Fanfic scenes by all

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Posted: 18 years ago
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This post is started as decided by me and Resh that those who wants to write scenes of SS can write here. For a full fledged fanfic story, start a new post.

Post only scenes here. Come on all SS members must contribute, its a request. Make our form lively as much as you can. Can you guys think of any game we can start in the forum regarding SS? Let's do it if members have ideas.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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bravo gal!!! come on guys...let ur imagination rn wild!!!! 😊 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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What happened fans? Why has no one written any scene? 😕 Like Resh said you exactly do not require any creativity for this.
In any episode if you had scene and thought that this could have been different(eventhough all scenes in SS were good). Those scenes you could have write it. Maybe your scene may look good too. 😊
Please guys do contribute.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah right...even if u thot anything cud be done differently..... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i've always wished shaina's leving scene to be diffrent ...i have alrdy written a fanfic on tht...so i neednt say more...
but i do wanna reform the scarf scene...it cud have ended way better than tth.....will write soon... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plaese tum logo mein se koi to mujhe aryan ki photo bhejo. main pagal ho rahi hoon. plz send me at mysticspice@indiatimes.com or romee.kumar@yahoo.com



blue lagoon. 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: blue lagoon

plaese tum logo mein se koi to mujhe aryan ki photo bhejo. main pagal ho rahi hoon. plz send me at mysticspice@indiatimes.com or romee.kumar@yahoo.com



blue lagoon. 😭

Haven't you checked the "picture gallery" post?Check it out first,it is wonderful. If you want to save them, just right click and save the picture.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: widluv2aryan

i've always wished shaina's leving scene to be diffrent ...i have alrdy written a fanfic on tht...so i neednt say more...
but i do wanna reform the scarf scene...it cud have ended way better than tth.....will write soon... 😊

the original scarf scene.... with my ending....

aryan enters the pantry.....everyone is engaged in their own leisure..some playing snooker....some having coffee...shaina was sitting in a corner....toying with her scarf...and lost in her thoughts.... aryan eyed all the staff members in the pantry....each left one by one....following aryan's glare... shaina noticed this and after the last person had gone...she too got up hastily to leave... aryan walked upto her fast....

aryan: shaina mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai...

shaina: mujhe nahi karni hai....

aryan: (holding her shoulders and pushin her towards the wall) haan lekin mujhe karni hai.... (shaina is trapped...but avoids his eyes...while he looks straight at her piercingly) tumhaare us interview ke baare mein jo tumne us women's magazine ko diya...

shaina: (looking down and around) what abt it??

aryan: tumhe kya lagta hai?? duniya mein sab mardh ek jaise hote hai??

shaina: (now looking up at him) tum kehna kya chahte ho aryan?

aryan: shaina aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki duniya mein ek aisa mardh ho....jo tumse pyaar karta ho....jo tumhaari dekhbaal kare....jo sunny ko apni aullad se badhke maane.......u know..... someone who relly... (he tugged at her scarf in her hand) likes ur scarf....!

shaina tried to suppress a smile...but then broke into a chuckle....

aryan: (smiling) what??

shaina: (shakes her head) its jus tht....ek insaan aisa hai....lekin ek problem bhi hai..... pata nahi kyun...woh mujhse kuch...kehta hi nahi hai!!!

aryan: shaina..... i.......i.......

shaina smiled....when she saw him struggling speak his heart out...before he could complete his sentence..... she moved within the enclosure of his arms (which he had made when he stopped her before the wall)....and gently, very innocently touched his lips with her own. she kissed him sofly before pulling away.... aryan was shocked....taken aback....

aryan: (in a very surprised tone) ...shaina???

shaina: i love you.....!!!😳 yahi kehne ki koshish kar rahe the???

aryan smiled widely at her outburst...and then laughed...and shook his head...shaina laughed along with him too.....but aryan stopped her laughter with a kiss of his own... he caught her by the waist and pulled her closer towards him...and kissed her lips gently...but longer than she had done his.... he finally pulled away and smiled...

aryan: i love u too😳.....

shaina smiled as she felt blessed when she put her arms around him and rested her head on his shoulder.....and aryan was overwhelmed as he cradled shaina in his strong embrace.....😊

let me add.....tht this is not hw i imagined it...but this is how i "EXPECTED" the scarf scene to end.!!!.....i was highly disappointed....when aryan said...."i....i.....i thinki ki tum usse yahan bulaalo....main us aadmi se baat karta hoon..."...a scenew hcih cud have been so much more...was nipped in the bud!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wonderful Resh. Shai as it is much more fast and daring than Aryan, and she showed it here too. Great.👏Actually when I saw the scene I too expected that Aryan would teel his feelings or atleast Shaina would mention his name. But nothing like that happened and it was abrupt. I was really surprised tehy showed such an ending. Then I thought maybe in the next episode atleast Aryan would talk again and they both would get together. But Shai just left. Very sad about it.

Edited by maha_prakrti - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well....even in th next episode....aryan was about to confess his feelings...if only the phone had not rung!!! 😡
yepp...i do believe tht shai is much more daring thn aryan.....she is impulsive...and like she said...."i know im a doer....aur kam se kam main bol to paati hoon!" this is what made me write this scene.....
very very honestly speaking......i used to watch hotel kingston and special squad....in hotel kingston...jus a few episodes before ....they had shown shelly and vish's first date...and even before confessin his ove for her (i think) he had just gone ahead and kissed her...... when they showed such a close scene in ss between aryan and shaina....i relly expected a similar thing to happen...theyw ere standin so close to each othr...they had to kiss!!!! but in vain! 😭

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