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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Haju-

Yayayaya Riddhi is the besttt😃


Am I Really?? 😆 😃 Thanks!! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RiddhiTacker


Am I Really?? 😆 😃 Thanks!! 😳


Well I Guess I'll Change My Idea Of Posting Tomorrow And Post Tonight!! 😉 😆
Edited by RiddhiTacker - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Yayayayayaya have anyone ever told you that you're the best thing ever happened 😃
Charu keeni learn something meanies -.-
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Posted: 11 years ago
Don't Say Them Anything Hija!! 😕 I Won't Take A Word Against Them!! 🤢
Keany & Charu Di Are Allowed To Take Time For Updating Their Stories!! 😃 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
update riddhi
iwant an update
like right now plz😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter ~ 9
Standing Their In The Waters On The Shore, Watching The Waves Coming And Going Back. I Was Snapped Out Of My Thoughts By A Call From Behind.
"Bhabhi" I Turned Towards Him, "Did You See Bhai Anywhere Around?"
I Walked Towards Him, "No, He Must Be Here Somewhere, Try Calling Him..."
V - "I Tried He Ain't Picking Up The Call..."
J - "Okay You Go Try Searching Him In Near By Areas I'll Try Calling Him. Where Are The Others?"
V - "All Are Into There Respective Rooms Resting. Okay Now I'll Run..."
J - "Yeah Go, Inform Me When You Find Him! And I'll Inform You If He Receives My Call!" I Dialed Viren's Number. No Answer, I Tried Twice, Then Thrice, And After Calling Him For Several Times I Gave Up.
I Turned Towards The Sea Again, The Cold Breeze Coming From The Ocean, Making Me Shiver A Bit, I Stood There Gazing At The Sun Which Has Almost Vanished From The Horizon. Just As I Stood There, I Felt Something Warm Near Me. In no Time I was Found In A Back Hug Of Someone. I Shrugged Him Away. Turned To Face Him And Spoke Up "Where The Hell Were You Viren? Ever Since Morning You Were To Be Found Nowhere!! You Jerk! That Poor Virat Is Still Searching For You!!" I Said Slapping His Arms, As I Spoke.
V - "Easy There Wifey!! I Just Happened To Meet A Friend Of Mine, And He Forcefully Took Me To His House..."
J - "But Then Why Didn't You Receive Any Of Mine's Or Virat's Call??"
V - "Uhhh...My Phone Was On Silent...Stop Lying Mr. Lawyer!! I Know You're Upto Something!!" I Said As I Heard His Phone Ringing...He Picked It Up,
V - "Hello Virat? Achha Suun...Get Back To The Hotel Okay? I'm Here And For Dinner Don't Wait For Me And Jeevika Please..."
Vi - "But Bhai, Atleast You Could've Informed Me? Okay Fine Forget It, Enjoy Your Time Together...Take Care!!" Virat Said Hanging Up The Call.
J - "Now, Tell me Mr. Vadhera...What Were You Upto?? And Where Were You?"
V - "What Do I Get For Answering Your Questions?" He Said Giving A Evil Smirk.
J - "How About Nothing? Or Actually..Few Punches So That You Won't Ever Leave Without Informing Someone Atleast!"
V - "Naahhh...You'll have To Give Me Whatever I Demand For...Deal??"
J - "We'll See..." I Said Turning Around. Just As I Was About To Walk Away; He Held Me Firmly By My Waist And Pulled Me Closer. I Could Hear My Heart Beating Faster Than Usual. He Kissed Me On My Shoulder, And Whispered In My Hears "We'll See..." And Gave Me The Devilish Grin Reserved Only For Me!
I Could Easily Guess What Was Running Through His Devil Mind!
J - "You Pervert! Stay Away! And Also, Keep All Your Dirty Thoughts Away!"
I Said Shrugging Him Off, And Walking Towards The Hotel. Viren Just Stood There Smiling Evilly.
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I Entered My Room Only To See It Pitch Dark. Just As I Moved Towards Bed Carefully, I Heard Some Weird Noises. Someone Just Then jumped In Front Of Me "Bhuuuhhaaahhhaaa..." I Just Screamed Wildly and Averted My Face Only To See Viren On The Bed Burst Out In To Fits Of Laughter, As By Then The Lights Were On.
J - "Christ!! Viren! You Just Scared The Hell Out Of Me!!" I Said Sitting Next To Him. And Giving Him The Stern Look.
V - "You Looked Even More Cuter When You Were Scared!! I Must Do This Often!!" He Said Continuing To Laugh.
J - "Dare You Do That!!" And For Now, Get Out Of My Room! I Need To Freshen Up Before Joining The Others For Dinner." I Said Pulling Him And Forcing Him To Stand Up.
V- "Mrs. Bhulakar, If You Remember We Are Going Out For Dinner, So You Can Freshen Up But You Aren't Joining The Others. And Here, Wear This! I'll Come Back In Next Few Mins. Be Ready By Then."
J - "When Did You Became So Bad Viren!? First, You Scared me And Now You're Calling Me Mrs. Bhulakar?" :-O "Go To Hell! I'm Not Coming With You!"
V - "Either You Get Ready And Go With Me, Yaa Main Tumhe Utha Kar Le Jaunga! Soch Lo!! Kisine Dekh Liya Toh??" He Said Grinning Ear To Ear.
J - "Such A Big Blackmailer You Are!!" I Said Going To The Washroom, After Grabbing The Dress He Had Brought For Me.
As I Closed The Door He Shouted From The Room "If I'm A Blackmailer, You Are A Big Big Dramebaazz!!"
J- "Viren You Better Run For Your Life Now, I'll Kill You!!" God! He Was Getting On My Nerves Now!!
V - "Whatever Dramebaaz! Be Ready Soon!"
J - "Jerk!!"
V - "Heard You Wifey! And You Are Gonna Pay For It!!" He Said Exiting The Room.
J - "Whatever!!" -_- Pata nahi Kya Samajhta Hain Apne Aapko? Blackmailer Kahinka."
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Soon I Was Ready, And Just As I Walked Out Of The Washroom, I Saw Viren Sitting There On the Bed Fliping Through Pages. Just As He Looked Up At Me, He Jaw Fell Open, And He Stared At Me Toe To Head. 😳
J - "Viren, You're Inviting Mosquitoes For Free! Please Shut Your Mouth!" 😆
Viren Stood Up And Pulled Jeevika Closer Resting His One Hand One her Waist, And With The Other Hand He Gentle Caressed Jeevika's Cheek To Which She Just Closed Her Eyes. Viren Gave A Peck On Her Foreheads...
V - "You Look Beautiful Wifey!" He Said As He Stared Deep Into Her Greys.
She Just Blushed A Little "Waise My Dear Hubby, Aren't We Getting Late?"
V - "Oh Yes! Lets Go!" He Said Giving Her His Hand Which She Gladly Accepted. The Walked Out Hand In Hand.
Vi - "Wow! So Bhai And Bhabhi...Going Out For Dinner? Enjoy You Love Birds!"
V - "Oye, Chote! Chup Kar. Aur Bhaag Yahan Se! Sunn, Baaki Sab Ko Bata Dijiyo That I And Jeevika Won't Be Joining You'll For The Dinner!"
Vi - "Okay Mere Bhai...Now Go!!" 😆 He Said Running Away From Them!
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Viren Stopped The Car To A Lonely Place, An Hour Away From Their Hotel. It Was All Dark There, Jeevika Could Detect Only Few Things With The Help Of Moon Light.
J - "Viren...?Where Are We? And Why Are We Here?" I Said As I Stood Next To Him.
V - "Bata Dunga Toh Meri mehnat Par Paani Nahi Pher Jayega?" 😆 "Jaldi Kya Hain?? Have Patience Wifey!!" 😆 😉
J - "No!! Tell Me Already!! Please!!??" I Said Making Puppy Face.
V - "Lets Go Further..."
J - "Crazy...No!! I'm Scared...It's All Dark Here, And Also So Lonely..." She Said Clunging On Viren's Grey Blazer.
V - "Yaar Tumahre Pati Ki Hote Hue You Are Scared??" 😕 He Said Placing His Other Hand On Hers, "Khabrao Mat...Chalo..."
Just As They Walked For Two Mins, Viren Stood Behind Jeevika And Placed His One Hand On Her Eyes.
J - "Viren...You Better Don't Play Any Prank On Me Okay? I'm Scared Already!"
V - "Jeevika Yaar...Kitna Bolti Hoon Tum!! Just Be Quite!!" And He Started The Count Down "9, 8, 7,...6, 5, 4,...3, 2, 1!" Jeevika Adjusted Her Eyesight And Was Awestruck... "Happy Birthday Mrs. Vadhera!" Viren Whispered Into Her Ears...
J - "Birthday?? Mine?? Kab?? Aaj Toh NahI hain...Kyun Ki Kisi Ne Wish Nahi Kiya..." And She Checked Her Cell Phone!! Wait What??" 😲 "Today Was My Birthday Not Even A Single Person Whished Me??" 😭 "Not Even Di Called Me??" 😭
V - "Okay Before You Start Crying Just Close Your Eyes Once Again!!"
She Did As He Said And Opened Her Eyes When He Instructed Her To Do So...She Got Another Surprise!! Everyone Including Her Di And Jiju, Stood There Singing Happy Birthday To Her!! 😛

V - "Wanted To Make Your Day More Special My Dear Wifey!!" 😉 He Said Smirking..."That's The Reason I Wasn't Seen Anywhere!!"

J - "Thank You Viren!!" She Said With Tears In Her Eyes...She Then Gave Him A Light Kiss On His Cheek, And Then Went Around Taking Blessings And Gifts From Everyone! 😛 😊 She Had Fun Time With Her Bhai, Di, Bhabhi, Jiju, Devar & Viren Recollecting All The Childhood Masti, While The Elders Just Adored Their Kids...In Between Viren Tried Romancing And Fliting With His Wifey! 😳 😛
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GOD!! 🤢 Done Finalllyy!! Don't Kill Me If The Length Is Short!! 😭
I Ain't Sure If The Update Is Long Enough!! 🤢 I Tried Hard Though!! 😕
Drop By Your Comments And Likes!! 😛
Take Care! ❤️
Edited by Protego_Maxima - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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riddhi what a fabulous update😊
❤️love u a lot❤️
🤗🤗🤗lots of love and huggs to you 🤗🤗🤗
wohooo🥳🥳 me first partyyy
just awesome update😊
and a long wala big update😃
thank u thank u so much🤗
loved the whole convo between virika 😊😆😉
just perfect👏👏👏
jeevika's birthday😊
❤️lovely❤️
❤️the surprise
😊❤️
awww...that was cute❤️
i m in love with this story
its just too perfect👏
u write so well dear😊
❤️awesome riddhi😊
fantastic update👏👏👏
continue soon 😊
very soon😆😆
i m eagerly waiting for the next now😉😉
and
HAPPY NEW YEAR !!!!!!

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wowww
it was long
amazing
loved it
just epic
fantastic
superrrb
lovely
u write so fantastic
awww
bless viren for surprising jeevika
as she forgot her birthday
mind blowing
cont soon
thnx for the pm
Edited by sumayyah1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
THIS IS SO CUTEEE
OMG OMG OMG
I LOVED IT
SERIOUSLY RIDDHI I'M OBSESSED WITH THIS STORYYY
THE WAY VIREN SURPRISED JEEVIKA
AND THE WAY VIREN WAS TEASING JEEVIKA
AND BTW I'VE ALREADY READ THIS STORY THRICE SO YOU BETTER UPDATE FAST
WAITING FOR MORE ROMANTIC UPDATES
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Haju-

THIS IS SO CUTEEE

OMG OMG OMG
I LOVED IT
SERIOUSLY RIDDHI I'M OBSESSED WITH THIS STORYYY
THE WAY VIREN SURPRISED JEEVIKA
AND THE WAY VIREN WAS TEASING JEEVIKA
AND BTW I'VE ALREADY READ THIS STORY THRICE SO YOU BETTER UPDATE FAST
WAITING FOR MORE ROMANTIC UPDATES


Hiya Ji!! 😆 Let Me Sleep Atleast For One Night Properly??!!? 🥱 😆 LOL! All I Do Is Keep Thinking About The Updates!! 🤢 🥱
What Are you Gonna Do After I Join Back My College In Next Two Days??? Haunt Me In My Dreams?? 🤓
Edited by RiddhiTacker - 11 years ago

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