FF: Loss of bliss,..prt 6 pg9 (4/23/07)

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four months.....four months i have been reading fan fictions on the ks forum...would like to thamk all the writers...mistletoe, sabsj, tintiny, armana, salmansgirl, sweetu, cordelia, henna, ziddi, sanam, guli, nibbles, rooj-i, sheena, garf, manish, raania, aditee, raaga, himali, kritika, divya, loka, kamy, visma, pri, bkeero, jnawaz, loranlee, rocky, minks......i don'tthink i have got evryone here....would applaud each and every writer of the ks forum........guys i am so inspired by your ffs that decided to pen down my thoughts on it....it is never going to be as fabulous as the above writers but i will try my best....hopefully you will like it and if you don't then tell so i can tell the mods to close this topic.....so here you go

Prologue

Shimmering lights…..enigmatic ensemble in front of the camera….however behind the camera you could see the hustle and bustle….spot boys running to and fro…cringing looks on the contrived faces of models…and someone's presence was conspicuous in this arena ….everything was ready for the shoot….except the photographer….

The look of worry, anger and jealousy several different emotions zapped through everyone …..she is never late…is something wrong with her?? Silence engulfed the studio as the phone rang…..incessantly until the secretary picked it up…..a look of astonishment…which changed to a look of worry made everyone eager to hear the news…..the secretary after putting the phone down….regaining her voice as well her composure she announced…that her employer (the photographer) had met with an accident…..myriad of emotions circulated the scarcely ventilated room….some were happy, which you can conclude were her enemies and those jealous of her success…..some were angry as they couldn't do the photo shoot…and with a flick of her hair one skimpily dressed model replied… "Couldn't she fix her appointment with the accident after the shoot?"…and with the low grunt retreated back to her dressing room to change into another pair of material deficient clothes.

"Ask her to wait a moment - I am almost done."
- Carl Friedrich Gauss (1777-1855), while working, when informed that his wife is dying

However her parents realized that her daughter had met with an accident only after the news reached the other end of the globe…..her mother, Kiran Singhania Dixit…..was the most popular heroine of bollywood even at the age of 46 she was the centre of attraction…….yet she was the estranged wife of Nishikant Dixit, one of the top hard core businessmen of India…….Kiran and Nishikant had got married when Kiran was precariously perched on a film by a rookie and Nishikant was just learning the surreptitious ways of the business world….and when success knocked on their doorstep both felt a magnificent attraction towards the golden roost than they felt towards one another…..and when their relationship was a on boat which was overpowered by a wave of wealth….the two innocent cherubs….bani dixit and vijay dixit had been affected by the shock …….as they were separated….the girl to be supported by the avarice mother and the boy to be held on by a chauvinistic pig……..even the beggar on the Lal Baug street watching the fiasco on television felt a rising pool of sympathy for the two children as their ambivalent parents fought unabashedly like those two innocuous children were some piece of meat…………..and as time flew by they got to see only apathy in the hollow eyes of their children.

comments good or bad both are welcome.....

god bless you all, take care

menal.

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~Unforgettable~ thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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love the beginning!!! plz continue soon!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great beginning Menal,

Loved the story line, children of an avarice mother and a chauvinistic pig, a must read...

please continue!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great beginning. Its different and orignal
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~Unforgettable~

love the beginning!!! plz continue soon!!! 👏 👏 👏

thank you soo much i will be updating tonight

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Great beginning Menal,

Loved the story line, children of an avarice mother and a chauvinistic pig, a must read...

please continue!

thank you soo much i have been reading all your ffs and it is such a honor that you liked mine......i will be updating tonight...once again thank you

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow Menal
great beginning feel sorry for the kids
I hope the siblings are support of each other
please write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: punjabi#1

great beginning. Its different and orignal

thank you will update tonight

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow i loved the intro.. really moving, you described it really well..

no need to say thanks in the beginning.. lol 😆😳

brilliant start.. the story line is really promising.. 😉

Henna x
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry..double post😳

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