ArShi FF:Twilight(Part 2 on PG 22)

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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Don'T worry 😎

Wrk more heard

all is well

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Maghinalls

@Maghinalls

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Don't worry.

Waiting for next update

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Sajinabi

@saj111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Just be cool and try ur best make a wonderful story of Twilight You Go Girl

We will be waiting 4 u to continue soon Good Luck 1

. Relax and thanks 4d pm .

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Sanjana Seth

@sanjanaseth1994

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

its fine...! i'm glad u changed it soon...!

will be waiting for the new start!

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suwin

@suwin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

please don't do it again...
waiting for your FF...

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sruthick

@sruthick

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Its ok...
Will wait 4 a new story

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kriti

@GroverAddict

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

ok i know you wont copy again , good luck

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priyanka1998

@priyanka1998

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

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Edited by priyanka1998 - 11 years ago

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Iman

@ArShiDelena

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Character Sketch:~

Arnav Singh Raizada

Khushi Singhania

Karan Singh Raizada(Arnav's Bro)

Ridhima Gupta(Karan's GF)

Abhimanyu Gupta(Nikita's BF)

Nikita Singh Raizada(Arnav's Sis)

Dr. Mihir Singh Raizada(Arnav's Dad)

Avantika Singh Raizada(Arnav's Mom)

Anirudh Singhania(Khushi's Dad)

Preeti Kapoor(Khushi's Mom)

Samrat Shergill(Khushi's BFF)

Nupur(Khushi's Friend)

NK(Khushi's Friend)

Lavanya(Khushi's Friend)

Shyam

Sheetal

Akshay

Edited by AbhiyaMaaneet - 11 years ago

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933191

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

I am very sorry to say but this story lacks creativity, there is no originality in the characterisation, only the names are changed and I am giving up on this story. Please don't consider this as bashing as I mean well but I am not ready to read the same story with new names. AKshay's character seems like a new twist though. anyway all the best.