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sohni_kudi_111

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow...totally unexpected, i was wondering who the 'He' was! was it maan? looks like geet is separated frm maan n is married to someone else! n looks like she's happily married to 'he'...well waiting 2 c how d story shapes!

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ChandlerBing

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Posted: 11 years ago

When I was half through, somehow I couldn't picture Maan anymore as her husband. The simple gestures he had shown, had somehow...
He is a great husband, a great friend but there are little gestures of her which remain invisible to him. There seems to be great affection and friendship and maybe love too. But what the mere letter did to her showed her agony. An agony which was unleashed by just one letter. One remembrance. One scrawl. Which came out in one word. His name.
"Maan"

PS: After so many days I feel like I am in the mood to write something again. I virtually gave up writing otherwise. Thank you for making me "Feel".

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Posted: 11 years ago

That was the first work i have read of urs and it was truly awesome...

All the time i was thinking she was married to Maan and she s happily married... but was surprised when the letter came...it was of Maan... Me waiting for the part...

And Why did she leave dancing if she was so passionate about it??? Is it somewhere related to Maan??? Me wondering.

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Kalam.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you to those who have commented both on here and the blog, the blog has received an overwhelming response which is so encouraging and supportive so thanks once again.

To make life easier for all of us, I've decided not to password protect the updates for now. This is because it's hard for me to keep track of everyone who is interested both on here and the blog, and also because people may not always be able to like/comment due to other commitments, and it would be unfair of them to miss out.

Instead, this thread will serve as an update thread for when the blog posts go up, so you can keep track.

If you want a PM for when I update, please let me know and I will do so.

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sohni_kudi_111

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Posted: 11 years ago

My god...This is totally unexpected! I feel its going to b a sad ending... maan will die! I seriously felt like crying!

Was geet married to maan in d past n things turned out 4 d worst btw them?

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

READ IT

VERY EMOTIONAL AND SEEMS TO BE A SAD STORY

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Kalam.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sohni_kudi_111
wow...totally unexpected, i was wondering who the 'He' was! was it maan? looks like geet is separated frm maan n is married to someone else! n looks like she's happily married to 'he'...well waiting 2 c how d story shapes!

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
When I was half through, somehow I couldn't picture Maan anymore as her husband. The simple gestures he had shown, had somehow...
He is a great husband, a great friend but there are little gestures of her which remain invisible to him. There seems to be great affection and friendship and maybe love too. But what the mere letter did to her showed her agony. An agony which was unleashed by just one letter. One remembrance. One scrawl. Which came out in one word. His name.
"Maan"

PS: After so many days I feel like I am in the mood to write something again. I virtually gave up writing otherwise. Thank you for making me "Feel".

I would say you've hit the nail on the head there. What she feels for her husband is a deep attachment and devotion, but with Maan there's a raw love, which became evident when she reads his letter - it throws her off guard completely.

You are most welcome. I hope I can continue to inspire you in some form or another.

Originally posted by: sparklingeyes11
That was the first work i have read of urs and it was truly awesome...
All the time i was thinking she was married to Maan and she s happily married... but was surprised when the letter came...it was of Maan... Me waiting for the part...
And Why did she leave dancing if she was so passionate about it??? Is it somewhere related to Maan??? Me wondering.

Thank you, I'm glad it's impressed you. The story is a knotted and stubborn rope which will start to unravel as the updates go on... as for the dancing, yes it is connected to Maan but you'll have to stay tuned to find out how and why.

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Wow. Following!

Privileged to have you on board!

Originally posted by: dolly10
Awesome...loved it

Thank you, it means a lot.

Originally posted by: sohni_kudi_111
My god...This is totally unexpected! I feel its going to b a sad ending... maan will die! I seriously felt like crying!
Was geet married to maan in d past n things turned out 4 d worst btw them?

It is a very emotional story... so I think you'll need some tissues at hand!

Hm, you're very close... you'll have to wait for the next update to gain the answers...

Originally posted by: punam2712
READ IT
VERY EMOTIONAL AND SEEMS TO BE A SAD STORY

It is a heavy dose of both. Not one for the faint hearted!

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Maria Ahmed

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Posted: 11 years ago

oh my good ness what a wonderfull story ..are you from pakistan..c

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Kalam.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MrMrsChiping.
oh my good ness what a wonderfull story ..are you from pakistan..c

Kashmiri but from the Pakistan side, yes. And you've hit the nail on the head, it is an adaptation of a Pakistani drama. The disclaimer is on the blog :)