FF: Jodha Hui Parayi.... Chapter 2 updated

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello everyone!!!

This is my first FF, Please help and support me... Please do comment and let me know how was it... please tell where I need to improve and what part you like most.

Please don't forget to like this chapter... I will update quickly...Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Story start at current track... After Jodha and Jalal's Misunderstanding and Jodha's Humiliation

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Jodha watched, how jalal saved that dancers Benzir's life... She was shocked and jealous at the same time... He carried her in his arm and took her into the palace in his room. She survived... With annoyance Jodha thought he is fine with her... why should I go there? it was bothering her... how Jalal was taking care of her and giving his all attention to her... and ignoring her... he has not missed any opportunity to insult ...Seeing this...Jodha heart was broken...

Jodha went back to her room she sat on the bed thinking of the times when they spend beautiful time together...how Jalal saved her life, care about her, respected her... all this beautiful memory bring smile on Jodha's face but then her smile vanished with painful sorrow all the memories of how he insulted her played through her mind. She felt a sudden aching in her heart .this pain followed by tears...You have hurt me so much but why can't I just stop thinking about you... Just then she remembered what moti told. Why would I be jealous. Do I have feelings for Jalal? Entire night she was captured by Jalal's thoughts and could not sleep the night.

The next morning jodha wakes up early goes outside and does her tulsi pooja . She sees jalal who has got his hand around benazir helping her walk. This jodha mad and angry. She was fuming with jealousy. Then she thought does she really have feelings for him. The memories of that they spent watching the moon and talking. Just thinking about how she cooked for him, how he asked her to sit next to him on his birthday. All of a sudden her heart started beat fast... a little smirk came on her face. She realized that she did love him and loves him a lot... She looked down to where Jalal and Benazir were walking around, Jalal cut a rose and gave it to Benazir . She felt like she has lost Jalal... Tears rolled out from Jodha's eyes... her anger was giving her pain...She went back inside the palace.

The next morning jodha wakes up early goes outside and does her tulsi pooja . She sees jalal who has got his hand around benazir helping her walk. This made jodha mad and angry. She was fuming with jealousy. Then she thought does she really have feelings for him. The memories of that they spent watching the moon and talking. Just thinking about how she cooked for him, how he asked her to sit next to him on his birthday. All of a sudden her heart started beat fast... a little smirk came on her face. She realized that she did love him and loves him a lot... She looked down to where Jalal and Benazir were walking around, Jalal cut a rose and gave it to Benazir . She felt like she has lost Jalal... Tears rolled out from Jodha's eyes... her anger was giving her pain...She went back inside the palace.

Please tell me should I continue UR opinion means a lot to me...Thank U for reading

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Peacefulmind thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start but make long as short stories get over in a minute and it will slip out of mind
looking forward
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start plz update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Start!!!!! love it...Superb!!!!!

Can't wait for next part... I love the way you have express Jodha's emotions...looks like she is realizing her love for Jalal... Jallu Jodha.👏👏👏
long update soon please😆😆😆
U ROCK⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsme start.
Continue soon.
And yeah
I updated my ff izhaar e mohabbat.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWESOME AWESOME 👏👏DEFINETLY CONTINUE DEARU 😳😳 JODHAA KI DIL MEIN HULCHUL HONE LAGA ❤️😆 NEXT CHAPTER UPDATE PLZ PLZ 😆😆 JALAL TERI HIMAT KAISE HUI NAAGINAZIR KA HATH PAKARNE KA 😡😡 UPDATE DEARU NEXT CHAP NEXT CHAP UPDATE ^^
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very good start...👏
keep it up dear...😛
continue soon👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice one dea i hope u continue the story soon...Will be looking forward for the next update :)...Would love to c a very jealous Jodha.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love this FF...
I'm so excited for this update..
It's amazing..
Plz give a longer update next time
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb start👍🏼
do continue and update soon😆

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