RiMa SS: ~~Living For Vengeance~~ Completed - Page 49

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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks so much dear...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: memad

lovely update part 8...good to see dips deserves that treatment from madhu...happy that madhu will tell everything to rk..


thanks so much dear... 😃
ya dips deserve dis treatment...😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sani9226

nice update, liked to see dips in this condition and waiting for madhu to tell the truth to rk


thanks so much sani dear...😃
happy u liked it...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey all

A BIG THANKS for commenting on prev chappy...

here goes the most awaited chappy... do enjoy it...

Chapter eight: Breathtaking Shock - 2


RK parked the bike in his mansion as she asked him "where r we???" he started to walk in replying her "at my place... come in..."

She walked behind him until he reached upstairs opening door of a grand bedroom... she quietly followed him inside... luking at every ounce of room... which is luxurious like some king's room...

RK offer her to sit nd she sat on edge of the bed... feeling little bit uncomfortable as Rk stood infront of her waiting for her answers...

RK asked her "madhu now will u tell wat this all is going on???" she is luking down at her hands in turmoil from where to start...

She softly speak "first fact is I m not ur madhu RK..." silence prevail for a sec... when RK didn't respond she slowly raise her head to luk at him nd saw his question mark face...

RK is staring at her waiting for her to elaborate what she is speaking as he is fully confused...

She took a deep breath gaining some courage she said "u heard it right I m not ur madhu nd I m Madhubala malik... madhu's elder n... nd twin sister..."

The confusing expression nw changed to shocking one... he is not able to respond the situation...

The girl sitting infront of him luking like madhu is really not her friend madhu but a carbon copy of her...

Same face...same brown eyes...everything is so similar that no one can believe this fact...

Madhubala stood up seeing RK like this nd came face to face with him... she speak "RK u ok!!!"

He is lost of word not knowing wat to say her... she shrugged him little giving him a reality check...

RK back off slowly stepping away from her saying "this is impossible... how can this could be real..."

She said with a confidence this time "it is possible... don't u ever heard or seen twins... we completely luk same...just like our name... Madhu and Madhubala... she was my better half... nd today without her I m incomplete..."

Her words "she was nd incomplete" hit his mind raising a question which is going to break him again... he asked "means madhu... she... is..."

She completed her left sentence "she is dead..." tear escaped from her eyes nd RK's too...

He fall on his knees... when he saw her infront him inside he was happy that his madhu is alive though his other part was angry that madhu is hurting his other friends... but happiness was more... life has planned everything in different way nd again the fact remained same madhu is dead... she is dead only...

Madhubala standing infront of him luking helplessly... not knowing what to do... what to speak... RK is all broken up before her...

Moreover she is controlling her emotions not to burst up... after madhu's death her life also ended... each passing sec lefts loneliness, pain nd regrets for her... that she failed to save her sister which was the only life for her...

After seems like one life passed RK contemplate himself...as there still many questions which are bothering him...

He stood up nd directly asked her "but why r u hurting my friends... i know u lost ur sister but she was our friend too she was important part of our lives also..."

She spat back at him "for u she was important part of life but for me she was my only life... everything for me..."

She took some step starting to narrate her life nd every event which took place in it... "after death of mom nd dad... we both left alone... we were everything for each other... from childhood only I Loved her madly cause she was my only sweet little sister... she too consider me like her mother though we were sisters...i was only some mins elder then her then also she always called me didu...her didu..."

A smile crept at her face in nostalgia she continued "when mom dad left... we were not able to live in village as every moment which we spend with them in our sweet small house started to haunt us... madhu nd I was torn out fully... but being elder I was knowing I have to take care of her for forever now... so I decided to leave from there... after selling our small lands nd house I arranged enough money to get settle in here... in Mumbai... we started our life from new point... I admitted her in city's best college means in ur college... cause madhu was brilliant in her studies... I wanted her to complete her study nd be an independent girl... I started my job as make up artist in cine world as study nd i was a very strong enemy...

She was really happy in her new life... everyday coming from college she narrate single event which happened in whole day... she can never hide anything from me...

RK did u know wat happen with her on her first day of college???"

Rk who was so much engrossed in her talks suddenly confused at her queston.. after a moment he replied thinking about his meeting with madhu "yeah I know I saw her first time as she came infront of my bike nd thank god she didn't get injured... but she behave very weirdly when I asked her concernly as she is ok... in return she just run away from there..."

Madhubala was amused at his reply as RK still remember every bit of it... she smiled nd said "she was scared at that time nd she never talk to stranger specially boys... that's y she ran off... my madhu was very innocent by heart nd she have to paid for it on her first day..."

RK raised his brows as not knowing what she is saying... she elaborate it speaking "ur so called gf dipali played a prank on her nd send her to boys loo..."

Next sentence spat from his mouth was "what??? Dips can never do this nd why she will do it when she is not even knowing madhu..."

Madhubala spoke with a smirk "in that case RK u failed to know ur gf... what she had done is all behind ur backs... it's truth she sent madhu to boy's loo but trishna came there as her savior... after that trishna was like second sister for madhu... she was with her in every single situation... then madhu met u nd become part of ur life... means important part... but it was only for u nd trishna...

In simple words dips never liked her... I don't know why but many a times she insulted madhu nd because of her I saw my madhu crying so many times... I wanted to go nd ask dips for her rude behavior but madhu never allowed me saying such things happens in friendship...

This little things only became so big nd took away my madhu from me for forever..."

Madhubla is now in tears... she was trying really hard not to be like this but remembering about day when madhu died she lost it...

She shouted like mad "ur b***hy gf nd ur best friend rahul murdered her... they both killed my madhu..." tears bursted more from her eyes...

RK standing numb over his place... one by one shock is making him to die at that moment only...

He spoke hesitatingly "no u r wrong about this... they can never do such a sin... I know dips never liked madhu but she can never go so low about it... u r wrong... sorry for this but I don't believe u... nd how can I when it is simply in front of all that madhu died in bus accident... u too know about it..."

She apparently said the truth "it was a lie told by me...madhu died in forest because of animal attack nd also because of dipali nd rahul..."

RK asked her "how u can say this so assuringly... u were not with us at farmhouse..."

Madhubala encourage herself as she is going to recall all those disastrous moment of her life...

"when trishna called me informing madhu left from farmhouse alone I was worried like hell... as I was knowing she cannot do this... we were new here nd madhu don'tknow the places properly how she can come back alone...

After an hour my phone buzzed nd when voice from opposite side struck my ears my life shattered into pieces...it was madhu's call... she was crying sobbing so badly... she was only pleading...

Madhu: didu it's me madhu... please save me didu...please...

First I calm down my nerve s nd spoke to her...

Madhubala: madhu first stop crying... shhh...I will save u nothing will happen to u... tell me where r u nd what about ur friends??

Madhu: they ditched me didu...they intentionally send into the forest...I m scared here...from last night I m here trying to find ways but I m failing... please come here didu...

I was perplexed at her statement "they ditched me"... because u nd trishna can never do so... and she spent whole night in forest...

Madhubala: u r in forest... how this all happened...madhu calm urself nd tell me everything...

Madhu: didu yesterday rahul nd trishna both fought with each other because of me as rahul was insecure due to my nd trishna's relation... nd she also slapped rahul... for this reason rahul nd dips took revenge from me... first they lied saying trishna left from house angrily nd went in forest...I came to search her but I lost in here... I tried to call them for help... nd dips said "trishna is at home madhu... it's only u lost in dark forest...nd this ur punishment for coming between me nd RK... so enjoy ur night with wild animals... gud night...bye bye at last..."

Nd rahul he said "y should I help u madhu??? Because of u today trishna slapped me u spoiled my years old relationship with her... nw time to pay for it... nor me or trishna is going to help u out..."

No one came to help me didu...

She was crying so badly my heart ached listening to her... how ruthless they are... after that I assured madhu saying I m coming to help her nd save her... But it didn't happened...

I failed RK I failed... when I went there with one of my friend nd searched for madhu whole afternoon... And lastly when I found her she was dead...she was lying on ground in blood pool lifeless... it was my last moment of life... seeing my madhu like this I want to die over there only...

Thanks to my friend that she supported me nd we took madhu from there... whole night I spent in tears crying for my madhu...praying god to give my madhu back...

The rising sun gave me new energy... I encourage myself nd decided to make all pay for my madhu's death...

I gave fake news in college that madhu died in bus accident... I was knowing law will also not give justice to my madhu's death... as I had no proof against them...

Then I decided I will live for vengeance... for madhu's vengeance...

After that first I want to know is trishna too involved in it or not...so I went at her home nd came infront of her like madhu...she was scared but after that she came running out in her balcony assuming madhu is alive...I hide behind door only nd heard how she was crying for madhu... she is true friend of madhu... it was only rahul nd dips planning to do so...

Then my next target was rahul... I want to scare him till core that he spill out truth in front of u all at party night...but his heart took my revenge on him...nd he died due to heatattack...

Tonight it was dips turn... and I m satisfied how I scared her..."

RK is listening this all is frozen state only nd angry too he spoke "this all is rubbish... this can't be possible... dips nd rahul... how can they??? This is unbelievable"

He is all worn out not knowing what happened with his happy going life...

Madhubala spoke sternly "I was knowing u will not believe me...that's why I told u RK u should mind ur own business... I can handle it all... cause I m not innocent like madhu I m all opposite to her..."

Saying this she started to walkout from his room... she open the door nd before leaving she turned one last time nd said "nd believe me RK I will surely make dips to pay back for her deeds... I will take revenge for every single pain of my madhu...also I request u if u don't want to help in... so stay away from this all nd hide this truth for forever..."

And she left from there...

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The End

Finally everything is revealed here...hope u all like it... now only one last chappy remaining of this SS nd an epilogue...

Now do share ur views in comments nd hit the like button...

Thanks and Love

SuRu😊

Edited by My_VivJaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow 👏super update👏
madhu had a twin sister😊what a twist

but dear y did u said that madhu was killed by wild animals???😲an image of dd in dark forest surronded by large bears were in my mind😲i don't know hw i got that image but ur words did that to me and i feel very very very sad😭😭
i know next part wil be dips' end,right???waiting for it😊
Edited by meiejrishbala - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Will send Pms later!!!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey suru,

Very nice update, everything was spilled outl but am sad, this ss gonna end, pls come back soon with a new story, once this is finished
Edited by uma88 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesomeee...
All mysteries revealed here.. I am badly waiting for your next part. I want RK join hand with madhubala and plan for madhu vengeance .


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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update Suru!finally the mystery is out!pls continue soon!but u r going to end it?pls don't do this!i'm going to miss this ss badly!
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Posted: 11 years ago
mg what a shocking twist madhu has a twin sister ,and mdhu is dead oh my poor madhu i hate deepali so much ,hope rk aur madhubala milkar deepali ko sabak sikhaye and i want deepali ka death same madhu jaisa ho

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