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Swachi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Awesome concept

read all in one go

they were awesome nd interesting

but directly coming to last chapter

it was fab !!!!

Gang have so much attitude

don't have words to describe

update whenever u get time nd best of luck for exams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

amazing update
now this story become more
mysterious hospital scene was
nice & children attitude towards gang
was also so cool
they deserve only this
waiting 4 update
Love u
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Anjana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: Sswachi
Awesome concept
read all in one go
they were awesome nd interesting
but directly coming to last chapter
it was fab !!!!
Gang have so much attitude
don't have words to describe
update whenever u get time nd best of luck for exams

Ohhh.😊😊😊..thank youuu😃...

exams postponed so will update soon..

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: anjanankuttu

THankyouuu...
esa comment dekh kar holi manane ka man karta hain...😃😃
what do you mean by 'think'...of course...he LOVES her...hmmm

ya he love her...but u knw after knowing that she is not taani but tansia...vo khud usse pyar na karne ki try karta hai but he cant help that he love her so much...

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Anjana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: navk
amazing update
now this story become more
mysterious hospital scene was
nice & children attitude towards gang
was also so cool
they deserve only this
waiting 4 update
Love u
Taarey

HMMM...after long time yaar

Well the comment was really nice...Thankyouuu

will update soon

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Anjana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

CHAPTER 15:part a

All of them were sleeping peace fully as it was 8:30 am...but...

Music..

AYE BACHCHU

Jhoom Le Jhoom Jhama

Jhoom Jhamak Jhoom

Pairon Mein Ta Ta Thaye

Jhoom Tumaak Tum

Jhoom Le Jhoom Jhama

Jhoom Jhamak Jhoom

Pairon Mein Ta Ta Thaye

Jhoom Tumaak Tum

Rey opened his eyes reluctantly...it was like having a speaker in their room...that much noise...

Bharath:(in a throaty voice) subhah subhah naayi Tamasha...hmmm

Vicky: chalo,dekhte hain yeh log kyun jhoom rahe hain...

With stretching and yawning they opened their door and went out to see what was going on...

Aye Bachchu Tu Sun Le

Mere Dil Ka Ye Order(everyone shouted 'order')

Ab Khul Ke Jeele Tu

Koi Seema Na Border

They saw that girls and boys were sweeping and dancing at the same time...

some one was singing from the room...when one stopped other one started...

A few of them were playing instruments downstairs...

Halka Sa Nasha Hai

Masti Ki Wine Mein

Jeene Ka Hai Chaska

Toh Aaja Line Mein

They also found girls standing their and observing it...

Suno Yaaron Suno Ek Raaz Gehraa

Kiston Mein Kya Jeena

Lambee Saans Lo Zara

Muthiyon Ko Kassona Inhe Khol Do

Dil Mein Kya Rakhna Chalak Bol Do

Tulsi: good morning...

Gun Guna Lo Muskuralo

Zindagi Toh Sikhtati Hai Yehi

Lehralo Balkhalo

Hum Qaidi To Nahin

Jhoom Le Jhoom Jhama

Jhoom Jhamak Jhoom

Pairon Mein Ta Ta Thaye

Jhoom Tumaak Tum

Lehron Ke Sang Chap Chap Chaapak Cham

Dol Tu Dum Dum Dum Dumaak Dum

Jhoom Le Jhoom Zoom

Oh Zara Jhoom Le Jhoom Zara

Suno Yaaron Suno Ek Raar Gehraa

Kiston Mein Kya Jeena

Lambee Saans Lo Zara

Muthiyon Ko Kassona Inhe Khol Do

Dil Mein Kya Rakhna Chalak Bol Do

Jhoom Le Jhoom Jhama

Jhoom Jhamak Jhoom

Pairon Mein Ta Ta Thaye

Jhoom Tumaak Tum(everyone shouted 'TUM' together and finished singing )

With the end of song they also finished sweeping the whole room and collected the wastes in a dust bin and took it outside...

Sharon: room cleaning keliye itna bada hungama...oh god...aur kya kya dekhna padega...

Gitaanjali:(from downstairs)sab log tayar ho kar neeche aao...mumma aati hogi...come on

Rohan: sab log includes aunties and uncles...

Simmi: AUNTY...hum kis side se aunty dikhte hain une...

Swayam: ok...kal humara plan flop ho gaya lekin aaj hum esa hone nahi denge...aaj hum yahan se nikalenge...kese bhi karke...

Nil: yeah...lets get ready...and get into action...

All of them leave to get ready...

10:00 AM...

Children had their breakfast and were getting ready to go somewhere...

Sharon: kal ki tarah koi aalo paratha hain tho mein khana nahi khane wali...

Annu: i would love that...lekin kya karoon...anni toh subah hi gayi hain fresh fruits laane...pata nahi kyun in loggon keliye yeh kar rahi hain...

Neha: kyun ki uski wajahse hum yahan fasse hain...pata nahi humare mumma papa kis haalat mein honge...

Amar: use uski kya chinta...hamesha uski man maani...parents ke man mein kya chal raha hain yeh jaan ne keliye parents ho na zaroori hain...

Rey glared at him while othere nodded thier head..

Vishaka: bloody orphan...

Annu:(angrily)tameezse bhaat kijiye...varna...

Swayam: varna kya...kya kar logi...

Annu: karne keliye kuch bhi kar sakthi hoon...

Swayam: kuch bhi kar sakhti hoon...(mocking her)ohh please...

Annu: dekhiye..

Before she could say anything

Taani: annu...

Annu: diii...suna aapne...yeh log...urghhh...inko yahanse jaane keliye kaho na...koii..itna irritaing kese ho sakta hain...

Taani: annu tujhe sab pata hain na...jaa jakar plate le kar aa...

Annu left giving them a murderous glare...

Taani: kaki...yeh kuch fruits hain...agar aap Ramaya bhabhi ko dekhne jaa rahi ho toh le kar jaana...

Anjali: aap kahan jaa rahi ho...

Taani: kuch kaam hain...tu na inhe khaane keliye kuch de...mein abhi freash ho kar aa jaoongi...

Taani went to refreash and gang had their breakfast...

11:30 am..

Gang were sitting in the sitout and planning how to get out from here when they saw children comming out dressed...maybe thay were going somewhere...

Pari:(to Swayam)hi,uncle...

Swayam: hi beta...aap bohot pretty lag rahe ho iss dress mein..

Pari:(clutching its frills) thank you...

Swayam: aap log kahan jaa rahe ko...

Pari:(excited)wo na..aaj jo di,john bhiya,jhanvi di,Anjudi,sameera di,Rohan bhaiyaa...

Swayam: haan haan...inke...

Pari: in sab ke...wo kya thaa...per..per..

Swayam: performance...

Pari: haan...who hi...

Swayam:(looking at gang)kahan...

Pari: pata nahi...

Swayam: kon le ke jaa rahe aap sab ko...

Pari: bhaiyaa aur diii,aur Ramesh uncle, kaka,surabhi aunty,kaki,anjali di,

Swayam: aur Taani...

Pari: maa nahi aa rahi...

Nil: tchh...

Taani was not going with them,this disappointed them...a golden chance...

After sometime three caravan came and one by one they got into it...

Rishab: mumma hame bhi jana hain...please...

Taani: nahi...tum loggon ko parso board exam hain...nahi jaa rahe matlab nahi jaa rahe...

Rishab: lekin...

Taani: rishu...behas mat karo...ek din ki bhaat hain...

Rishab: Fine...

Children: bye mumma...

Taani went to the first caravan..

Taani: acche se perform karna...all the best...mein tumhare saath hi hoon(kissing everyone on their forehead)

Then went to next two caravan

Taani: uncle jo bhi kahe unke baath manna...koi badmashi..varna agli baar nahi jaaoge...hmmm...(TO kaka)sambhal ke jaana..pohanchte hi phone karna...

Kaka: tu thenshion mat le...mein sab dekh loonga...

Taani: aap ko pata hain na...

Kaka: haan haan...meri maa..

Taani: toh...bye...(as the car started)Sambhal ke jaana...koi shararathi ki toh...

Children: bye mumma...byeee

Taani stood their till the car left the gate...and turned to see Rishab fuming in anger...

Rishab: aap se bhaat nahi karoonga...

Taani:(quietly) rishu...

Rishab: aap mujse jyada unse pyaar karti hain...

Rishab ran inside while Taani followed him calling out for him...

Vicky: are wah...kya oppurtunity hain...

Nil:(with an evil grin) dude..i was also thinking that...

Amar: what...

Vicky: hum jaa toh rahe hain...jaane se pehale thoda maa-betoon ki pyaar toh kum karo

Rey: no Vicky...thats not right...

Simmi: jo wo hamare saath kar rahi hain kya woh right hain...nahi naa...so why should we play fair...

Rey: because we are not her...

Vishakha: i second Simmi...

Swayam: mein bhi iss ides ka saath nahi de sakta...

Bharath: wo tumahara marzi...lekin hum chup nahi betne wale...

Vicky: chalo...

Vicky,Nil,Amar,Bharath,Vishaka,Simmi went with them...after sometime rest of them joined them...not to do anything but just to see what they are going to do...

They saw Taani going to the kitchen...

Vicky: perfect...

He then lead them to children's room where they knocked and entered...

Vicky: hii...

Gitaanjali: oh...hii...aap log baitiye...

When they all settled down...

Nil: yeh bacche kahan gaye...

Tulsi: ek fest hain...St Peter's ka...wahan gaye...

Sharon: St Peters...Thats really great...

Amar: tum log kyun nahi gaye...

Jacob:(showing the book) exam...mchhh

Bharath: toh phir unhe kyun jaane diya...

Vishaka: Taanine sahi nahi kiya unhe jaane de kar...are tum loggon ki maa hain...toh sab ko equally treat karna chahiye...

Children raised their eyebrow at this comment...Gita and Jacob exchanged glance and nodded

Abarna: toh aap ka matlab hain hame exam keliye padna nahi chahiye...huh..

Simmi: no...she meant that it is not fair...har maa apne bacchon ko ek jaise treat karthi hain...

Mithoon:(standing up)listen...it is our matter and you guys better not interfere...

They also stood up...

Nil: hey chill...we were just mentioning our opinion...

Amar: from what all happened it is evident that your mother love them more...

This infuriated the children...if amar had continued with his comment then it was sure that a world war 3 might have happened there...but

Jacob:(comming in between them) Mithoon...no..they are our guests...please..

They glared at him but sat down...

Jacob: aap log mere saath aayiye...hum bahar jaa kar bhaath karenge...

Gang gave him a 'whatever' look and follows him...he takes him to their room..

Jacob: dekhiye...i'm really touched to see that you guys care for us...but isko ese express mat kijiye kyun ki agli baar hum unhe control nahi kar paayenge...particularly shilpa aur john ko..

Rinni: i don't understand...what your mother did is wrong...not what we did...

Jacob: sorry...but i really can't agree with you...

Neha:kya koi maa apne bachoon ko ese treat kar sakti hain.. tum sab ko ek saath bejna chahiye tha na...varna nahi bejna chahiye tha...

Jacob: that is not right...unhe wo fest mein jaana important tha...

Neha: she could have postponed it...

Jacob: but it is last day...they are performing for the closing cermony...

This left them speechless...

Jacob: agar aaj unki performance nahi bhi thi...toh bhi hum unhe jaane dete...sochiye agar aapke ek chota bhai aur behan hain aur wo kahin jaana chahta hain..lekin aapke exams chal rahe hain yaa phir

aur koi reason ke karn aap nahi jaa sakte...kya aap jo aaj kaha hain wohi karte...apne chotto ki chotti si ichcha bhi poori nahi karte kya...nahi na..wahan mumma papa kya karte hain usse koi matlab nahi...

They just stared at him...he was telling right...when our siblings want something and is not getting because of us then we should be the one to give them that...they knew this

Jacob: (leaving)anyway...please don't create a scene like this...(on reaching the door)aur rahi baath mumma ki..apne notice nahi kiya hoga...she didn't go with them ...she stayed back with us..

issse aapko pata chal gaya hoga...maa ke liye hum equal hain...haan..Rishabne aaj woo nautanki isliye kiya kyunki usse Paubaji bohot pasand..dekhna aaj ghar mein paubaji banega...ok then...

He leaves the room after closing the door...There was a silence...

Vishaka: mahaan taani aur uske mahaan bachhe...god,kya kya aur dekhna padega...

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Anjana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

PART B-

12:30 PM

Taani: (shouting from downstairs)maharani...mujhe aaj hi market jana hain...

Annu: uffo di...bas 5 minute or...

Hearing this gang came out of their room...if they were not mistaken Taani was going somewhere...maybe a chance to escape...

Taani: panch minute ho gaya...ab aa na

Annu: di aap chalo gaadi mein beitto...abhi aati hoon...

Taani: jaldi aana

Annu: haan meri maa...aa rahi hoon...

Taani:(noticing gang)hum log sirf ek ghante keliye bahar jaa rahe hain... yahan se bhaagne ki koshish bhi mat kijiye...aap nahi kar sakte...

Neha: jaayenge tho hum zaroor...

Taani:(leaving)All the best...

As Taani left...

Swayam: idea...come with me...

They followed Swayam...

Swayam: i thought so...

Sharon: what...

Swayam: see...its a tempo...

Bharath: so...

Swayam: a big one too.

Nil: tho...

Rey: we can escape in it...brilliant Swayam...lekin Taani

Swayam: chal...Taani yahan nahi hain...yeh hi mokka hain...

They opened the door...

Sharon:(hesitantly)its dusty...

Vishaka: tempo saaf karne keliye nahi...uspe beithna hain...

Sharon: isn't there any other option...

Vishaka: dekh Sharon..this oppurtunity won't come again...hum log tumhare vajah se yeh miss karna nahi chahte...

Amar: yep...

Rey: get inside,sharon...its just a matter of few minute...

All of them gets inside..Sharon does it reluctantly and locks the door praying that Taani would not open door...Suddenly they here Annu's voice nearby

Annu: di yeh aapne lock kyun nahi kiya..

Taani: tho lock karana...

Annu: hmmm..(sound of shutting the lock)kardi...chale ab...

Taani: haan

Then they start the journey not knowing that Gang was with them...After few minutes Sharon starts sneezing...

Vishaka: Sharon..shhh

Sharon covers her mouth but she is not able to control...suddenly she starts coughing badly...

Swayam gets worried..and rubs her back but this doesn't help her...with each passing moment her cough gets worse...she starts breathing heavily...

Simmi: Oh god...Sharon ko asthama hain...yeh toh hum bhool gaye...

Vishaka: WHATTT???SHARON AND asthama...(looking at sharon)

They were shocked with this news..Rey and others get panic seeing Sharon's condition... now her eyes starts rolling up...Seeing all this Swayam satrts blaming him and crying...

Rey bangs the tempos wall...

Neha: what are you doing...

Rey:(shouting)trying to get her attention...join me...

They start banging on the door...soon the tempo comes to a halt...They knew if any one can help them then it is Taani...They hear someone oppening the door...

Taani's eyes widen seeing them inside...it was then she noticed Sharon in Swayam's arms...gasping and her whole body covered in sweat...she was shaking feverishly...no one was able to control

her...

Swayam: Taani do something...agar isse kuch ho gaya tho i swear i won't spare you...

Taani: huh...(comming out of trance)GET HER OUT FROM THERE...FIRST..

Taani went inside and with others help she got Sharon out and made her lie on the road...as it was noon time they could hardly find any vehicle or people...

Taani started removing the scarf around her neck and loosend the tight clothings a bit...on the otherside, it was becoming unbearable for Sharon and started flinging her legs and hands...Taani sat

with her and made her sit and hugged her...rubbing her back...Swayam also sat next to her helpless and chanting 'Sharon,Sharon' while gang didn't know how to react...

Taani:(shouting)GIVE ME THE PUMP...

This caught them off guard...did Taani knew it...

Taani: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU ALL WAITING FOR...GIVE ME THE DAMN PUMP...

Swayam:(searching the ) i...i...think i left it there...(wailing bit loudly)ab..ab...kya kren...Sharon...

Shaon started to make sound and started bitting Taani on her shoulder in panic

Taani: shhh...ANNU MERI BAG MEIN...AHHH..EK PUMP HAIN..WO NIKAAL...JALDI...

Blood started oozing out from Taani's shoulder but Sharon bit her harder...she was not in her own control...Rey came foreward and tried stopping her by pulling her face...

Taani: rahne dijiye...this will help her to calm down...

Taani was right...Sharon was indeed calming down..her thrashing reduced though she was struggling to breathe...

Taani: ANNU JALDI...

Annu: aayi di...yeh lijiye...

Taani took the pump and broke their hug...this made Sharon violent..she fell back and her chest started heaving up and down showing how much she is struggling...Taani tried to insert the pump's

mouth into sharon's but failed as she started shaking her head...Taani forcefully held cheek...and opened her mouth applying pressure on her cheeks

Swayam: usse dard ho raha hoga...(catching her arm)chodo usee...

Taani's glare was enough for Swayam...he removed his hand while taani inserted pump's mouth into Sharon's mouth and two puffs...Sharon's chest fell slowly...she took a deep breath and fell

unconscious...Taani stood up and bend down to scoop her when Swayam pushed her.She fell into Rey's arm who was standing behind her...They were pulled into an eyelock...

Swayam: yeh sab tumhare vajah se hua...

This brought them out of their trance...they moved apart...Rey noticed blood spot on her shoulder...

Annu: huhhh...what...tell me you are kidding bhai...

Swayam: (shouting)no i'm not...Sharon ki iss halat ki zimmedar sirf Taani hain...

Annu: aap thak nahi jaathe...aapne galti keliye doosaron ko blame karke...pehale yeh boliye kya anni ne aapse kaha ghaadi ke peeche baithne ko nahi na...phir...

Vishaka: we did this to escape from there...

Annu: escape...is tarah...pata tha aapko Sharon ko asthama hain phir bhi aapne...

Amar: nahi pata tha hamme...

Annu: wahhh...kya dosti hain...apne dost ko asthama hain yeh thak nahi pata...salam aapke dosti keliye...

Taani: thats enough annu...

Annu: nahi di aaj mein chup nahi beithoongi...aap ko zara se bhi sharam nahi aata unhe blame karte hua...unhone kya kuch nahi kiya aap keliye...

Swayam: kya kiya usne...aaj Sharon jis halat mein hain uski vajah bhi wo hain...

Annu: Sharon baach gayi uski reason bhi wo hi hain...

Swayam: isme konsi badi baath hain...

Annu: konsi badi baath...badi baath...aapse koi umeed rekhna hi galat hain...i hate you...i JUST hate you...aap mere bhai nahi ho...mere liye...

Taani: ANNU...BAS KAR...

Annu: par di...

Taani: chup...ek dum chup...

Taani: aap ko nahi lagta Sharon ko hospital lekar jana chaiye...yahan beech raaste pein ladne ke jagah...

Swayam:(hurt by annu's words)tum mujhe mat sikhao...sahi kya hain galat kya hain...

He then bent down and took Sharon in his arms and started walking...

Taani: kahan jaa rahe ho...unhe jadi hospital lekar jana chahiye...chaliye mere saath...

He knew that there was no other option and followed her.Swayam made her sit in the front seat and he sat next to her and kept her head on his shoulder...

Taani:(getting into driver seat) annu tu inko saath hospital aa...kaka se bola hain mene gaadi bechne ko..

Saying this they drove away...

2:30 pm

Gang with taani and Annu were waiting outside ICU..Swayam was sitting in chair clutching his hair with Rey next to him..Doctor came out...

Swayam: doctor...Sharon

Doc: darne ki baath nahi hain...she is perfectly safe now... Kal subah hi aap unhe ghar le jaa sakte hain...haan kya aap ke paas unke doctor ke number honge toh mein unhe consult kar ke

medicines prescribe kar doonga...

Simmi and Swayam knew about Sharon's asthama but they never bothered to keep her doctor's number...

Taani: mere paas hain...

Swayam looked at her in surprise...'how did she get it'...

Taani: mein inko number deke ghar jaa rahi hoon...agar kuch zaroorat hain to Annu ko bata dena...bye...chaliye uncle...

She left the hospital...after 5 hours or so, Sharon was shifted to room...After 9pm everyone left as they were tired...Swayam and Rey stayed back...Swayam sat next to Sharon holding her hands and

fell asleep there...Rey also sat on the bystanders bed and closed his eyes rewinding everything...It was when he heard sound of footsteps...he opened his eyes slightly to see Taani standing

near Sharon staring her...when moved a little she immediately kept her palm on her forehead and quietened her...Swayam was fast asleep to hear anything...she then ruffled Swayam's hair and moved

outside...Rey also followed her...He found her standing in the balcony looking far away...Without making noice he went near her and stood by her...she didn't seem to notice him standing there..

Taani: kya hua Rey...ap kuch poochna chahte hain...

Rey: haan...nahi...mera matlab wo...mein...tumhe...kaisa...kaise pata tha Sharon ko...

Taani:(smiling)mujhe aap loggon ke baare mein bohot kuch pata hain...jaise...

Rey: jaise...

Taani:(looking into his eyes)us raat aapne aap ke ghar pe...mera diya hua saman aur photos jala diya...am i right or am i right,Rey...

Rey also looked into her eyes they were now filled with tears...if he waited a little more he could have witnessed their fall...But he did not...he just turned away and went... although he wanted to wipe that

tear but he didnot...

Rey:(whispering to himself)she desereve this...

But still...still he couldn't stop his eyes from getting wet...

NEXT DAY:

11:30PM

Gang reached home and were sitting near Sharon's bed when Taani came running...from her face it was evident that she was excited...

Taani:(excited)sab log yahi hain na...

Amar: nahi hamare bhooth hain yahan...kaise sawal poochti ho tum...

But she didn't wait for Amar's reply...she ran out...Rey smiled at this... after a few minutes they were able to hear wheel's noise...it confused them but soon they saw Taani opening the door

and entered with someone in wheelchair...her eyes where covered with Taani's duppatta...that person was wearing a red shirt and long skirt...hair left open...

She: kya bachpana hain yeh Tanni...mein khol rahi...

Her voice shocked them...she removed the dupatta and blinked her eyes before noticing them...

The person in the wheelchair was none other than

Vishaka: KRIYAAA...

Kriya was also shocked to see them before her eyes...only Taani knows how much she missed them...She was floating in her past when she felt someone's palm on her shoulder...She knew it was Taani,

her friend...she looked up to meet Taani's eyes...she was speechless...her eys were brimming with tears...she kept her palm on Taani's and looked at the gang...

Who like her was not knowing how to react...

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rose_taarey

@rose_taarey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

res/unres

amazing update...bt yar tu aur kitne shock degi...😡...aftr reading ur update...only 1 ques cums in my mind always......ab kya hoga...😆...bt pls i request u...dont create mor distance b/w taarey...due to kriya...omg...no1 knws abt sharon's doc...😲😲😲...c gave gud answer 2 rey-

Taani:(smiling)mujhe aap loggon ke baare mein bohot kuch pata hain...jaise...

Rey: jaise...

Taani:(looking into his eyes)us raat aapne aap ke ghar pe...mera diya hua saman aur photos jala diya...am i right or am i right,Rey...

haha rey wil be shocked...dont worry rey...mey bhi shocked hu...😲😲😲...taani ko ye baat kaise pata chali...

update asap...

Edited by rose_taarey - 11 years ago

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sumera sulaiman

@sumera_sulaiman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#239

res/unres😊

wese di aap aur bhi jatke se jatke hame de rahi hain

mein toh sure hun ki mein pakka mental hospital pohunch jaungi😆😆

mujhe kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai...

suddenly kriya ki entry, aur taani ki motive ko bhi abhi tak samajh nahi payi..

i think annu ko sab pata hai lekin taani hi usse batane se mana kar rahi hai..

sharon ka asthma prob aur taani to d rescue😃😃

hamare princess toh har prob ki solution jaanthi hai😊😊😊

wese aap sab secrets ko kab reveal karogi warna sach mein pehle ki tarah bata rahi hun mein mental ho jaungi😆😆

aap jald se jald se update kariye.. iss update bhi update karne ki yehi time hai kya..

chalo aapko maaf kiya par agli baar aap ye galti mat kijiye warna meri life ki guarantee nahi🤣😆

on d whole ye update superrr se bohot bohot bohot uparr thi👍🏼

Edited by sumera_sulaiman - 11 years ago

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@navk

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#240

awesome update
part-a was nice but
part-b bang on
asthma scene was superb
& rey & taani's conversation
was also good but surprise
was unexpectable
it was amazing ..
update soon dear