AsYa SS:One rainy night, two strangers & coffee Completed

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Posted: 11 years ago

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rajnid68

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wonderfully penned..

Both drowning their problems..by having coffee

Looking forward to the rest..

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manognasai

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Posted: 11 years ago

Amazing and a refreshing start👏Loved the way u explained each and every moment and feelings of The Lonely Girl and The Coffee Man!Update soon...

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madina12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful start...
Look forward to ur next update

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dewdrops27

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Posted: 11 years ago

Your writing is very good!!

Do continue soon!!

I loved it!

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647704

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Posted: 11 years ago

very nice..😊

Edited by ImmortalLove - 11 years ago

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aashiqua

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Posted: 11 years ago

it was written so beautifuly and smoothly dat i realy felt very angry as u end dis part...i wanna read it as whole...let me ask is zoya d girl he is supposd to meet compeld by his mother?..when wil u update ..if possiblf plz pm me

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treasure11

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Posted: 11 years ago

YOU DESCRIBE SO BEAUTIFULLY...

THE RAIN ,THEIR INNER THOUGHTS,THEIR FEELINGS

EVERYTHING!!!!!!

CONTINUE SOON !

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Nim

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hey Ambreen,

It's simply Beautiful. You're a genius at writing, you know that don't you? The surroundings, weather, people & emotions were all Perfectly described. So "the Lonely Girl" becomes the key to all of Asad's secret or hidden desires. But due to his nature, he would not talk to her or at least know her name.

I guess it's Zoe, & isn't she the one his mother chose for him? just saying after reading Zoe's thoughts, this came to my mind. That she was sad because her proposal or relation to be with somebody was broken & here Asad has rejected to meet a Girl, too.

So... please update this soon.

Love..