NAKSH OS: Ek Dusre Se Karte Hain Pyar Hum UPDATED

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Hello all nakshians,
this is my first naksh OS hope u all liked my OS
In my OS all characters are as usual as in yrkkh
so here is my OS...
Naksh were busy with their daily routines and does not have time for each other
naitik is getting ready for office...he calling akshara
naitik: akshara..akshara
akshara: aa rahi hu
akshara come upstairs..
A: kya hai naitik
N: akshara meri shirt ka button tut gaya hai plz laga dijiye
A: naitik mujhe bahut saare kaam karne hai..abhi duggu ko bhi school ke liye taiyar karna hai...aap dusri shirt pahan lijiye na main baad me laga dungi.
N: hamesha to aap usi samay lagati hain na...
A: haan par aaj bahut kaam hain na...
N: mere liye to aapke paas time hi nahi hai...aap rahne dijiye baad me bhi ye button lagane ki jarurat nahi hai main kisi darji se lagava lunga.
naitik angrily goes out of the room
A: naitik meri baat to suniye...
naitik goes to office while in home akshara is worry because naitik is angry with her...akshara thinks..
A: aaj maine naitik ko naaraj kar diya mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha...
later in evening akshara doing all her works very fastly so that she kept some time for naitik..
naitik come from office..he goes to his room and busy with his laptop., akshara come upstairs and asks naitik for tea...he says no because he is busy with office works on laptop...
akshara thinks he is already angry with her..she goes downstairs and preparing for dinner..
in night at the dining table all mens were sitting and having foods..after finish their food they go to their room and then all singhanias ladies were sitting to eat.
akshi wants to go to her room as soon as possible but still she does not have time to go..then dadda ji calling akshara... akshara goes to dj room and gives him his medicine and make dj sleep..
then after finishing all works she goes upstairs..while going to her room
A: aaj bhi bahut der ho gayi..kahin naitik phir se naraj na ho jaye..
she fastly go and wear naitik's favourite night gown then go to her room.
she sees that naitik is already on the bed under the blanket.. she too came under the blanket and says to naitik..
A: Sorry naitik aaj thoda late ho..(she sees that naitik is already asleep)
A: are naitik to so gaye..janti hu mera intezar karte karte so gaye hoge..kafi thak bhi gaye the..galti meri hi hai mujhe hi apna saara kaam jaldi se khatm kar lena chahiye tha..par ab aage se aisa nahi hoga...kal se mera saara time aapke liye..(after placing his hands on naitik's face she says) I LOVE YOU naitik and kisses on his cheeks then she turns another side😳
N: I love you too (after placing his hands on akshara's waist)
akshara is completely shocked she says
A: aap jag rahe the..main to soch rahi thi ki aap so gaye
N:akshara chahe kitni bhi der kyun na ho jaye main hamesha aapka wait karunga... vaise akshara ek baat bataiye jab main aapse I love u bolne ke liye kahta hu tab aap itna sharmati hai aur aaj jab main so raha tha to aapne jhat se kah diya kaya baat hai...
A:kya aap bhi... main to bas yuhi 🥱
within a second they completely hug each other 😳
N: aaj maine aapko bahut miss kiya.
A: maine bhi aapko bahut miss kiya
N: Akshara main aapse ek baat puchoo?
A: poochiye
N: sach sach bataiyega
A: poochiye to sahi..
N: jab aap kamre me aayi aur dekhi ki main so gaya hu tab aapko kaisa laga

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Posted: 11 years ago
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N:jab aap kamre me aayi aur dekhi ki main so gaya hu tab aapko kaisa laga?
A:jab maine dekha ki aap so gaye hai to mujhe bahut bura laga kyonki aap subah bhi naraj hokar chale gaye the aur jab wapis aaye tab bhi main aapko samay nahi de payi...main subah se aapko bahut miss kar rahi thi aur aapko sorry bhi bolna chahti thi..
N: to phir aapne mujhe uthaya kyon nahi 😉
A: kyonki aap pahle hi itna thak gaye the aur aapko uthakar main aapki neend nahi kharab karna chahti thi
N: akshara aap na world best wife hai...hamesha mere aaram,sukh ke bare me hi sochati rahti hai..I am sorry akshara maine bekar me hi aapko subah daant diya jabki aap to har pal mere bare me hi sochati rahti hai..
A: nahi naitik sorry to mujhe kahna chahiye..main hi aapko time nahi de payi aapki narajgi bilkul jayaj thi..
N: akshara agar hum aise hi ek dusre ko sorry kehte rahe na to hamare beech ladai ho jayegi..
A: nahi ab hamare beech kabhi ladai nahi hogi..kyonki hum ek dusre se bahut pyar karte hai
N: haan vo to hai..hum ek dusre se itna pyar karte hai ki hamare beech kabhi ladai nahi ho sakti..aur dekha jaye to actually galti kisi ki nahi thi halat hi aise the..hum dono itne busy ho gaye the ki ek dusre ke liye time hi nahi nikal pa rahe the..par ab hum aisa nahi hone denge..aaj kal aap mujhe bahut miss karti hai na
A: haan vo to hai
N: to is problem ke solution ke liye mere paas ek idea hai
A: kya
N: pahle boliye ki aap mana nahi karengi
A: acha baba thik hai main mana nahi karungi
N: to phir theek hai kal sunday hai na kal ka pura din hum saath bitayenge..bahar ghoomne jayenge movie dekhenge aur khoob enjoy karenge
A: idea to acha hai naitik par kal main ghar se bahar kaise jaungi
N:kyo kya hua?
A:kal ma aur bhabhi ma pados wali tai ji ke yahan puja me ja rahi hai aur mujhe bhi saath chalne ko kaha hai
N: bas itni si baat.. ye sab aap mujh par chod dijiye..main ma se permission le lunga
A: aisa kya karenge aap
N: main ma se kah dunga hamare kuch client aane wale hai jinke saath deal sign karne ke liye aapko bhi jana padega,.. simpal hai tab to ma bilkul bhi mana nahi karengi
A: aap ma se jhut bolenge
N: akshara aapne vo kahavat to suni hogi..pyar aur jang me sab kuch jayaj hai aur vaise bhi aapka sath pane ke liye main kuch bhi kar sakta hu..bas aap haan kar dijiye
A:meri taraf se to haan hai bas ma maan jaye to
N: ok done, ab aap ma ki chinta chodiye aur bas mere karib aa jaiye ab hum sirf romantic baate karenge 😃


N:acha akshara ye bataiye aap mujhse kitna pyar karti hai
A:bahut khud se bhi jyada..utna jitna koi sapne me bhi nahi soch sakta.. main aapse itna itna itna pyar karti hu ki main aapke aaj vo night gown pahan ke aa gayi jise pahan ne me mujhe bahut sharm aati thi..I love u naitik
naitik is shocked to see her in that NG
N:aap mere liye ye NG pahan ke aayi aur itni der se maine dhyan hi nahi diya.. aap sach me bahut bahut bahut sundar lag rahi hai is dress me.. meri to aapse nigahe hi nahi hat rahi hai... man kar raha hai bas aapko hi dekhta rahu..
A:naitik aap please mujhe aise mat dekhiye mujhe bahut sharm aati hai
N:are aapne mere liye hi to pahna hai aur mujhe hi mana bhi kar rahi hai...
A:naitik
N:akshara sach batau mujhe aapka ye sharmana bhi bahut acha lagta hai..kyonki jab aap sharmati hai to aur bhi jyada cute lagti hai
within a second naitik pulled akshara towards him.. he kisses on akshara's forhead and akshi kisses on naitik's cheeks... they were under the blanket in their own world..(piya bawri playing in the background)
In morning, naksh were still sleeping in each other arms peacefully.. after sometime naitik woke up first and admired his beautiful wife..suddenly akshara too wake up
N:Good morning(after kissing on her cheeks)
A:good morning
N:aapko apna promise yaad hai na jo kal raat aapne mujhse kiya tha
A:haan mujhe yaad hai aur main aapke sath chalne ke liye taiyar hu..chaliye ab uthiye aur mujhe bhi jane dijiye
N:nahi..abhi nahi😳
A:are mujhe bahut sare kam khatm karne hai..tabhi to main aapke sath bahar ghoomne ja paungi
N:theek hai aap jaiye lekin ek shart par..he pointed his cheeks
akshi gives pecks on naitik's cheeks and fastly go to washroom meanwhile naitik go to g3 and take her permission
In naksh room, naitik is wearing his shirt.. suddenly akshi came in the room after seeing her he becomes naughty and broke his shirt's button
N: Oh.. no
A:kya hua
N:akshara meri shirt ka button phir se tut gaya
A:Naitik main janti hu..aapke shirt ka button tuta nahi hai aapne khud jaanbujh kar toda hai
N:are nahi..sach me ye apne aap hi tut gaya
A:naitik bahane banane ki jarurat nahi hai..main sab samajhati hu..laiye main button laga deti hu
akshara came with niddle they stand completely close to each other

remaining parts are below this thread
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Edited by bindas567 - 11 years ago
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Akshara came with niddle.. they stand completely close to each other(naitik placing his hands on akshara's waist akshara fixing the button continuously looking into his eyes)
naitik doing all his mischievousness which he can do
N:akshara(pointed his cheeks) akshara gives the kisses on naitik's cheeks
A:lijiye button lag gaya ab main jau..
N:nahi (then he breaks another button and asks her to fix it)
A: are naitik ye kya aap ek ke baad ek button todte hi ja rahe hai.. jaiye ab main nahi lagaungi..
N:akshara pls man jaiye na..acha iske baad main nahi todunga
A: pahle promise kijiye
N:acha baba... promise
A: ok dijiye... main laga deti hu 😊
then after few hours naksh goes out to enjoy their sunday..
they go near the lake side enjoy some romantic moments there,doing shopping ,masti and eating icecreams together...and after having dinner they come to home and sleeps in each other arms.
THE END

so how's this ...pls like the thread and give your comments
tell me which scene you liked
Edited by bindas567 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mindblowing super duper hit os yaar
you are really fantastic writer love your os
pls pls continue soon...am waiting
Edited by anjali-naksh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very sweet os Dear
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super duper Os yaar...
Wonderful job done by u
Complete it soon...

M waiting...
👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice...I want you to continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: greatsumkum

very sweet os Dear

Loved it

thanks for liking it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kripa-banka

Super duper Os yaar...
Wonderful job done by u
Complete it soon...

M waiting...
👏

thanks..ya i complete it soon may be tommorow
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nakshiranridz

Nice...I want you to continue

thank you I continue soon...pls like the main page

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