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Posted: 11 years ago
Teaser for part 17








Ye geet kaha gayi abhi to mere sath thi

where are you geet ,GEET ,GEET









MAANji kaha ho app ab main kya karu
mera to mobile or purse bhi room main hi rahe gaya

Maanji Maanji Maanji



enjoy 😈

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Posted: 11 years ago


awesome update...

Maan ki innocent Geet kahan gayi...

Maan to gaya kaam se itni bold Geet dekh kar...yes why not girls express their desire...

Precap---SR se pehle hi Geet kho gayi...yeh to bahut bura hua...

hope Maan jaldi usse dhoond le...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 17

Maan put his hand to his hair and say oh man ye phone ko bhi abhi ana tha aj to kiss ho jata he make puppy face and went to wear his cloths hear geet attent the call , it is call from her home actually she not called them after reach in kerala , so they called them geet talking with them but her all thought are around the maan , maan hot and under shower image not going from her mind she cant hearing their talk she just talking in hu ha like this at last that called ended she end the called

Now her face again turn into red with shyness and she know that now can't lose chance to tease her ,she start avoid eye contact with maan and say maan wo papa or ma ka phone tha humane call nahi kiya to wo pareshan ho gaye wo apko bhi puch rahe thay /they are asking about you also

Maan ; ok geet maan have teasing smile on his face he know geet avoid his eye contact and her red face talking about her mind state he just want to hug her and kiss her breathless .He control his all erect thought and ay to himself no geet today I don't leave you ,at list a kiss i deserved ,if gate some more then kiss then I am happy person

Maan just come near geet and ask in husky voice Geet wo kii kii Keys kaha rakhi hai room ki oh poor geet turn into beetroot red she excepting kiss word from him poor soul just look him with shock and after geet reaction maan start to laugh like manic

Geet just want to run from there,

Maan : now be ready we are going for outing and for some shopping if you want change then change you know i love jeens with that he went to hall

Hear our geet sharm se pani pani at last she took jeans from bag it is skin fit jeans with fitted top ,she took scroll with it she first time wear this cloths so she littil bit uncomfortable with it ,but now she also start to enjoy this all from dress to company of maan

She come in front of maan and maan mouth open in O shape ,in shock he say

Maan : Oh geet you looking dam sexy and smoking hot

Geet eyes pop up like boll with maan comment she just run to wear her shooes

Maan and geet both come to reception give keys to them and turn to go there one person in late 40 standing there with smile he introduce himself as manger of hotel and he start to inquiring about hotel service , are they satisfied with that or not he is jolly person

Mohan : you don't have any problem with our service Mr. kuhurana

Maan : no mr. joshi you have good and efficient staff

Mohan : so you are on your first honeymoon

Maan : thinking like fist honeymoon ,to kitane honeymoon hote hai he just nodded his head

Mohan : Mohan came to near maaan ear so what is score

Maan ; maan just turn in red with mohan qus ,and mummer score big O ,but mohan lesion maan mummered and start to laugh maan just want to run from there poor boy and hear geet asking him what happen maan just nodded in no and say by to mr. mohan

Mohan one second he give his personal number it help you and for traveler there are bike also available so enjoy and mr. khurana think and work on score ha ,maan just run from there

Both came to parking of hotel took a bike maan say to geet, sit geet ,geet already have weird feeling in her stomach with making baby face to babaji she sit behind maan and maan just took chance and speed the bike and poor geet in fear clutch maan shoulder maan took her other hand and put it on his abdomen ,poor girl have goosebumps on her body first cool winter ,romantic atmosphere and hot images of maan in mind and she sit on bike with shy and dhak dhak heart bit her soft body touching with maan hard body when ever there body touch with each other current is passing from there body

Poor maan he is in another world geet on his bike with every brake and speed of bike her body touching with his body her soft body make another ***** effect on his body ,he just want to stop his bike and -------------------

Geet soft hand on his body give goosebumps to him maan scare with his own desire with speed he reach to there destination it is beautiful part of munnar ,they watch some point and went to shopping ,after shoping both coming out from shop and there is one Groom barat was passing from there ,both start to look to barat after passing of that barat he just turn for geet and he gate the shock of his life ,geet is not there ,she just disappear from there ,maan just got blank for moment ,he don't know what to do new place ,new people and his newly wedded wife just disappear from there ,so many bad thought coming in his mind ,if any bad things happen with her, he start to search her like mad person he don't have her photo with him he so much scare for geet

In this few days geet become his life and this thought if something bad happen with her start to brake him, he just dial her number but she is not taking it after so many try ,he at last dial adi number

Maan ; adi help me adi help

Adi ; shuttered with maan talks ,he ask maan what s wrong what happen maan tell him all things ,adi say cool down maan first clam yourself and called to hotel if she went there and for photo ihave some your photo i will send you that on your mobile don't worry she should be all right don't worry and he cut the call

After talking with adi maan little bit clam down and first he called hotel but he got negative ans ,he gate photo from adi ,he just loose his pession it is more then 2 hour he is searching geet , he went near by police station with fearful mind he tell them and give geet photo

They say they will not written complaint because after 24 hour of missing they write question they start to ask him that you misbehave with her or bit her etc he so much angry but for geet shake he keep quite he just turn his finger in fist to control his anger

Mean time one constable come there and say he got one dead body that girl also have jeans ,maan just stood numb with blank face ,his mind stop to work inspector put hand on his shoulder and shook him and say please see that body and maan just nodded his head in no ,after some time with shaking yes he look to that body ,his face light up that is not his geet ,he just put his hand on face say no she is not my wife and imm come out from police station he sit on bench hold his face in his hand and start to cry like small child and start to mummer geet where are you geet

precap . nothing

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Posted: 11 years ago
aapka kya iraada hai

hum sab ki jaan lene ka

itna shoching ending
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sad update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 18

His phone start to ring with him he took phone but scare because it is call form geet father and they are asking how is geet maan somehow control his emotions and asy she is ok papa , Mohinder maan some time before geet called me she is disturbed on call so I call you everything is ok na , maan start to boil with anger it means geet call her papa but not me but he control himself and say nothing to worry papa and cut the call and again call on geet phone and reception of hotel but he gate negative response

After few second he gate called with unknown number with so much fear he took called it is from mohan hotel manager ,he say him that geet is in hotel

Maan just took breath in relief and say stop her there I am coming with no time he came to hotel he is so much angry,scared ,frustrated there he saw geet siting on garden bench of hotel with bending head he just went near her and shook her with his hand ask in real anger what was that geet where are you , where you disappear we are in new place ,and why you not taking your called , you can call papa but not me what is this geet , ans me dam it geet he said in high voice

Geet is shaking like dry leaf , tear start to fell from her eyes with shaking voice and shaking hand she just hug maan and say I am sorry maanji I am sorry wo barat dekate hu I miss your hand and when I saw you are not there I search you there for hour , after that I request one shop keeper that he allowed me for one called I call on your number but it coming busy so I called papa and wo wo I forgate my purse and mobile in hotel room so cant attend your call ,till hear I came with walking and now I am felling so tired and hungry she mummer last line in slow voice


Maan just nodded his head what a master piece ,his anger go away with soft voice he ask you are hungry oh geet you don't know till now what I feeling

I think I lost you, you are part of my life geet I so much scare and after papa called I gate angry on you but don't repit this geet I should die without you geet just put her hand on his mouth ,she is looking to his eyes with pain and love and say sorry , maan just want erased this tension so with naughty smile he kiss geet hand with big sound and yes geet eyes winded in shock she start look hear and there ,if somebody saw him like this she turn beetroot red and took back her hand maan ask her common lets go in room we eat something there ,geet nodded her head and start to walk but stop for second come back to maan and with shyness she just pick on his cheek , and run from there ,maan stand there with open mouth oh what is that he have silly green on his face then he also went behind her ,both took there lunch and maan ask her to take some rest in evening we are going to watch sunsate point and dare you don't repit this again geet just nodded in yes

After some time she wake up saw she is alone in room she scare for moment but her eyes fall on note It is good evening sleeping beauty now hurry up we have to reach early to sunsate point I am waiting in hotel lobby come fast and ya there are some surprised in hall watch out waiting your maan she just put finger on word maan , she went to hall and there she saw a packet with happiness she open a gasp come from her mouth it is beautiful saree ,her face light like moon she just ready in within time and went to hotel lobby all where watching her when maan saw her he stand there like statute with desireful eyes , he say to himself maan bahar jane ka program canceled kart u 100 % kuch ulta sidha kar dega



Geet come to near him and say thanks you have good choice maan just nodded his head and thay start to walk to point it is walking distance from hotel there are so many couple there maan make face and mummer ye to market se bhi jadha rush hain

Geet is in her world maan took her to near the sunset in that light her face shine like gold she just looking beautiful ,maan just watching her ,but her bangls brought him back and say geet you falled love with anybody in your school or collage first geet shock with qus but with shy she nodded her head

Maan hold his breath , he start fell jeloes , with serous face he look to her and ask to her

Maan ; who is that

Geet ; there are three manji maan eyes pop in shock

Maan ; geet 3 person

Geet ; with shy smile yes they are tom cruse , hritik roshan and my painting teacher of class 9 th ,

Maan just hold his finger in feast ,he try to hold his anger but when he heard first two name , he start to laugh oh geet Tom and hritic common geet

Geet ; geet make face with anger say I wll not tell you anything maanji you laughing on me

Maan ;sorry geet I will not you continue maan some how control his laugh

Geet yes tom because he is so quite and hritic he have 6 pack and that drawing sir you no maanji he is so down to earth and he is good loking he is my first crush but I never told him because of shy , you know you are not like them but don't know but I like you

She look to his eyes and maan just staring her ,her confession give him happiness his heart making bhangda

Geet somehow broke there Mahiii moment and ask do you have any afier first maan denied but then say yes in collage one girl maya she is bold and beautiful I have crush ob her for 6 month and one day when I went to propose her that day I got that she already have boyfriend and maan start laugh on himself you know that is so stupid , that is just attraction nothing else

They are so much engross with each other they don't gate they are all alone on that place they are lost in each other eyes there special Mahiii

And from no wear rain start adding fire on their desire this is unexpected winter rain maan just took geet hand and run to take shelter , but they already drench in rain and geet saree touch her like second skin which give look of her perfect figer beautiful shapes of her body which added fire in maan desire he came near geet and took clip from her hair he just love her open hair he blow to her hair ,for hide her red cheek she went away from him


Geet start to shake with cool air ,she already drench with rain and this cool air maan just come near to her and put his hand on her shaking hand which passed current in geet body she try to go back word he came near her she just run from there and again drench in rain with open eyes this new desire her body on fire with maan touch

Shwaas ha tujha
Aahe oothi aaj hya
Sparsh ha tuza ani hi tujhi nasha

I just want to feel you now
I just want to touch you now
Baby come close to me
I just want to love you now

Zaraa... Zaraa
Jawal ye Zaraa Zaraa
Zaraa... Zaraa... Zaraa





Maan come near to her and took pallu in his hand pulled her to himself now geet back touching to his chest and current pass from there body




maan just put his hand on her hand start to travel his palm in slow speed on her bare and wait hand he took her hand and turn her to himself and blow some air on her face his hot breath make some magic on her a black magic she took her hand and start to cares his M shape lips with her fingers





maan just could not control after her hot touch

Share the love
Share my dreams tonight
Share my sky
Share my joy tonight

Feel the heat of the rain tonight
Feel the beat of my heart tonight

Aahe hi nashili hava
Haa avegla hai nava
Daar zankarun uthte taplelya janiva ...2

Zaraa... Zaraa
Jawal ye Zaraa Zaraa
Zaraa... Zaraa... Zaraa

he hold her face in his palm and give pick on her forehead then to her eyes , nose ,then on her cheek she just closed her eyes in submission and desire









she expecting maan next moov which may be her lips but when he not come near her lips she open her eyes with frown ,maan just want to eat her raw ,he say huskily geet it is our first kiss and I want to you look to my eyes when I first time kiss you

He mala
I can see desire
Stay with me
Can you see the fire
Touch my heart
Go deal with it
Feel the joy that lies there in

Haa sparsh aahe nava
Ani tyat ha garva
Taplelya avegala shaant hou de zara ...2

Shwaas ha tujha
Aahe oothi aaj hya
Sparsh ha tuza ani hi tujhi nasha

I just want to feel you now
I just want to touch you now
Baby come close to me
I just want to love you now

Zaraa... Zaraa
Jawal ye Zaraa Zaraa
Zaraa... Zaraa... Zaraa

a red hu come on geet face ,she just nodded then maan come to near her face and touch her rosy lips with his manly lips oh both are felling current in there body this heavenly feeling he start to make outline around her lips with his tongue like he tested some ice creme or candy , then he took her upper lips in his mouth and start to suck that , geet just hold his shoulder in anticipation she is felling out of world but her leg start to shake with so much passion, maan ask within his kiss geet fallow my action and geet took his lower lips in her lips oh cracker start to fired in her body , her heart is running like express , maan take next step and pull her closed to her body now her body touching to his body and there each and every part of body touching in right place when maan ******* touch geet stomach a gasp come from her mouth maan took that chance trust his tongue in her mouth and he touching each and every corner of her mouth start to drink her Silva ,he touch her whole mouth with her tongue , his one hand holding geet face and other is roaming on her back ,when maan gate geet cant breath he stop kiss and pull out them from kiss a red hu coming on there face they have /share there first kiss , maan just put his forehead on her forehead and say thanks geet thanks




precap i think all you know 😉

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 17 n 18
lovely updates...
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Posted: 11 years ago
both parts are very nice like very much n waiting for next update😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 16
awesome dear...
lovely...
nice...

PS - hey dear...we are in the new thread...
post the link there...see u soon in 9th thread...

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Posted: 11 years ago
teaser
nice...
where is she?

PS - hey dear...we are in the new thread...
post the link there...see u soon in 9th thread...

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Both update r super duper waiting fr nxt part

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