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The pace of SwaRon story is halted unnecessarily. The writers need grace period to settle down with SwaRon. But in the meantime does it involve tampering the original essence and beauty of characters by showing the opposite of basic characterisation. Adjusting to the SwaRon storyline which was already readily available, doesn't imply taking SwaRon in a way that is just not them. SwaRon are presented in a total contrast form whom we do no connect like Swayam and Sharon itself. The details in SwaRon story is not focused. The dialogues arent apt but also are repeated. That tells how reckless the writers are being towards SwaRon story. Sharon, who had hurt herself badly during the shivam fiasco knowing it would distance her from Swayam and had been completely involved herself with Swayam's every aspect in the last two years, is now all so casual about her broken relationship??? the strong headed DIVA is not paying any attention towards making good of her relationship with Swayam asap. This is how the writers want to continue justifying Sharon post break up? Besides Sharon is also totally distanced from DANCE element.
If it is not easy to move forward the love story of SwaRon towards patch up at least we expect the basic characterisation is kept intact.
We agree that Swayam is hurt badly this time. Swayam DO NOT have to run behind Sharon but how possibly the silent passionate lover inside him can be presented so vaguely as he is just like an ordinary character?? How on earth does Swayam's care and concern for Sharon is depending on a third person's intrusions?? that's horrible. Swayam goes on apologizing spree to rey (and this is individuality of Swayam according to D3 writers🤢) but does not even thinks once of justifying why he hid kriya's truth to Sharon. And I simply do not understand to which aspect does the repeated change monologue/dialogues of him I should relate to🤢 All I know is its not Swayam who wants Sharon to change herself
The writers are presenting just opposite of the basic characterisations with improper dialogues not at all apt for Swayam or Sharon. It clearly seems as cvs aren't paying any attention towards SwaRon or prolly they do not understand the depth of Swayam and Sharon even after having studied them or may be not🤢 very disappointing .
Udne Ki Aasha
