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doing in 10 minutes

and thanx fah waiting along😃😃😃

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Hey folks!!

I am here with the 9th chapter of mae SS,, still we are back in time,, promise its last full chapter in the Past...😕
do give a reading, do hit like and post your views...
am thankful to all those who waited along fah the update,, who commented, who liked, n even to those who just viewed



Part 9

Revelations

Nikah on phone doesn't remain valid, it is to be renewed with proper witnesses and care takers of bride and groom,

Words of molvi sahib repeated themselves in zoya's head, zoya's eyes were popping out of the sockets,

Nikah on phone doesn't remain valid, it is to be renewed with proper witnesses and care takers of bride and groom,

The lady kept on mourning,

While zoya's mind was somewhere else in the time,, she was all in deja vu

When zoya was busy on phone with Asad, trying to calm him down that soon she would be at home,

In the noise in community hall, someone was calling

Kya zoya Farid aap ko apna nikah Ayaan Ahmed Khan k sath qabool hai,

Haan Haan Mr. Khan!

Mubarak ho,, that man announced loudly

For what that man is saying congratulations to every one? What happened??

Mubarak ho! Zoya! your and ayaan's nikah has been accepted.

What? When did I say Yes to the nikah,, and with that too Ayaan?

Just few minutes back, you yourself accepted ayaan as your husband,

Now both of you are husband and wife

When asad came to know about recent mishap, she repeated herself over and over again

No,, Mr.Khan,.. it was just an accident,

Miss farooqi do you trust me?

Yes, I do..but

Then come with me,, asad reprimanded

Zoya is in the right slot, where she should be, she is wife of Ayaan so her place is here in SM,, asad announced in SM

Tatters of old memory were lingering in her mind...

No.. she called out aloud,,


She went to Molvi Sahib,

Excuse me

Assalaam-a-alaikum

Walaikum-asalam beta!

I want to inquire something about what you were telling to that lady few moments back, my case is slightly different but still I have some queries,

Yes? Man asked in slight confusion, while heading to his desk,

Sit here,, he gave her a mini-couch to sit,

And zoya told him everything right from being followed by goons, till the divorce clause,..

Still 1 month is left. After 1 month that divorce clause would hath an end, and I would be independent to marry any man of my choice

Oh! Girl! What are you saying, No nikah happened, and you still stayed with that man!

Saying Zoya was shocked would be an understatement, she could feel walls around her approaching her,

Look! I know you are shocked but its truth

Zoya was unable to utter even a single word,,

Its hard to understand but let me give you the detailed answer,

First of all, you told me that you never wanted to marry that guy, then this nikah is already rejected,

Then you were saying Yes to someone else and that too on phone, that's why priests over there misunderstood that as your agreement to nikah,

Your sir name was wrong, as I told that lady too, that nikah should be renewed with proper witnesses and care takers of bride and groom,

You told me you have no parents, then who was your caretaker for nikah?

Zoya's eyes were brimming with the fresh stocks of tears, the lump in her throat was made to stay un-swallowed

I do"don't know, zoya tried to answer, in the middle of her sobs

You signed the documents? But For what? When you never had nikah,

Okay! did molvi sahib asked you to say YES in front of all again.. whle signing nikah doccuments?

N..No

Oh my Allah! Your nikah is invalid, I would talk to Imam sahib of central Mosque, and would inform you with the conjoint opinion in few hours.

Zoya's body went numb,, and her mind was screaming in her

For what I, and Mr.Khan suffered that much, and still are suffering

I told him, it was an accident, and he never listened to me,

Mr.Khan! what you have done...

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Asad! I still want you to review your decision, her tears had dried, she had no more water to spool down,

Ami! whenever you want you can come and meet me,,

We would always stay connected, but I can't stay here anymore, asad's eyes were wet and expressions were tensed, but still he was trying to keep his sound calm

Asad! My son! How you can leave this country which gave you everything? She questioned him

Everything? Everything Ami?

Are you really asking me this question?

I don't want to go into the debate again, am tired of it Ami,, he said while leaning back on the headboard of his hospital bed.

Ami! you can stay with me, if you want, you can..

No Asad! I have decided, she said while wiping last trails of tears from her cheeks,

If you have right of deciding, the way to pass you life then I have my own,,

If you are firm in decision making then so I am,

With saying that she stood up,

My all blessings are with you,

Am-mi

May Allah bless you with a happy life ahead, say my love to Zoya too..

She turned her face away to hide her new trail of tears

Allah Hafiz

And without giving him a look she left the room,

Asad was watching her going, sense of sheerness was getting over him..

Atlast, My Ami left me

he had to cry for next few hours on the fresh loss he made

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After a day of sprouting warfare within her, it was 8 in the night, when zoya returned back to spine center,

A nurse was coming out of the Asad's room.

How is Mr. khan?

Umm Ma'm, he is sleeping, his BP is kind of high

Oh... tell me how much serious it is? Zoya got worried for him again

Ma'm normal one is 120/80, We can expect his to be 140/90, but its 160/90 and is out of range, Doctor has given him new IV medicine,

Oh

He is again stressing, where is Phoopi, she thought

He has nobody with him?

Um, No..

The old lady, I mean his mother left?

Yes Ma'm she left around 5 in the evening

Okay,

Nurse walked away,,


When she entered in his room, there were just two sounds in the room, 1 of beeping monitor and other his beating heart,

He was sleeping calmly, dark circles around his eyes showed like he hasn't slept since centuries. A new IV tube was connected to his left arm.

I hope everything went fine here.

Mr.Khan! Wake up I have much to tell you...she called him in her mind

She sat beside him, fondling his hairs,, with love and care, to not make him awake,

Do you know Mr. Khan! Her voice was hardly audible,

I was never wrong,

You were not wrong too.

Then whose fault was that?

She left his hairs and sat their while resting her elbows beside him on bed, and holding her own face in hands

It's what we call as destiny?

Was it really written in our lucks to stay away, and crave for each other,

She was staring in his calm snoring face

But if it was, then now I want it to come to an end,

He was stirring in deep slumber,,

He started mumbling something,,

Zoya stopped her self session, thinking he must have gotten disturbed due to her ,, she pulled back

But soon she realized Asad was really saying something,, his tone was telling he was calling for someone,

Ami..Ami,,

a gasp escaped through her mouth as she listened him calling Dilshaad

Ami..Ami, come back to me,

Don't, doon''t leave me na,

Your son is alone,

Am-mi..

Zoya put her hand on mouth to stop the escaping gasp...

She moved forward, and tried to calm him by stroking his hairs off the forhead,, holding his hand in hers

I am with you

His grip tightend on her hand,, and after few minutes he calmed back to sleep, while still holding zoya's hand,,

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Zoya! I needed to tell you some thing,, asad said in the morning while he was trying to be off the bed,,

Mr.Khan! I also have something, to tell you...but

But what? Asad looked up to zoya's face,

Don't get down,, Hann! You have to rest, zoya stopped him by holding his hand

Zoya! Last night doctors paid a detailed visit to me, and they told me that tomorrow I would be getting discharged.

And this bed belongs to hospital?

Zoya's mind was lost in the conversation of last evening, so she didn't get what he was trying to say..

What does that mean?? Scrunching her brows in confusion

It means miss farooqi.. he sat back in the bed, and made zoya to sit beside him while holding her arm,

It means that when I would be leaving the hospital, I would have to leave this bed too.. tucking her hairs behind ears

I can't take it with me, so am just trying getting off so that I can learn the habit of staying away from this bed,, he was smiling while looking directly in her eyes, where he could see the pain and sadness

What's it zoya?

Zoya kept silent and looked away,

He held her chin and tilted her to face him,

I know you are worried for me, am okay... look,, stretching his arms in air,, and when he was doing so, he felt her crashing herself into his chest,

Zoya! Held her with her shoulders,,

Zoya! Is everything okay? he could feel his hospital dress soaking up with the moisture she was pouring off her eyes

He was stroking her head with one hand, and his other hand was holding her tightly against his chest.

She was still crying,, what made her cry.. she didn't know too.. it was just the aftermath of revelation or the upshot of ten tiring days of her life,, in which she experienced worst fear of her life... loosing someone you love most, while being in your absolute senses,,

Mr.Khan! please don't go away from me,

Am here zoya! Please tell me what happened? His eyes started tearing up too.. his courage, his miss. Farooqi was on verge of breaking,

I know you had much to live with much in last few days, but I promise everything is over! Promise,, he was still stroking her back to calm her down.

come back to me forever

Zoya! I am with you forever, if not forever, then uptill the time you decide to walk away,

I want you in my life forever Mr.Khan!

Asad pulled back to look into her tear stained face,

I would be with you unless you want to leave me,, wiping her tears with his thumb

Zoya couldn't resolve out why he was discussing about the leaving and walking away thing

What does that is supposed to mean?

Zoya! Look! Its hard to understand for you,

but I want to tell you that I am not a good person, that's why people keep on throwing me out of their lives, look! None of my parents stayed with me,

Am alive and they are too...but without each other,

Zoya couldn't believe what she was listening; shock was the most evident expression in her face,

Mr.khan still am unable to figure out the under laying meaning of what you are trying to say...

K! let it be simple, I want you to rethink, rethink about our nikah..

as I am leaving to Dubai in early Monday morning, and I have asked Ayaan to reserve a seat for you in the flight which is taking off to Newyork in Monday's noon.

after 1 month I would get to Newyork, as U+A Architects are well established in Canada, and now they are heading to establish their network in US too,, and WDC and Newyork are their sole targets right now..

if you would really stay firm on your decision then we would get married there,

zoya wiped the fresh trail of tears,

and if I would not want to be in Nikah with you at that time, then? after taking one good long minute, she shot back

the expressions in asad's face were transiting like color of rainbows,, shock, distress, fear, pain, stun, astonishment, relief and these all expressions were mixing up to present a blank face to zoya

Mr. khan am waiting..

Then I would get back to Dubai.. and

And?

And then, I.. I would

Where I would live then?

Now this was asad's turn to pose a face filled with confusion

At Newyork, I guess

My Budhu Ahmed Khan! Patting his forhead lightly

I would be at Dubai too, cox now am not going to wait for a month or so to get married with you.. tension in her voice had been replaced by the fresh joy, which was pouring into her, owing to dreams of beautiful tomorrow.

What? But he was still confused

You are getting discharged by tomorrow morning?

Yes,

K! deal, shaking her hand with his

we would have nikah in evening, and in Monday's noon we both would fly to Newyork..

What you are talking about? Am still not getting you

Then zoya filled whole conversation from last evening into asad,

After listening that saying asad was in shock would be kind of understatement,

I told you, asad said while shaking his head in disappointment, biting his lower lip

Now what?

That am not a good man for you, I am sorry zoya, a lonely tear escaped his eye,

Zoya put her finger on his lips,

Shhshhh! Nobody of us is wrong asad, nor was.. it's the fate, the destiny,

If you are sorry then so I am,, I should had shhshhd Miss bond inside me too...so,,

She leaned into his chest, while folding her arms around his torso,

am sorry

so am too..

the tension in room was slowly slowly being replaced by the giggles and a husky voice

I love you, asad said while nuzzling deeper in her hairs

And so I do too

His arms were grasping hard at her lean body into his chest,,

I want you,

And so I do too..

The words were shaping themselves into moans gradually

And am not going anywhere away from you,, zoya snuggling deeper into his hospital dress

And I am neither sending you too,,

he could feel his heart fulling up with the love, this lady in his arms was throwing on him. And in that lonely moment he made a silent prayer to make them to stay together forever.


So am done with it,, now hit like and let me know about your views...😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
woww...so nice...👏

Zoya's almost emotional breakdown & Asad sambhaling Zoya was so beautiful...👏

Dilshad... grrr... as usual...😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

and finally Asad & Zoya flying away 4m all chaos... fr each othr... wid each othr... wowww...😉

p.s. I should had shhshhd Miss bond inside me too.. 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Edited by rjhr - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update was awesome yar

Dilshaad is such a selfish woman! i hate her more now

Molvi was great yar, had valid points

n ASYA were lovely

the way zoya was taking care of him, and then the way he consoled on her breakdown,
both truely belong together

Asad had a long term planning,
flying to dubai, then to newyork, and then back to dubai,😆
thanks God he sent her to dargah and there she listened that lady n molvi cnversation

Loved it
now update it soon😳😳😳

Edited by .KSGIAN. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
heloo! alien hello smiley

i love you for the updatealien i love you smiley

and the update tooin love alien smiley

now when you would update next?alien no way smiley

Do it soon Hanhh!!cactus run smiley

Take Care,
Bye Byealien bye smiley
Edited by .KSGIAN. - 11 years ago
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superb superb superb
sooo awsume
aesa serial mai kyu nhi hota

ur writing is jst wowww
continue soon dear 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Zoya's mono dialogue and budhu khan was too funny...I really enjoyed reading that a nice mixture of emotions
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Posted: 11 years ago
hope something like this happens for asya and they reunite in a marraige soon

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