Yeh ishq mere Allah kitna tadpata han chp6 pg # 58 - Page 36

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angleroops

hhi mishti hw r u
Hey I m fine and you?😛
hey thanks for dedicating the chapter for me
Your welcome dear😊
sry for late comment
It's okay
actually i was busy in wedding
Take your time
now cuming to the chapter was fab
omg kushi uday arnav and manyata are cousins
i hope uday cums to know about his manayata
Thank you very much 😛
promo is awsum
i hopwe uday luvs her
Hopefully
pls update soon
thanks for pm
Your welcome
Will update sooon

Thank you dear for your wonderful comment😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey my buttery loved it
It's awesome u know I m not fine
Loved your story sorry for late comment
Please update soon it's long since you update
Sorry for short comment
I loved your sory very much it's mindblowing lovely update
Manveer alone in home it's interesting
Update fast can't wait more and
I will reply your pm soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha.behroz

Hey my buttery loved it

It's awesome u know I m not fine
Loved your story sorry for late comment
Please update soon it's long since you update
Sorry for short comment
I loved your sory very much it's mindblowing lovely update
Manveer alone in home it's interesting
Update fast can't wait more and
I will reply your pm soon

Thank you diii😛
Please no need for sorry take rest and get well soon😉
Please take care of my kiddo😭
Love our comment 😆
I like your small commentes also so chill😉
Yeah manveer alone😳
Will update sooon nai kahugi aj 😛
I will update today finally😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ---ButterFly---

Thank you diii😛
Please no need for sorry take rest and get well soon😉
Please take care of my kiddo😭
Love our comment 😆
I like your small commentes also so chill😉
Yeah manveer alone😳
Will update sooon nai kahugi aj 😛
I will update today finally😃

Your welcome bacha
Ok ab yeh rest and stuff stop saying
I will ake career myself and ur kiddo
Thanks for update today hugs
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha.behroz

Your welcome bacha
Ok ab yeh rest and stuff stop saying
I will ake career myself and ur kiddo
Thanks for update today hugs

Hehehehe ok ok dii
Thanks for caring
Heheheh hugs back
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter Six

Manyata tried a lot for sleep but she unable to sleep finally she woke up from bed and went near window wind came through window and her hairs start flying she feel very nice when she about to go sudden she see in garden bench uay sit a lonely Manyata go down and went garden to see him she sit aside him but uday are in his deep thoughts he didn't relise his aside Manyata was sit sudden Manyata snap her two figures front of him and he come in his sense

"tum yaha! " uday ask surprisedly
"tum yaha kyu betha ho Akaile maa ki yaad ari Han? " she asked

Uday give her shocked expression he was hell shocked how she know what he thinking and why he sad he didn't understand not Manyata also bit her tongue she also confused what I said and why she didn't understand after silence both said together

"woh..." both said
Then both looked eachother and passing smile both again try to spoke something
"how"...both said again
Now both are embrasses much and they remains silence for sometimes and turns their faces other side after sometime both looked eachother and shared laugh

"ok wht are you try to tell after long time"?he ask
"nothing...and you?" she answered and asked him
"nothing woh mai bas aisa hi"
"ok then why you sit here only uday" she said
"ok now I tell you truth" he said
"what's truth"
"truth is I m missing my mom I miss her a lot when I was 6 years old she leave me and go somewhere ...he point his index figure in up ...This so cold God snatch my mom from I hate him alots he was non then why all doing many things for God
His eye become teary Manyata eyes also become teary she can feel his pain she understand his pain she feel very bad for him
In crying uday hugged her tightly Manyata hugged him back

Uday hands rubbing her back both feel their war ness and feel very nice in eachother arms when uday's hand moving here and there he feel on her right shoulder something he remember his flashback


Flashback

One girl and cute boy running here and there and playing with their plastic sword sudden girls giggling and turn unknownly boy hit her back and then komal came all family members came because of girl load crying voice all shocked to saw her condition and said "Manyata"

After sometimes Manyata was sleeping peacefully all around her and crying sudden uday came and kiss her foreheads and checks due to kisses Manyata woke up and saw uday sit near her she smiled and uday crying

"Uday why are you crying"She asked him innocently
Uday crying and hugged Manyata tightly


"Manyata I m sorry I m really very sorry I m hurting you"He crying much
"it's ok uday it's totally ok koi baat ni it not you fault"
she smile
Both hugged eachother and said "I love you"

Flashback End

He think if he broke the hugged then she come her sense he start nibbling her neck and turn her and untied her night gown zip and he saw to saw here was a same mark whom he gave to Manyata in childhood he sudden stood up and went his room he was just thinking about this incident

In morning uday wake up in jerk and said loudly "manyataaa" he was confused she Manyata or else why I feel nice when she with me I think I have some connections with this girls and I permit myself to search her identity

Manyata sleeping and shraddha came an wakes her up she wake up and saw shraddha but she think only one think why uday do this why he went tonight without me but she didn't understand why she feel him something something

Shraddha said her I m going with Arnav bhai and khushi you wanna come with us but Manyata immediately said noo shraddha said ok sand went all now Manyata wake freshen up and went down in breakfast table uday also a,e both start without seeing eachother and talking finally uday decide to spoke

"Manyata" he call her
"hmmm say" she said in low voice
"I m sorry for tonight " he apologise with her
"it's okay uday I don't mind" she assure him that she was not angry
"thanks"he said
"no need for thanks uday" she said and share smile with him

Both start liking eachother

Both come closer and closer lost in eachother uday came and kiss her left and right check and forehead when he kiss her he feels he kiss her not first he kiss her previous also he holds Manyata shoulder make distance between them Manyata shocked and also she feel hurt beause she want him she is shocked to see all like that

Uday went and thinking sudden his mind give idea went to Samar room and find if Manyata is Samar daughter or anything else he went and start searching he searching much and much but can't find anything when he couldn't find anything he was about to go but sudden he stop and saw something it was a box old box he open the box and find some pictures albums and letters he was open it but sudden he listen some foots step and held all things and went for his room

Precap - uday know Manyata is his princess and princess Manyata of devgarah and uday and Manyata fall in love uay purpose Manyata and Manyata confused ...Manyata and uay kiss and Manyata realize she love him

I think it's enough and very long update
Guys I have no time to re-check this update
Because I m busy in stuck and updating for my story likes
I come here rarely u know all
I think today this pm I m unable to send
So my fiend roopali give you pms
Hit like button and give long comments
I want 45 likes musty
And 30 comments
For next update ok guys
So bye for now
Love ou alll
~~~Mishi~~~

Edited by ---ButterFly--- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Karkit

Nice update
loved it

Thank you😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it..
nice update...
thanx for the pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum update
loved it...
cont. soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
woah great update yar
how sweet
Uday and many at a together together
loved the precap the most
jaldi update kiya kar yar
bahot time lagati hai

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