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Posted: 18 years ago
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guys plz do tell me if you don't like this stor then i won't continue and if you guys like it then i will post part 2 of this story very s00n
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dang i just read all the stories.... i am not a big fan of love stories... but these were really good... i actually felt like crying... 😭
aren't love stories supposed to be 'happily-ever-after'.. then y are thsess sosoo sad... 😭 plss continue this story fast... i wanna read some more... 😳 😳 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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your story sounds pretty cool!! plz do continue!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well i guess i have to countinue for you 2 only i wish there was more friends to request for part 2 of my story. nywayz i'll countinue s00n
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Posted: 18 years ago
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(Her story)

Part 2

Next day the mother_in_law sends her for grosrey without a car. She comes home and she's all wet. She saw her mother-in-law, who was staring at her. She said mother I can explain this. Please don't let me stay in backyard for today. Because it's raining, and that's why I came late and I got wet. The mother-in-law is trying to say something, but she does't listen because she was scared. Then the mother-in-law moves a side and she saw her parents were standing there. Her father was so mad he said I have never let my daughter to carry her own school bag till now, and what have you done. My daoughter is not a servent.

He was so angry he said im taking my daughter. It was the when her father-in-law said please don't take her my san is coming today from army and we want him to see his wife after he comes. Her father didn't care and asked his daughet to get ready for leaving this house. But his daughter refusses she said no I won't. she said I saw your love and their's as well and im happy to live with them. Because when I was getting marreid have you thought of giving something to me. To start my new life with.

The father said yes I did and I gave all my properties everything to you. But you husband said he won't accept all these. Then she said I am going to stay here. Because this is my house form now, even thought I don't like their son, but I did accepted him as my husband.Her parent left, and she went to her roon crying.

Next morning, she woke up early and she did all the work to see her both parents-in-law happy. They were sitting for breakfast and then someone comes in, it was her sis_in_law. She was crying, she tried to talk to her but her sis_in_law won't listen. Then she said if I ever blame something about you for a good reason will you get mad at me, bhabi? She said if it is for good then yes you can blame anything on me.

Afternoon she is sitting in her room someone comes in. she stood up to see who it was. She saw her first love standing in front of her. She was speachless. He asked her are you pragnent? She was in her dreams she was staring at her she said yes without hearing what he said. Then he leaves. She thought she was dreaming. Then somebody comes and it was her mother-in-law she gave her papers to sign them, when she looked at it. The papers were for her divorce.

Her mother-in-law said , that you husband wants the papers to be sign for tommorow. She was confused she wanted to know why would her husband want to give her divorce without seeing her. She went down stairs nobody was talking to her they all left. She went to each of their rooms and they closed their room door. Now she is left all alone accept one person standing in front of her. His eyes were red he was looking like he wants to murder someone.
She said I thought you died and what are you doing here. He said im your ex-husband from now. I know your wish is if I die. She said no it's not that what is wrong with you what ar you saying. He holds her hand and grabe her toward the car. He droped her in her parents home , he told her you don't have to come back. She didn't know what was going on. She was having some many questions to ask someone who will answer her.

He left now she is going inside her house. Her father said you are livig here form now. But your only going to be in you room after all that you have done I wish if you were someone else's daughter. He locked her in her room. Nobody was talking to her even her mother. She was crying she didn't know what she did. One day her husband decided to go to her house to get the divorce paper. As he went there a servent girl in her house was serving tea to the girl's father.

When she saw the girl's husband she droped the tea.she was shock. He came near her and ask if she was alright. She said I thought you were dead. He remebered what his wife said. He ask her why did you thought I was dead. She said me and your love(the girl) are the only one who have seen you. He said what are your saying. She went near the girl's father and told him that this person looks exactly like the guy your daughter was in love with and then he died.

Written By: Riya_14

Edited by riya_14 - 18 years ago

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