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Posted: 18 years ago
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very heart touching stories. thanx for sharing 😊
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wow that was so touching, i cant describe in words how much i liked it. thanks for sharing!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very touching stories both story made my cry 😭 but if u have more storie like that plz post it even i like reading love stories
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sure i'll post a new story but i guess it wont be a true story cuz im the wrriter and i am going to make it up so im not sure but i think u guys wont like my story that much lols. but i'll try my best.
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My new story unexpected(Her Story) is

Edited by riya_14 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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This is a true story , my friend sended me this and it is a heart tpuching story thought to share with you people


*January 2*
Do you still remember the first time we met? It was the first day in school. I was hurriedly entering the school gate when I bumped into you as you stepped out of a luxurious Volvo. The books you were holding fell all over the ground. I quickly picked up the books and returned them to you along with words of apology, but all you showed me was your intimidating look. My first impression of you was that you were a wilful girl born with a golden stingy in the mouth. I had rejected you completely and had hoped not to meet you again, but surprisingly you turned out to be my classmate.
*March 22*
I started to know more about you as days passed and my opinion of you changed for the better on each passing day. You were nice and friendly. You got angry that day we first met because I had left a footprint marking on the poetry collection you loved dearly. I found something in you that was different from the rest of the girls - your passion for Chinese poetry. You were so knowledgeable that you knew every poet and which poems they composed. I was very impressed indeed.
*April 5*
I met you again in the study area. That day you were reading the Chinese classics "Romance of the 3 kingdom". Your ability to appreciate Chinese classics left me with admiration. You were indeed unique in many ways.
*Aug 7*
I could not deny it. It was a feeling I could not identify accurately. Whenever you laughed over a joke with other guys, that emotion filled my senses. It took me a while before identified it. I was in love; the feeling was jealousy. I felt the need to express it. But, I was afraid...that you would dismiss my feeling, that you and I would be stuck in an embarrassing situation, that our long nurtured friendship would crumble...therefore, I kept quiet.
*Oct 1*
The news came as a shock to me. I was so worried when I learnt that you had fainted in the canteen. I was struggling to keep my worried face in control as I looked at the ambulance that carried you away.
<>*Oct 2*
Our form teacher sadly announced that you had got cancer. As she finished her last sentence. I rushed to NUH ICU to see you immediately after lesson. Your face was whitish in colour, showing no trace of red. I learnt that you had just undergone an operation. The life-support system was just beside you with tubes piercing mercilessly into your left wrist. "I am all right, it is just a serious case of anemia. Believe me, my parents told me that". you said convincingly. I knew fully well what you were thinking, you did not want me to be worried. "Are you comforting yourself or comforting the fears and hopelessness that was written all over my face?", I thought to myself. I was not strong enough to disagree with you and I nodded my head with a forced smile. You responded with a smile too-with gre! at effort.

*Oct 5*
It was a ordinary day but to me, it was an important day. I felt an impulse to express my love. I walked over to the side of your bed, holding your hand. I told you the story of how an ordinary guy fell in love with a girl who likes poetry and Chinese classics. As I told my story, my eyes started to flood with water, and uncontrollably my voice started to choke, and finally I broke into tear But you held my head against your body and with watery eyes, said: "I understand such a love, so did the girl." I returned my eyes to her and at that moment, her tears dropped, and for the first time, I saw some redness on her lips.
*Oct 26*
It was the last day of examination and I rushed to NUH to continue my story. When I reached there, I only saw the nurse arranging the bed you once slept on. When I asked about you, the nurse told me expressionlessly that you had passed away. I stood motionless for a long time. I hated myself for spending the last few days preparing for the last examination paper. I hated myself for not staying longer the last time I visited you. The next day, I went for the funeral. I heard from your father that on the day you passed away, you were still reading the Poetry collection I gave you as a gift for your birthday. Standing in front of Your portrait, I had no tears, they were used up on the day of your death. All I knew was sadness, my heart was like shattered into pieces and died.
<>*Jan 2*
A new girl has taken over your seat. She does not like poetry, but she likes to hum pop songs. When I asked her if she knows Jia Bao Yu, she replied: "What talking you." Yes, you were gone. But to me, the seat is still unoccupied, and maybe no one will ever occupy it......

IF U TRULY LOVE THAT SOMEONE... JUS GO RIGHT UP TO HIM OR HER OR GIVE A PHONE CALL RIGHT NOW TO SAY "I lUV U " AND EXPRESS YOUR FEELINGS FOR THAT PERSON B4 IT'S TOO LATE!!!!!

sweety
Edited by sweety223 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweety223

This is a true story , my friend sended me this and it is a heart tpuching story thought to share with you people


*January 2*
Do you still remember the first time we met? It was the first day in school. I was hurriedly entering the school gate when I bumped into you as you stepped out of a luxurious Volvo. The books you were holding fell all over the ground. I quickly picked up the books and returned them to you along with words of apology, but all you showed me was your intimidating look. My first impression of you was that you were a wilful girl born with a golden stingy in the mouth. I had rejected you completely and had hoped not to meet you again, but surprisingly you turned out to be my classmate.
*March 22*
I started to know more about you as days passed and my opinion of you changed for the better on each passing day. You were nice and friendly. You got angry that day we first met because I had left a footprint marking on the poetry collection you loved dearly. I found something in you that was different from the rest of the girls - your passion for Chinese poetry. You were so knowledgeable that you knew every poet and which poems they composed. I was very impressed indeed.
*April 5*
I met you again in the study area. That day you were reading the Chinese classics "Romance of the 3 kingdom". Your ability to appreciate Chinese classics left me with admiration. You were indeed unique in many ways.
*Aug 7*
I could not deny it. It was a feeling I could not identify accurately. Whenever you laughed over a joke with other guys, that emotion filled my senses. It took me a while before identified it. I was in love; the feeling was jealousy. I felt the need to express it. But, I was afraid...that you would dismiss my feeling, that you and I would be stuck in an embarrassing situation, that our long nurtured friendship would crumble...therefore, I kept quiet.
*Oct 1*
The news came as a shock to me. I was so worried when I learnt that you had fainted in the canteen. I was struggling to keep my worried face in control as I looked at the ambulance that carried you away.
<>*Oct 2*
Our form teacher sadly announced that you had got cancer. As she finished her last sentence. I rushed to NUH ICU to see you immediately after lesson. Your face was whitish in colour, showing no trace of red. I learnt that you had just undergone an operation. The life-support system was just beside you with tubes piercing mercilessly into your left wrist. "I am all right, it is just a serious case of anemia. Believe me, my parents told me that". you said convincingly. I knew fully well what you were thinking, you did not want me to be worried. "Are you comforting yourself or comforting the fears and hopelessness that was written all over my face?", I thought to myself. I was not strong enough to disagree with you and I nodded my head with a forced smile. You responded with a smile too-with gre! at effort.

*Oct 5*
It was a ordinary day but to me, it was an important day. I felt an impulse to express my love. I walked over to the side of your bed, holding your hand. I told you the story of how an ordinary guy fell in love with a girl who likes poetry and Chinese classics. As I told my story, my eyes started to flood with water, and uncontrollably my voice started to choke, and finally I broke into tear But you held my head against your body and with watery eyes, said: "I understand such a love, so did the girl." I returned my eyes to her and at that moment, her tears dropped, and for the first time, I saw some redness on her lips.
*Oct 26*
It was the last day of examination and I rushed to NUH to continue my story. When I reached there, I only saw the nurse arranging the bed you once slept on. When I asked about you, the nurse told me expressionlessly that you had passed away. I stood motionless for a long time. I hated myself for spending the last few days preparing for the last examination paper. I hated myself for not staying longer the last time I visited you. The next day, I went for the funeral. I heard from your father that on the day you passed away, you were still reading the Poetry collection I gave you as a gift for your birthday. Standing in front of Your portrait, I had no tears, they were used up on the day of your death. All I knew was sadness, my heart was like shattered into pieces and died.
<>*Jan 2*
A new girl has taken over your seat. She does not like poetry, but she likes to hum pop songs. When I asked her if she knows Jia Bao Yu, she replied: "What talking you." Yes, you were gone. But to me, the seat is still unoccupied, and maybe no one will ever occupy it......

IF U TRULY LOVE THAT SOMEONE... JUS GO RIGHT UP TO HIM OR HER OR GIVE A PHONE CALL RIGHT NOW TO SAY "I lUV U " AND EXPRESS YOUR FEELINGS FOR THAT PERSON B4 IT'S TOO LATE!!!!!

sweety

awww thsi story is soo sad😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG I love love stories but how come all the love stories makes us cry why r they so sad 😭 😭 😭
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awesome stories you guys, they are so sad 😭
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(Her story)

Part 1

There was a girl, who was the most beautiful girl in her village. Her father was the riches man of that village. One he found that his daughter was in love with a poor person. He did not accept it. He told his daughter to forget him. She decided to do what her father wants. Finally she gave up and she ran with her love, leaving all her property, her dad and even her whole family, who meant a lot to her.

The people started talking behind her father's back. Once all the people came and told him "what kind of father are you? Don't you think your suppose to search for your daughter?" the people told him you should leave this village, because they thought if a person like him lives in their society then the whole society will become like him, and they all will have to lose their daughters.

Her father's lost all of his business nobody wanted to work with him. Now her father was angry all he wanted was his daughter. Also her father accepted his daughter's love. He then asked his daughter to come back home and if both the lover comes they will get marry to each other. As the lover read this in a newspaper, they decided to go back to home. Now the couple went to a city for shopping, for their wedding. The guy was wear a white suit and was walking across the street as he saw a car coming toward them she pushed the girl, and the car hits him.

He died on that spot. The girl lost her senses. After a long time she recovered and accepted that her love has died. Now her father wants her to marry his bessness partner's son. She refuess but her father won't listen her said now he is the only one who will decied her futhre. She said now that her love is not with her and there is nothing possible she could do to stop this wedding. She told her father that she was ready to marry the guy that her father have chosen for her.

The day of her wedding came. She was looking for a person who will help her out, but unfurunatlly nobody came to help her. The first night of her new life. Everyone is gone and she is left all alone in her room. She was up the whole night he husband didn't came.

Next morning her mother in law comes in to her room, and wakes her up. She tells her to clean the whole house and give her jewelry and all her dresses to her mother_in_law. She said no her stuff is save with her. She won't give it to anyone. Her mother_in_law said well as you wish, but I must tell you this… until you don't give me what I want you'll have to clean this house and do all the work without eating or drinking.

She was confused that why would my dad chose this kind of family for me. Second thing she was wondering was why would they spend all their money and make this wedding the best wedding of the village. If they were going to be like this. She now know that she have no other chose then give all her belongings to her new family. Because she doesn't know how to work, as she was from a rich family and she never cleaned her room before by her self then how can she clean whole house.

Now this tells you how her mother in law was. She stood by the window in her room, she was thinking of her first and last love. Then she gets intrupet by someone. She looks back and she saw her father in_law talking with his wife. "What should we do now we thought they will give their daughter all their properties but they her dad didn't even bother to give us a penny."(Said The father_in_la) " Who told you to say nothing when her father asked you what you need with my daughter. Why were you being so nice who the hack told you to say she's your daughter you don't want anything from them accept her." Said his wife.

NOTE: This is not a true story.
The End Of Part 1

( Written By: Riya_14)


Part 2 comming soon....

Edited by riya_14 - 18 years ago

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