FF: Precocious Rawte. chapter 26, p.67 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
i read it even before u pm'ed me
this junior is really so sweet and naughty and temperwala
he broke sam's nose and doc's specks coz he did'nt liked them way to go boy 😆
and was absolutely enjoying himself with all girls and chotu 😃
abhi se ladkiyo ke godh main khush 😉
i love him man i also want to take him in my arms 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Baby Rawte attacked Moustache uncle's nose 😆
so soo sooo sweet
after all he is a Rawte 😳
very nice & sweet update
loved it 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
🤗so sweeet🤗🤗
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
haye... kinna shona baby hai
lovely
uncle ke naak thid diya.. my superman!!
aise anakyse kar rahe hai janab, ab riya ko bhi peeche rehna hoga.
love you baby and u too aat... oops
😳
jaldi jaldi update karo
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Awesome update
toh junior ne badla le hi lia😆
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Hey...i'm loving it..👍🏼😃everything is beautifully written..👏.baby's pov part is my favourite...👏it would be nice if u update it everyday😉...waiting for the next update⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
awesome update '
baby rawte is very strong
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
lovely update.
Jr.Rawte is short temper like his father😆
this is going to be interesting
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
aww such a cutie my dhundhuni...

i agree ayesha really has a bad choice...she should choose junior rawte instead of the 'moustache man'😆

bechara sam nak phor diya na?? aur bolo rawte ke bare mein gandi baat 😛

I am so just loving this story atisha...plz plz continue sooon

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Chapter 6 :

Rathod and Arjun sat besides Roshni and watching the team busy with the new baby.

Roshni : Bas popcorn ki kami hain, nahi Arjun?

Arjun : (hugged her from side) hmm...

Rathod : Tera beta laath maarke mera naak ka bara baja dia, aur aab dekh kaise sab kii saath maza le raha hain. Dekh Aisha ko, tere bete pe jitna payaar loota rahi hain na iska 10% vi aaj tak mere liye kavi nahi jaataya. Mere saath hi aisa kyun hota hain (he made a sad face)?

Arjun : Ek advice doon, shaadi matt karr usse. Avi se yeh haal hain, shaadi ke baad tera poora band baajaygi. (Roshni hit Arjun)... AAO... I'm joking, sorry.

Roshni : Anyways, tum dono engagement ka date final kia hain ya main Aunty se baat karun?

Rathod : Nahi, I'v talked to mom already. Her parents & mine will final the date. In fact, I told mom to finalize the marriage date also. Tera iss Chota Singham Rawte ko takkar dene ke liy aab ek chota Rawdy Rathod ka aana zaroori ho gaya hain.

Arjun : Agar chota Rawdy Rathod k jagah Choti Rosy Rathod aa gayee toh?

Rathod : Yeh toh aur vi achcha hoga, tere bete ki toh band bajake rahegi woh. Soch, harr saal rakshabandhan pe tera beta gayab ho jayega, jaise main hota hoon tere biwi ke weired demands se bachne ke liye.

Now It's Rathod's turn to be beaten up by Roshni.

Aisha : Mere taraf se vi ek do lagado, Roshni.

Rathod : Aab maine kya kia, mere credit card to teri paas hain na?

Aisha : (ignoring Rathod) Aur Arjun sir, aap ki biwi ko to main kuch din baad dkhungi. Kitni baar kahan ki ghar jaa, bahar aane ki zaroorat nahi hain, magar yeh Mrs. ACP kisiki sunti kahan?

Rathod : Sangat ka asar hain, Rawte ne isko poora bigar dia.

Arjun : Main toh bas iski...

Rathod : Pata hain, iski samne tera awkaat toh constable se vi neeche hain. Aisha, I'm damm tired. Sabko kaho kii aab maa-bete ko akla chore. Aur ghar jaake rest kare. Rawte, Aisha, I'll drop you & then I'll go home. Come.

Arjun : No, I'll stay till visiting hour ends. You all go.

Liza came with the little baby and put him into his mother's arms.

Arjun : Guys, thanks a lot for everything. Aisha, Chotu , Shree, thanks for being here all the time. Saakshi, Liza and Nitu; thanks for saving her life. I owe you for her life.

Roshni : Aaj literally hum tino sisters huye. Khoon ka rishta jo bann gaya. (girls hugged her)

Aisha : Aur main?

Roshni : Tum? Tum toh mere double sister-in-law ho. Bhavi vi aur nanand vi. Two- in -one.

Shree : Accha di, aapne iss laddu ka naam final kiya hain kya?

Arjun and Roshni exchanged glances. They were thinking so many names from last 4 months but still couldn't final any.

Shree understood the situation and smiled.

Shree : Ok, agar final nehi kia toh jaldhi kar lijiye, nahi toh main yeh Laddo final karr lungi.

Riya : No, it would be Gullu, haye meri Rosogolla.(she started drooling)

Sakshi : Guys, hum toh kuch vi bulayenge, but good name toh mom dad hi rakhenge na? so let them decide.

After everyone left, Arjun again settled beside Roshni and took the baby in his arms.

Arjun : You rest, Rosh... I'll take care of him.( he was about to move)

Roshni : no, stay here, I want to spend some more times with you two.

Arjun : Ok.

Roshni : you heard what doctor said, babies have very good reflex in first 24 hours after birth.

Arjun : Haan.

Roshni : I think... He just don't has good reflex, actually...

Arjun : What actually?

Roshni : Actually he understands everything.

Arjun stared at her dumbstucked for a long moment...And he slowly asked.

Arjun : He actually understands everything??

Roshni : Hmm, he punished Sam for his meaningless bantering. He was angry with him, so he didn't go to him.

Arjun : (still surprised) You want to say he did everything knowingly??? Even that doctor's speck breaking thing??

Roshni : hmm...when he heard that the doctor slapped him, he became angry. But doctor did it for his well being, but He's too young to understand that. Usko to Sam ka mazaak vi samajh main nahi aaya, mera Addu ka janam aaj hi hua hain na...

Arjun : Addu!!!

Roshni : (smiled sheepishly) haan, I always call him Addu. You know na..

Arjun : Always !! but uska janam avi khch ghante pehle hi to hua hain...

Roshni : So what, he was within me for these long nine months. I...in fact we both talked him, & you heard me calling him Addu, tab toh kuch nahi kahan tumne!!!

Arjun remembered everything Roshni used to do when she was pregnant, & he thought it was mere pregnancy symptom. But no, it seems she was damm serious with those things. He smiled at that.

Arjun (smiling) Rosh you know, a newborn baby is just like a computer without an operating system...

Roshni : I know, I've gone through Dr. Spok's book.

Arjun : Phir vi??

Roshni : That's why you are dad & I'm his Mom. A mom knows everything about her child, but a dad doesn't.

Arjun : Oh!!

Roshni : (took Addu in her arms and held him tight on her chest) I know my Addu is extraordinary.

Arjun : For every mother in this universe, her child is extraordinary. It's quite obvious.

Roshni : But the difference is, my son is Extraordinary. If I ask my son to smile he'll smile, if I ask him to raise his leg , he will. If I...

Arjun : (cut her between) Ok ask him to grin showing his gums.

Roshni : (looked at Arjun with hurt eyes) You think I don't believe my son & I should examine him right now?

Roshni's question made Arjun perplexed. He didn't know what to say now & he gave up.

Arjun : Ok, I don't ask anything. I believe you. But tell me one thing.

Roshni : What??

Arjun : Do you really gonna call our son Addu?

Roshni : Why, any problem?

Arjun : Nop, not at all..If your name were Ghiringi Bai, I would've love you this much. It wouldn't make any difference for me.

Roshni : So you didn't liked this name? Pehle kyun nahi bataya?

Arjun : Kaise batata?? Iska janam toh avi avi...

Roshni : Aur jab pehle main isko bulata tha tab toh tumhe proble nahi hui.

Arjun : Tab toh hum aise hi, payaar se.. yeh toh final nahi tha na?

Roshni : (made a stern face) Arjun, mothers never make fun of their child. They are always serious about their child. Samjhe ya samjhaun?

Arjun : Hmm...( he brushed his hair with his left hand)..so what should be his full name? Addu Arjun Rawte? Rosh, just think, how wired it is. Aage jake iss naam ko lekar bechare ko bohot problem hogi. I'm afraid, iska shaadi nehi hogi, in fact, isko dhang ka girlfriend vi nahi milga yaar.

Roshni : Tum jaise kharoos ko mere jaise larki mili na? Toh mera beta to tumse kahin zyada achca hain. Tum uski chinta matt karo.

Arjun pouted at that.

Roshni : Haan, but you can decide a good name for him like Adarsh, Aditya, Adinath, Adhiraj, Adhikaar, Aadil, Aadvani...whatever you wish. But I'm gonna call him Addu, Addu and Only ADDU.

Arjun : Ok, meri maa. Now relax & give him to me.

Arjun took his son in his arms and adjusted himself beside Roshni on the bed. He put Addu on his chest and held him with his left hand, and Roshni used his right hand as her pillow.

Roshni : Arjun...

Arjun : hmm...

Roshni : you stink.

Arjun : Maine tumhari baat maan li hain Rosh...

Roshni : No you actually stink, aaj nahaya nahi?

Arjun : Delhi se sidha yhi aaya tha...

Roshni : toh ghar jake nahalo, I'll be fine.

Arjun : I know, bass Addu so jaye,& Saakshi wapas aaye, phir chala jaunga.

Roshni : Pillow ke neeche tumhara wallet hain, le jaana.

Arjun : (lookd at Roshni) Wallet !! but I gave it Aisha.

Roshni : She left it before leaving. And bring a black forest cake when you came back.

Arjun : But you are not well...

Roshni : ( made a puppy face) But I wanna have some. Today is my son's first day in this world . I want to celebrate.

Arjun : Thik hain mumaa...now rest.

I was listening the conversation between mom and dad. Bohot mann karr raha tha ki mom ki support main kuch bolun, kuch karun, but I kept quite. From this whole conversation, I came to know two things, First, that dad guy is a very close one to mom & me. Second, this Kharoos aadmi achcha cheez hain, he's not actually that bad at all. So I didn't interfere.

When he put me on his chest and patted me to sleep, I felt this world is not a bad place, & I kind of liking it within these short time of my arrival here. If I hadn't brought here, I never knew about this place.

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Now it's your turn. You know what you have to do 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Here comes Addu
haye kithna lamba list hai naam ke
loved the talks
baby rawte...love u baba

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