#4-ArHi FF: Ten things I hate about you**Completed**LastCh.Pg38-31/12 - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago
They make me sigh. For the longest time I have wanted Khushi to let go or rather let him in, she is doing it now and I couldn't be more happy.

It was a beautiful update and that is a lovely poem by the way :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant update...😊
Absolutely loved how Arnav is taking care of Khushi... And I completely agree with Arnav... Men who can cook are definitely more attractive...😊

As far as Khushi is concerned, I think its understandable if she is going through conflicting emotions... She has had a lot on her plate recently so its okay if it takes her some time to absorb everything and deal with it... Also she is finally starting to realize how much Arnav means to her...So accepting that might take her a while...

Loved it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
Res! 😈
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OHMYGOD!! He said it! He said those three words to Khushi! Their conversation...the toe-curling kiss followed by the confession...breathtaking!! Oh, you write so well!! :D All I hope is for Khushi to be strong and not retract to her shell after hearing this! She's acknowledged that he is her anchor...that gives me hope. I really want to see Khushi accept Arnav's confession with smiles! *fingers crossed*

I loved the Anjali and Manorma Mami scene!!! Anybody who wouldn't know them would not think of them as anything but Mother and Daughter. Beautiful!

Also, I really love your attention to detail without making the update boring. In fact, it usually adds to the scene. I like how you showed Anjali being conscious of her blouse...girls until a certain stage are conscious of deep neck, deep back, no sleeves, etc. (although, once that stage is crossed...that's exactly what we want 😆 Okay, no further digression :P ) I'll say the same for the scene where Khushi scans through Arnav's bookshelf...and then their little 'I'll quote Hitler' conversation that followed.

BTW, from how you described Khushi's outfit, it sounded AMAZING! ;)

I love this story! Please, next chapter jaldi milega naa? 😆
Edited by avantika_2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
unres
that was quick update
will be back in an hour sorry
the hell with waiting man
oh my so he said it finally
but how shall she react
hope it wont be too bad
well that will be bit of problem right
it was anj huh
i thought you meant khushi in beginning
seems that khushi is getting more cosy with raizadas
and that is needed
even mami seems to know of her
even if she hasnt seen her
and they let her go to him
without making it too obvious of course
awww she was impatient to see him huh
wow he sure had her floored as did she of course
hmmm rudolph thats really naughty of him i tell ya
but so funny for sure
ahhh their kisses sure changing with their relationship
which too is changing
so anj mami and rest do approve of her
when are they gonna given in well arnie did didnt he
and about time too
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome
loved it
:)
this was a great update ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
they seem to have a easy and beautiful relationship today
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a lovely present Arnav got Khushi

Nice

Of course
Anjali and Mami's conversation was fun also

Can't wait to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
Will this story end!? 😭 but beautiful update👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally
he said it
and their kiss was hot I must say

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