Revamped Arjun ff- Nafraton Ke Raste..... Hum Milenge (Ch1- Pg1)

Hi frnds...As u all knw dt our show is revamped. So i decide to adapt d change nd presenting u my revamped ff on Arjun...

"Nafraton Ke Raste... Hum Milenge"

Starring:

Shaleen Malhotra:Arjun S. Rawte

Rohit Purohit: Karan

Shruti Bisth: Anjali

Sheena Bajaj: Simran

Myself: Simrita Sinha

Part 1 vl post asap...
And also my other work.
Luv Samara.

Chapter 1:

She is dressed in beautiful yellow nd royal red coloured lehenga. Hair clipped in a simple bun but the hair accesories are making it beutiful just like her beauty. Everything is just making her goddess of beauty except d sweat on her forhead due to running. She is running for her life on a deserted road. Crying for help but no one is there to save her from the man of her would be husband. As sky also want to show some pity on her condition it also started to rain. Now she is fully drenched and surrounded by goons.
A goon on phone- Sir ji madam ji samne hai. Ji hum unhe la rahe hai.
He cut the call and take a step towards her.
Girl- Dekho mere paas mat aana. Warna main...main...
Goon- Warna kya... Chilaogi... Ha...ha...ha...
Another goon- Par koi nahi aaega tumhe bachane...
Suddenly they heard a weird romeo punch line...
" Jab hoga kisi khoobsurat
bala pe attack tab aaega use bachane yeh Karan banke Robin hooda" karan came infront of them.
Goon1: Oye hero chal bhag yaha se nahi to aisi jagah marunga ki dubara kisi ki madad ke liye nahi aaega.
Karan- Aur main tujhe aisa marunga ki... Yaar tereko main action dikhata hun. Tere pe line kaheko waist karna.
Soon all goons were lying on road crying merclessly.
Karan- Kamino ek khoobsurat ladki dekhi nahi aur chal pade bhukhe bhediye banne.
Karan to girl- Madam ji now you go. Now u safe. Me going.
Girl nodded and karan turned to leave but stopped by her.
Girl- excuse me.
Karan turned and soon realised that she is hugging him.
Karan- Oye! Chal jyada senti mat ho. Thik hai sab to ab ghar ja. Sayad aaj teri shadi bhi hai. Aaj khush reh.
And next he heard her crying very hard slumping on the road.
Scene shifts to garage.
Arjun is doing push ups. He is sweating in the month of december that too when sky is showering its gift i.e. rain. He gets up and removed his t-shirt. Now he is only in his tracks showing his well toned body. Karan entered and hands him his fav chai almost glaring him.
Karan- Oye shera itna bhadak kyun raha hai. Are ab main karu tulsi ram ne apni dukan band kar di aur tujhe work out ke baad chai na mili to tu mera band bajaye bina rahega nahi. To main gaya tere liye chai lane raste main mujhe ek ladki mil gayi.
Arjun- Aur phir tu suru ho gaya hoga..
Karan- Are shera wo musibat main thi aur main as a gentlman uski bas madad kiya.
Arjun- karan tum na mujhe apne in bakwaas ki line bazi wali story se plz door rakha karo.
Karan- Arjun ise line bazi nahi art of loving kehte hai.
Aur tum kya jano pyar kya hota hai.
Arjun- Jis din asal me pyar ho jaye to tab aana pyar ki batein karne aur mere zindagi me pyar kya hai tum nahi samjhage.
Karan- Bhadak kyun raha hai. Main to bas tujhse kuch puchne aaya tha.
Arjun- kya?
Karan look at the door. Arjun also followed his gaze and found a fully drenched girl in wedding attire is coming. Her whole body is shivering due to cold. Her messed up hair are dancing with with wind. Eyes with tears are sparkling. The sound of her payal are giving a background music. Soon she stands infront of him. He is looking at her but she is looking at everywhere but not him. His trances broke by karan.
Karan- Oye shera yeh Simrita hai. Ise help ki zarurat hai. Ye yaha shadi karne aayi thi but iska woh bada kamina nikla jab isse pata chala to ye bhag gayi lekin uske gunde piche pad gaye. Aur kuch din ke liye sheltar ki talaash me hai to kya ye yaha humare sath...
Arjun- Ghar tumhara garage tumhar tumharu marzi...
Karan turned to girl named Simrita and motioned her to follow him.
Arjun to himself- Pata nahi Maa- Baap ladke ka background thik se check kyu nahi karte.
Simrita who heard him replied- Plz dont blame them.
Arjun- Agar tumhare parents ne us ladke ka background check... (Cut by Simrita)
Simrita- They died in accident when i was 1 yr old.
And next she came out of garage with karan. Leaving a guilty Arjun.
Some days passed. Arjun is looking for simrita to ask her sorry but she is not giving him any chance. And this angered him just more and more.
So he just decided to go to her to ask sorry but in his SYS manner but stopped at his way.
Now he is peeping inside simran's room and found her dancing and Simran, Anjali, Karan are enjoying her dance.
She stop dancing breathing heavily.
Simran- wow Simrita u r fabulous. Can u plz teach me some moves.
Karan- Simrita tumhe agar apni kamar todni ho to saukh se isse dance sikhana.
Simran- You...
And both starts running all over d room.
Anjali- Really Simi Di u r too good i wish i cud.
Simrita- Dont be sad Anjali. I m sure one day u vl do it.
Anjali- Ye sab chodo aur ye batao aap ka interview kaisa chal raha hai.
Simrita- Not good.
Karan- Dont worry jaan sab thik ho jaega.
All of dis observed by Arjun and now he is something and went away.
Some days later...
Simrita- thank u. I really need this job.
Principal- Dont be miss simrita. Its our pleasure to have u as our dance teacher.
Anyway kuch dino mein competition starts ho rahe hai. So start ur work.
Simrita- Ji!

nice revamp
continue soon

PS: whn are u going to update rishte naye ya purane? waiting for it so eagerly.

love
Aisha

Awesome revamped...

Interesting dear samera wonderful

awesome update!!
the new ch is wonderful n also well written
her bonding with Karan,Simran n Anjali was really nice
while Arjun searching for a chance to apologize to her
thanks for pm
cont soon

hey samara!

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

nice revamp
continue soon

PS: whn are u going to update rishte naye ya purane? waiting for it so eagerly.

love
Aisha

thnks and glad to knw ki u r waiting for an updt of Ristey naye ya purane.

Originally posted by: Jo_Pinchy

Hi Samara, Nice concept

I am reserving this now. And I will come back after Christmas and comment and hopefully you'll have more updated.😉

ok dear but unres it soon.