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Hey folks!!

I am here with the 8th chapter of mae SS,, still we are back in time,, i just quickly want to wrap up the past,, so here you go,,
do give a reading, do hit like and post your views...
am thankful to all those who waited along fah the update
,, who commented, who liked, n even to those who just viewed

Part 8

Forgiveness



Dilshaad was all in dilemma, if she should visit Asad or not

Zoya's words were still ringing in her ears like she was freshly hearing her talking,,

Phoopi! mr. khan is broken,, The Asad Ahmed Khan is broken.

Phoopi! everything has two ways of doing, 1 wrong and 1 right. If you really feel doing something, then why not to opt the right way?

Zoya! Asad hates his dad.

Mr. Khan, can't ever hate anyone, anyone phoopi!

He has forgiven me?

He never talked to me about forgivenss thing. Once you left the home, he broke everything he could get to. And in between these breaking fad he broke himself too, he broke himself too Phoopi

I would just grab one glance of him and would walk away.

Walk away? You are again talking of walking away Phoopi?

Its not solution..talk to him phoopi,, if you wouldn't now, you would loose him for ever Phoopi!

I should really go to Asad. I really owe tons of clearance.

She wiped her tears,, and held her phone with her ear

Zoya!


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Asad was sitting in his bed; his eyes were roaming with his Miss farooqi, who was wandering in room from last 10 minutes, like she was in a large public garden allotted to public for morning walk.

Miss farooqi! If you are done with the morning walk and your fitness mantra, can I have lil talk to you? Raising his right eye brow

Mr. Khan! Am serious.

Did I make a joke,, I just asked; Miss farooqi! If---morning walk---fitness mantra, I don't find any joke in my statement.

Mr.Khan! can you be serious? She said in a stern tone

Asad was bewildered by sudden mood change,

Everything okay Zoya?

She came and set beside him on his bed, while holding his hand in hers

Look! Mr.khan! phoopi is coming,

Ami is coming? his eyes narrowed

Yes! First of all keep calm,,

Calm! Hnh! Asad gave a disgusted look,

I know! Am demanding more then you can endow me with, but still please stay calm for two reasons,, first is none other than your health..

And second is that, she isn't entirely wrong in her position, she has her own reasons, her way may be wrong, but she isn't.

There is a third reason too Zoya, asad said while pulling his hand back

What is that?

I love ami too much, I want her to be safe, I want her not to suffer, and if she has really decided to suffer in that house, then not atleast in front of my eyes,

Then have you any other way Mr.Khan? if she isn't stepping out of SM,, and you don't want her to stay there, then what's the mid way?

There is one!

And what's that?

I would tell you later,,

I want a favor,

Yes tell me Mr. Khan, she said while holding his face in her palms

Can you please go to Dargah today, as its Friday and I want you to pray for me,

I already do Mr.Khan,,

But make a special dua for me today, with some additions

I always pray for your long life, our happy future,

But today add something more like, May Allah bless me with the strength to be firm, to be firm in each and every decision I make by today.

That's for what Mr.Khan?

That's because, from last one year what am deciding backfires on me, I want you to add one thing more in your dua,, about my wicked fate, that by now it really spares me and my loved ones..

Mr. Khan! Please don't stress yourself, I would leave when phoopi would leave,

Why? He raised his eye brows in confusion

I want to make sure everything stays in hand

Miss farooqi, you can leave now, I would be fine... his tone turned stern and louder

Mr.Khan?

Yes, I would be fine,, please... he calmed himself down

Okay,, tears made a good stock in her eyes

Zoya! Am sorry, I didn't meant to hurt you..

He took her in an embrace,, his hand was playing in her hairs, to soothe her

Am sorry,, this is just that, I want to talk some important stuff with ami, and after that...

After that?

Nothing ZOya!

A knock on the door, made them to pull away,

Phoopi?

After a gap of few seconds, door opened, and dilshaad entered in the room.

Zoya moved to dilshaad in one swift moment,

Phoopi! while hugging her,,

Dilshaad eyes were glued to asad's pale face,, he was looking down in his lap, trying to avoid eye contact

How are you zoya? Still looking towards asad

I am fine phoopi, come sit here, she led dilshaad to patient sitter couch, just on a distance of 1 meter from asad's bed

Mr. Khan! I needed to go to dargah, can I leave now?

Yes zoya! Go now,, without looking up,, his eyes were welled up,

K Phoopi! bye, she grabbed her phone and left the room.

After a silence of 10 awkward minutes, finally dilshaad made her mind to talk,

As-sa-d

And a tear escaped from his brimming eyes, how voice of his mother broke while taking his name

Asad! Now you wouldn't even look in my face? Have I turned that much unbearable?

With that he looked up at her face,

She looked like she hasn't slept from years

Am-mi!

Asad! I know I did wrong in hiding everything from you, but Rashid really needs me betay!

His upper lip curved right to give a sarcastic smile

what happened at the time when you needed him,, when your children needed him? Oh I forgot, A man can get whatever he want and whenever he want, he had another wife too, other family too,

he never got time to need you in his good times, and in his illness all of sudden he needs you?

Yes, your husband needs you ami, And what about the son? Who went through much in last 9 days?

I didn't had enough courage to face you Asad, and you know its true,

Asad! I want both of you in my life, a woman can't be complete without her husband,

And can be without children?

No, never, that's why I want you to forgive us asad,

Us? You are putting yourself with that Mor...

Asad stopped midway, his eyes were spooling pools of tears, and his pale face was turning red with the anger, trigeminal in his forhead again made an appearance..

To calm him, Dilshaad stepped towards him by only being stopped by the signal of his hand when she was just on few inches from his figure

K! what do you want me to do? Asad said while turning his face to other side,

Look at me Asad,

what do you want me to do? Asad repeated himself, more sternly

I want you to look at me Asad!

He turned to face her, and she felt like killing herself for making his already ill son to suffer more due to herself.

Asad! I want you to listen to me, listen to Rashid, he's really ill.. and he need his family.

She sat on his bed beside him,, holding his hand

Please Asad!

Ami! do you really feel living in siddiqi mansion for rest of your life?

Ah,.. she looked down..

Ami! do you really feel living in siddiqi mansion for rest of your life?

I would have to,

Okay, asad said while pulling his hands back

You want me to forgive you?

I can't.. as you are already forgiven, I love you Ami, and I can't be angry with you ever, not for even a single minute,

When doctors would discharge you?

Am fine now,, in a day or 2,

But why?

I would ask, Rashid to arrange a portion in SM for you and zoya..

Asad seemed to be puzzled

What?

As after discharge, I wouldn't let you to be away from my sight for even a minute,

Ami I said am not angry with you, this surely doesn't mean am living with you in SM, or zoya is moving there too

Asad please,

Ami that house haunts me, as that house snatched my childhood, my father, my brother, I cn't even think of stepping in that house..

Asad! Please forgive him too.. Rashid, wants to apologize himself, he wants to meet you beta, he wants to hug his elder son Asad, he want to..

Ami, you wanted to forgive Janab Rashid Ahmed Khan, you did, but you cannot push me to do the same as I love you.

Asad! He's not fine.. he wants forgiveness, he wants love..

I forgive him,

His statement brought a smile on her teary face

Wha-aat, I would just call him to come and meet y..

I said I forgive him, not that I would like to meet him.

What does that mean?

It means

I forgive him, because blood relations are bound to be forgiven,

I forgive him, because I really want to burry murderer of my childhood, deep in the past.

I forgive him, because I cannot be Rashid Ahmed Khan, who just thinks about himself,

I forgive me, because forgiveness is the one of the best deeds in my religion,

I forgive him, because I want to start a new life, with zoya

And I forgive him, because from now my past wouldn't overshadow my future.

Asad, please don't say like this please, her eyes were spilling with the tears

Ami! do you know where did zoya go? Just to pray for me, for my firm decisions and for my wicked fate to flew off.

Asad,..

Ami! I love you and would keep on loving, I want you to be safe, and would keep on wanting, whenever you feel you need your son, I would be just there, around the corner,

Asad, mere betay,

I would always remain yours'

Ami! I want you to hug your son for the last time,

Last time? Her heart jolted

Yes! Am planning to join U+A Architects again, and for that i need to leave India, in a month.

Please don't asad

It's another firm decision,

Asad...

Ami! one last time?

And with that she hugged asad flowing her umpteenth tears, who were flowing and had to flow for rest of their lives,

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When zoya was done with the dua at dargah, she was coming down the stairs with her mind clouded with recent talk with Mr.Khan,

Firm decisions? What he was talking about. Which decision he has made now? Allah Miyan! What's wrong with Mr.Khan, why he keep on playing puzzles.

When she was about to step into her shoes,

She heard a woman crying loudly.. she followed the sound, it was coming from a small prayer-center adjoined with Dargah,

No, Molvi sahib! This can't happen; say what am listening is wrong,

How can I say that? It's Islamic conjoint view, that Nikah on phone doesn't happen.

But nikah of my daughter did happen on phone, she said I accept on phone to his groom to be, and now he has taken her with Australia,

But that nikah isn't valid lady! Few years back there was a misconception, but now Islamic Scholars have sorted out the predicament... Nikah on phone doesn't remain valid, it is to be renewed with proper witnesses and care takers of bride and groom,

Nikah on phone doesn't remain valid, it is to be renewed with proper witnesses and care takers of bride and groom,

Words of molvi sahib repeated themselves in zoya's head, zoya's eyes were popping out of the sockets,

Nikah on phone doesn't remain valid, it is to be renewed with proper witnesses and care takers of bride and groom,

So am done with it,, now hit like and let me know about your views...😃😃😃

Edited by -Maliha- - 11 years ago
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I would always remain yours'

Ami! I want you to hug your son for the last time

And with that she hugged asad flowing her umpteenth tears, who were flowing and had to flow for rest of their lives... 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

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Edited by rjhr - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
That's freaking fabulous !!
I loved this line ... Names of asad Ahmad khan 😆

So, finally ... He is alright n even want to talk with dilshad😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome
i like asya dialog
asad is fine now
tnx for the pm and continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
jitni Tareef ki jaye itni kam h...u r tooo awsume👏

wow dilshaad came to meet asad...bt am nw waiting for their interaction...
zoe asad scene...Tooo cute !!!
want more of asad zoe tamatar scene...😛

tooo Nicee
continue soon dear..😊

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