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anzana

@Bista-anzana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Pleasing SS & soo swt nd happy ending...
Rey fell for taani,,, her care dts rlry soo lovely
rey changed to normal polite loving & caring person ws soo awesum
deir confession lubd it
awesum dear
w8ing for new story written by u
brilliant job dear

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Ayesha Hasan

@Ayesha_Hasan

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Aayi hai aayi hai Ayesha Aayi hai😳😆
Main aagayi!! Laikin phir late...
Sorry na,,!!
Mujhe maaf nahi karogi😭
Ye lo kaan bhi pakad liye ,..
Sholly!!😳

Acha Coming to the First Chapter..

Superb chapter, dear..
The Characters of TaaRey!!!
Rey!! A super cool dude..
Wo to wo hamesha se hi hai..
But he treats Taani like a nobody..
Aise kaise kar sakta hai wo meri Taani ke saath..
I felt so bad..
Loved the SwaRon CS too..
Aww.. Sharon treats her like a sister..
Loved reading that..
OMG!!! TaaRey paired together..
Dekha!! Lecturer bhi inko alag nahi kar saka to ye Rey kya cheez hai..
Ek na ek din to Taani se hi pyaar karega..
How could he talk to Taani like that..
She might have been so hurt...
And Swayam knows his sister so well..
Loved the way SwaRon got angry at him for Taani..
And whats this !!
Rey agreed for the project ONLY for his FRIENDS!!
Gadha!!! Ganda ladka..Bewakoof!!!
HOD ne Taani ke liye kitna acha chance diya hai to prove herself..
Hmmm.. So TaaRey going to Agra together..
Mere mann main to Laddu hi laddu phhot rahe hain..
Ab Agra jaa rahe hain to Taj mehal ko bhi jaana chahiye..
Lets see whats gonna happen now..
Main abhi padh kar aati hoon..

Res Until then..

UnRes ..

Chapter 2
First of all, let me dance..
Are firstly kyunki Mera guess sahi tha..
TaaRey went to Taj mehal too..
Acha acha.. The Update was Lovely..
Aakhir My Rey is Falling for Taani..
But ye Kya..
SwaRon to ab bhi Us Se naraaz hain..
He was feeling so bad that they didnt even bid bye to him..
Hmm.. So, Rey has suffered in his past..
And thats the reason of his rudeness..
Taani was observing him so Keenly..
Aur ye Rey!!
Plane main bhi Flirting Start,..
Huh!! I hate him for that..
TaaRey slept for so long..
Mujhe bhi sone ka mann kiya as main ye update raat ke 4:30 am ko padh rahi hoon..lol
Loved the way Rey was getting lost in her face, her curls, her voice..
I loved that scene so much..
I was so happy..
I was also feeling ticklish..
And then those DISGUSTING GOONS!!
loved to see Rey's anger when they were speaking about Taani!!
Oh My!! Mera Rey!!
He Got Shot!!!
Poor Rey!!
Kitna dard hua hoga na..
Acha hua Taani's Bua came..
I hope he gets well soon..
Chalo me running to read the next one..

RES till then..

UnRes..

Main abhi ro rahi hoon..
Update padhne ke baad, I cannot control myself..
The Most beautiful chapter, himu!!
Love you!!!
Har waqt kuch na kuch aise hi kar deti ho ke mujhe tab hi aakar Tight hug karne ka mann karta hai...
In all your works, there have been some very very special chapters to me..
And THIS Chapter is added to that Special List of mine..
Trust me, I have loved this Particular Chapter a LOT..
The Way Taani was Taking care of Him for each and every second..
The way she never left him alone..
the way she hugged him..
Rey's Phobia..
He really seemed like an innocent child..
The way he hugged her belly out of fear..
And she was caressing his back..
And when he said that even his mom didnt touch him when he had fever..
trust me, I was sobbing.. Yeah yeah.. i am very emotional..
But I felt so bad..
The way taani changed him with her Love and Care towards him..
And he was feeling so Guilty..
The Confession was out of this world..
So So Damn beautiful...
Loved it..
Their tight hug..
And the words he spoke to her confessing his feelings..
I was so damn touched by his words..
I felt like hugging them tight..
A VERY BEAUTIFUL CONFESSION!!!
TaaRey sleeping in each other's embrace..
And Taani kissing him..
heheheh!! Swayam got a mini heart attack..
But then even he accepted him..
Such a perfect ending..
Really loved it..

Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago

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tharu01

@tharu01

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

i loved all the three chapters its amazing...ur a grt writer...love ur stories...n ya all d best 4 ur examz...😉😊

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shikha_taarey

@shikha_taarey

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Res..
Unres
Aapka paagal khaana haazir hai!!!!🤣... n pls gussa na hona.. cuz as usual late hun... meri bhuddhi daadi ayesha n niki d lazy behna se bhi late hun! 😔... hota hai kabhi kabhi!!! Ab aap bologe ki niki kaise lazy hui... kabki she was d 6th commenter!! Arey vo apni khudki stries once in a blue moon par update karti hai!! So technically she is lazy🤣🤣
N meri dono behno ko bol do... vo mujhse pehle jaroor comment kar sakte hain..bt never bigger dan mine!!! Afterall itni jyaada bakwaas to vo bhi nai kar sakte!!! 😉 🤣
Ok ok lets start...
CHAPTER 1
First of all happy ganesh chaturthi hima dii🤗
N ande joote taamatar... hum kyun phekenge... itne saste thodi hain jo hum aapko baatte phire!!!-___- 🤣
Lemme start den... d cs... rey hot handsome... KOI SHAKK!! Vo to bhagwaan ne uski kundli me hi likh ke diya tha dat saari gals will drool over him!!! Including d pagal khana me!! 😳 😳 🤣... n taani to hai hi simple beauty wid brains princess... no doubt!!! 😳 swaron cs bhi accha tha... by never thought dat ull show swayam as taani's bro!! Arey matab d way rey talks to taani n den u told he thinks of taani as a nobody... mujhe laga swayam ki behan hai to ye gadha thodi respect se to baat karega!!! ...bt thik hai... ab acc to ur cs.. rey is a badtameez ladka n thoda bahut no no... bahut bada gadha hai!!! 🤣
N ek gadhegiri to usne tabhi hi kardi jab usne my princess taani ko nobody bola!!! 😡
D assignment of making d idols... n d lecturer made taarey partners!! 😲 ... dis is called rab ne... no no "Lecturer ne bana di jodi" 😳 🤣... vo kehte hain na... ab na mai thodi philosophical hone wali hun... so bear me!!! 😉 😆
Haa to mai kahan thi... haan... taarey dhocked dat dey were paired wid each oder... vo kehte hain naa... "Hota vohi hai jo manjur-e-khuda hota hai" 😳 😆 ... n ab to taarey god ki decision ke against to ja nahi sakte!! 😉 😆
Reyam talk... haww... rey itni jyaada classes bunk karta hai n itna dull student hai ki fail hone ki naubat aagayi...chee rey!! Vry bad... kuch seekho mujhse!!!🤣 im d student of d year🤣 N for swayam he is ready to work wid taani!!! Huh!! Bada aaya... meri image ka kya hoga??? Vo colg hai ... koi mirror nai jo rey ki image kharaab hojaayegi-___-...🤣...i know ganda joke tha🤣... bt he was really vry rude to taani!😔... n telling her a nobody!!!-_-
Loved taani ka reply to him 😆 ... n usi tym ..."Enough"... kya dum hai aalwaaz me!!! Ise kehtw hain asli bhai...bhaiyon me bhai... Swayam bhai!!! 👏 😆 ... soo sweet... d way he was concerned for taani n angry wid rey!!! Even sharon was angry... u deserve dis rey!-_-
Finally ooth pahaad ke neeche aaya!! 😆 ... taani ke saath kaam karne ke kiye maan hi gaya!! 😳 ... n achese baat to kiya!!! 😳
HOD calling both... mujhe to laga d gr8 swayam bhaiya ne complain kardi hogi!! N HOD partners change karva dega... thankgod bach gaye!! ...ab bhagwaan ka likha hua to HOD nahi badal sakta na🤣
Ohooo!!!! Ek taraf d gadha of d year my rey n dusri taraf soty taani!!! How contrast n wonderful jodi!! 😳 .. taarey will be gng to agra!!! Hayee... ek mumtaz aur shahjahan n dusre hamaare Taani n rey Taarey!!!! 😳 😳 ...
Again swayam bhaiya... how concerned for her sis!!! N rey seeing all dis... hope vo taani se jealous na ho... just kidding di🤣
I wonder mai apni behno ke liye itni possessive kab hui thi... ayesha ke liue to im always possessive bt ab uss badtameez niki ko kya bolun... ab to dono behne badi besharam hogayi hain🤣
Chalo done.. my hands r paining now 😆

Edited by shikha_taarey - 12 years ago

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shikha_taarey

@shikha_taarey

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

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CHAPTER 2
Awesome update hima di... start was really very cute!!! 😃
Swayam was sad dat taani will not be wid him for one month!!! How sweet bhai... just lyk me!!! 😳 😆
Jitna swayam tensed n sad hai taani ke liye...mai utni hi excited n khush hun...one month... taarey privacy!! Samjha karo 😉 😳 😆
Swaym ka dialouge...kon mere liye khaana banaayega..kon mujhe coffee banake dega... kon mujhe roz subah uthaayega!!!! Iske liye taani... ramu kaka chutti par gaye hain kya??? 😕 😕 🤣 ... nai bt d scene was actually cute... specially wen taani said dat line in a childish tone...aww!!
Taani has called sharon to stay wid swayam for one month 😲 😲 ... isse acchi behan aur nanad swayam n sharon ko kahin nahi milegi!!! 😉 😆 😆 ...n taani telling swayam "Be a man"...i was seriously laughing lyk mad🤣... hayee ...kitne ache se explain kiya taani ne dat sharon trusts him n so she agreed!! 😃 N their hug last me... really cute... sach me best bro-sis ever!!
Next day at airport... taarey leaving n swayam worried for taani again...aww... bhai ho to aisa!!! N sharon assuring him 😳
Both r still angry wid my rey... ab na mujhe rey ke liye thoda bura lag raha hai!!😔
Taani thinking n den vo sharon ki aakashvaani 😲 😆 😆 ... vaah..kya bhaabhi hai!! Rey ko pyaarbnai mila n so he is rude!!! 😭 Kiska hai ye tumko intezaar main hun naa 😳 😳 😆 .
Rey flirting wid airhostes 😲 ... hadd hai yaar!! Ab jo vo thoda sa bura feel horatha vo bhi nai horaha!!... taking her no.😲
Agar mai hoti to rey bas meri taraf ek baar dekh leta... use flirt karne ki jaroorat hi nai padti!! Ab tak maine hi flirting chalu kardi hoti!! 😳 😳 🤣... n taani ka vo "didgusting"... jealous 😉 😆
Finally reached delhi n slept for a long tym... me too slept 😛 isiliye to late hui 😳 ... n den gng yo agra!!! Car me... taani explaining him d structute n all... n he agreed dat taani is 'Beautiful'!! 😲 😳 😳 Jo baat aaj tak rey ke liye kahi jaati hai... vo mai aaj taani ke liye kehti hun!!! You cant resist my beauty wid brains wali princess taani!! 😳 😆
Aagaye mere aajke mumtaaz n shahjahan in TAJ MAHAL!!! 😆 ... n its really a place where one gets lost!!!
Taani explaining d sculptor n hamaare shahjahaan... i mean rey again getting lost!!! N den both walking back to d hotel!! Their wasnt even a mosquito... 😲 ... wow...kitni cleanliness hogi na vahanpar!! 👏 🤣 ... n taani sitting on d rock n rey asking thak gayi!! 😳 chalo mr. Attitude ne khud se convo to chalu kiya! 😆 ... n den those goons... hamesha tabhi kyun aate hain jab ladka ladki akele hote hain!! 😡 Haww... he called taani a pataka... aakhein hain ya button??? Dikhta nai taani insaan hai 😡 😡 ... ab ise bolte hain na heroo... ek akele ne sabko maar giraaya... hayeee mera rey 😳 😆
One of dem shot rey... 😭 ... mujhe sach me rona aaya!! My rey... 😭... n taani screaming his name!!😭
Taani ki bua cane there... bhagwaan ka farishta ho aap buaji!! _/|\_ 👏 Thankfod she took rey to d hoapital n d way taani was stammering 😭 ... again gng to read 3rd chap now!! 😳 😃

Edited by shikha_taarey - 12 years ago

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snehataarey

@snehataarey

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Super nice update 😊😊 Luved dish story😛😛

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hima sachan

@hima_crazyD3fan

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

sorry sorry sorry...
i knw bht late hun per kya krti di u knw na abhi kya situation hai n uoer se haath bhi fracture ho gya..!!
nw coming to he 3s it was awesome di... luved it a lot..!!
Chap 1
taarey as a team awww...
the idea o making a murti of ganesh ji was brilliant ddi..
reyam convo was so...
gosh rey kinna rude hai my poor taani
ahha bang on taani...
yehhh taarey going to agra..!!
Chap 2
taayam were so cute...
sharon told about rey
so saddy saddy yr ...
beauty with brains... 😛😛
taj mahal haaye]
those bloody creep
rey shot
omg...
Chap 3
chalo he is fine now
aww taani feeling guilty..
gosh this line\
R: pata hai taani? (In a very low tone) jab bhi bachpan me mujhe bukhaar aata tha, meri mom hamesha servant ko bolke doctor ko bulaati thi. Mujhe chuu ke bhi nahi dekhti thi!
my heart literary sank..
their confession yeiii/...

awesome 3s di..
again a big sorry late hone ke liye bt exams bhi hain sorry didu..
luv
hima

Edited by hima_crazyD3fan - 12 years ago

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shubhi_taarey

@shubhi_taarey

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

just read it! its just amazing loved the whole process of taani tking care of rey nd he falling for her!

the best part was wen he had to get an injection nd he hugged taani so tight one more great work of urs!!🤗👍🏼

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meenakshi

@meenu_taarey

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

awesome awesom awesm awesm love it like anything just to the core of my hearts just love it when taani cares so much for her reyaansh
n thanx for helping mee dii love u ... n write stories like that always it helps mee too reduce my stress🤢 hehehe just joking ,,,,,,,,,,,,, ur stories r just FANTABULOUS OUT OF THE WORLD,👍🏼