ASYA OS :: The Greatest Gift

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hii guys i am naina... i present to you my first os on AsYa in QH forum. 😊
i have written this os on virman but have changed it little bit and now posting it for you guys out there...
hope you all like it... 😊
fingers crossed
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Asad n Zoya are married for more than 4 months and finally zoya farooqui is now zoya asad ahmed khan... asad loves this feeling of zoya belonging to him and zoya... she has explored a new talent of hers... she paints... suddenly all she wants is to paint this world in her colours... colours of happiness and joy. asad's mother dilshaad is really happy from the day zoya and asad got married... yes there were problems in their life but now everything is sorted out... ayan and humeira also got married and have gone to their honeymoon... nazma got graduated with a distinctiona nd went to mumbai for further studies... literally their lives were filled with numerous colours as zoya entered the house as a daughter in law... zoya after marriage even tried to become like her those typical bahus - a perfect wife and a perfect daughter-in -law of the house but dilshaad one fine morning told her to be the way she is and not try being someone else... she didnt want zoya to change even a bit.. asad and zoya were happily married with lots and lots of nok-jhoks and romance... they would frequently go out for dinner or on romantic dates... their life was just perfect. asad and zoya like mature adults have decided that they dont want a baby so early ( but it doesnt mean they havent consummated their marriage) rather they just wanted to enjoy time with each other and nurture their love and their relationship... they were so lost in each other's love...
it was asad's daily routine to get up early and work out... he always gave time to his health and looks unlike ayan (who was just always busy loving his wife) . everyday zoya would get up with a wonderful sight.. her husband busy working out and looking irresistible, and too hot to handle.

she would always used to get up, and wished him good morning with a very passionate hug.. she used to love this morning romance that they had everyday... she always thought that asad was her lucky charm so he was the first person she saw every morning and it always made her day...
but today there was something different. zoya woke up thinking of seeing asad but she was sad because he was seen no where...
she looked at the clock and it was 7 am. everyday asad used to be there at this time but where was he today and that too at this time... she got up from bed, got ready and went outside looking for asad.
now it was 07: 40am and still there was no sign of asad. zoya was worried and dailled his number... but why wasnt he not picking up the call.. just then dilshaad came and asked her to have her breakfast and stop worrying about asad as he would come back... she went back to her room whispering " allah miya whats wrong with ammi... ek toh mera pati ghum ho gya hai, aur iske upar ammi ko naashte ki padhi hai ". she saw asad's phone placed on the corner table and then her loving adorable husband has suddenly changed into the annoying and careless guy according to her... so being the obvious thing zoya got into her sherni avtar... she was pacing here and there in her room and had even skipped her breakfast...
asad came back and saw that zoya was not present there... he wondered what was wrong with his begum. he went into their room and asked zoya " hello mrs. asad ahmed khan... jogging karni thi toh aap mere saath park chalti, par aapne room ko hi park samajh lia..." as soon as he completed his sentence. he was greeted by things coming flying to him - pillow, cushion, remote, deo or whatever came in front of his dear wife...
asad nearly escaped everything and locked the room. he started moving towards zoya and zoya started moving backwards. if he took one step towards her, she took two steps away from him.. but soon she banged the wall and she knew that now there is no way she can escape from her naughty husband. asad blocked the way by keeping his hands on the wall and said " kya hua...??? what happened zoya begum...?? i want my romantic and sweet wife bcos today i have missed my morning romance..." zoya's anger flew away and she started blushing but out of curiousity asked " where were you asad..?? i was so worried about you...?? and u didnt even take your phone with u..?? mr. asad ah,ed khan how could you do this to me..." asad smiled and said " mrs zoya asad ahmed khan... calm down.. i just went for jogging and by mistake forgot to take my phone... dont worry il take it with me tomorrow..." zoya blurted " but why do u have to go for jogging... u already look so handsome and hot..." ." for you my jaan..." he said and left to get freshen up but after kissing her cheek... zoya was lying on the bed and was quiet...
asad came out of the bathroom and the moment he saw her he knew that some khichdi was being cooked in his wife's brain. asad while drying his hair said " zoya waise ye koi tareeka nahi hota hai apne ek laute shauhar se behave karne ka... " zoya got up from the bed , came towards him and while snaking her arms to his neck said " shauhar ji... jaiye aur pehle khud seekheye how to be a responsible husband... fir mujhe boliyega kuch seekhne ke liye..." asad knew that he cannot win from his wife, so he said " chhodo ye sab... lets go and have breakfast..." zoya nodded in positive and they went hand in hand...
the day ended and zoya has already decided that tomorrow she will join asad for jogging.. she got up early and got ready in her track pants and tank top... when asad got up he saw her standing in front of him and grinning...
asad : good morning jaan
zoya : morning husband ji
asad : what is the matter...??? kahan ja rahi ho...???
zoya : aapke saath...
asad : main kahan ja raha hoon...???
zoya : jogging pe... (saying as if it was the most obvious thing and the whole world knows about it)
asad : aap kahin nai jaa rahi hai zoya...
zoya : kyun...?? i am telling you that i am coming... main chal rahi hoon bas...
asad : okk... main abhi ready hokar aata hoon...
zoya : jaldi aana mr. khan...
they both went for jogging and dilshaad at home was looking for zoya n asad and was getting worried... her breath hitched when she saw asad carrying zoya in his arms and coming inside...
she asked " kya hua zoya ko...???"
asad : kuch khas nahi aami jaan... subah jidd karke mere sath jogging par gayi thi aap pyari bahu... aur..
dilshaad : aur kya asad..???
asad : aur kya aami... jogging karte karte miss far- i mean mrs. khan behosh ho gayi... very simple...!!!
dilshaad : asad stop making fun of her and take her to the bedroom asad... and let me call the doctor
asad : ammi there is no need of that... zoya exertion se faint ho gayi shayad..
dilshaad : no more discussion asad...

the doctor after examining zoya said " congrats...!!! she is expecting"
dilshaad was very happy and asad was standing still as if it was difficult for him to digest this news...
asad : are you sure doctor...????
dr. : yes mr. khan... i am 100 % sure..."
asad : thank you doctor...
by the time all this happened zoya has already gained consiousness and said : allah miya what is happening... ye doctor kya keh rahi thi...??? kya main... main
dilshaas : haan zoya... tum maa banne wali ho...
with this dilshaad hugged zoya and congratulated them both and soon left the love birds alone in their room...
zoya : mr. khan...
asad : mrs. khan ye sab kaise ho gya...??? asked innocently
zoya : aapko nahi pta ye kaise hua mr. khan... whats wrong with you...??? allah miyah save me please...
asad : mrs. khan nothing is wronmg with me and show some respect to me now... i am going to be a father soon...
zoya : and i will be a mother... i am soo happy mr. khan and thank you for giving me this beautiful gift...
asad : i should be the one thanking you mrs. asad ahmed khan...
zoya blushed and hugged asad...
asad : i cant wait to hold junior zoya in my arms...
zoya : it will junior asad mr. khan... mark my words...
asad : no no it will be a girl... trust me...
zoya : boy...
asad : girl...
zoya : boy...
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they were really happy and ready to welcome a new change in their life, a gift of their love... their unborn... their beautiful creation... their junior... junior zoya or junior asad...
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so thats it... the end yet a beautiful begining
lots of love
naina

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Miss-Appy thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful OS Naina!!!!!! 😳
It was very cute and sweet!!!! 😉 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was beautiful I loved it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Beautiful OS Naina!!!!!! 😳
It was very cute and sweet!!!! 😉 😳



Thank u...
Glad sumone liked it 😊
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Originally posted by: princess101

That was beautiful I loved it😃



Thank u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: naina927



Thank u...
Glad sumone liked it 😊



Dont worry i'm not the only one who liked it 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SBanoMalik



Dont worry i'm not the only one who liked it 😉



Yeah 😃 even i can see it now 😃
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Thanks 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing OS...when this one happen in QH...... I love it !!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful os naina i missed ur stories

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