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Part 22

Sumeet noticed Sonia getting tensed again, so he asked her quietly.

Sumeet- Sonia, kya baat hai? Kabse tum itni tensed lag rahi ho.

Sonia- Koi problem nahi hai.

Sumeet- Are you sure?

Sonia- Haan Sumeet. Tum khaana khaao.

Sumeet- Okay.

Sonia- (thinking) Ab main tumhe yeh baat kaise bataaoon Sumeet? Lekin mujhe Yuvi ko toh bataana padega. Usse bataana bohat important hai.

Soon it was time for the girls to go home, and Sonia never got a chance to tell Yuvi anything. Ashi-yuvi and Tia-Ranveer went back to their homes.

Ashi-Yuvi!!!!

Ashi and Yuvi were at their house and were going upstairs to their bedroom to sleep. Yuvi went into the bathroom and quickly changed and came out. When he came out, he saw Ashi sitting in front of the mirror at the dressing table taking off her jewelry. (Ashi changed before Yuvi did)

Yuvi- (walking up behind her and starting to help her take off the jewelry) So... apne ghar jaake kaisa laga?

Ashi- Apne ghar? Psycho, mera ghar yeh hai.

Yuvi- (looks at Ashi lovingly, then kisses her on the cheek. Then he put his arms around her neck and looked at their reflection of them together in the mirror) Ashi, you know, itna strange lag raha hai yeh sab.

Ashi- Strange?

Yuvi- Ya. I mean, hum dono hamesha itna fight karte the, and now look at us. Like this. Tumhe nahi lagta ki yeh sab eik dream hai?

Ashi- Nahi. Main nahi chahthi ki jo kabhi meri dream thi woh reality se phir se dream ban jaaye.

Yuvi- (flirty tone) Oh really? (moves closer to her) Aur agar main tumhe abhi kiss karoon toh? Yeh bhi tumhaari dream hi hogi.

Ashi- (smiles, then pushes him back) No. Yeh dream nahi nightmare hoga. Jo main nahi chahthi ki reality banne.

Yuvi- What??? Ashi!

Ashi- (laughs) Psycho, main abhi bohat tired hoon, so... can we please sleep?

Yuvi- Yeah chalo. Even I'm really tired.

Tia-Ranveer!!!!!

At the Sisodia residence😆 the scene was very much alike. Ranveer came out of the washroom and saw Tia standing in the balcony.

Ranveer- (hugs her from behind) Tia, aap yahaan kya kar raheen hain?

Tia- (frightened by Ranveer's sudden entry) Ranveer, tumne toh Tia ko darra hi diya.

Ranveer- (laughs lightly) I'm sorry Tia. Humne aapko yahaan dekha isiliye socha ki aapke paas aajaayein. Waise aapne bataaya nahi ki aap yahaan kyun khadeen hain.

Tia- Woh actually Ranveer, Tia thodi fresh air ke liye aayee thi. Phir Tia ne moon ko dekha. Kitna beautiful lag raha hai naa?

Ranveer- Haan. Par aapse thoda sa kam. Hume uss chand ko dekhne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Humaara chand toh aap hain. Aur woh chand itna door hai, par aap toh humaare bohat paas hain.

Tia- Ranveer, Tia ko pata hai ki woh beautiful hai. But tumne Tia ko compliment di isiliye thanks.

Ranveer- Achha? Toh aapko humse pehle kehna chahiye tha naa ki aap jaanti hai ki aap khoobsurat hain. Hum aapki tareef toh bohat cheezon mein kar sakte hain. Kyunki aap toh perfect princess hain. Humaare liye aap eik pari se kam nahi hain. (points to the moon) Aap toh waheen se aayeen hain. Aur uss chand ki saari khoobsurati apne saath hi le aayeen. Jab yahaan itna khoobsuart chand hai, toh uss chand ko kaun dekhega?

Tia- (blushes and then hugs him) Ranveer, Tia bohat tired hogaayee hai. Ab hum chalein?

Ranveer- (smiles) Chaliye.

Next Morning!!!!!

Ashi-Yuvi!!!!

Ashi- (at the breakfast table) Yuvi, mujhe MP aur Maate ke saath baahar jaana hai.

Yuvi- Haan fine. Jaao. Pooch kyun rahi ho?

Ashi- Hello. Pooch kaun raha hai? Main tumhe bataa rahi thi loser.

Yuvi- (rolls his eyes) Wacko.

Ashi- Anyway, I've got to get going. MP aur Maate aagaaye honge. Okay? See you.

Yuvi- Alright. Bye. Ashi!

Ashi- Kya hua?

Yuvi- Be careful.

Ashi- (laughs) Shut up psycho. (leaves)

Yuvi- (laughs to himself) Wacko.

Tia-Ranveer!!!!

Tia- (at breakfast table) Ranveer, aaj hum kaheen baahar chalein?

Ranveer- Jaisa aap chahein. Bataaye, kahaan jaana chahti hain aap?

Tia- Shopping?

Ranveer- (laughs) Hume lag hi raha tha. Theek hai chaliye.

A few hours later, Sonia called Yuvi.

ring ring

Yuvi- (picks up phone) Hello?

Sonia- Yuvi? Mom bol rahi hoon.

Yuvi- (extremely happy) Mumma aap?

Sonia- Yuvi, mujhe tumse eik bohat important baat karni hai.

Yuvi- Boliye Mumma.

Sonia- Nahi. Phone pe nahi. Hum kahin baahar milein toh zyaada achha hoga.

Yuvi- Mumma, eik kaam kariye, aap yahaan aajaaye. Ashi bhi ghar pe nahi hai toh aap yaheen baat karlijiyega.

Sonia- Perfect. Main aati hoon.

Yuvi- Okay Mumma. (hangs up)

Shopping Mall!!!

MP, Vrinda, and Ashi had just finished getting what they needed and Ashi told MPand Vrinda to go home and she would take a taxi. Ashi was about to leave from the mall when she bumped into Tia and Ranveer.

Tia- Ashi?

Ashi- Hey guys. Tum dono yahaan? Kyun Thakur? Timbo tumhe itni jaldi apna slave bana liya?

Ranveer- Nahi Ashi aisi koi baat nahi hai. Tia ka aaj ghoomne ka mann tha isiliye hum inhe yahaan le aaye.

Tia- Ashi, Yuvi kahaan hai?

Ashi- At home. Main yahaan Mp aur Maate ke saath aayee thi.

Ranveer- Oh.Achha. Waise hain kahaan woh dono?

Ashi- They just left. Actually main bhi abhi ghar hi jaa rahi thi.

Tia- Really? Hum bhi ghar hi jaa rahe the. Chalo. We'll drop you.

Ashi- Uski koi zaroorat nahi hai Timbo. Main taxi se chali jaaoongi.

Ranveer- Humaare hote hue taxi se jaayengi? Bilkul nahi. Aap abhi chalye humaare saath.

Ashi- Par Thakur...

Ranveer- Hum kuch nahi sunaa chahthe. Chaliye.

Ashi- Fine. Chalo.

Meanwhile, Sonia reaches at Ashi-Yuvi's house and quickly goes in.

Sonia- Yuvi?

Yuvi- Hi Mumma! (hugs her)

Sonia- Hi sweetheart. Beta mujhe tumse bohat important baat karni hai.

Yuvi- Haan boliye Mumma.

Sonia- Listen sweetheart. Mujhe pata hai ki yeh sab sun ne ke baad tum bohat hurt hoge, lekin yeh baat kehna bohat zaroori hai.

Yuvi- Kya baat hai Mumma?

Ashi, Tia, and Ranveer reach the house and see Sonia's car outside.

Ashi- Mumma ki car?

Tia- Mumma's here!!! Chalo chalo hurry up.

They all run inside... Jus in time. Or should I say... the wrong time.

Sonia- Yuvi, jab Mummum choti thi toh woh apne Dad ke saath car mein thi. Unka car accident hogaaya tha aur...

Yuvi- Kya hua Mumma?

Sonia- Mummum toh theek hogaayi, but...

Yuvi- (scared of what he was going to hear) Mumma... kya hua Ashi ko?

Sonia- Yuvi, doctors ne kahaa ki Mummum...

Yuvi- (really tensed and scared now) Mumma boliye...

Sonia- (starts crying) Mummum kabhi maa nahi ban sakti!!!

Yuvi gets a real shock. Sonia continues to cry, but Yuvi just puts his hands on his head and looks down.

Sonia- Yuvi, sweetheart, tumhe yeh baat Mummum se chupaani hogi. Agar Mummum ko yeh baat pata chal gayee toh woh pata nahi kya karegi.

Yuvi- (coming back to his senses) Mumma, don't worry. Main Ashi ko kuch nahi pata chalne doonga.

Little did they know that Ashi, Tia, and Ranveer had heard everything!!!

COMMENTS!!!

Edited by AshiYuvi4life - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Hey babes. Thanks. Mere exams totally rocking the. Sorry actually main iss fic ke baare mein totally forget hogayee thi. Exams toh december mein hogaaye the. Anyway, main jaldi continue karti hoon

U r most welcome yaar😊

What u forgot about ur this lovely fic & about us??😭

Ab tune itna gussa dila diya hai agar tujhe bachana hai to tujhe jaldi hi apni fic cont karni hogi!

Edited by sweetyvidya - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey main batana bhul gayi soorry the part was really very nice 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago

Yeeeeeeeeeee maine sabse pehale reply kiya 😃🥳

Edited by sweetyvidya - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsume !!!!!!! simply rockin 👏 gr8 fic

n yeh thnz for continuing soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
AWESOME Part!!!!!!!

It's so sad though.....no kids for Ashi😭😭😭......would LUV to see little devils running around playing tricks on ppl!!!😈😈 the world needs lots of little Ashis running around




Edited by gsoni - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
finaly,u updated 😡 d part was greattttttttttttttttttttt 👏 now plz cont fast
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Part 23

After hearing the news, Ashi broke down. She was screaming and crying.

Sonia- (shocked to see Ashi standing there with Tia and Ranveer) Mummum!!! Sweetheart!!!

Tia- (trying to control Ashi while she herself was crying really hard as well) Ashi, babes, relax. Calm down Ashi. Ashi, please!!! (Ranveer was speechless)

Sonia- (came over running) Mummum, sweetheart, please. Sambhaalo apne aap ko Shona.

Yuvi- (running over to Ashi who was now sitting on the floor crying her head off) Ashi... baby... please. Ashi... (hugs her really tight and tries to hold back his tears) Sweetheart, hum... hum kids adopt karlenge. Don't worry sweetheart.

Ashi- (crying) Yuvi... Yuvi... main... main...

Yuvi- Sweetheart, main... main tumhaare liye pani laata hoon.

Ranveer- (follows him) Banaa, hum... samajh mein nahi aata, ki hum aapse kya kahein. Hum toh yeh bhi nahi keh sakte ki hum samajh sakte hain ki aap pe kya guzar rahi hai.

Yuvi- It's okay Ranveer. Don't worry about it dude. Main sambhaal loonga.

Ranveer- Agar aapko humaari zaroorat ho kabhi bhi, toh hum hain yahaan.

Yuvi- Thanks dude. (they hug)

COMMENTS!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
tooooo goood ... 👏 ...but poor ashi ...... 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part but too short!!!!!

what will ashi do?

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