ArjunVSS-Paas aate-Ye Faasle

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rimi❤️
NOTE:- blue is saakshi's POV and maroon/red is the flashback.

" Ajj bhi jab uss din ko yaad karti hoon toh ajeeb lagta hai... agar vo din nahi aaya hota, toh aaj mai kaha hoti? kaisi hoti? kya mai zinda hoti? khush hoti ya dukhi? pata nahi... lekin vo din... vo mere liye bohot khaas tha."

Flashback:-
(saakshi, a degnified, soft spoken but straight forward, and lonely business woman. (lonely... at heart) is sitting on her huge chair in her castle-like cabin. She is the boss and her employee is standing and looking at her in a pleading way.)
saakshi- ok dev. i agree.😕
dev- (in happiness)- really???😲
saakshi- haan... meri taraf se haan hai.. abb khush?
Dev- i cant believe this 😲 are u serious? is this a dream 😲
saakshi( getting up)- its not a dream dev... huh... i am ready to marry you.😔
dev- 😳 hmmm hmm yaani madam ko iss nacheez se pyaar ho hi gaya? nahi?😆
saakshi- dev! tum mujhe college se jaante ho. u know ki mai sirf...
dev- i know sakku...😆
saakshi- stop it dev. mai apne mom dad ko aur dukh nahi dena chahti. they like you. and so... i think abb mujhe unki baat maan leni chahiye...😔
dev- oh God... mujhe toh believe nahi ho raha...mai...
...
" dev, mera sabse accha dost, jo mujhse hamesha se pyaar karta aaya hai... bohot khush tha ... ye jaante huye bhi ki mai bachpan se Arjun se pyaar karti hoon, usne kabhi mera saath nahi chodda. usne kabhi mujhe koi nuksaan nahi pohochaya... mere saath saath, in 7 saalo me usne mere parivaar ka bhi khayaal rakha.. mujhe impress karne ke liye nahi, bass mere dil se kuch bojh halka karne ke liye... vo jaanta tha mai khush nahi hoon... lekin use yakeen tha ki ek din vo mujhe vaapas pehle vaali saakshi bana dega...


(saakshi is going back home, she lives in london. dressed in decent dress with an overcoat, she is looking amazing among the white snow, though she is sad with her straight and expressionless face, she is looking beautiful)


" Na jaane mere dimaag me uss vakt kya kya chal raha tha.. maine abhi abhi dev ko haan karr di thi... lekin arjun, mai uss din bhi hamesha ki tarah uska intezaar karne airport parr gayi"...

(saakshi is sitting on a chair inside the airport with her usual upset face. just then a security guard comes and hands her a cup of coffee)
saakshi( giving a gentle smile)- thanky so much daniel.😊
daniel- mam... you come here everyday? i am seeing you from the last 7 years... you never miss a single day... but today you are early?? shall i think this is the end of ur long waiting?😊
saakshi- you can say that daniel. today is the end.😕
daniel- so .. is he coming today mam??😃
saakshi- no daniel... i am leaving...
daniel- what do u mean mam?...

"bass mai jaanti thi uss vakt ki mere dil me kitna dard tha... Itne saal roz mai ummeed leke vaha jaati thi ki arjun mujhe kisi flight se utarta hua dikhega... aur mere paas aake kahega ki saakshi... tumhaara intezaar khatam hua... lekin abb... abb maine apni zindagi ko nayi disha me modne ki soch lee thi. tum hi mere sab kuch the arjun, lekin abb maine apna sabb kuch apne apno ke liye tyaagne ki soch lee thi..."

(Saakshi is back on her way to home. she sees some kids playing)

" mujhe uss vakt vaha ruk jaane ka mann kiya. unn baccho ko dekh ke mujhe apna bachpan yaad aa gaya... sirf ek hi dost tha mera... arjun... hamesha uske saath khelna.. padhna... saath me school jaana...😊 aaj bhi yaad hai mujhe vo anmol pal."

(she moves ahead and sees a teenage couple sitting on a chair holding hands)

" unhe dekh ke mujhe yaad aa gaya ki kis tarah mujhe arjun se pyaar ho gaya aur uska ehsaas ajeeb sa tha... pehle toh yakeen hi nahi hota tha... choti si age me kisi se itna pyaar karne lagi thi ki vo hi meri duniya bann gaya tha. use kho dene ke darr se kabhi use kuch kaha nahi... lekin... ek din usne mujhse keh diya that he luvs me 😳 meri toh duniya hi badal gayi thi... kitni khush thi mai.😃... lekin...😭 jo hua use yaad karne se bhi ghabraane lagi thi mai abb... arjun ko apna career banaana tha... hum dono ke college alag the. vo chala gaya lekin vaada kiya ki jaise hi uska sapna poora ho jayega vo vaapas aayega. lekin 3 saal india me aur 7 saal london me mai uska intezaar karr chuki thi... vo nahi aaya tha, na hi koi phone, na hi koi letter... kuch nahi... laakh koshishe karr chuki thi mai...but in vain...aur mai abb aage badh chuki thi..bass abb mai ek nayi zindagi shuru karna chahti thi...😭

Log kehte the mujhe arjun se nafrat karni chahiye, mujhe dhokha diya usne...lekin meri yahi ek problem thi ki mai apne dil me uske liye nafrat nahi laa paayi...usse pyaar karna nahi kam kar paayi.. usne kabhi sach me mujhse pyaar kiya tha ya nahi, mai nahi jaanti thi..lekin mai tab bhi usse bohot pyaar karti thi...lekin haan ek gussa zaroor tha mere dil me... kuch kadvi yaadein bhi dee hai usne mujhe...lekin abb mai vo sab bhool ke... apne dil me sirf uske liye naraazgi liye aage badh jaana chahti thi"...


(saakshi reaches her home, its a mansion. she is at her huge gate , which the watchman opens,greeting her. she moves in and is about to open the door when she hears a familiar voice.)

"Saakshi..."

(she is dumb-struck. she is standing still. her eyes are widened. she can't believe this is happening.)
(she turns around ... and tears start falling from her eyes)
saakshi- "A-A-Arjun?"😭

XXX

Hey guyzz...i am back with a story... its a VSS (Very short story 😆) guyzz i don't have tym but i really feel like writing this one. its a new concept and all the characters are really different in it. i hope you enjoy it. this was just a introduction ... plzz forgive this error queen 😆 for mistakes. and i am comments bhookhi pyaasi 😆 so plzz comment ya like zaroor karna 😳 any suggestions, any daant phatkaar accepted 😳😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice arjun sakshi bachpan ke friends arjun proposes to her but then leaves to make his career
but no he is back now what sakshi has said yes already
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

nice arjun sakshi bachpan ke friends arjun proposes to her but then leaves to make his career

but no he is back now what sakshi has said yes already


thnks fr reading dear... yeah this story is full of twists and turns 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was just awesome
wow iam speachless
u r such agud writer
me commenting on a story thread after along tym
wow yaar u were simply awesome

u deserve this


Edited by .Gwen. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey rimzi!
welcome back sweetheart!
I"ve always loved ur stories...and u know it well...and I hav also loved a lot the new characters u created...Samara being the best example for it...
I am really looking forward to this story of urs...
plz continue soon
it seems a really diff concept with the refreshing storyline
I ma waiting
continue it sooon rimzi

love
Aisha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good vss but plz en fasloon ko kam kar do plz plz plz qk show mai to waise bhe fasley aa hey gaye hain n plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the first part, do continue soonish! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept
loved the first part
waiting for the next one
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thnkuuu sooo much all of u...my net is weak
But i will soon come back and thnk
Each of u... Thnks all... Keep reading luv u all
😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Gwen.

that was just awesome

wow iam speachless
u r such agud writer
me commenting on a story thread after along tym
wow yaar u were simply awesome

u deserve this



Thankyou sooo much gwen 😳 🤗

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