Faltering Footsteps: Dil Ke Nazar Se *Completed* - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
awww beautiful story !!!! BRAVO !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
OH MY GOD! Jenna this story was so awesome just WOW!!

This is your best story ever and I mean it.Your PHYS and COL has become my 2nd fav because this story has got 1st rank from me.Bas!:)

Their first meet,her concern,his reaction to her was so beautiful and serene to read!

The way she stood up for themselves and remain adamant to marry him even against her family concent left me speechless! I was awed by the way she took care of him without any pity but with love whilst her busy schedule!! She took the responsibilty in such a tender age and did exceptionally well and worked hard to earn money just for sending him to US to be normal again...Hats Off!!

Khushi's pain and wait left me in tears and her belief that still he will come one day...i was spellbound by her unconditional love for him.

At first I was angry at Arnav for making her go through this pain but when he came back and explained his reasons...i was in tears...he did all this for her just to give her all which she deserve and be the man she would be proud of.

Not to forget the letters...They both kept their promise.Arnavs letter was so touching!

The anniversary day of AK...so good...The whole world came to know the bond between them and khushi being the reason of all his success.They both confessed infront of whole world and showed the world and her family that she did make a right choice!She is pregnant now...Awww

It goes well with the saying that,
'Behind every successful man,there is a woman'

P.S.Hey i did notice Khushi's schedule similar to yours.Nahi??Uni and shelter home and her studying law*wink*;);)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Hina69

OH MY GOD! Jenna this story was so awesome just WOW!!

I am glad you loved it!


This is your best story ever and I mean it.Your PHYS and COL has become my 2nd fav because this story has got 1st rank from me.Bas!:)
I still find it so overwhelming that you like PHYS cos I have no idea what I was thinking whilst writing that! I am glad you like COL though I am suffering from writers block with it slightly 😔

Their first meet,her concern,his reaction to her was so beautiful and serene to read!
I wrote half this story late at night and had no idea what I was writing so I am glad that you enjoyed it!

The way she stood up for themselves and remain adamant to marry him even against her family concent left me speechless! I was awed by the way she took care of him without any pity but with love whilst her busy schedule!! She took the responsibilty in such a tender age and did exceptionally well and worked hard to earn money just for sending him to US to be normal again...Hats Off!!
True love makes it possible for anything to happen. I just wanted to get that across and I am glad that I did!

Khushi's pain and wait left me in tears and her belief that still he will come one day...i was spellbound by her unconditional love for him.
That bit was slighty hard to write but I am glad that you think I wrote it well

At first I was angry at Arnav for making her go through this pain but when he came back and explained his reasons...i was in tears...he did all this for her just to give her all which she deserve and be the man she would be proud of.
I think most people hated Arnav at first and assuemd he left her. But after they found out why they realised he loves her jsut as much

Not to forget the letters...They both kept their promise.Arnavs letter was so touching!
I am glad you liekd Aranv's letter cos that was a hard part to write

The anniversary day of AK...so good...The whole world came to know the bond between them and khushi being the reason of all his success.They both confessed infront of whole world and showed the world and her family that she did make a right choice!She is pregnant now...Awww

It goes well with the saying that,
'Behind every successful man,there is a woman'

P.S.Hey i did notice Khushi's schedule similar to yours.Nahi??Uni and shelter home and her studying law*wink*;);)
Why winking, I just think law will help change the world one day so I make them lawyer instead of fashion designers. Plus fashion desigining ke bare I know nothing! Now wink karna baan karo!

Aww you really think I am the best? 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yup your are the best!
Any doubt:*
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kyunnn????
Hum ne keh diya na u r Best than Bas its Final !!;>
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg!! this is epic!! i have no words to tell u what a beautifully awesome work this story has turned out to be...now after finishing this up, i have turned blank literally...nothing is entering my mind, the only thing which i'm thinking right now is how can someone's love be so pure, so heavenly, even amidst all the cynicism and artificiality ruling the world around us..right now i'm shutting everything out of my mind n just giving myself some time to reflect on the truth brought out by this story...

i strongly recommend everyone to read this wonderful story..brilliant work..
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey girl...my apology...fr late comment...
dam busy...study...exm...lots more...
nw free reading n commenting...
it was beautiful ss...
oh girl...hw always u make a note of sociak awareness ...
in ur ss...m wonder...really its GOD gifted...👏
i like the way u create different story of love...
handicap arnav n lawyer khushi...
very tough combination...
the way their love formed unique...
the way their relation named unique...
khushi truly a angel...
did more than enough fr arnav...
arnav understand her value...
loves her unconditionally...
5 yrs waiting its like ages wid out each other...
khushi endured many hurdle...
but still stood unbreakable...
salute to her dare...respect her...
arnav justified their separation...
nw they r extreme phase of their life...
welcoming new member,,,,,,,,,
so happy n lively...👏


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Posted: 11 years ago
that was a sweet story
loved it👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just read the whole of this fiction...
I understand that the intial bit of khushi was u jenu...her routine n lifestyleat 18-19...
This piece touched me...
It was heartfelt...i felt for both arnav and khushi...
Such love n belief is jus devine to jus read...least i can imagine encountering it in real life...
It was lovely...
Iv always felt that being handicapped is not a crime right. ...So y treat them different...
But then every parent would worry for their childs future...
Its jus that both r right at their places...
It was lovely written...
I loved it...^_^

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