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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks all will surely contiune am writing now the next part😛

Edited by dj_me - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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next part:

So here is the next part:

Jai is a big business man while he is too popular when it comes among girls ….. It's a Tuesday morning .. Jai goes to his office, an ordinary week day while he past his room he saw a pretty, innocent girl coming towards him…. She keeps talking to him but he wasn't able to hear her pretty voice, he was studying her eyes, lips and hair …. It was just amusing he hadn't seen a girl like it before, it was just a miracle … suddenly when the girl said Mr Walia do u hear me am talking to you , then he came out of his dream and said oo yeah I am listening ….. Why not have a cop coffee in restaurant and talk about it …. The girl said ok as you wish, they went to a cafeteria near a beach… they start talking and jai asked what was her name , Bani she said call me bani … pretty name said jai just pretty as you look, what said bani nothing mm nothing at all I was just talking to me said jai… ok …
Bani: I am coming from a village here to a big city and I have two sisters , which are younger then me….and its my responsibility to take care of my sister after my parents death … cause of it I need a job which is able so I can take care of my sisters. So I would be thankful to you if I give me a job ….. so is it possible for you to come tomorrow , yeah said bani but can I ask why ??? why?? Said jai you said you need a job and I offered you a job as my new assistant … if it suit for you??? Bani: she was shocked and asked mr walia do u mean me yes but …. Ok said jai have to go have a urgent meeting so see u tomorrow …. Bani went home and looks after her sisters :pia , rano where are you I have good news … the phone rings and she picked it up and was so shocked to hear …..

Will continune sooner ..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great fanfic ! 👏 👏
Please do continue soon ! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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more comments thanks ... 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very good start 👏 👏 👏 . when is the next update, pls update fast but pls make it little more long.

waiting....

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhanu

very good start 👏 👏 👏 . when is the next update, pls update fast but pls make it little more long.

waiting....

thanks for liking it ,,,will surely make longer next time .. i think the next part will come tommorow as i am doing it in school cause we have eng lesson and then i have to write it there beacuse of mi teacher would see it ... haha am geeting grades from this ...lol joke but its count with mii grade in eng ... so teacher have to see every part of it .....😃

xxniains

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i was a silent reader, when will the next update be here? 😃

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