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u know abhi jaisa situation hain ek song dimag me aa rha hain 😆

Aaja piya tohe pyaar doon, gori baiyyaan tope vaar doon
Kis liye tu, itna udaas
Sukhe sukhe honth, ankhiyon me pyaas
Kis liye kis liye ho,
Aaja piyaa ..

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Eagerly waiting for Geet's manofy.But our Maan is not that tough nut to crack hard.one teardrop of Geet is enough 😉
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Chapter 62 - Hum Chup Hain

poor geet puri tara dadima our meera ke bitch main fas gayi what to say poor soul maan looking handsome in baby pink also poor girl don't want to go in collage maan kiss her with his eyes wow but ye pammi kaha se ai fir maan ko outhouse jana pada but he again fight for meera and geet beautiful update poor maaneet dont get any privacy for them meera console maan with her word too good

Chapter 63 - Tune O Rangile

secretary ke saath full fledged affair with mask of boss he flirt with geet that is MSK wow geet sit on maan lap maan want his misty dose poor boy carried away in his passion and poor girl scared in office if anybody see them like this poor maaneet tense with each other anger sasha again got her dose of scold from Msk

wow meera give good idea double dose de do munda kahi nahi jayaga wow
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Chapter - 64

"Of o Di...Come on...now don't spoil your mood. Ache mood se shopping karo and then jaa ke mana lena piya ko...chalo"

Geet pouted but walked to the jewellery stores to select engagement ring for Maan. First thing she did was to give her chain and find out how much that will fetch it in exchange.

"Di, I think that your saving will be anyways less for Maan jiju's dress. He won't wear any simple suit and designer suits are very expensive. So let's agree with Daadima's suggestion and just buy the ring with your existing saving and not sell off this chain."

"Nahi Meera...my mom always used to say that two things in any wedding are shagun - one ring and one dress. Yeh meri kami hai ki main is layak bhi nahi ki unke hisaab se kuch kharid sakun. Lekin phir bhi jo ho sakega mein karungi. Woh nahi pehnege yeh simple si ring toh we can change later. Lekin ek shagun ki anguthi toh honi chaiye na. And dress...I know mein unki hasiyat tak nahi pahunch sakti. He can just keep it with him...woh meri khushi ke khatir accept toh kar hi lenge."

[No Meera... my mom always used to say that two things in any wedding are shagun - one ring and one dress. This is my shortcoming that I am not in a position to buy anything according to his status. But still I will do whatever is possible. If he doesn't wear this simple ring then we change it later. But I have to at least but an engagement ring. And dress...I know I can't buy according to his standing. He can just keep it with him...if nothing else, he will accept it for my happiness at least.]

She was already feeling guilty for today morning and few tears rolled out of her eyes at the though of not able to do justice to even something as basic as their engagement ring. Meera hugged her sideways and wiped her tears

"Aap ro mat di"

"Mera bhi man karta hai Meera ki mein unke liye sab kuch karun. Jaise unehin khushi hoti hai mere bare mein soch kar aise hi ji chahta ahi sab kuch unke hisaab se unke liye itna kuch karoon...lekin I am so useless...worthless...kuch nahi de sakti unhein siwaye in feelings ke"

[Meera, even I feel like doing everything for him. Like he feels happy to think about me same way I also feel like doing everything for him according to his taste but I am so useless...worthless...I don't have anything to offer other than my feelings.]

"Di...feelings hi toh important hoti hain...pyaar hi toh anmol hota hai...kehte hain ki bas intention honi chaiye. Aap ro mat di and who says you cannot do anything for Jiju. No one loves him like you do so no one can think about him and his happiness also like you do.

We will buy a perfect ring for him. You have seen jiju...he never wears any jewellery...just a watch. I am sure, he will love a simple ring which he can wear any day and nothing very flashy. You are right, we will buy that with the money from this chain and then pool the savings including Anu's funds to buy a good dress."

"Nahi Meera"

"Wait Di... First thing, I am not aksing you to just gobble up my Anu's fund which you have setup but take loan from that fund di...after marriage you wont have to pay rent so you can add that to what you save every month for Anu...thik hai and secondly I have a brilliant idea...

We will but dress material for jiju...even good quality material will come in 15,000 which we have and then we can give that to Daadima and she can get the dress made from a designer. Shagun bhi hojayega and jiju ke standard ka bhi...ab aap rona band karo and let us look at some gold bands...thik hai"

Geet finally smiled and wiped her tears as they browsed through some gold bands. Geet squealed in excitement as she found the perfect one. It was gold with self dots on the sides.

"Perfect"

Meera also loved it and they decided to buy it.

"Meera woh...mera man tha ki mein kuch inscribe karaun uspe"

"Acha ji"

Geet pouted at Meera's teasing "Maine ek movie me dekha tha...mujhe bhi karna hai"

Meera laughed and folded her fingers to say awesome

"Kya karana hai inscribe - "Maan - Geet"?"

"Nahi"

"Toh? Shaadi ki date?"

"Nahi"

"Toh"

"MishtyMaan"

Meera's eyes widened with mischief as Geet blushed

"MishtyMaan...wow kya baat hai Di..."

After lot of teasing, blushing and fun, finally they gave instructions for the ring to be ready and went to a good shop and bought the dress material.

Meera showed the pictures of the ring to Daadima along with the dress material and she was super excited

"Wow...tum dono ki choice toh bahut achi hai...ab se saari shopping tum dono hi karna. This ring is awesome and I am sure Maan will love it. Simple and classy. Dress material is also very good...he will love to wear this on the wedding day.

Lekin beta yeh sab toh itna costly hoga. Please mein abhi bhi keh rahi hoon...let me pay for it. Ek hi baat hai...kya farak padta hai"

"Nahi Daadima please...mujhe pata hai koi farak nahi padta lekin yeh sab kar ke I am feeling very happy...I tried to be independent and survive in this big city all thanks to you...aur aaj meri mehnat se whatever I am able to do, I want to do...waise bhi unke liye nahi toh kis ke liye karungi...please."

Daadima caressed her head gently "thik hai ebta...but koi tension mat lena...aur ab baaki sab hum pe chod dijiye aap...hmmm"

Geet smiled but Daadima noticed some hesitancy in her

"Kya baat ahi Geet...aap itni badi cheez kharid ke aayi lekin puri tarah se khush nahi lag rahi...koi problem hai"

"Main batati hoon Daadima"Meera thumped down next to Daadima with Anu - "Di ne jiju ko naraaz kar diya hai aaj and now

roothe roothe Piya...piya...roothe roothe piya manaon kaise

Aaj na jaane baat hui kya kyon roothe mujhse"

"Meera!!!"

Daadima laughed at Meera's song "arre lekin baat kya hui"

"Woh di ne jiju ko romance nahi karne diya officer mein aur kya"

"Meera!!!!"Geet was purely mortified while Meera smirked at her Di's indignation

"Daadima, unhone khana bhi nahi khaya...aur yeh badmaash bas mujhe tang karti hai"

"Baap re itna gussa hain woh...waise Maan toh aksar lunch miss kar dete hain...lekin aap ghabraiye mat. Hum hein na aapke saath...pehle unehin manaiye with his favourite dishes and then unhein daantiyega aap ko pareshaan karne ke liye"

Geet nodded in acquiescence as Daadima told her recipe of Maan's favourite pasta and chocolate cake.

"Ab jaiye, fresh hokar, unke liye outhouse mein jaake cook kariye"

"Mein lekin outhouse mein kaise"

Daadima sighed "Geet aap baar baar ghabra kyon jaati hain...this is your house only beta."

Meera took off and left with Anu as she was getting tired while Geet left for outhouse to cook for her Piya ji.

Maan was cursing his luck. He was so happy in the morning and his small tiff with Geet had completely ruined his day. He somehow finished all the necessary work and left for home. On the way he called up Geet who was busy in cooking and did not pick his phone.

"Yeh ladki mera phone bhi nahi utha rahi...yeh thik toh hai na...why is she not picking up phone."

He immediately called up Meera who told him to relax and go home.

"Jiju, d ki taraf se ek surprise hai aapke liye...jaiye"

Meera cut the phone giggling and hi-fied with Anu who smiled at her mom's joy.

"Anu, tere bade papa and mausi na ek dum budhu hai..."

Maan hurried to the outhouse and the scene there completely mesmerised him.

Geet was standing near dining table and it seemed she had just completed some cooking. Bead of swat was shining on her forehead as she hurriedly removed the hair tendrils coming in front of her eyes. Admiring her handiwork, she shot a quick prayer

"wow...it looks nice na...i hope yeh dekh kar unka gussa choo mantar ho jaye...Babaji please...bas ab bahut hua...pura din meine miss kiya na unhein ab please aap unko mana do...nahi mein sach mein aapse katti ho jaungi aur roungi bhi..."

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Tu rutha to mai ro dungi sanam
Aaja meri baho me aa

Maan smiled at her cute little talks and relaxed knowing that she was not angry with him

"Pagli...nakhre karne bhi nahi aate is toh pyaar mein...lagta hai yeh bhi sikhana hoga...so better enjoy her attention for first and last time Maan...is ke baad to tu hi ghumega iske peeche peeche"

Maan chuckled at his own thoughts and then schooled his expression into a serious one. Geet saw him entering and walking straight to his room with long strides.

"Maan sir...please rukiye toh...suniye na"

Geet followed him hurriedly into his room and walked behind him as he took out his clothes from the cupboard

"Woh, maine jaan bujh ke nahi kia tha...woh phone...I got scared...suniye toh"

Maan opened the washroom door with gGet still following him. He turned and asked her "what do you think you are doing...ab washroom mein bhi mere peeche peeche aana hai kya?"

Realising her folly she shook her head in denial giving a cute pout. Oh dear, Maan just wanted to eat her up right there but he forced himself in and closed the bathroom door.

Geet sat down on his bed waiting for him

"Dekha Babaji...kitna attitude...meri baat bhi nahi sun rahe"

Le legi jan meri teri narajagi
Jisme tu khush rahe meri usme khushi

Tu rutha to mai ro dungi sanam
Aaja meri banho me aa

Maan entered the room after freshening up and he stopped seeing her all serious and teary. Geet looked up and for a moment she was lost in his face, his wet hair and the tight t-shirt he had worn clearly showing strength of his shoulders. Seeing him like this she just wanted to run into his arms but...

Maan walked towards her with full intention of stopping the drama now but she stood up at same time bumping her head with his. For support she grabbed him and not expecting the same, Maan lost his balance and fell yet again, but this time on the bed with her on top of it.

Thud...thud...thud

Loud sound of their heartbeats were broken when Geet lifted her head from his chest and spoke softly

"I am really sorry Maan sir...for this and the morning fall too...I did not mean it. That time I got scared with the phone and now it was just an accident"

"Acha"

Maan looked alluringly at the innocent face full of tension, love and expectations. Kitne rang bikhre hue the uske chere pe...

"haaan...and..."

Before he could understand why there was a look of determination on her face, she seemed to decide something and then bent to pecked him softly. Maan's eyes widened in shock at her boldness feeling her soft lips against his even if it was closed mouth and just momentarily.

He looked at her blushed face

"Please maaf kardijiye...ab toh I gave you..mera matlab...woh Meera ne kaha tha ki double dose dene se sab thik ho jayega"

Maan laughed out chuckling hard trying to stop

"acha...matlab tumne use bata diya ki mein tumse kyon naraaz hoon"

"nahi...I mean..she guessed and said to give what I denied in double dose"

"Acha...toh abhi toh single dose hi mili hai...where is my double dose"

Geet's cheeks burned and her shyness completely overtook her. Maan slowly lifted his hand.

She was alarmed feeling him removing pins and band from her hairs "yeh aap kya kar rahe ho"

"I love your open hair...especially jab woh mujhe gher lete hain"

Fingering her hair gently, he made them scattered on his face. Geet's breath hitched as he caressed and touched them with so much passion. Finally cupping her head he pushed her down to take double dose of his Mishty.

Ho teri ye sadagi ye bholapan tera
Mera nasib hai khilata joban tera

Meri bahar tu mera karar tu
Masti se bhar diya tune jivan mera

Tu meri hai mai tera hu sanam
Pagali hai kya hans de jara

Fire erupted not only in their mouths but everywhere as she flattened on top of him. She being on top made her in control of the kiss but he kept the firm pressure as she slowly invaded his mouth tasting him completely. Automatically their legs entangled and they got lost feeling each other.

When pleasure and yearning both became unbearable, Maan took control of the kiss flipping her underneath his weight. Swirling his tongue in every crevice, he smooched her deep and wet while she moaned in pleasure. His open assault on her every sense as his strong body moved on her so perfectly, dizzied her completely.

But then bodies have some other needs as well. Maan stilled as he felt the vibration underneath his stomach with loud sound of growling.

He looked at her flushed state as it took her a moment to come down from the heaven she was in.

"Kya hua?" is all she could ask gently when the sound same again.

She flushed some more as if possible as embarrassment flooded her

"Woh mujhe bhuk lagi hai...aaj aapka pehla din tha na after accident to gurdwarda gayi thi...isliye breakfast miss ho gaya...lekin maine parshaad khaya tha..."

Maan didn't know to engulf her again in his arms seeing her innocent and cute pout or to be angry on her carelessness. Getting up from her he decided for the second

"What is wrong with you Geet...tumne breakfast nahi kiya and what about lunch...woh kyon nahi kiya..."

"Dekhiye ab aap mujhe mat daantiye...daantna toh mujhe chaiye haan..."

Mark glared at the finger she was showing. Geet bent it slightly seeing his eyes but then remembered Daadima's words

"Aur nahi toh kya...saari galti aapki hai...mujhe lunch mein bhook kaise lagti when you were so angry with me...aur aapne...aapne khaya kuch ...nahi na...lunch toh chodo do bisbuit bhi nahi khaye...kabhi socha hai, how much it hurt me...aapko is tarh bhooka dekh kar...dawai bhi miss kar dete and that also you ate on empty stomach"

By now her finger was lowered and some fresh tears started shining in her eyes.

Chupake se bol de dil me jo bat hai
Ab koyi dar nahi apani har rat hai

Apna ye pyar bhi puja se kam nahi
Mujhko ye naj hai tu mere sath hai

Tu rutha to mai ro dungi sanam
Tu rutha to mai ro dungi sanam

Aja meri banho me aa
Aja meri banho me aa aa aa

Tu meri hai mai tera hu sanam
Pagali hai kya hans de jara

"Geet tum pagal ho kya...yes I was a little angry but then I was ok when you came to me first time itself. And lunch...mein toh aksar lunch skip karta hoon...why did you...tum sach mein...Aage se khabardaar jo aisi harkat ki toh...samjhi"

"What...aap mujhse naaraz hi nahi the..."

"Nahi baba...aur tum..."

"tum kya...and hello Mr. Maan Singh Khuarana...pehle jo bhi ho lekin duniya ruk jayegi...pralay aa jayega na agar bhagwaan Maan Singh Khurana will take 10 minute break to eat his lunch. First you promise me that you will never skip your lunch...aur agar aap itna busy hain toh cabin mein lunch kar sakte hain na...pehle mera haq nahi tha lekin now dare you...dare you keep your self hungry...aap mere ho and you said it yourself samjhe."

"Geet"

"No Geet...ek toh saare din mujhe itna pareshaan kiya...phir apna khayal bhi nahi rakhte...aur ab muhe daant rahe hain...I don't want to talk to you...jaiye"

Maan gulped his anger seeing sherni avatar of his docile Mishty. He sighed knowing she cared too much for him and he like an idiot should now be more careful because his every action now has a result for both of them.

"Acha Jaan...sotry...ab dekho tum gussa mat aro...I promise I will take care in future...I know koi hai jise meri khud se bhi zayda parwah hai...ab chalo...I am also hungry...hmmm"

Geet nodded sniffling while he just picked her up in his arms and started walking downstairs. She didn't even bother to ask what he was doing and snuggled in his neck and chest...

Settling her in his lap, he beamed at the choice of pasta...his absolute favourite. Taking the first bite he forwarded towards her lips but she was looking at him like an excited child

"Maine pehli baar banaya hai...Daadima ne recipe di...batayine na..."

Maan smiled seeing her eagerness and took the bite himself.

"Ummm...it is so nice..."

"Sach mein"

"Khud khake dekho na...and tell me if this is too bland for you"

Lovingly they fed each other with Maan taking his Mishty in between...now nothing could beat that...not even chocolate cake...can it?

"By the way what was your personal work jiske liye mujhe chod ke gayi?"

Geet told him about the shopping. He asked her to show the picture of the ring but she wanted it to be a sweet surprise for him. Teasing each other with light banter they spent the time.

...

Much later Maan was driving to drop her home when she told him that she is shifting back with Pinky as Meera was now able to take care of Anu and PG was much closer to office.

"Woh Geet...suno...actually I wanted to talk to you. Please tell emu if you are uncomfortable at all but this Saturday I wanted to go with you outside. It is a surprise and hum raat ko wapis aajayenge. Sunday ko tumhaari class bhi hai...but pure din...tum chalogi mere saath?"

Geet looked at him and thought for a second before responding "kitne baje nikalna hai"

Maan smiled "sach Geet...tum comfortable ho na...we will leave at 6:00 as it is a long drive"

"Off o Maan sir...aap bhi na...aap rahoge na mere saath pure din...bas nahi toh muhe dar lagega. Aur haan Daadima se mein kal puch loongi. And please remember to take driver with you. You are still recovering and I will not let you drive for so long..."

"Daadima se mein baat karlunga...lekin driver"

"No lekin wekin...samjhe aap...bahut laparwaah hain aap khud ko leke...bas keh diya meine"

Maan laughed out seeing her stubbornness and care "acha baba...we will take Ramesh with us because he is the only one I trust."

As the reached she started steeping out of the car, when she stopped and turned back

"acha mein kya pehnu...mera matlab...any special occasion or place?"

"It is special Geet but also a long journey. So wear what is comfortable..."

She steeped out again and then turned back

"acha...mein Pinky ko kya boloon"

Maan smiled "Malik-e-Maan agar aap ka jaane ka man nahi hai toh hum long drive pe chalte hain...waise you can go with your boss also for some land deal na..."

Geet blushed at his teasing and again opened the car door when he called out to her this time

"Geet...suno"

"Ji?"

"Good Night"

Geet smiled as he placed a sweet kiss on her cheeks and she finally ran inside towards the door.

Precap - Tu bin Bataye

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Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome, beautiful part
loved it
geet is slowly slowly opening up
her hesitation her wish her desire to do something for maan is there but he is adjusting...but like meera said feeling is matter than anything ...this all r materialistic thing but geet's feelings r priceless...
loved meera - geet moments
loved meera n geet conversation
meera is turning mature with time
her teasing her suggestion to geet r so lovely...
awww geet want to engraved the name mishty maan lovely
loved how dadi ma making geet easy n helping her with maan's like
ha jee khana baaniye dil tak toh pauch gaye but roothe piya ko maanne ke liye khane se jada kuch nehi hain pyaar se bhara kahana aapno hatho se banake dena
geet is so cute
awww maan is tensed cause of this tiff n personal work of geet
lol
but loved meera she is another cutie pie aww she said right to any
buddhu hain anu's bade papa n mashi...
loved it
loved maaneet moments in our house
awww geet is so innocent sacchi mein isse nakhra karna nehi ata but jo bhi karti hain dil se bahut pyaari hain
n maan loved her for this
awww maan try to pretend but kab tak...
their kiss it's not only passion but their love...feeling...n this small tiff's make up
awww geet's right over maan n scolding maan is lovely
loved it
how maan bowed over geet's scolding her right on him
loved it
loved maaneet's spl dinner
loved how geet trust maan n will go for outing
awww maan is always naughty teasing geet but this r tings make their relation more strong n coming close...
loved the song perfect with moments
continue soon
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 11 years ago
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Geet has so much integrity. I really like that about her character.
Meera and her teasing😆 She did come up with a good compromise though.
Giving from the heart and also to Maan's liking made Geet so happy.
Daadi the great comes in to help Geet manao her roothe piya.
Following him in the washroom😆😆😆 Such a jhalli and sweetu she is.
I loved the peck that she finally dared to give just to make his anger go away.
They are going away for a whole day. 😳😳 I sense some more sweet moments coming.
Waiting eagerly for MishtyMaan and their outing.
Thanks for updating Ritzy😃
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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amazing part
loved it
geet wanted to buy ring and dress with her money
they bought ring and geet wanted crave mishtymaan on the ring meera teasing geet with that
geet prepared maan's gavourite pasta and complaing to her babaji to send him soon
maan and geet had the pasta ...
maan asked geet wether she will come with for whole day for that she agreed
now waiting for the next part

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