Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19 - Page 71

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Posted: 11 years ago
Both chapters are just superb dear...I m in love with this ff

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Originally posted by: Serviana


And please do so!!!!



Thanks a lot dear..will update in a while...
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thanks a lot dear..
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Originally posted by: meerab147

Both chapters are just superb dear...I m in love with this ff



Thanks a lot dear..and i am in love with you people who make it special...
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Awesome, doubts all cleard
Thank you


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Hey guys.thanks for your response...
So here is the next update...Ok, it may look repetitive a bit but very important... so, will have to read carefully as it is about dance night... from Shlok's point of view...

Part-16

After dropping Swati to hostel, Shlok was thinking about last day's activities...

When Swati had pulled her to dance floor...

But Astha, you? Shlok asked...

Its ok Shlok, I am waiting here, once you people come back, then we will go... ...

No, I am not leaving you alone, Shlok resisted...

How am I alone with so many people? You go. She is waiting for you... Atsha pushed him to the stage...he had to go there...Swati held his hand taking him to stage but his mind was still stuck to Astha...

Yaar Swati... Astha is alone there... He said.

In so many people, she is alone? Swati smiled... When music started and they started dancing but Shlok still looking at Astha...

nayi nahi yeh baaten ,...
kaisi paheli hai yeh kaisi paheli zindagaani


Oh , Ouch, suddenly Swati shouted. Shlok what are you doing? You are dancing on my feet?

Oh Sorry Swati,. I was just worried about Astha...she is trying to convince me , she is fine, but doesn't look like...

Swati gave her a look...you are impossible Shlok.

aankhon mein gar sapana naya ,---------

kaisi paheli hai yeh ,kaisi paheli zindagaani

I can see, you are just standing here but your mind is still stuck to Astha...Can't you think beyond Astha ? Swati smiled...

Yaar , she is alone...actually If I tell the truth, I am feeling alone without her. This is first time, I am dancing without her since we have met...Shlok smiled.

nayi nahi yeh baaten ,---------
kaisi paheli hai yeh ,kaisi paheli zindagaani

Shlok...I am your dancing partner, will you look at me for a moment? Swati smiled...

Humm...Shlok came back from his own , you were saying something?

When Swati moved a bit closer to Shlok...taking her lips close to him...

Shlok was taken by the moment, he closed his eyes and started moving close to Swati...he was just about to place his lips on her...suddenly something clicked his mind... no, I can't do it... I can't cheat Astha... He shrugged Swati away...

Astha? Swati repeated...

I..I don't know, but I can't do it.. Saying Shlok looked towards window where Astha was standing...

Astha? Where is she...he immediately came from dance floor looking for Astha... he was really upset on what was going on...but no one was there...When Swati held his hand..

Swati please leave my hand... and where is Astha? Shlok asked worriedly..

Why is Astha so special for you Shlok?

She is my best friend yaar..Shlok replied...

Then how could you cheat her if you are with me Shlok? Or you love her? Swati completed..

Swati? Shlok shouted ta her...

Yes Shlok, do you love her? You were with me, we had four years relationship. But you were never so possessive, so caring for me... She is just your friend and you can't be with another one for a single moment because that will be like cheating her for you, why Shlok?

I don't know Swati and please stop all this nonsense... Shlok shouted...

I am telling you same Shlok. Stop this nonsense...stop being a jerk to deny your love... On very first day, I could see how much you two are in love but you still don't want to accept and Atsha...she is one step ahead from you, she wants me back in your life just because she wants your happiness...without thinking how will she tolerate even a day without you...I am here since three months and i just listen.. Astha ye, Astha wo, Astha prepare my notes, cook my dish, choose my clothes, you can't go alone, you can't stand here, you can't eat this...and she? Same like you Shlok likes this, Shlok hates this, he will love this color, he will like this dress...he doesn't allow me to wear this...he doesn't allow me this...if she is just your friend, then how can you define boundaries for her?

Shlok was listening everything carefully now...

Swati pause d for a moment ad spoke...

Shlok I know, you were so much in love with me that you decided not to let anyone in your life... but that was adolescence age... We didn't knew what true love is, at that time, we needed someone to show off to others that we have a boyfriend or girlfriend...that's why we were together. But now we are mature enough...we know what's right and wrong for us. And you know, I tell you frankly, if even I would have been your girl fried till date and you have been putting so much conditions on me na, I must have broken up with you by now...she does everything for you even being your friend and you can't imagine a single moment without her...if this is not love, Then what is love? Just roaming around, sipping together or sleeping together?

Shlok you forgave me, not because you thought I was innocent, just because Astha thought so... ...but we became friends again as you have cleared...you have forgotten our past, its ok...but now it's time to move ahead. Go to Astha. She too loves you as much you love her...just accept the fact and get your love before its too late...

Shlok had tear rolled over his face... he immediately left hall and went outside looking for Astha...

Astha. Astha...he was shouting... when he found her alone outside the hall going towards outer gate...

Shlok, please leave me alone for some time... I want to go home. She said without looking at him...

Astha please... Shlok tried to pull her from back but instead of Astha, he had pulled her blouse doris making it getting loose...

Oh hell...he shouted...as well as Astha...

He held her hand and pulled her to the corridor nearby where a tube light was glowing... he turned Astha back and started tying the dories speaking...Astha, we need to talk...its urgent...he wanted to talk about what he feels about her...

Shlok, I am really not in the mood. We may talk later...

But it will be too late by then...

It's never late Shlok... Astha showed him hand to keep quite...

He was tying doris quietly thinking...why no hesitation from Astha on my touch? And even to me, I can't touch any other girl like this...never then why I feel so comfortable with Astha...just because ... a smile appeared on his face... Suddenly while tying upper dori, he saw a big mole on her back...and was a bit shocked...

Have I seen it before? No it's too deep and Astha don't wear deep back tops...then how do I know, there is mole here? He tried to remember that night...suddenly he touched her bare back, moving hand in between doris, he slowly opened the top dori looking at mole...

This means that was not my imagination. She was with me that night...and she didn't stop me even? Why? Why did she gave in? Does she feels for me too as Swati says? I had kissed her that night? That's why I felt I was not touching her lips for first time while giving her artificial respiration that day. he thought to himself...this means she knew since last six months and didn't tell me... That made him angry...

Shlok, what is going on? Astha shouted turning back holding her loose blouse tightly...

Finally she agreed, she was with Shlok but she didn't stop him because she was taken away by moment and how the hell she can say that was a passing moment between them? Shlok was thinking...

But finally she made it clear...

So you mean, that was a passing moment between us? He shouted...

Yes, that was and you want to know why we stopped midway because you told me you love Swati...Astha too shouted gathering the courage to speak...I was on your bed and you were talking about Swati...but I am thankful to god, I stopped midway as I know you love Swati... You are made for her only...Astha shouted...

Shlok was shocked thinking..., she thinks, I love Swati till now? And why is she not speaking what told me that night... when she herself said... I love you Shlok? Why is she bending the things?

Astha, I want to talk about the same to you today... Shlok spoke a bit politely... that's why I was looking for you...because I wanted to tell you that I love...he wanted to tell her...he was sure now, he loves her only... Swati was his past but Astha is his present and future...but she stopped midway...

I know Shlok, you love Swati... Astha spoke before Shlok could complete... Its ok...I am happy for you...Listen Shlok. I told it was a passing moment... I was ok on the next day only and you know, otherwise, I would have told you at the same moment, you know, I don't hide anything form you...that doesn't matter anymore in my life...and I just wish that should not matter in your life too... we are friends and will be... Please forget it and move ahead with Swati...

Her statement made him much angrier...what the hell she thinks, why she can't listen once... but if she doesn't want to listen, I will make her speak only. Thinking Shlok too shouted... ...ya you are right. That was really a passing moment and I am fool who was taken away by that till now... Still thinking, why, how. All that happened... you are right...I really love Swati... I should go back to her only...

Stamping is feet he reached back to dancing hall to Swati...

Shlok what happened? Swati asked...did you tell her how much you love her?

Shlok held is head in his hands sitting on a lonely table...

Shlok what happened tell me , I may help you...Swati pleaded...

Shlok told her everything...including that night incidence..

Shlok, are you sure she told you that night, she loves you?

YA, Now I remember each and everything of that night...I am sure...

Then why is she denying now?

Because she thinks I am with you as you are back...

But go and tell her na... that you love her only...

I know her, she is too stubborn, she will never agree...I will have to think something big...

Shlok, if you need my help, I am always there...Swati said with a smile..

Thanks Swati for making me realize what I want in my life...Shlok smiled while leaving...

For full night, he was thinking how to convince Astha...

Finally he called Swati early in the morning...Swati will you be my GF?

What? Swati was shocked...

I mean in front of Astha? Will you help me? He smiled telling her plan... and Swati too agreed...

Shlok smiled reaching back at his home and coming out of his memories...So the game begins Astha Kirloskar, to make you mine... I will make you so much jealous and frustrated, you yourself will shout how much you love me... he smiled at his own...


Edited by jeenia123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
love. ur update u r super ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
swathi is such a nice person
loved the way she made shlok understand his love for asthA
so he is planning to make jealous astha
waiting for next updates... It will be fun to read
continue soon
thanks for the pm😊
Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pt311288

love. ur update u r super ...



Read so fast? thanks a lot dear... for being first one to comment...
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my first place gone today😭

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