Shree SS: Chahoon Mai Ya Na - Pt 7 Pg 28, 27-Feb

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Friends,

I'm back to bug u all with a new SS .( zyada torture nahi 😉)
This story is on special demand by my swee birdie Aisha Vashishth as a gift to her little princess Sashaa Vashishth from both of us.
Love u Sashaa 😊
The title of the story : "Chahoon Mai Ya Na"
So without wasting time... here is the prologue:
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"Par papa apne uski baat maan kaise li"... "lekin"... "haan mai janti hoon" ... "fir bhi" ... "kya Delhi mein koi college nahi hain?"... "par aap hi bataiye mai akeli kaise handle karungi?"... "no no"... "papa please"... "aur Maa?" ... "achchha theek hai"... "waise se bhi ab koi option nahi hai" ... "humein uski baat maan-ni hi paegi" ... "OK" ... "bye"
By the end of the call with her father she had given up all the hopes. She threw her phone on the bed, went near the window and took a deep breath. He came from behind and hugged her and she smiled.
Him: "Kya hua jaan? aisi kya baat huyi sasur ji se jisne tumhe itna pareshan kar diya?"

Her: "Aapki laadli saali... humari princess... Mumbai aa rahi hai"

Him: "To aane do... ismein problem kya hai?"

Her:"Wo yaha ZIMA mein admission lena chahti hai ... 3 year Crime journalism graduation course mein"

Him: "KYA???" His eyes almost popped out and he parted from her and turned her to make her face him.

Her:"Hmmm... wo kisi ki baat sun-na nahi chahti... kuch bolne jao to jo cheez haath mein aati hai wo fek ke maarti hai ... is baar to papa bhi darr gaye hain"

Him: "Hmmm... koi baat nahi ... handle kar lenge ... wo tumhari chhoti behen hai aur mai tumhare ghar ka hone wala bada daamad... to wo meri bhi responsibilty huyi...hum milke ye responsibility uthayenge ... OK?... now cheer up ..."
They smile and hug each other.
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Scroll down for Index and and CS.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index

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Prologue Page 1
Character Sketch Page 1
Part 1 Page 5
Part 2 Page 7
Part 3 Page 12
Part 4 Page 17
Part 5 Page 22
Part 6 Page 26
Part 7 Page 28
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Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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Character sketch

Ajay Kapoor
A businessman who lives in Delhi with his wife Jisha Kapoor and younger daughter Sashaa Kapoor. His elder daughter Ayesha Kapoor is an ETF officer who lives in Mumbai.

Jisha Kapoor
A simple housewife who maintains her family and relations. She loves her family. She cannot stand a word against her daughters.
Ayesha Kapoor
A brave ETF officer. She is in a relationship with her chief Sameer Rathod and they recently got engaged.
Sameer Rathod
ETF Chief and a brave cop. He loves Ayesha a lot.
Sashaa Kapoor
A sweet girl. Younger daughter of Mr and Mrs Kapoor and baby sister of Ayesha Kapoor. She is very stubborn but very good at heart. She usually starts throwing stuff around in the house when something doesnt happen as per her wish but she doesnt intend any harm to anyone. She is very impulsive. She loves loud music. She is a budding badminton player and has won many trophies at state level tournaments. She has a dream to become a crime journalist. She aspires to take admission in the prestigious ZIMA in Crime journalism graduation course in Mumbai. At first her parents refused to send her to Mumbai and she was very upset. She cried and threw stuff around to make her parets agree to fulfil her demand. She is very excited to step into this whole new world. Her stay in Mumbai is going to change her life altogether.

Shreekant Sen
Technical expert in ETF. A fun loving guy who is crazy about gadgets and his gaming console. Hacking and cracking is his life. But along with it is equally good at shooting and martial arts. He has proven himself many times on field assignments. He loves being single and doesnt want to fall in love. He thinks that girls are only meant to give tension to boys. But very soon his life is going to change.

Arjun Suryakant Rawte
Second in command of ETF and Rathod's best friend.
Roshni Arjun Rawte
Arjun's wife and a school teacher.
Chhotu
Commando in ETF and Shree's best friend.
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This story is about Shree and Sashaa ... how they meet and fall in love.

So how was it?
Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cant' thank u enough diii!

well this ws our princess's reaction...
wat a beautiful CS...nd prologue Rukku baby...lolz...mom-dad ke naam bhi almost same rakhe hai...lolz...bas sanjay ki jagah ajay...nd nisha ki jagah jisha...great..

woaho! i never realised ki mere ghar me itni devilish ladki rehti hai...aj apni hi behen ka chara sketch padhke laga...she is so dangerous...lolz...
well u missed on TIGER! ye point shaa ne bola not mine...

continue soon
more than me sm1 else is eagerly waiting

Love
Birdie
Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arey wah!👍🏼 Shree ne Navika ko dump kar diya?😆 Chalo yeh bhi acchi hai!😉

Interesting prologue! SamAyesha story bhi hai!😃

But you know which pic had me going all tizzy fuzzy He is just so heavenly in green😳

Continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely start Di..
eger to read...
Thx 4 PM..
and ys Love Shasha..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Carrie-



Arey wah!👍🏼 Shree ne Navika ko dump kar diya?😆 Chalo yeh bhi acchi hai!😉

Interesting prologue! SamAyesha story bhi hai!😃

But you know which pic had me going all tizzy fuzzy He is just so heavenly in green😳

Continue soon!

😆😆😆
Arrey!!!! if i had known Sashaa before i started RNP ... to Navika ki jagah Sashaa hi hoti 😉
She loves Shree the way u love Arjun and I love Rathore ... so ek Shree-Sashaa Love story to honi hi chahiye 😉
😉 ... yeah ... i know ... aur uske saath uski Angel in white bhi hai 😉
next part will be coming very soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

Lovely start Di..

eger to read...
Thx 4 PM..
and ys Love Shasha..

Thanks dear!!!!!! yes... update coming soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome bhavna Dear
Really beautiful dear
Amazing prologue n CS
Plz Update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow di... Super start
👏 👏 👏 👏
waiting for the update
please di... Jaldi karo na

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