Shree SS: Chahoon Mai Ya Na - Pt 7 Pg 28, 27-Feb - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
OMG bhavna aapne to jhhande gaadh diye
Amazing dear wonderful start
Kya filmi meeting hai sasha aur Shree ki too good
she is really sweet
Continue soon
Cant wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
so cute ..😳...patiyala ki maharani ...har baar yahi dialog kyo marati he ladkiyaa ,. waise mene bhi mara tha ik baar ...🤣... sameer is so cute jiju ... kash mujhe bhi milte aise jiju ...update soon 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
awesome update di..
just superb.. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
nice start Di..loved sasha n raesha scenes..!! ohh shree n sasha's first meet.. 😆 😆 cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Awssumm Didu...Aashu-Sashaa-Sameer ki chemistry was superrbb!! Lovd Shree-Sashaa ki first meet! Im roflingg..🤣🤣 Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Soonz!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Friends,
Thank you so much for your encouragement. Sorry 😳... was not able to reply to all of you individually... but all the comments and likes were a big motivation. And now without wasting time, here is the second part of the story 😊

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Sameer(scolding Shree): Sorry ka kya matlab hai Shree... hadd hoti hai laparwahi ki... aise kaise nikal gaya wo tumhare haath se... ye case humein isliye mila hai kyunki hum best officers hain... aur agar hum hi aisi laparwahi kartey rahe to baki departments k samne hum kya ideal rakhenge ? tum jante ho na Babloo ka pakda jana kitna zaruri tha ... ek wohi tha jo humein is case se related sari information de sakta tha... lekin aaj wo tumhari galti ki wajah se bhaag gaya aur tum kuch nahi kar paye... i'm really disappointed Shree...

Shree was quietly listening to all this with lowered eyes.

Sameer: ab aise khade mat raho ... uska phone track karke uski location trace karne ki koshish karo ... quick ...mujhe results chahiye... aur jaldi... waqt nahi hai humare paas...

Shree(meekly): Yes sir...

Sameer storms out of the conference room and Arjun also leaves for his cabin. Shree quietly sits in front of his laptop trying to concentratebut was upset. Chhotu and Aisha look at him helplessly. Shree narrates them the whole incident and also mentions that Sameer and Arjun would never believe that it all happened because of a girl. Chhotu and Aisha trusted him and assured him that even they have activated their informers' network and they will catch Babloo very soon.

Both Aisha and Chhotu try to cheer him up but he was thinking about the stranger girl. He was not hurt because Sameer scolded him but he was feeling bad about his helplessness and he was totally mad about her.


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Sashaa, on the other hand, was feeling guilty. She didn't know what to do. Suddenly she got an idea and called up his senior crime journalist with whom she was working as an intern and asked him for help. She met him and he took her to a sketch artist. She had seen the culprit whom Shree was chasing very clearly, so she gets his sketch made. And her senior identifies him as Babloo, who was a history sheeter and was involved in some supari killings.

She gave the details of the location from where Babloo ran away and her senior journalist through his informer's network found out that Babloo was hiding in a lodge in Bandra.

She notes down all the details and thanks her senior for all the help and reaches home late.

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Around 9 PM
At Aisha's place.

Sashaa arrives.

Aisha was worried for her so she called Sameer there. They are relieved to see her back. She covers up saying that she was working on a story with her senior.

She notices both Aisha and Sameer were stressed. While having dinner.

Aisha: Sameer... aapko Shree ko aise nahi daantna chahiye tha..

Hearing this Sashaa chokes on the food she was eating starts coughing. Aisha and Sameer are distracted and Aisha gives her a glass of water.

Sameer: Aisha mujhe Shree se aisi laparwahi ki ummeed nahi thi...

Aisha: mai janti hoon... par it was just an accident ... ek ladki ne galat-fehmi mein aakar Shree ko rok diya aur Babloo waha se nikal gaya

Sameer: mai nahi janta ki Babloo uske haath se kaise gaya ya fir wo galti thi ya galat-fehmi ... aur agar galti thi to wo kiski thi... mujhe sirf ye pata hai ki Babloo ka humare haath aana bahut zaruri hai... ye khoon usi ne kiya hai aur usi k zariye hum us tak pahuch saktey hain jisne ye supari usko di thi...

Aisha: Relax... wo pakda jayega... aap khana khaiye...

Sashaa felt very bad for Shree.

later when Aisha went out to see off Sameer, Sashaa borrowed her phone pretending to install an App and checked her contact list to search Shree's number. She found the number and saved it in her phone and sent the message with Babloo's whereabouts to Shree.

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Shree was about to sleep when his phone buzzed and he saw the address of the lodge where Babloo was hiding. He immediately called up Sameer and Chhotu.

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Sameer had just left Aisha's place when he got Shree's call. He called up Arjun giving him the address and went back to Aisha's place. Aisha was surprised to see him back but knowing about the latest developments she quickly got ready and they left.

Sashaa was relieved.

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The team nabbed Babloo and took him to ETF office and interrogated him wher he soilled the beans about the case.

After necessary formalities were done for Babloo's arrest and all were relieved. It was almost 1 AM.

Sameer: Good job Shree... par tumhe uski location kaise pata chali ?

Shree: Thank you sir... wo mujhe ek unknown number se message aaya tha ... shayad kisi informer ne bheja tha... message milety hi maine aapko call kiya...

After a pause...

Sameer: Shree... aaj jo hua uska mujhe afsos hai... par tum ye mat samajhna ki mujhe tumhari kabiliyat par koi shaq hai... bilkul nahi... you are the best and that is the reason you are a part of ETF ... and I am proud to have you in my team ... aur Babloo ko hum pakad lenge, is baat ka mujhe yakeen tha ...par...aaj jo bhi maine tum se kaha wo sirf isliye kaha kyunki mujhe tumse bahut zyada ummeedein hain ... aur jab un ummeedon se kuch kam milta hai to thodi baukhlahat to hoti hi hai ... I hope tumne meri baat ka bura nahi maana hoga ... (Sameer smiles)

Shree(smiles back): Kaisi baatein kar rahey hain aap sir... mai aapki kisi baat ka kabhi bura nahi maan sakta ... aur aapne jo kuch bhi kaha wo galat nahi tha... aur meri humesha yahi koshish rahi hai aur rahegi ki mai aapki sari ummeedein poori kar sakoon... aur aapka yakeen mere liye bahut important hai... mai apki training kabhi waste nahi janey dunga ...

Sameer pats his back and others in the room smile and leave for their respective places.

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Sashaa was waiting for Aisha. Aisha was surprised to see her awake late in night. Sashaa just showed her concern and was relaxed when Aisha told her that Babloo was caught.

Just out of curiosity, she also asked Aisha about Shree with a reference of Sameer and Aisha's conversation at the time of dinner. Aisha casually told her that Sameer was happy with Shree now and that everything is fine between them. Sashaa was relieved to know that.

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Next day.

Shree tried to call on the number from which he got the message but Sashaa didnt receive his call. Shree thought of tracking this number but Arjun gave him some work and he completely forgot about the matter.

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In next few days, Sashaa gets more information about Shree from Aisha in normal chit chat without arousing any suspicion from Aisha. Aisha told him that Shree visits a temple every Tuesday. This triggers Sashaa to meet him again. She herself feels weird that why does she want to meet him, but she ignores it and follows her instinct.

Following Tuesday, Sashaa gets ready early in the morning and makes an excuse to Aisha that she has to work on a report with a friend, and leaves for the temple to meet Shree.

Out side the temple.

Shree comes out of the temple and is shocked to see Sashaa there. Sasha walks up to him.

Sasha(smiles): Hi!!!

Shree(straight face): Hi!!!

Sashaa: How r u?

Shree(uninterested): I'm fine (moves forward to leave)

Sashaa: Shree!!! I'm mean Mr Shreekant Sen ... mai aapse milne aayi hoon?

Shree: Kyun?

Sashaa: wo sorry kehna tha... us din jo hua uske liye I'm very sorry ...

Shree: bol diya? ab bye...(again moves forward to leave)

Sashaa: Tumne mujhe maaf kar diya na?

Shree glares at her.

Sashaa(pleads making puppy face): Dekho mai janti hoon ki us din jo hua wo meri galti thi... but believe me wo sab ek galatfehmi ki wajah se hua...mera intention galat nahi tha... aur ab to tumne Babloo ko pakad bhi liya hai... I mean mai janti thi ki tum usko zaroor pakad loge... to ab to tum mujhe maaf kar saktey ho na?

Shree is lost in her cute puppy eyes. They lock eyes for a few seconds. But Shree quickly snaps out.

Shree: achchha theek hai... par aagey se dhyaan rakhna ... warna tum khud bhi musibat mein pad sakti ho...

Sashaa flashes her dimpled smile and Shree couldn't help but smile back. The twinkle in her eyes tickled him.

Sashaa: Thanks...

Shree: take care... bye...

Sashaa: Bye !!!

Shree hops on his bike and leaves for the office. All through the way Sashaa's smiling face flashed in front of his eyes and he ended up smiling himself for no reason.

Same was with Sashaa. She was happy that he had forgiven her and even she could forget his smiling face.

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So how was it?

Pre-cap : "Shree: Maine to uska naam bhi nahi poochha... aur usko kaise pata ki us criminal ka naam Babloo tha ... aur usne kaha tha ki wo mujhse sorry kehne aayi hai... usko ye kaise pata tha ki mai aaj mandir jaunga"


Enjoy!!!!
Bhavna
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Awesome
Precape is interesting
Haye shree Kia dimag pata hai
Thanx for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
awesome update
Loved it👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Somewhat i was having a feeling that u will update it today.
Yay...
It was supppa fab and amazing update.
Loved it a lot.
Uri Baba...
Shree ko daat pargayi from Sameer bhai as he couldnt catch the criminal.
Sashaa was feeling guilty...
Sashaa with the help of her senior,got the sketch done of that criminal and tracked down his details and whereabouts.
Sashaa took Shree's number from Ayesha and texted the info.
On that basis,ETF caught the criminal and put him behind the bars.
Sameer and Shree convo wasreally good and nice.
This is how a relation between a senior and his colleague should be.
Sashaa went to mandir and asked forgiveness from Shree.
Shree forgave her and is lost in her beautiful smile...
Loved the whole update.
Uri baba...
Precap is much more interesting.
Ab Shree apne seniors ki tarha dimag chalayega to know how did Sashaa know the name of the criminal...
Hmm...
Continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the pm and also for the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
superb dear.. Loved it.. Interesting precap.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..

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