KHAMOSHI (continuation) updated part 8 23/12/2013

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys,

i hope u all still remember me...
i have one on-going story in this forum called KHAMOSHI which is based on our burthals SHANAK...


i cant continue due to my studies and some personal issues at home...
but now i'm getting some free time in-between my studies...i'll try to update my story here since the previous topic has been closed by the forums for being inactive for a long time


link to the previous parts




i'll update the next part probably by tonight or tomorrow morning guyz...:)))))

lots of luv,
vishali.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX


part 6 : scroll down

part 7 : page 2

part 8 : page 3
Edited by vishalipoornima - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i remember khamoshi and u
infact u pmed u also many months ago
i m very happy :D
but if again u get busy toh phir se wahi hoga
so plzz if u really can continue and end it in a proper way toh hi continue karo bcoz this is very good story and phir se wahi hua na toh i dont know about others but main toh bahut upset hongi like previous time :(

waiting for next update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 6


After meeting ducks, shaan is very happy and grinning ear to ear throughout his journey back to his home from ducks caf. He is whistling while driving his car and thinking about his lady love who has managed to occupy his heart and mind 24*7 just in a single meeting. He recalled his conversation with his buddy and smiled because he is a person who doesn't believe in love at first sight but he have belief in love of course who won't believe in love after seeing and living with his adorable & loving parents throughout his life and now his made for each other bhai and bhabhi. He thought love happen only after knowing and understanding a person completely that's the reason why he rejected all those proposal during his college days and his mom's wedding plans because he can't accept someone by just seeing them ones.

And now this chit of the girl has turned his world upside down. He has given his heart to this angel who has the most beautiful big black eyes and the musical laughter he has never heard.


Then he saw the time in his watch which showed ten minutes past seven and smiled thinking that tonight he will reach before dinner time and can be escaped from mom's angry glare.


When he was about to turn his SUV to the left side, he looked at his rear mirror. But the scene he saw has raised his temper. Two guys were trying to harass a girl in a corner since it is dark and isolated. He stopped his car with a screech and got down to help that girl.


But suddenly a small car (imagine TATA nano) which was coming in the opposite lane stopped in front him and a girl wearing a jeans and cotton kurti with her hair tied in a high ponytail got down from the driver seat and went towards that guys. She has given a nice punch to both of them and when they try to hold her she gave a kick on one's stomach and punched the other's face. Both of them fell on the ground and cried in pain. Then she went towards the girl who has been hiccupping and gathered the girl in her arms and consoled her.


All this while, shaan was standing still and shocked to the core by the stunt of this superwoman whose face he can't see since she was facing the other side. When he saw one of those guys was getting up from the ground and walking towards the girls who have their back turned towards him, shaan came from his shocked state and went over there.


He again knocked him down with his punches. When he fell unconscious, shaan went over to the other and kicked him as well. Then he took his mobile to call the cops and explained the situation to them and asked them to come ASAP.

All these were seen by the girls who have turned due to the commotion and signed in relief after hearing the stranger's conversation.


Hanging up the phone, shaan turned towards the girls to check whether they were ok and rooted to the spot with his jaw touching the ground...because the superwoman was the same stranger girl who has now became his ladylove. He stared at her with eyes wide open.😲😲😲


He was startled and comes out of his dazed state when the other girl came and thanked him profusely for helping her in the difficult situation. Then she again turned and hugged the superwoman alas his ladylove tightly.


Girl : tha...thank...thank you so much di. She said these while crying and hiccupping.



Shaan noticed that his girl started rubbing her back and consoled her. After sometime, his girl cum superwoman pulled out from the hug and wiped her tears and gave her gorgeous smile while throwing a look at his direction. Then she went towards her car and came back with a first aid box. His angel started treating the girl's wound with an antiseptic and bandaged the cut in her forehead and arms.


His angel : "now stop your crying or it will cause flood in Mumbai...do you want that... "By saying this his superwoman started laughing causing the other girl to join in her laughter... shaan was mesmerised by her.


The Girl again hugged his superwoman and said "once again thank you so much di... I don't know what would have happenned to me if you haven't come..." But his angel interrupted her and shh'ed her

His angel : hey don't talk non-sense... nothing will happen to you. And you called me as your di, then why are you thanking me... I would have done the same thing if it is my little sister. Ok now smile.



Shaan was blown away by her nature. Today he had seen her in a different light because that day she had portrayed so much innocence while playing with those school kids but now she looked like a fiery lioness to him while fighting with those guys. His thought process was disturbed by the siren of the police car.


Cops came towards them and asked him whether he was the one who informed them. Shaan nodded in positive and explained the entire situation to them. Then they took the return statement from the victim girl whose name his Anita Paul and left with those unconscious jerks. Then Anita came towards shaan

Anita : thank you very much sir for helping me... she said to shaan.

Shaan : it's okay... No need to thank me anita...by the way I'm shantanu...shaan extended his hands towards anita while eyeing his angel. Anita shook her hands with him and suddenly

Anita : OMG...OMG... you are THE SHANTANU KHANDELWAL the famous music director... aren't you?... I can't imagine that you are standing in front of me...I'm a huge fan of you.


Then Anita waved towards his angel who was now standing near her car to come over there... Slowly his angel walked towards them...and stood near Anita.

Anita : di... see who is here...the famous bollywood music director, shantanu khandelwal.

Shaan said "hey" and extended his hands towards her. His angel softy placed her tiny warm hands in his large one. Now he really thought that "is this the same hands which had punched those guys with such force?"

His angel : hello... I'm khanak.

Shaan again went to his dreamland by thinking how aptly her name suited her. "So his angel's name is khanak" he said in his mind. He then quickly released her hand from his grip when she looked him and their clamped hands. Then she turned to Anita

Khanak : I think we should leave Anita. I'll drop you at your home.

Anita : ok di...and it was nice meeting you sir... Anita said to shaan..

Shaan : it was nice meeting you too anita... bye and take care...


Then his angel and Anita left in her car...shaan smiled at the disappearing car and said KHANAK. He loved the way her name sounded while he said. Suddenly he looked at his watch and exclaimed " oh nooo...ten'o clock. mom is gonna kill me for sure".

He settled in his car and headed towards his home with a happy smile because of the new found improvement in his love story.

p.s. plz give ur feedback guyz..:)))

i'll update the next one probably after dec 9 becoz sem exams were getting over on 9th dec but will try to update a small parts if i get time in between my exams...

Edited by vishalipoornima - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it!!! 😊 Finally Shaan came to know about Khanak's name!!! And Khanak rocked..She is indeed a JKR..Fought those culprits and saved a girl!!! Shaan is head over heels in love with Khanak!!! ❤️

Looking forward and thank you for writing an amazing update!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG wat the ...
khanak can fight too i mean physically wowooww i m impressed :D
awww shan ur lady love is not only innocent but she is a fighter too yayyy
eekkss aise meeting honi thi inki loved it
now he knows her name atleast
his parents are mathmaking with khanak only will he come to know of it ?
tab toh woh bahut khush hoga
waiting for next

no worries update after exams season hain exam ka heheh i hate exams

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally ur updating,
cant wait for the next part i really hope u continue whenever u can
xxx
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Vaishali lovely update.
Shaan realised his love for Khanak.
Khanak is really a jhansi ki rani. She fought with 2 bad guys and saved a girl.
Shaan found that his angel is not only innocent but fighter too and loved how he helped them.
Finally Shaan came to know Khanak's name.
Looking forward for the progress in their love story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
hey guyz,
finally my exams got over...🥳
i'll update the next part soon when i finished writing..
i hav to change some parts in it...😉


lots of luv,
vishali..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh wow :D
i hv still one paper to go :(
waiting :D

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