kabke bichde hue hum ...Taarey OSpart 9page 13

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hello Guys I know we all are upset whatever CVS did with Taarey fans but we will keep Taarey alive on this forum by our love and that time I thought I should write a story after Taanis enagement ,I know I have to complete my Taarey OS after 4 years and believe me I will do that but I am going to start this story please feel free to comment if u like also and if u don't like also I am ready to accept all comments
Ye kahani shuru hoti hai ek office se ek ladki apne interview ka wait kar rahi hai lekin bahot nervous hai aur ankhon ke samne ghar ki fights aa rahi hai rona chahti hai lekin koi aisa hai hi nahi uski life me jiske khande pe sar rakhke vo ro sake bahot udas bahot mayoos hai phir bhi apni khoobsurti nahi chupapa rahi hai kyunki hai hi itni khoobsurat pyari inoocent .hankerchief se apne cherepe jo marks hai vo chupa rahi hai ji han ye uske pati ne diye hue hai uske pati ne usko bahot pita hai kyunki vo nahi chahta ki vo job kare ji han guys ye hai MR.VISHESH ki wife MRS TAANI VISHESH ,itne me receptionist use bulati hai
R:Mrs.Taani ji aap andar ja sakti hai
Taani:oh Thank you(Taani apne sare papers leke andar jati hai)
(us company ka owner back karke baitha hai )
Taani:may I come in sir
Company owner:ya come in(phir bhi vo back karke baitha hai)
Taani:good morning sir
C O:good morning ,seat
Taani:thank you(vo Taani ke papaers hat me leta hai aur nam dekhke ekdam se mud jata hai jisase vo dono shock ho jate hai)
Taani:aap Rey aap yahan
Rey:Taani tum I don't believe this tum yahan I mean delhi me kya kar rahi ho
Taani:vo hum 1 sal pehle yahan shift hue
Rey:oh muze to pata hi nahi tha
Taani:kaise pata hoga aap to USA gaye the kahanse pata hoga
Rey:han abhi lauta hoon 6 months pehle
Taani:kaise hai aap aur Kriya kaisi hai
Rey:main main bilkul thik
Taani:aur Kriya vo kaisi hai
Rey:vo bhi thik tum batao Vishesh kaisa hai
Taani(ghabrake par Rey ko dikhati nahi):Thik infact bahot ache
Rey:Taani ye kya tum aise hankerchief se moo kyun chupa rahi ho kabse dekh raha hoon kya hua
Taani:nahi Rey kuch bhi to nahi
Rey:to hatao na please
Taani:nahi Rey rehne dijiye
Rey:Taani please(vo hatati hai aur uski chot dekhke vo shock hota hai )ye kya hai Taani
Taani(hanste hue ):ye na aap to jante hai main kitni bar girti hoon aisehi bathroom me gir gayi chot lag gayi isiliye chupa rahi thi
Rey:sach ye bathroom me girnesehi chot aayi hai na
Taani:sach Rey ab Rey kya hum interview Karen please
Rey:kya Taani tumhara interview loonga main nahi tumhe job doonga kalse kam pe aa jana
Taani:oh thank u Rey aap nahi jante ki ye job mere liye kitni important thi thank u
Rey:its ok but ek sawal puchun tum ye job kyun kar rahi ho I mean Vishesh ka to business hai na phir
Taani:kya Karun vo itne busy hai ki main akele bore ho jati hoon to socha job kar loon
Rey:tumhare kids?
Taani:nahi abhi nahi hai aur aapke
Rey:mere ?acha ye bate bahot ho gayi chalo cafee pine chalet hai
Taani:kahan?
Rey:of course Taani cafee shop me
Taani:bahar nahi Rey vaise bhi muze ghar jana hai Vishesh aayenge to unhe main ghar me unke samne chahiye to main chaloon
Rey(confuse hai):thik hai Cafee bad me kabhi piyenge thik hai jao tum(vo jane lagti hai)Taani tum khush ho na?
Taani:kyun aise kyun puch rahe hai
Rey:bolo na khush ho na
Taani:han Rey bahot aur aap?
Rey:main han agar tum khush ho to main bhi vada jo kiya tha
(ye sunke ankhon ke samne sagai ka vo din vo pal aa jate hai aur isiko dil me leke Taani ankhon me ansoon leke vahanse jane lagti hai aur use Rey dekhta hai aur kehta hai)
Rey:tumse vada kiya tha isiliye itna normal dikha raha tha khudko par mere dil ke andar jo toofan hai vo aaj bhi vaisahi hai kya Karun bhul hi nahi paya tumhe aur pata nahi aaj dekhke aisa laga ki bhuli to tum bhi nahi ho muze aaj bhi tumhari ankhen tumhari sanse tumhari dhadkan tumhara rom rom muze bula raha tha (hosh me aake) Rey hosh me aa vo Vishesh ki wife hai ab tumhari koi nahi
Taani(ghar jate hue in her mind):aaj aapko dekhke laga aapko hug karke itna ro loon ki ansoon khatam ho jaye meri har taklif aapse share Karun laga ki aaj bhi hum vahi hai jo kuch sal pehele the aap vohi Rey aur main vohi Taani kya kiya maine ye Rey ek bahav me aake faisla le liya Vishesh ke sath shadi karne ka aur aaj dekhiye kya halat hai meri lekin kaise bataon aapko nahi Rey nahi bata sakti nahi Taani tuze kuch nahi batana hai dekha nahi REy kitne normal the vo khush hai Taani unki Kria ke sath apni zindagi ka dukh unhe batake unki zindagi dukhi mat kar abse tumhe unke sath kam karna hai lekin apne har emotions pe kabu rakhke aur han tu Rey ke sath kam kar rahi hai Ye Vishesh ko pata nahi chalna chahiye be strong Taani please Krishanji muze Shakti do
(ye sab sochte hue vo ghar aa jati hai aur vahan uska intezar Vishesh kar raha hai)
Vishesh:aa gayi madam aao pani laon thak gayi hogi job ke liye jo gayi thi mere mana karne ke bad bhi han mere mummy papa jo sath hai isliye itna uchal rahi ho chalo kamre me tumhari thodi khatirdari Karun chalo(use khichte hue unke kamre me leke jata hai)
Precap:kamre me Vishesh use belt se marta hai bahot marta hai uske maa papa baharse darvaja bajate hai par vo nahi kholta aur jab ye sab hota hai tab Rey apni ghar me bahot bechin hai use aisa lag raha hai ki Taani musibat me hai lekin vo kuch samjah nahi pata aur dusre din vo Taani ko is halat me office me dekhta hai
Part 1:page 1
part 2:page 2
part 3:page 4
part4:page 5
part 5:page 7
part6:page 8
part7:page 9
part8:page11
part9:page 13
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg...this is superb...

vishesh😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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vishesh😡
pls updat nxt prt soon
nd pm me too

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Posted: 11 years ago
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vishes is so ugh :/

but nice concept :)
continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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iss vishesh ki toh *******
plz update soon
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Seems really interesting
Hate that vishesh
Update soon nd pm me
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goosebumps de diye yaar
it was super amazing
pls pm me the next update😃
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part 2:

Vishesh:chaliye Mrs Taani thakake aayi hai to farz hai mera pati hoon Tumhara tumhari thakan dur karna chalo
Taani:Vishesh kis bat ki saja de rahe ho please aaj muze mat maro bahot dukhta hai bahot taklif hoti hai muze please Vishesh
Vishesh:are patni ka to dharam hi hai ki Pati ke sukh me dukh me uska sath de to chalo na aur main marunga thodihi surprise for u(lekin Taani samajh jati hai aur bahot dar jati hai itne me Vishesh ki mummy papa vahan aate hai )
Vishesh ke dad:ye kya ho raha hai Vishesh tum piker aaye ho aur kya kar rahe ho Taani ke sath
Vishesh:oh papa please u just stay out of this ye mere aur Taani ke bich me hai don't interfere ok
Vishesh ki mom: kaise na kare janvaronki tarah pesh ata hai usase hum nahi dekh sakte kya ho gaya hai tuze tu to Taani se pyar karta tha hai na phir
Vishesh:han karta tha infact abhi bhi karta hoon lekin aapki ladli bahu se pucho kya vo muzse pyar karti hai uske dil me to abhi bhi vohi hai vo Rey mere sath hote hue bhi mere sath nahi hoti puchiye na isase ab kyun nahi bolti tum bolo
Vishesh ke dad:han jante hai hum ki Taani ka ateet tha aur vo usne tumhe bataya tha aur tumne accept bhi kiya tha phir ek bat kahun ye tumhare hat me tha ki vo apna ateet bhulke puri tarah se tumhari ho jaye par tumne kya kiya jo tarika apnaya use hasil karne ka usase kaise pyar kar sakti hai vo tuzse
Vishesh:han han lecture mat do main vohi karunga jo muze sahi lagi aur ise meri har bat manani hogi ye gahr mere paisonse chalta hai so shut your mouth and just go to your room
(aur vo Taani ka hat pakadke use khinchta hua room me leke bed pe fek deta hai jisase Taani ko bed ka corner sar pe lagta hai aur Vishesh room lock karta hai )
Vishesh:oh lag gayi dard ho raha hai I can understand par kya hai na dard agar jyada ho na to dard ka patahi nahi chalta dikhaon kaise?
Taani:nahi Vishesh please muze mat maro please
(Vishesh apna belt nikalta hai aur usase use marta hai Taani chinkhti hai chillati hai par vo nahi rukta ,baharse room ko knock karte hue Vishesh ke mom dad thak jate hai lekin Vishesh unki bahi nahi sunta aur use marke vo so jata hai aur Taani roti rehti hai )
(jab ye sab Taani ke ghar me chal raha hota hai tab Rey apne ghar me hota hai vo khana khane baithta hai aur use kuch ajeebsi feeling aati hai )
Rey(in his mind):kyun aisa lag raha hai kyun kuch acha nahi lag raha hai kya ho raha hai muze aisa lag raha hai ki Taani taklif me hai aaj uske chehre pe vo marks kya vo sach keh rahi thi ki vo bathroom me gir gayi par kyun muze yakin nahi ho raha hai ,abhi aise kyun feeling aa rahi hai ki Taani muze bula rahi hai use meri help chahiye oh god kya Karun phone karun use nahi bahot late ho gaya abhi to vo apni family ke sath hogi par main kyun itna dukhi ho raha hoon(aisa kehke vo apni ankh ko hat lagata hai usme ansoon rehte hai)ye kya apne aap aansoon aisa to tab hota tha jab Taani aur main sath hote the aur tab jab hamara breakup hua tha Taani ki har taklif pe meri ankh bhar aati thi (itne me Rey ka servant matalb usase bade hai vo unhe kaka bulata hai ate hai)
Kaka:kya bat hai REy baba apne khana nahi khaya ?
Rey:pata nahi kaka kuch acha nahi lag raha hai
Kaka:tabiyat to thik hai na aapki ?doctor ko phone karun?
Rey:nahi kaka aisa kuch nahi bas aisa lag raha hai ki koi apna taklif me hai pata nahi bahot bechian ho raha hoon
Kaka:ek bat puchun aapse
Rey:han puchiye na kya bat hai
Kaka:aapko Taani bitiya ki yad aa rahi hai kya (han Kaka sab jante hai)
REy:nahi kaka aisa kuch nahi chaliye chodiye main apne kamre me jate hoon(vo vahanse jata hai aur Kaka use dekhte hai)
Kaka(in his mind):aap kitna bhi muzse chupaiye nahi chupa sakte kyunki aapko bachpanse pala hai maine janta hoon ki aaj vapas aap usi taklif se gujar rahe hai jis taklif se aap pichle kai sal se gujar rahe hai jabse Taani bitiya ki shadi hui thi bas ab bhagvan se yahi dua hai ki aapki khoyi hui khushiyan lauta de aur yakin hai muze ki vo aisahi karega (aisa kehke vahan pe khadi Krishanji ki murti ko hat jodte hai)
(usi bechaini me REy puri rat jagta hai aur yaha Taani apne jakhmonke dekhete hue aur rote hue )
In the morning Taanis house
dinning table pe Vishesh ke mom dad baithe hai Taani aati hai vo thik se chal nahi pa rahi hai pav me bahot laga hai use aur hat me bhi ye dekhke Vishesh ki mom ke ankhon me ansoon aate hai
Vishesh ki mom:beta aao ye kya hal bana diya mere bte na muze maf kar do Taani
Taani:are ma aap kyun mafi mang rahi hai isme aapki galti thodi hi hai ye to mera naseeb hai
Vishesh ke papa:nahi beta hamarihi galti hai please ho sake to...
Taani:papa aap bhi aap muze apni beti mante hai na to please aisa kehke muze paraya mat banao please
Vishesh ki mom:pata nahi kis janam ka pap hai mera jo aisa beta hua muze jungli
(itne me Taani Vishesh ko aate hue dekhti hai)
Taani:maa vo aa rahe hai please aap shant rahiye aur papa aap bhi ok mere liye
(dono use han kehte hai,Vishesh aake dinning table pe baithta hai )
Vishesh:mera moo kya dekh rahi ho ab breakfast dene ke liye bolna padega
Taani:nahi main bas la rahi hoon
Vishesh ki mom:beta tumhe bahot lagi hai tum baitho main kaka ko kehti hoon ,kaka please Vishesh ka breakfast to lana
Vishesh:oh maa app janti hai na ki main sirf apni wife ke hat ka khana khata hoon kaka ke nahi to please use lane dijiye bar bar nahi kahunga to Taani
Taani(ghabrake):ji ji main lati hoon
Vishesh:good good for u go fast
(Taani nashta lene jati hai )
Vishesh ki mom:tere andar dil hai na uski chot dekh raha hai aur tu hai ki
Vishesh:oh mom just shut up ok
(Taani nashta leke aati hai use deti hai aur uske liye chai bana rahi hai uske baju me khade hoke vo chini dal rahi hai itne me vapas Vishesh apni chal chlata hai )
Vishesh(uski hat ki zakham ko jor se pakdta hai):are bas marna hai kya chini khilake
(Taani jor se chillati hai)
Vishesh:oh sorry muze pata nahi tha ki tumhe yahan lagi hai sorry (Vishesh ke mom and dad use ghussese dekhte hai)what aise kyun dekh rahe ho aap maine jan buzke nahi kiya ok chalo main office chalta hoon bye(vo chala jata hai )
Vishesh ki mom:Taani mere pas baitho beta bat karni hai
Taani :han boliye na maa kuch chahiye aapko
Vishesh ke papa:han bahot kimti cheez
Taani:vo kya?
Vishesh ki mom:tumhari azadi
Taani:kya ?
Vishesh ki mom:han beta tum mere bte ko chod do aur chali jao yahanse
Taani:aap kya keh rahi ho maa
Vishesh ki papa:han beta sahi keh rahe hai hum tumhare aage bahot lambi zindagi hai aur Vishesh kabhi nahi sudhrega kyun apni life barbad kar rahi ho main tumhe support karunga bas tum Vishesh se divorce le lo
Taani:nahi ma nahi papa aap aisa soch bhi sakte hai aur aap sab ko chodek main kahan jaungi
Vishesh ke papa:Rey ke pas
Taani:papa aap ye kya bol rahe ho
Vishesh ki papa:main sach keh raha hoon chali jao Taani apne REy ke pas
Taani:nahi papa ye nahi ho sakta Vishesh mere pati hai jaise bhi hai
Vishesh ki ma:Taani tum is jamane ki hote hue aisi bate kar rahi hoon kuch sukh nahi diya hai tumhe mere bte na aur zindagi uske sath bitani chahiye jisase dil juda ho aur tumhara dil Rey se juda hua hai to kyun nahi main bat karungi Rey se
Taani:nahi maa Rey bahot khush hai apni life me unki shadi bhi ho gayi hai aur agar unki shadi na hui hoti to bhi main unke pas nahi jati REy bahot ache hai ma aur best deserve karte hai mere jaisi jhoothan nahi (aisa bolke rote hue andar chali jati hai)
Rey house
Rey:(in his mind) agar kabhi muze aisa pata chala ki tum ksi taklif me ho aur tumne muze nahi bataya to muze bahot bura lagega Taani aur main ye bhi janta hoon ki ab agar tum taklif me hogi to muze nahi bataogi kyunki tum samajhti hoon ki meri shadi ho chuki hai Kria ke sath aur main khush hoon lekin sacchai tumhe nahi pata hai aur main kabhi bataunga bhi nahi kyunki meri vajahse tumhe taklif ho ye main nahi chata par han itna janta hoon ki tmhare jaisi ladki best deserve karti hai par kya Vishesh best hai ?main pagal ho jaunga kyun god kyun milaya hume vapas kya is bar bhi tu hide and seek khelega hamresath aur hamari life ke sath agar hamari kismet me milna nahi likha hai tu kyun bar bar Taani aur muze karib lata hai kyun?(aise me frustrate hoke vo office ata hai)
(Taani bhi office jane ke liye ready hoti hai jitna ho sake utne apne zakham chupati hai lekin zakham to chup jayenge lekin uska dard Taani ke chehrepe saf tha)
Taani:maa main office ja rahi hoon
Maa:par beta aisi halat me(use hat lagati hai)tumhe bukhar bhi hai mat jao
Taani:nahi maa jane dijiye office jaungi to kuch der ke liye ye sab bhul jaungi please maa
Maa:thik hai lekin jaldi ana
Taani:han maa(vo jane lagti hai par use lagti hai ki itni badi bat use nahi chupani chahiye )maa papa aapse ek important bat karni hai
Vishesh ke mom and dad:han bolo
Taani:main jis office me kam karti hoon vaha mere boss Rey hai unki company hai lekin kasam se maa jab main interview ke liye gayi to muze bilkul nahi pata tha ki ye Rey ki company hai varna main nahi jati mera yakin kijiye
Vishesh ki mom:are hume tumpe pura vishwas hai itni safai dene ki zaroorat nahi hai ok jao tum aur han ye bat hum Vishesh ko nahi batayenge aur tum bhi mat batana ok
Taani:lekin agar kabhi unhe kisi aur se pata chala to
Vishesh ke papa:nahi pata chalega par please beta tum Mahan banke kuch aisa batana jisase tumhe taklif ho ok
Taani:ji papa to main chalun?
Vishesh ki mom:han jaldi ana aur sambhalke jao bye(Taani unhe bye karke jati hai)
Vishesh ke papa:dekha tumne hum to sochte reh gaye aur bhagvan ne apna karishma dikha diya
Vishesh ki mom:ji main kuch samjhi nahi
Vishesh ke papa:batata hoon aaj itne sal bad kyun leke aya hai bhagvan Rey aur Taani ko ek sath ye uska ishara hai ki Taani ka dukh dur karne vala ab aa gaya hai aur dekhna Visheshse sirf Rey hi use bachayega bas ab hume bhagvanse dua mangni hai ki is bacchii ko uski sari khushiyan mile
Vishesh ki mom:lekin Rey ki to shadi ho gayi hai aisa Taani ne kaha na aapne suna na
Vishesh ke papa:nahi muze nahi lagta maine REy ko ek hi bar dekha hai lekin jo pyar Rey Taani se karta hai vo kisi aur se shadi kar hi nahi paya hoga dekhan tum nahi aisa nahi hua hoga
Vishesh ke mom:agar aisa nahi hua hoga to main bahot khush hoon ji bas in bichde dilonko bhagvan mila de(dono bhagvanse pray karte hai)
Precap:Taani office me aati hai aur Rey use cabin me bulata hai aur dekhta hai ki Taani ne lambe hat ka kurta pehna hai aur vo usase puch ta hai lekin vo bat tal jati hai bad unke hat se fil girti hai aur Rey ka hat Taani ke hat pe hota hai pehle to vo ek dusreke ankhon me kho jate hai bad me Rey ko pata chalta hai ki use bukhar hai aur vo Taani ko doctor ke pas leke ata hai aur vahan khulta hai Vishesh ka asli roop
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I so wanna kill vishesh
waise i m glad u r writing dis tr os
plz pm me wenever u updt dis n ya plz buddy me as well
d first two chs wer really emotionally
tr loves each other immensely
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello, Super awesome story. liked ur update plz next update soon. waiting for next. poor taani, and helpless rey both want to be together BT such an wired situation. I hope rey may help her and soon they become Taarey plzzz update

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