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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#391

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Great description of Khushi's surroundings. I think that has become your forte!!

I was not expecting them to meet like that. Once I realized it was Anjali's wedding it was obvious she would see him, but for him to find her in the empty guest house was a nice twist to the predictable!!

Conversation was electric between them. I could feel the attraction between them leaping off the pages!

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#392

Res!

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Sandy i am still 😭 but anyway chalo koi nahi ab toh roke bhi koi fayada nahi hai...you keep breaking my poor little heart 🥺Hmph!

Moving on to kaam ki baat -the update...i guess i don't have to tell you how much i loved the update...you my girl have an incredible knack of just capturing all your readers into a magical web that you weave so effortlessly. The vivid descriptions are so real its like seeing the entire place flash before your eyes...that's the magic of your writing.

I will not lie i was hoping against hope that Arnav comes to the bus depot to pick up khushi but haila this is so much better...a reunion of 2 lovebirds of sorts and all alone in the house😳 I know they have not reached a stage in their relationship where we can expect fireworks...but phir bhi one can dream and hope...rainy night, darkness all around, poor scared khushi seeks comfort of her hero's arms. 😆

Loved their first meeting their apprehensions, fear and dhak dhak captured so well. Raat baki hai do i hope that these two fools will have some sense and talk to each other or will they just sit in two opposite corners and brood...damn i have half a mind to make them sit and say 'you are not getting up from here till you talk to each other'😆

I loved the situation in which you have got these two together...there's something magical about a wedding...sure shot romance in the air. Would it be too much to expect some green eyed monster to pay a visit to mr. caramel chocolate eyes 😆

I am a bit curious to know how emotionally scared anjali decided to let Mr. Jha have emotional control over her life. Do we get the background of Mr. Jha's relentless pursuit of Ms. Raizada?

Sandy you have me hooked to this story...love it love it love the story but more important the way you write it. 👏⭐️

P.S 1 : The song selection could not get better than this

P.S 2: That card...kitna sundar hai!

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#393

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Kya hua tera vaada ? 😒

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God bless Anya! I am grateful to her for messing up the dates 😛 We have Arnav and Khushi all alone in the Raizada Mansion for at least about 12 hours ? Yay 😃

The conversation was so full of sparks and intensity... I loved how you made the gradual shift from awkwardness and apprehension to the eventual thawing.. and the "sorry". Aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai, how long can they suppress it ? 😳

Oh, and a special mention to your description of the mountains and the scenery - spectacular! Took me back to my holiday... I miss those days! Bas!

Lovely update, Sandhya :)

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#394

Updated on page 57 😊

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#395

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"How does one handle fear, excitement, nostalgia, hope, anger, happiness, tension and wariness together? "

Finally molten caramel eyes and Khushi meet! Loved Khushi's reaction to seeing Arnav. One could feel all the different emotions running through her.

I'm so glad that they met alone, without the Raizada family around. Trust Ana to mess up the dates😆

Back to the meeting, oh my heart was literally pounding Sandy through the convo. Can't wait to see interaction between Arnav and Khushi for the next few days!

I loved the wedding card and am happy that Anjali is getting married!

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dumas

@dumas

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#396

amazing update finally they meet and loved khushi reaction can't blame her not trusting to stay with him he loves to give wrong signal and glad she wants to make sure her heart is protected because she knows he will wake away again and anjali finally decide to marry shyam and payal and akash loved the update thanks for the pm

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yoga123

@yoga123

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#397

Awesome...now both are in the same house...nobody is around...both are running away from each other and most importantly themselves...waiting for dawn to break...Awesome chapter...thanks for the PM

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bkamber

@bkamber

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Posted: 11 years ago

#398

Loved the update.
I had thought Khushi & Arnav will meet unexpectedly, but not quite like this...still cute. Glad nobody else was around.

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rulama

@rulama

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#399

Loved the update.

You have described the setting so well that I could feel being there.

Loved the invite. Wonder who wrote it. Devyani herself or someone else. Beautiful handwriting to possess!😉

Atlast they are meeting and what a way! Each gleaning as much as they could with their eyes but spouting something contrary to their feeling! Oh boy! Don't they have their work cut out??? Khushi was thinking in terms of people being difficult with Akash and Payal! What about these two? They are like two stubborn mules!😃

Lovely update Sandhya.