~The Room Of Doom~ [OS Contest Runner-Up] - Page 2

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Abhi it was really good. nice writing and you should write more. the jillu part was scary and i liked how you put the sounds even for visualizing of readers. it was gripping. very well done 👏

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asmuasmi

@asmuasmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

super se uppar wala abhii🤗🤗

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Frances

@Punkin22

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Posted: 11 years ago

Outstanding story. Loved the scary part best. You have a very creative mind sweet friend and I enjoyed your writing. Would love for you to write more.👏👏👏

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@Fazila~

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aaa...that was really scary...very well written...phew...Need ASR to save us hehehehehe ;))

Great job👏

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awww this was a freaking scary OS but wonderfully written.

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-solitary-

@-solitary-

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Posted: 11 years ago

Woah ! It was really good n scary abi ! 😳

Loved the small things you added in b/w. Their convo's was very relatable and funny.

Especially the last part with jillu and malini was super scary ! 😵

A deserving victory !

Keep writing !

Love you ! 🤗

P.s : sorry for the late reply!

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