love u more than myself...kriyansh ff...last chptr updated

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys..i am Natasha..new here..
I stopeed watching d3 after shakti's exit !! now that she is back..even I am back...😃 🤗
Had an idea of a ff...pls do read the intro and lemme noe if u all want me to continue...
SHEKHAWAT..
lost their mom(due to heartattack)
SWAYAM:3rd year student tybcom...is the gs..member of dazzlers(clg dance grp).loves irritating his sister..bt still loves her a lot..never makes her feel offended..is dating Sharon..
KRIYA:swayam's younger sister..is in 1st year tybcom.sweet by nature but thinks too much about herself(little selfish)...vl be a part of dazzlers

SINGHANIA..
ASHOK:rey's father.trustee of st lois
REYANSH:is in 2nd year tybcom..member of dazzlers(clg dance grp).d.very charming cool and calm by nature.dsnt loose temper easily..most famous guy in college.has a great rapport with swayam his senior.
lost his mom wen he ws a kid

sharon raiprakash:is dating swayam from the past 1 year.3rd year tybcom

vicky..1st year student vl try to hit on kria

dazzlers:swaron,kriyansh,nil(2nd yr) simmi(2nd yr),amar(1st yr) rinni(1st yr)

kriya gets into a relationshp wid rey!!and den coz of her selfish nature hurts rey..how kria hurts him...and how vl rey react to dat.. vl be seen as the story moves on!!! 😳

******

ps: this is a kriyansh ff.der will be little bit of swaron probly(vl decide as the story demands)

INDEX
CHP 1-PAGE 2
CHP 2-PAGE 3
CHP 3-Page 4 CHP 4-Page 5
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
nic concept dear .. . but swaron wala part pm kar dena
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
awesome concept
lekin kria selfish
pls update soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was a great concept... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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concept is something very different...bt m ready for it...do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 1:

(swayams home..sunday nyt)
swayams dad:so mr gs..all set for 1st dat of college(he pats swayams back)
sw:yea dad me to hun..now i jst hope kal koi late na krwae(says luking at kria)
kr:ohh pls me tym pe hi rdy hoti hun..
sw:han toh mene kab kaha nahi hoti..me tje thodi na bol rha tha..
kr:ha bas bas..paka mat..
sw:arey me kaha kch bol rha hun..khud hi strt krti hai n mje end krne bolti hai..kya gir vir gayi kya...chot aayi kya sir pe aa bata..(and he moves towards kria.)
kr:(throws a pillow at him)papa aap hi isko bolo chup baithne..wrna phr jgda hoga!!
dad:mje mat ghaseeto in sab me tum dono
sw:papa se kya complaint krti hai bachon ki tarah..complaint box...
kr:arey yaar problm kya hai tera..jab dekho mje irritate krne pe tula rehta hai..tjse baat krna hi bekar hai..
(and she leaves..swayam luks at his dad and dey both laugh) 😆😛

scene shifts to reys house..
(rey is playing basketball.)
ashok:beta chalo cum khana lagg gaya hai
rey:yea dad..
(at the dinning table..)
ashok:so exited for clg tommorow??
rey:daaad,me pehli baar thodi na jaa rha clg..
ashok arey no baba..senior ho ab tum..juniors ki kheechneka plan toh hoga hi na!!and phr prom k liye fe hi pakdoge na!! (he winks) 😉
rey:(little laugh)aapki baatein sunkr kaun kahega aap dad ho mere..
ashok:han toh acha hi hai na mere liye..i'l seem more young!!
rey:ohh cummon dad bas abhi...ohh btw..me kal jldi niklunga..mje swayam k ghr jaana hai..upcomming events k baare me princi se baat krna hai na so presentation go thru krna tha..
ashok:ohh han ok..me breakfast rdy rkhne bol dunga..

next day morning...rey goes to see swayam..
(rey directy goes in swayams room..)
rey:whats up bhai..
sw:ohh hiee aaja..presentation laya na??
rey yep cum see..(saying this he jump on the bed..swayam also sits der..)
rey:theekey??
sw:yea..its great.(a serwant comes in)arey zara dekho kri rdy hui ya nai..
ser:nai unhone kaha tha 8 baje uthengi usse pehle koi dsturb na kare..
sw..acha tum jaao..soyi hai madam..chal aaja uthate hai usko!!! 😈
rey:u r too much..sone de na usko..
sw:arey chal na maza aaega...


(rey and swayam in kria's room..rey opens the curtains)
kr:ohh good bhai..wt the hell is ur problm...
sw:u r my problm (rey laughs)
(kria realises it wasnt swayam's laughter..so she opens her eyes to see who it is.bt b4 that,swayam in order to scare her comes very near to her face..when kria opens her eyes and sees swayam so close..)
kr:aaa(she pushes swayam,hops and sits.)ohh god mad...dumb...kya kr rhe the
swayam and rey:(cant stop laughing..) 🤣
sw:mahn..tera expression...hahahaahah...
kr:shit..dat ws sick!!!n is wqt mere room me kya kr rha hai..and ye kise lekr aya hai!!
sw:uthane aya tha tje obviously!!and ye rey!!dont temme u dont noe him!!
kr:oh rey m sry neend me smja hi nai..yaha kya kr rha hai..wo bi itni subah
r:arey wo...(swayam interrupts)
sw:toh wo teri tarah aalsi naiye..
kr:ha ha..very funnyyy..
sw:arey fact hai..(while sawaym ws saying ds rey also comes and sits on the bed)
kr:kya baith kya gaye han..chalo utho dono jao yaha re..
rey:arey ye kya tareeka hai baat krneka..senior hun me tera..
kr:senior hoga clg me..ye mera ghar hai..so niklo chalo...dono bhii..jaaaooo.
sw:acha jaa rhe hai..jldi aa..(they leave and kria again goes back to sleep)
sw:(shouts)uth jaa kria wrna me phr aaunga!!!
kria:ye pagal sone hi nai dega!!!(and gets off her bed!!)

(wen they go outside sharon comes..)
sh:hii baby!!!gud morning..(she hugs swayam)..hi rey..
r:namaste bhabhi!!(with folded hands)
sh:ohhh shutup yaar!!!
sw and rey laugh..
sw:sunn tu jaa..hum dad se milkr aate hai!!
rey:seedhe seedhe bol na priv8 time chahiye..me mana thodi na karungi..kyu bhabhi ji(luking at sharon)
sh:han han beta le le maza..hume bhi mauka milega!!
r:ha ha..lets see..(n dey leave)

(rey in dining hall..kria comes)
kr:chalo lets go..
rey:swayam and sharon ko chodkr jaana hai kya??
(kria shouts very loudly...)
k:swaaayyyaaammm shaaaron...chalooo
rey:ohh god..ye kya tha..araam se bhi bil skti thi na
k:tum jante nai ho unn dono ko saath me rhe na phr kisi ki nai sunte..
(swaron come and dey leave..swayam hints kria to go wid rey..she makes a weird face n goes)


(rey's car)
r:kya baat hai?? mere saath car me aana nai tha kya??
kr:kya???
r:arey no u made a pretty weird face so asked..darr lagg rha hai kya ragging karunga krke..
kr:arey no..no no..arey wo kya ab gaadi me bhi romance krenge kya dono..i mean..poore din toh saath hi hai na den y akele jaana hai unhe
r:its k yaar relatnshp me hai..hoga na kc..
kr:yea bt...i dunno thoda zyada hai..harr jagah akele akele..jab dekho chipakna..clg me bhi aise hi rehte hai kya?
r:not really..shayad isiliye private time chahiye ho..
k:arey wat..raat ko 2 ghate saath me rehte hai..phr bhi tasalli nai
r:(smiles n says..)tu pyaar me naiye na isiliye aise keh rhi hai..
k:ohh plss me aise sab nai krne waali..
r:han han dekhte hai..
k:han ohkk(ab gaadi chalao..)

(they rch clg...swaron is waiting for kriyansh..wen theu come al eyes on kria as she is the new girl amond the 4..swaron and rey..dont realise dis..as dey r busy wid their masti n tlk..but kria realises..i gets irritated..she says byeto dem and leaves)
sh:arey ise kya hua??rey kch bola kya tune car me??
r:nai toh..car me toh achi khasi thi..
sw:(has an expression of "i noe wtz goin on"...bt still says)itna kya soch rhe ho..class me hi gayi hogi...nothing to worry!!
(sharon and rey ignore and dey al leave...)

precap:scene 1..kria dancing on the song..sunn sathiya (ABCD) rey watching her from outside.scene 2..rey and kria siting on the stairs of fire exit..rey gives kria a shoulder to shoulder pat and they both smile... 😉😳

ps..like the post if u want pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Read ur chap jst abi...its great..spcly kriyam's bond...gud going...scrap me wanna tell u smthng regarding it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome update
swayam kitna irritate karta hai kria ko
poor kria
loved the whole update
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres
chappy 1 awsome...
precap looking intersting
update soon next part
nd pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely
please do PM me
would love to read it

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