Dil Ko Kuch Pata Hi Na Chala Fan-Fiction

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey everyone
As you all know that currently in wrwmk pari has lost her memory and saumya is dying to meet her.The lovely couple is separated and we are all waiting for them to be together again.So i decided to write this fan fiction about the sweet couple saumya and pari!

Characters....

The Parasharts

Saumya-He's a senoir at college so its his last year,He's a really sweet and honest guy.He lives with his sister and dadaji and hates his parents.He has a best friend named pari with whom he would tell everything to and he has known her for a very long.He's waiting for the right girl to spend his life with.

Ishana-She's saumya's sweet little sister.She loves her brother and dadji a lot.

Dadaji-He's saumya and ishana's loving dadaji who takes care of them since their parents arent around.

Kamya-She's samya and ishana's mother but she doesnt live with them.She's cares more about her business then her children.

Abhay-He's saumya and ishana's father who also cares more about business and money then his own children.

The Thapars

Pari-She's a senior at her college.She's a very sweet and loving girl (like in the show)She loves her family and friends alot.Her best friend is saumya and she tells him everything.She's waiting for the right guy to spend her life with.

Aditya-He's pari's older brother.He takes care of the business with the help of his grandfather after the death of his parents.

Khushi-She's paris younger sister.It's her second year at college.She loves her family alot adn shes a sweet girl.

Danima-She's pari,aditya and khushi's dadi,nani and mother =danima.She loves her grandchildren alot and wants them to be happy.

Dadu- He's pari,aditya nad khushi's loving grandfather.He takes care of the business with the help of Aditya after the death of his son prince.

in this story khushi is pari and aditya's real sister so shes the daughter of prince and rani also.Also pari walks normaly so she doesnt limp.

Rohit-He's Saumya,Pari && Khushis good friend

Well i will write the first part really soon😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1
Ring Ring(alarm clock)
You see a young girl getting out of her bed but you cant see her face.She goes near the mirror.You see her smile and then her eyes and then you see that shes none other then pari!Danima enters her room.
Danima=d
pari=p
d-pari tu abhi tayar nahi hai...tum college ke liye late ho rahi hai
p-danima..bus 2 minute
d-theek hai jaldi karo
p-theek hai😊
Pari gets ready and goes downstairs.Everyone was sitting at the dinning table eating breakfast.
p-good morning dadu
dadu=da
da-good morning beta
p-good morining bhaiya
aditya=a
a-good morining pari
p-danima khushi kaha hai? 😕
d-pari voh toh college ishana ki saath college ga chuki hai
p-theek hai..mujhe abhi jana hai
d-jane se phele to kuch kaho
Pari takes a slice of bread and leaves

She goes to saumya's house(he lives next door)
The servant opens the door and she goes in the living room and finds dadaji sitting there drinking tea.
dadaji=dji
p-good morning dadaji..saumya kaha hai?
dji-good morning pari beta..voh to apne kamre main hai
p-theek hai
She goes to his room and finds him standing near his bed.
p-saumyaaaaa tum kya kar rehe ho..hum college ke liye der ho gayaige
saumya=s
s-pari im looking for my watch
Pari walks away and then comes back.
p-yeh lo..now can we please go..we are late
s- theek hai chalo

Well that was the first part..My hindi is pretty bad so i'll start writing in english.Please post your comments...i need to know what you guys think.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very nice... i loved this part especially the opening with Pari...haha thanks a lot... keep it up!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good story..totally_desi...
continue it...we all can enjoy...
can others continue your story line..so that we all can build a story..its just a query..
your way of explaining s good...
nice narration... 👏 ...
atleast now sowmya n pari can stay together...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good story!!!!!!!!! n great ideas...........
thanxxxxxx.......... loved the opening part............. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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love it.. please continue... can't wait 2 read the next part...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#7
hey please continue its interesting,kya patha serial waalon ko yaheen se koi idea mil jaye!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey totally_desi that was really fantastic 👏 really !! u got my habit of making stories , even i do such things but akele akele , after watching serials at night on bed i keep making stories in mind .. u r doing a superb job , maybe rajshri will sign u for their next projext 😉 hehe ...continue ,atleast we can have saumya n pari together 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwnnnnn that was awesome totally desi can't wat for the next part 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for liking it so much everyone 😃
honey_06...yea others could continue..i dont mind

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