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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
res
just amazing
superb
loved it totally
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
sorry for not commenting on the first chapter 😔 was a little busy over the weekend!
love the new concept and the characters!
Your stories have such vivid imagery, that I can picture everything in front of my eyes
And best of all is you have long updates ❤️ thank god 😆
beautiful update...
loved the radio part... very funny actually 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update
i really love it
thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nic update
beautifully described the brother sister bond the masti was really fun to read
virika dinner cum date was gud
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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totslyyy crackedd it upp.. loved it soo muchh.. keepp continuingg.. eager to read moreee
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this was a fabulous update loved it
seriously
this story is somewhat related to what i am experiencing
loved how u described the bonding between brothers and sisters
viren is very nice
jeevika is good i love both of them
waiting for the reply of jeevika
and the surprise too
continue soon and thanx for the PM


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter - 3

It Was 2AM And I Felt Like Having Coffee. As I Headed Towards The Kitchen I Saw Di Sitting Down Next To The Couch, Head Burried Into her Knees. By That Position Of Her I Easily Gussed She Had A Fight Or An Argument With Neil. DamN If That Guy Was In Front Of He, He Would Have Had A Tight Slap On His Face & A Hard Punch On His Nos From Me.

I Settled My Self Next To Her.
J - "What Was It That You Had Fight With Him?" She Just Hugged Me Tight.
N - "He Promised Me For A Movie Tommorow." Her Sobs Decreasing A Little. "And Now he Says He Has A Important Meeting."
J - "Di, I Think If He Said That, It Must Be Really Inportant Right?" I Said Whiping Her Tears Off. "I Think You Shouldn't Make A Fuss Of It. He Must Be Sad For Disappointing You Too."
By Then She Had Totally Stopped Crying, And Bhai Was Down Here In The Living Area Too.
J - "Di?" I Said Touching Her Forhead As We StoodUp. "You Have A Fever? Don't Tell Me You Were All Crying For Mare Than 2 Hours!"
N - "No. I Wasn't! I had A Fever Since Evening" She Said It A Low Tone As She Was Gonna Get Busted By Now!
J - "Upstairs To You Room NOW! Bhai, Pick Her Up And Take Her To The Room I'll Get Some Medicines Till Then. The Fever Ain't Too Much. So There Isn't A Need To Wake Mumma Up."
N - "I Can Walk Myself."
J - "Take This Ill Dumb Sister Of Yours To The Room Bhai. I'll See You There." Bhai Took Her Upstairs While I Was Heading To The Kitchen I Noticed Viren Standing There.

J - "Viren? Why Are You Up So Late?"
V - "Actually, I Heard Some Noise So Just Came Out. And Anyway I Wasn't Able To Sleep."
J - "Probably Because Your Regular Sleeping Place Was Changed. Try Sleeping Now Though." He Was Grinning Evily.
V - "Hmmm. Is Di Alright?"
J - "She'll Be Completely Fine Only Tomorrow Morning When She Gets Her Gift."
V - "Okay. Good Night!" He Said Waving Me A Bye.
J - "Good Night!"
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Next Morning On the Breakfast Table.

J - "Bhai,..."
A - "Yes Angry Young Woman?"
J - " Stop Calling Me That!" I Said Rolling My Eyes. "The Early Morning Today Were You With Di? Was She Alright? I DId Check Her This Morning. She Didn't Have A Fever Though she Looked Pale."
N - "What Is This Jerk Gonna Tell You Jeevika. He Left Me Alnoe After You Went For Studying. I Was Fine Later. And The Pale Face Of Mine; Can You See It Now? I'm Alright Now Baby." She Said That As I Stood Up And Made Her Sit On The Chair.
J - "Now Bhai Your Suprise Is Cancelled!" I Said Giving Him A Angry Look.
A - "What Did I Do? She Was The One To Tell Me To Go Away, Not I."
J - "Damn Look At Him, He's Such A Dramebaaz!" Everyone Giggled. "You Are Talking As If I Don't Know Di. I Was Just Playing Around! Relax."
A - "What's The Gift You Wanted From Me? And What's The Suprise You Are Giving To The Two Of Us?"
J - "The Gift i Wanted From You Or Actually The Both Of You Is - You Two Have To Get married Before
Me!"
A - "Niki Marrying Before You Is Alright. But How Can I Even Marry? You Don't Like Priya At All, And I Will Not Marry Anyone Else. I Don't Wanna Hurt The Either Of You!"
J - "God! When I The Hell In World I Said I Don't Lioke Bhabhi?"
He's Head Shot Up, Sparkingly, My Words As If Reverbarating In His Ears.
A - "Hold On WHat Did You Just Say 'Bhabhi'?"
J - "Yes, I Approved Her Even Before You!"
A - "What? How's That Even Possible? You Used To Call Her An Eggface And Now Like Bhabhi? Really?"
J - "Enough Of Your Over Reaction. You Two Agree Or Not? Or The Two Standing At The Dorr I'll Have To Send Them Back!"
N - "Standing At The Door?"
J - "Yes! Probably With Their Parents To Talk To Ours. And then Let Them Discuss What All Is To Be Done Further. And Di Can You Just Get The All Six Of Them Inside?"

Viren Who Was Sitting Right Opposite To Me Just Whispered "Excuse Me? Before You Get Married? Like Really? To When? And To Whom?"
My Eyes Shot Up A Little Embarassed, But That Faded It Away And Answered "There's Someone." I Stood Up And Left A Grinning Viren Alone There On The Table. Crossing The Living Area I Saw All The Elders Talking. Virat, Di,Bhai My Would be Jiju & Would Be Bhabhi Busy In Their Talks. I Headed Towards My Room. Making My Way Straight To The Study. Settled Down There, And Then I Had To Make Some Notes As I Was Doing It I Could Here My Phone Ringing. Damn! -_- I Had To Move Towards My Bed! Heck. I Didn't Wanted To Get Disturbed. But I Had To Get Up!

Picking Up The Call "This Better Be Important You Two!"
Adi - "Jeevika, Why Are You getting So Hyper? Are We Getting Onto Your Nerves AFter You Found Someone Else To Spend Time With?"
J - "What Rubbish Are You Talking About Adi?"
Not Oblivious Happening Around Me, I Heard The Two Shouting "We Were Talking About Him!!" Getting Side Ways Making A Way So That I Could See The Person. Of Course None Other Than Viren.
J - "What Are You Two Devils Doing Here? This Early Mornig For Both Of You?!?" I Said Hugging The Two.
"Wait A Second! Rahul Where Are Your Specs? And Adi You're In A Indian Outfit?" My Jaw Dropped Idiotically.
V - "Shut You Mouth Wifey!"
J - "Excuse Me?" My Head Shot Up, Eyes Buried Into His "When Was This Decided? Wifey? Really?"
V - "Ohhh...So You Didn't? My Bad Luck...!" I Heard The Other Two Chuckling.
J - "Stop It The Two Of You. And You Too Mr. Vadhera." Shoting Him A Death Glare.
"Adi How About A Movie Tonight? It's Been Ages For Our Outing!"
R - "NOOO!!! No Way! I Have Economics To Study! I Can't"
J - "Cut It Off You Nerd!" -_- "You're Coming With Us And That's Final! Let's See If Di And Gang Agrees As Well!"
R -"Is You Would Be Husband Gonna Come Along?" He Said Asking It A Little Low "And Jeevs From When Did You Start Calling Me A Nerd?" He Said In A Little More Sad Tone.
J - "Come Again? You just Called Him My Would Be? He Isn't Yet! And As Far As He's Coming With Us Is Concerned Let Him Decide That! And Why If Your GF Can Call You That I Can Too!"
V - "Who Would Not Love To? I'm A Lawyer But I Love Outings Too!"
Adi - "Wait A Minute. GF? Rahul? Jeevs...You Knew And You Never Told? Who's That Girl i Wanna Know! RIGHT NOWW!!!"
J - "Baby Chill I Was Talking About You!" And I Just Sprinted Out From The Room! Damn I Wished To See Both Of Their's Expressions! :D:D
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Sending PM's Only Those Who Commented And Liked My Previous Update.
Thanks For Liking My Work Guys! 😊 ❤️
Take Care All...❤️

Edited by Protego_Maxima - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res :)
srry fr unresing it so late...
me really sorry!!!!!
nd Thxxx fr reminding me... :)

#unres
a grt update by one of the awsomest writer we came to know abt!!!!!
I just luv how the story is proceeding.
u write amazing...
express each nd everything so perfectly... .
jeevika care towards every1.. awww... ❤️
love it. ..
nd I totally agree with karina... ❤️
Edited by millee18 - 11 years ago
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