New FF: Rishtey~Season 2. Part 1 pg 7 (19/1)

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Posted: 11 years ago
#1
hey peoples...
erm?! can i ask something??!!!
would you allow me start a new FF owing to my past records?!
eerr... i guess i should just shut my mouth and give rest to my mind and stop writing.
but i am human and that too a sanki one. ;)
you know me naa? yeah yeah main jaanti hun...
you will be thinking that i will start and leave it in middle.
but trust me i am not going to do that.
the story i have planned now is different.
characterization is different, so are relations, rishtey.
and no, this name is not final. its just for time being until i find a suitable one, may be in hindi or in english or any other language.
arjun may or may not have past and the atmosphere at ETF is entirely professional, at least in the initial chapters as i have planned. equations between sameer and arjun is entirely different, which i will reveal.
if only you allow me, i will post prologue.
updates will be once a week, and it may vary in extreme conditions that is if i get extra classes till late evening in college. other wise, i ll give regular updates.
as of chori chori chupke chupke, i with 2 updates a month. i need to get funny mood, in other words, mujhe sanki attack aaya to hi i can write. ;)
these will be the only two stories i will be writing, other than occasional outburst of OS.
and yeah!!! few things.
this FF will have all elements of fun, emotions, tragedy, action, romance, love may be even lust(i mean it) i will notify in the update if i decide to write any mature stuff, which i will try to avoid as much as possible, not going into it, but with just subtle edges. but i will not guarantee.

i will send pms to all who are in my buddy list. no i am not going to segregate non readers.
if you are not interested, then just ignore the pm and let me know.
i send to about 100 and get response of about 20 which i will not mind because i am not reading many peoples work so naturally they tend to avoid mine. i have my own reasons and an inbox with about 400 unread messages. so for now, i am sorry.

and yeah, prologue may not give away anything about story.. i am telling it in advance... story will unfold in further chapters... and character sketch, sometime after prologue where only the important characters will be introduced.

~~~

so unlike my recent introductions to my stories eh!!
cant help guys... i am goner now... lost almost all nuts.
jeez!!!!! i guess i will stop my blabber blabber blabber and give prologue in some time... its almost done, just few tweaking work ;)
hope i have some readers this time... unlike my previous serious stories.
i mean it.


aapki
Pari<3
(fully sanki ;))

P.S: i saw something just now... this is my 1500 post in the forum... yay!!! lungi dance lungi dance... ;)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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sound good to me😊
update soon
who's the couple??
Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: laila1994

sound good to me😊

update soon
who's the couple??

thank you...
will post soon...
and couple... i have not decided the name against arjun as of now. i know what i wantt in that character opposite to arjun, but name... but i would not make any fictional character.
and sameer has aisha who i adore ;) so yep for now, the only official couple which i will make... ;)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds interesting
waiting for the update
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sounds good...update the prologue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess_pari

thank you...
will post soon...
and couple... i have not decided the name against arjun as of now. i know what i wantt in that character opposite to arjun, but name... but i would not make any fictional character.
and sameer has aisha who i adore ;) so yep for now, the only official couple which i will make... ;)

I adore Rayesha too😉
if possible make it Arni.
there r just few FF on this couple.
Just a suggestion...Em fine with any/every Jodi😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: laila1994

I adore Rayesha too😉
if possible make it Arni.
there r just few FF on this couple.
Just a suggestion...Em fine with any/every Jodi😊

i am not about arni as couple... may be or may not be... i have three names infront of me to choose...
i am planning that particular character very differently as of now, so lets see what happens... and yeah prologue will be in few minutes...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey here is the prologue guys.
and dont even think of killing me after this post kay... ;)

Dont judge the book by its cover. i have not said any word wrong right? i am bad at quoting :P
well, it applies to character as well. and character behaviour is not same towards all... :P ;) so without further blabbers, i will give prologue... :D

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A slender lady with wheat complexion made her way into the ETF lobby. She slung her bag on the reception desk and spoke in husky and sweet voice.

"May I know the way to ACP Rathod's cabin miss...erm...yeah Miss Kapoor" she said taking a second to read the name tag on her formal shirt.

MS. Kapoor glanced at the lady in front of her. Dressed in beige chinos and crisp white shirt, gun holster strapped across her chest, and with a height of about 5 feet 10 inches, she looked very much intimidating, sans her extremely good looks.

The lady caught her eying her, bend down and spoke,

"Don't eye me miss. For I may not leave your eyes in your sockets any longer"

Miss Kapoor shuttered and muttered in low voice

"Do you have appointment miss?"

"I don't need one lady. And I have no spare time in my watch to waste on you. SO NOW THE WAY" she glared hard, dropping her voice a notch low.

"The cabin at the dead end in the upper floor"

"Thank you" she smiled sweetly and picked her bag to make way to her destination.

"terror her name...but drop dead gorgeous" miss kapoor slumped on her chair, gulping down a glass of water.

"yeah... I guess she unnerved you with her eyes and voice right? and you are falling for her!!!!" liza casually strolled to her desk, winking at the receptionist.

"Liza mam... I guess... yes... it was almost like seeing female version of Arjun sir.. phew!!! And she is... sooo... HOT!!!"

"haha... you like every hot girl around naina... but if I am not wrong she knows... so now, get back to work... it's the time lion makes his entry.."

"oh frack!!! Gotta run few errands before he is here... bye..."

"bye naina... and all the best" liza winked and walked away.


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ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod. The name reckoned power, unique aura of sincerity, loyalty and fierce love towards nation. He was immersed in a file when he heard a quick tap on the door.

"come in" he said while sipping his coffee.

"hey sameer..."

"PARI!!!!!!!!" sameer screamed and jumped out of his seat.

"yeah its mee..." she gingerly hugged him. sameer kissed her forehead and cupped her face.

"kaisi hai baccha? Na phone, na email!! Bhool gai mujhe right?"

"jeez!!!! Tum kabhi nahin badloge sameer... bhala main tumhe kaise bhulu?"

"haan... usse kaise bhulegi tu pari? Tu to mujhe bhool gayi naa...???" came a voice from behind and pari jumped away from Sameer squealing.

"ARRJUUU!!!!!! I missed you TULIP!!!!!"

"I am not Tulip you cup cake"

"yeah! Then my jalebi?!"

"shut that trap of yours honeycomb.. I am angry on you!"

"sorry baba... main case mein busy thi to call nahin kar payi aur I was not allowed for using emails for personal reasons..and your hair look like cob web."

"and your are like medusa snakes... aur kab aayi tu Mumbai?"

"abhi just few hours back. airport se seedha yahan aayii hun..."

"mujhe to bata sakti thi naa? I would have come there to pick you..."

"yeah par I would not get to see these two monkey faces wide in surprise naa..." she pulled their cheeks and both sameer and Arjun smacked her head.

"auch!!! Sambhalke... I am very precious..."

"yeah yeah... we know..." both sameer and arjun rolled their eyes.

"ab chalo. Apne naye officer ko team se nahin milwaoge?"

"arre baba... you are early. Maine sab ko sharp 10 ko conference hall mein bulaya hai... oops!!! Its almost time... lets go guys..." sameer said and the three made way to conference room.

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Shree tapping the keyboards looking into some software where as chotu was on phone with one of his informers. The only two who were friendly in this team were Aisha and liza, who were very good friends.

They all scrambled into their seats as they saw Arjun entering and after him sameer entered laughing with Pari.

Liza opened her eyes wide when she saw the same lady laughing openly who not many moments ago spoke in steel, cold voice.

"liza... kya hua?"

"um! That lady..." she said in low voice and saw sameer and THE lady said by liza.

"Good morning guys... pari... yahan aao... team... this is new member of ETF." Sameer started his introduction.

"shez smoking hot man..." Shree thought.

"ACP Archana Rawte.. tumhare Arjun sir ki twin sister. Pehle Interpol mein thi, now has been recruited in ETF." Sameer completed.

"what the F***... SHE is ARJUN SIR's sister?! Argh!!" groaned Shree and stopped when he saw chotu glared him in an irritated way.

"are you not well Shreekant?" asked chotu.

"no... no I am perfectly fine. No worries" Shree just smiled.

"Naina was so damn right Aisha. This is female version of Arjun sir"

"hey guys... I am Archana...and I am quiet eager to work with an efficient team like ETF" pari said with a slight smile.

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well, dats one heck long prologue.

update next week.. :D

hope you like this story...

with love

pari <3

Edited by princess_pari - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres
PAriii😎
loved shree's condition🤣
Arjun's twin sister is nothing like Arjun.👍🏼
LOved her character so much👏👏
Poor ETF 2-2 Rawte ko kese sambhalgenge😆
Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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*unres*
Yay...
My Pari dear is back with her new FF...
Awwiiieee...
It my favorite title, ''Rishtey''.
Brought back old memories of Rishtey season 1.

Uri Baba...
Archana is one heck of an angry,young girl...
Aate hi Rawte-giri shuru...
She is the twing sister of our hotwa ACP.
No doubt that she got the traits of anger and attitude of her brother.
Shree's expression was superb and made me ROFL...
Ayesha and Liza are best friends.
So,Archana joining ETF...
She has a good rapport with Sameer bhai,as well...
But,one thing struck my mindwa,ki,why is Chotu calling by his full name????
Naina ko toh aate hi Maa Kaali ki darshan hogayi...
Lovely prologue...
I just loved it.
Hope,i will always be with this story,just,as I was with the season 1 of Rishtey...
Thanks a lot for starting it.
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm.
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago

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