Asya FF:When South meets North part-2/page-3(1/12)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey ppl😊This is my first FF nd i hope u all lyk it...I'll b givng u a brief introductn of the story..If u all want me to continue den i'll continue it..Pls bear me as dis is my first Story on ASYA⭐️
So the Intro part is in dis way...

CHARACTERS

1.ASAD AHMED KHAN: U all knw him😆He is handsome,Rich nd same as the character he's currently playng(nt dat luv sick Asad😆before fallng in love wat was his character...? exactly dat Character which everyone love) .He's 25 years old nd belongs to Bhopal(North)

2.ZOYA: Same as in the show😊She stays wid her Aunt,Uncle nd their Son who r really carng nd sweet.She is pursuing her Proffessional ComputerScience Course in a College😃.Se's 20 years old nd stays in Hyderabad😆⭐️.

3.Other CHARACTERS: u all will get to knw as the story starts...😊


Now startng wid a phone call...
One early morning day in Bhopal dat too in KV Dilshad gets a call...
Dilshad: Hello!😊
Other person on line:Hello Dilshad aapa!😊
Dilshad:O tum😛 hw r u?...nd all dose formal things were done nd after a conversation of 15mins Dilshaad's reply is

Dilshad: O come on...u r also a part of our family nd u can brng her at any tym...u all r always welcome😊She can stay here as much tym she can nd she is also lyk our family member😊
This convo was heard by the one nd only MR.ASAD AHMED KHAN nd he was thinkng lyk who's gng to come to our house all of a suddn?🤔
His thinkng was disturbed by dilshad when she said dat a guest is cmg to our house frm ur uncle's side...😊

Asad: Its ok ammi he can come at any tym nd can stay here...He said dis nd went away to his office by sayng Bye to his ammi...
But Dilshad wants to tell him dat its she but nt he😆 but before dat he left off frm der...
(Bechara doesnt knw dat the so called guest is gng to turn his lyf upside down😆😃⭐️)


So hws it guys!!?So based on ur precious comments i'll be gng to write my story's part-1 😊
Thank u all😊

Intro-pg-1
Part-1 pg-2
Part-2 pg-3



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akaswan thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds very nice continue soon and please PM me 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds nice. Continue soon :)
Posted: 11 years ago
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sounds interesting
continue soon😊
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Very interesting...
Pls continue soon😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
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I knw the response is nt dat huge...but even though m updatng my part 1for dose who want me to write dis FF...So dis is for u all guys...😊

Part-1

Da same morning in Hyderabad

Anwar disconnected the call after talking to Dilshad nd called Zoya,his wife nd his son.After discussing wid the family membersabout sendng Zoya to Bhopal dat too informing about her stay in KV both his wife(who is a Hindu) nd son(Abhi) felt really happy nd all of dem lookd at Zoya for her Response...🥱

But the Response was Hw could u do dis to me...uncle?

Anwar: What have i done Zoya...😲i've just arrangd ur stay in Bhopal so dat we can have a sigh of relief here.dilshad aapa is really sweet nd i knw her frm my childhood...So wats da pblm?

Zoya:I'm nt a kid anymore uncle...I can take care of myself very much..Moreover m nt gng on a vacatn to Bhopal..u knw y m i gng...I shud knw my past at any cost...Aur waise b mere chuttiyan shuru huyi hai...before my clg reopens i've to knw my past at any cost.Aur waise b I will nt have dat freedom wen i stay wid dem..nd wat shud i tell dem wen dey ask me da reason of my visit?😕

Anwar:oohhh Zoya dnt be a kid i've told aapa dat u r cmg for ur mini-project as ur holidays are gng on nd u need to do ur project work nd more over we r gng out of the country...khush...?😊

ZOYA:oohh lyk dat den its fyn...thank u uncle.🤗

So den i'll b leaving by tmrw...ok?😊

Anwar:ok as u wish...😊

(ok nw Zoya is half muslim nd half hindu in my story as she doesn't knw who is she nd all dose things..she does namaz as well as pooja along wid her aunt nd uncle)

Bhopal

Najma: Ammi aap bhaijaan se kuch kehrahi thi..?kya hai?

Dilshad:wo mai to bhool hi gayi tumhe bataana hi...kuch dino ke liye Zoya anwar's Daughter is cmg to stay wid us...😊

Najma:But ammi jitna mai jaanti hu anwar uncle ko unhe toh sirf ek beta hai na...Abhi...?den a girl child hw come?

Dilshad:Zoya's mom is a good frnd to Anwar's wife...So wen Zoya's mom died she adopted her...nd took care of her.

Najma:Oh lyk dat...So wen is she cmg frm Hyderabad?

Dilshad:Tmrw😊

Najma:U see ammi she'll be a complete package of tehzeeb nd tameez...nd she even gets adjusted in our house😃

Dilshad:yea...😊

Hyderabad:

Soumya(Anwar's wife):Zoya pack dese chudidhaars dear...it doesn't look nyc wen u stay der wearng jeans nd all dese dresses...😳

Zoya: Aunty i feel comfortable in dese dresses only nd more over i wnt change myself for someone...m sorry i cant do this...

Zoya said dis nd went off...😃

Night in Bhopal:

Asad:Ammi kal mujhe jaldi jaanaa hai...kal mujhe ek important meetng hai..mai late hojaaunga shayad...aap mera intezaar math keejiye...

Dilshad:ha its ok Asad...

Next Day Morning Asad went off to his meetng nd dilshaad nd najma are waitng for Zoya's arrival...

In the Afternoon the door bell rang nd it was opened by najma nd da moment she saw Zoya she was awestruck...😲

Da same xpressn was follwd by dilshaad also as they saw Zoya in jeans instead of chudidhaar...😲(As dey thot she is very traditional in her clothing😉😆)

Zoya first dint understand wats gng on nd slowly she started greeting Dilshaad nd Najma...which is very decent nd heart touchng which made dilshaad to connect with Zoya the immeadiately...😊

After knwng about the ppl in KV even Zoya connectd wid dem instantly...nd she went to her room which is ooposite of asad's room which she loved it(she loved her room nt dat its opposite to Asad's room😆)

At nyt Zoya was unable to sleep as its a new place nd she already started missing her family.So she wanted to have some Coffee to relax herself...As it was dark she was unable to see anything nd got hit by a pillar nd fell on Asad who had just arrived frm his busy day nd hit his back on the floor along wid Zoya in his arms who is a bit frightened yet beautiful in lookng😳😛

For more than a minute Asad was mesmerized by her beauty(imagine moonlight fallng on dem⭐️) nd wen Zoya saw him she started screaming as CHHOOORRR CHHOORRR Ghar mein Ghus aaya hai..Phuphi CCCHHHOOORRR😆😃⭐️

By hearng her screaming both Najma and Dilshad were awake nd switchd on the lights in the hall...which made dem laugh as dey saw Asad nd Zoya still in each others arms...😳

Zoya dint understand y both of dem r laughing...Dilshaad clarified dat he is her son Asad...

Zoya got up frm der nd even Asad also got up nd was really angry at her..

He dint even wish her nd stepped into his room angrily...😡


So here is my part-1 whch is quite borng i thnk..but i'll try to add some fun in it frm my next part onwards...please do read it nd give me ur comments😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkugarg

Very interesting...

Pls continue soon😃



Updated😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: akaswan

Sounds very nice continue soon and please PM me 😃

Thank u😊I've updated part-1
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very good part 😊
Asad and Zoya meet 😃
i hope that Asad will not be mad at her for a long time 😒
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Annie_

Sounds nice. Continue soon :)


Updated fynally😊

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