Asya OS: Promise

Asad finally left Rashid n straight away asked his ami...whether she wanted him or Rashid..

All were shocked...

Rashid: Yeh ksa sawaal hy?

Dilshad: asad?

Asad: boliye ami..mein ya Rashid Saab..

Rashid: tum dilshad ko ase..

Asad: (cuts him short) aap se kisi ne pucha nai hy...aap jaa Sakte hy...

Rashid: Theek hy...jaa raha hu mein...

Dilshad: Rashid?

Rashid: mein tumhara bahar intazar kar raha hu..jaldi aana..(n left)

Asad: ami aapne Kuch kaha q nai??

Zoya: Mr. khan aap plzz jara thande dimaag se sochiye..

Asad: zoya, aap plzz chup rahiye...mein aap par gussa nai karna chahta..aap plzz mujhe koi suggestion math di jiye...plzz..

Zoya looked at him n shook her head..

Asad: ami, uss aadmi ne Yeh kse Soch liya k aap unke saath, uss pagal khaane jayengi..unhe lagta ki aap unhe 17 saal pehele joh unhone kiya uske liye Maaf kiya..par asa nai hy ami...hy na?? aap unke saath nai rehna chahti..hy na??

Dilshad: Asad meine haan keh diya hy unhe..mein apni bachi hui zindagi Rashid k Saath bitana chahti hu...(tears flowed dwn her cheeks)

Asad: ami? aa..aap jaanti hy aap kya keh rahi hy?? uss insaan k Saath rehna chahti hy, joh17 saal pehele aapko, hum sabko Chod kar chale Gaye the??

Dilshad: Asad woh 17 saal pehele ki baat hy...par abh Rashid khud Yeh chahte hy, ki mein unke saath rahu..toh uss mein galat kya hy??

Asad: galat?? Yeh aap mujhse puch rahi hy?? ami joh aadmi 17 saal pehele aapko jhoote vaade dekar Chod kar Kisi 2re aurat k paas gaya tha, uspar aap bharosa kse kar sakti hy?? kya guarantee hy woh iss baar aapko dhoka nai denge, dard nai pochayenge?? boliye ami..??

Dilshad: Asad, mein tumhe kse Samjhau?? meine 17 saalo se Rashid ki rah Dekhi hy..aur abh jab woh mere saath rehna chahte hy, toh phir mein unhe na q kahu??

Asad: ami mein nai chahta k aap uss ghar mein un logon k saath rahe..

Dilshad: Asad, jab mein tayar hu toh tum mujhe q rokh rahe Ho?? mujhe plzzz jaane do..plzz..

Asad: ami..

Dilshad: bas asad!!! tum mujhe rokne wale hote kon ho?? mein Rashid k saath rehna chahti hu bas!!!

Asad: (was deeply hurt, his ami's word's somewhere killed him) widout thinking much he said, "Theek hy...jsi aapki marzi"..

While Zoya was in for a shock..

Dilshad: (didn't knew wat she said to him in anger) thanky..

Asad: (interrupted) chaliye mein aapko bahar tak Chod aata hu..

Asad just had blood shot eyes till now, but when he said the last line he was in tears...

Dilshad and Zoya followed him..

As soon as they reached outside KV, Rashid had a big grin on his face..he went n hugged Dilshad in front of Asya, making Asad more angry..

Rashid: mein jaanta tha k tum mere saath hi aaogi Dilshad..(happy wale tears in his eyes)

Dilshad: aana toh tha hi Rashid, pichle 17 saalon se meine aapki rah dekhi hy..

Rashid: (turns towards asad) asad, bete..

Asad: peheli baat, meine aapko pehele bhi kahi baar kaha hy, abhi bhi keh raha hu..mein, apka, beta, nai hu..aur, 2ri baat, mere liye meri ami hi meri zindagi hy..isliye agar aapke wajah se yaa aapke parivar k wajah se agar mere ami ko koi bhi taklif huyi...dard Hua..agar unke aakho mein aasu Aaye..I swear to God, I'LL KILL YOU...mind my words...

Dilshad: Asad, tum nai chal rahe??

Asad: (almost broke dwn) nai..

Dilshad: Asad, tumhare Abu humein lene Aaye hy..

Asad: aapko..

Dilshad: asad???

Asad: sirf aapko..humesha k tarha..

Dilshad: (looked at zoya) asi baat nai hy asad..Rashid aap kuch kehte q nai..

Asad: Yeh kya kahenge?? 17 saal pehele bhi bina Kuch bataye chale Gaye the..(sad smirk) anyways, Apna khayal rakhiye ga..(n went inside)

Zoya who was standing quietly all the tym finally spoked..

Zoya: m happy for u phoopi...aapko finally aapka pyaar mil gaya..(n hugged her) dost plzz phoopi ka khayal rakhna..agar inhe thodi si bhi taklif huyi na toh Mr. khan se pehele mein aapko kachcha jaba Jaungi..(funy yet serious tone) qki mere liye phoopi kya hy Yeh mein Kabhi Samjha nai paungi...so u better take care of her..

Rashid: I promise zoya, mein Dilshad ka bahot achi tarha se khayal rakhunga...(n smiled) chale Dilshad?

Dilshad looked behind but asad was not standing there..she half heartedly sat inside Rashid's car n they drove off..zoya was standing outside, she wanted to see her phoopi till the car disappeared..but was shock to see it taking reverse n coming back...

Dilshad: Rashid, mera Dil nai maan raha..mein ase Asad ko akela Chod kar nai aa sakti...

Rashid: Dilshad??

Dilshad rushed inside her house followed by Zoya n Rashid...

Dilshad: Asad?? Asad?? (n strtd banging his door) asad plzz darwaza kholo...Asad!!!

Zoya: Mr. Khan??...Mr. khan...plzzz open the door...

Dilshad: zoya, asad darwaza q nai khol raha??? Yah Allah, I hope he's fyn..

Rashid: Kuch nai hoga Dilshad...

Dilshad: Rashid, aap chale jayiye yahan se...

Rashid: Dilshad??

Dilshad: mere liye jitne imp aap hy..utna hi imp mera beta hy...Aur agar woh Khush nai hy..toh mein aapke saath nahi chalungi...

Zoya: phoopi?

Dilshad: Asad!!!!

Rashid quietly left frm Der...while Dilshad n Zoya tried to talk to asad, but in vain...asad was not answering them...Dilshad now was tensed...she knew something was definately wrng with her son...

Dilshad: zoya, mere room se asad k room ki duplicate keys le kar aao..jaldi...

Zoya: jiii...(n ran inside Dilshad's room..) Yeh li jiye phoopi..

Dilshad opened the door n was shocked to see asad's room condition..same was wid zoya..all the things were broken dwn by asad..while the rooms light were off..asad was sitting on the floor completely broken..tears flowng frm his eyes..his ami's wrds were ringing in his ears.."tum mujhe rokne wale kon hote ho?''..just for the sake of her so called husband, his ami insulted their pure relationship..by asking him his rights on her...Dilshad was his ami n he was her son...so, he had directly n naturally got the rights to stop her frm doing something wrng..but today his ami killed the remaining lovable asad inside him by her words..he was so lost in his thoughts tht he didnt realised when did dilshad sat besides him..

Dilshad went near asad n sat besides him...n caressed his hairs..

Asad removed her hand n got up..

Asad: aap yaha kya kar rahi hy??

Dilshad: agar mera beta mere jaane se Khush nai toh mein kse Chali jaati??

Asad: jse 15 min pehele gayi thi..Waise hi..

Zoya: Mr. khan, Wats wrng wid u?? aapki ami aaphi k liye wapas aayi hy..aur aap unse itna coldly behave kar rahe hy??

Asad: aapko wapas aane ki jarurat nai thi ami..m perfectly fyn...

Dilshad: asad, (n hugged him)

Asad too hugged her back..whatever dilshad said to him didn't meant tht her rights were over on him...she has, had n will always have all the rights on him..n cried like a small baby..Zoya was shocked to see her asad like this..she had never seen asad crying so badly in her life..

Dilshad: shhh...shant Ho jao asad...rona band karo..mein nai Jaungi tumhe Chod kar..

Asad: (wiped away his tears n broke the hug) ami, mein jaanta hu aap Rashid Ahmed Khan se beintehaan mohabat karti hy..aur aap unhi k saath rehna chahti hy..aap reh sakti hy..mein aapko nai rokunga..

Dilshad: asad, mein tumhe akela Chod kar nai jaa sakti..mere liye tum, nazma, zoya sab equally imp ho jitne ki rashid hy...

Asad: peheli baat ami, aapke shauhar sirf aapko lene aaye the...mujhe aur nazma ko nai...aur dusri baat mein apna ghar chod k Rashid saab k saath nai rehna chahta...mere saath aur paas zoya hy..aap unhe maaf kar sakti hy...mein naii...

Dilshad: asad, asa kab tak chalega?

Asad: mere marne k baad..yah shayad uske baad bhi nai..

Dilshad: ase math kaho asad...Allah k liye ase math kaho...

Asad: ami, kya aapko sach mein lagta hy ki Rashid saab aapke liye ladenge, awaaz uthayenge????

Dilshad: pata nai asad, par joh bhi ho, woh mujhe wapas lene aaye hy..mere liye uthna hi kaafi hy...

Asad: zoya??

Zoya was lost in asad's n dilshad's convo...

Asad: zoya?

Zoya: jii...jii mr. khan??

Asad: ami ka saaman pack ki jiye..

Both the ladies are shocked..

Dilshad: asad?

Asad: ami, agar aap sachi mein khush hy..toh mein aapko rokne wala kon hota hu??

Zoya: here, all set..bags pack ho chuke hy..

Asad: chaliye ami...lets go..

All of them sat inside asad's car n drove off to SM..

Asad along wid Zoya n dilshad entered inside SM n everyone were shocked..

Shireen: toh aap aa hi gayi..

Asad: jii..aur aaj se ami yahi rahengi...AAP sab k saath..

BB n rashid were happpy while others were still shocked..

Asad: mein jaane se pehele aap sabhi se kuch kehna chahta hu.."agar, agar mere ami ko kisine taklif ya chot, ya dard pochane ki himmat ya koshish bhi ki, toh mujhse bura aur koi nai hoga...mein apne ami ko jaanta hu..woh kabhi bhi mujhe nai batayengi ki woh taklif mein hy..par mein unki ek aawaz sunn lunga aur mujhe pata chal jayega ki woh taklif mein hy..aur tab aap sab ki kya halat hogi woh mein bhi aap sab ko nai bata sakta...mere warning ko mazak math samjhiyega..mein apne ami k khushiyon k liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu..kuch bhi..issi liye mein unhe yaha lekar aaya hu..qki woh Rashid saab k saath rehna chahti hy..so, i hope m crystal clear to everyone here, especially mr. rashid ahmed khan aap..

All looked at him in shock..

Asad: gud...chaliye zoya, ami apna khayal rakhiye ga..aur kisi bhi cheez ki jarurat ho toh mujhe, zoya ya ayaan ko keh dena...ok??

Dilshad: ok..(n hugged him followed by zoya..)

As soon ad Asya left SM..asad rushed towards his car..n hopped in controlling his tears..followed by zoya..who very well knew asad's turmoil..she was feeling really sad..she wanted to help asad..but she knew..asad would never share his problems wid her...as soon as zoya sat..asad drove off..they reached KV.. n asad entered his room followed by zoya..asad competely broke dwn in frnt of zoya hugging her tightly..

Asad: 17 yrs back i lost my abu..n today I lost my ami..I lost her...I was neither able to stop him nor could I stop her..

Zoya: asad!!! ( n caressed his hairs to calm him dwn)

Asad: promise me zoya, u wont leave me..or else i'll die zoya..I'll die

Zoya: i promise u asad...I'll never leave u..

Asad: promise?

Zoya: promise...

N zoya hugged asad,hiding him in her warmth, her love...

..THE END..

I hope u guys liked it...meine asehi joh maan mein aaya woh likha...srry for the spelling mistakes n grammatical mistakes..

Love,
Pradnya..

Beautiful --Asad shown in such a positive light! I sincerely hope the story onscreen pans out thisaway!

I am crying crying and crying!😭😭😭😭


It is sooo beautifully written!👏👏👏👏

Kash hamari zoya mei itni samaj hoti aur show mei inti khamosh rehti jitni apki OS mein hai... She always likes to interfere n make asad angry

Very we'll written , loved it

awww.beautiful.

asad😭😭

very well written👏

wow beautiful and emotional part loved it