ViSa FF~Perfect soul mates~Part 16 updated pg 43- Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanju_g


My pleasure dear!! I will stick to this forum even after show goes off.air just to read fics on visa...all the best


Thank you, Sanju!😳 Will update FFs as frequently as possible, dear!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update pallavi
read it agn n agn
you are too good
if u ever write a novel, do give me a copy
this was awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Jyothi...Thank you loads, girlie! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nandinidavid96

haila ...what is this Pallavi, u call it an update😉.

You had me grinning like stupid teenager, all blushing blushing

hume kuch kaam bi karnahain bai...should put a disclaimer "not to read in office hours" ☺️

Good Job Pallavi...keep writing, this is not enough for our gutter minds😆

Please Update ASAP


If not an update, then what should I call it, Nandini? ViSa lovemaking on the way? hehe 😆😆😆

LMAO about the disclaimer!😆

Aww, I am happy that I could get you to re-live your teenage days!😳😳

Tell me about it! I am unable to focus on anything nowadays, all because of the ViSa hotness on screen!☺️

Do not worry, I am planning to update both the fics with ViSa today. I am as guttery minded as you are. Hope I match your expectations!😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 7


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As Sarita entered the kitchen, she noticed her husband
talking over the phone to someone. She was curious when she heard excitement in
his voice. She wondered whom he was talking to, and suddenly it struck her that it must
be Abhiman. When he gently said Abhi', she knew that her guess was right. She
ran across the room and came to a halt right in front of her husband and
extended her hand, silently pleading him with her eyes to hand her the phone.



One look at his wife and Vikrant knew that she was anxious
to hear their son's voice. He gave the phone to her. She eagerly
grabbed it from him and started speaking in animated tones. His eyes glazed to
see the love emanating from her face and voice for his, no...THEIR son. He
wanted to hit himself for ever having thought the worst about her. He was truly
fortunate to have her in his life. She was such a generous soul. She did not
even think twice to forgive him. Whereas he resorted to a gun when all he had
to do was talk to her. He was still ashamed of his actions.



He heard her voice crack a little with emotion, saying,
"Yes, my darling prince. Papa and I will come and bring you back home very
soon. We love you a lot!" She heard Abhi reciprocate his love for them and held
her emotions in check until she disconnected the call; and immediately the
tears rolled down her cheeks.



Vikrant immediately embraced her and spoke soothing words to
calm her down. He was privileged to see a mother's love today. He was deprived
of it, but not his son. All thanks to Sarita. He was grateful to god for having
sent Sarita as their savior. He realized how much he needed her; their son
needed her. He made a promise to himself then and there, that he would love her
unconditionally forever.



Once her tears subsided, Vikrant held her hand and entwined
their fingers together and assured her, "Everything will be alright, I promise!"



She interrupted him asking, "But we broke the law and the
police are looking for us. What if we get caught? What about Abhi? ..."



He placed his index finger on her lips to silence her and
said "Abhi is in safe hands, darling. I left him with Divya and Raj, before I
came looking for you. And we will discuss everything, don't worry, but after
breakfast. Don't you want to taste the khichdi I made for you?" he enquired.



She nodded her head and helped him lay the table. She was
finding it increasingly difficult to believe that she was spending quality time
with her husband and that they were having conversations like a couple; for the
first time since their marriage. Her face saddened a little thinking about
Abhi. Oh, she missed him so much; missed his naughty smile and bubbly laughter.



And she was feeling guilty that she was happy to be here, in
this isolated place with her husband, while their son was away from them. But
didn't Mr.Suryavanshi promise that things will be alright and that they would
discuss this? She had to trust him on that, she thought.



They sat down opposite each other. He fed her a spoonful of
khichdi and was looking at her face intently to gauge her reaction. Her face
was neutral at first and then a slow smile spread across her mouth. She said,
"Mmm, this is really delicious, Mr.Suryavanshi!" That brought a matching smile
to his face. He was happy that he could satisfy his wife's taste buds. He went
to feed her again, when she held his wrist and shook her head. "It's my turn
now" she said and fed him. They went on to feed each other and ate in silence.



Her smile which was pleasant until a moment ago, turned
naughty all at once. "So, Mr.Suryavanshi, the shrewd businessman, knows to
cook! WOW! You know to act; dance, and fight and now I discover that you know
to cook as well. What other skills are you hiding from me, huh?" she teased him



That brought a shy smile to his face. "These are things no
one knows Sarita, except you. So don't even think about telling anyone all this,
got it?" he warned her mockingly.



This only increased her smile, "What if I give an interview
to the media about 'The 10 secrets of Mr.Vikrant Suryavanshi you never knew', huh?" She
questioned mischievously.



He tried to grab her hand while saying, "Don't you dare!"
She dodged his hand away; pushed the chair backwards and started to run when he
chased her. They were playing 'run and catch' like small kids, in the middle of
the dining room. Vikrant finally trapped her in front of the refrigerator, by
placing his hands on either side of her waist.



"Caught you!" he whispered breathlessly. "Promise me that
you will not spill my secrets!" he ordered. This irked her and she retorted"What
if I don't?"


"What if you don't?" he repeated and when she nodded her
head, he started tickling her.



She was squirming and pleading him to stop, but he did not
pay any heed. He went on to tickle her even more and asked her to promise him;
He stopped the tickle torture when she finally said "Okay, okay!"



"Okay what?" he asked her holding her waist. "Okay, I will
not leak any information about you. Your secrets are safe with me!" she said
breathing heavily.



During their tickle fight, the belt that held her robe
together loosened and it exposed her neckline to his hungry eyes. His eyes took
in her flushed face and gradually dipped down to see one of her breasts partly
exposed.



She noticed his roaming eyes; and all of a sudden was very
aware of his naked torso pressed against her upper body. He moved back a
little, untied her belt and gently pushed the robe to the sides to observe her
body. It was perfect; no, SHE was perfect and he felt proud that she was his,
only his. He had the privilege of deflowering her last night and it was the
most precious moment of his life. He would cherish the moment forever.



He looked up to see her trembling with anticipation and did
not want to disappoint her. So he slightly rubbed his chest to hers; and this
delicate friction caused a moan to escape from her mouth. And he caught her
moan with his mouth and took the opportunity to plunge his tongue inside her
mouth. He pushed her against the fridge and his hands went to her bosoms to
tweak them. She arched her body towards his and he took the opportunity to kiss
her cleavage. Her hands made its way to his short hair and tightened its grip
every time he nipped her skin and soothed it with wet kisses.



He gripped her waist and picked her up; her legs
automatically wrapped themselves around his waist. That brought a subtle
friction to the lower half of their bodies, which made both of them groan with
pleasure. He was walking towards the living room; all the while ravaging her
exposed skin which made her leave half moon impressions on his back, with her
nails. They collapsed on the sofa and he immediately shed his pants to join
her. Their culmination not just brought their bodies together, but their souls
as well. Every single time.




To be continued...



<p>Sorry about all the mushy mushy stuff, guys! Will proceed with the story from next chapter onwards!


Hope this one matched your expectations, Nandini, my gutter-minded buddy!😆😆😆


Edited by wupa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
OMG Pallavi what should I do with you? You NEVER disappoint!! It's like 10 degrees outside and I'm burning hot right now ☺️ Vikrant is also so perfect! I really hope Sarita never steps back in sharing her feelings or showing her love to Vikrant, he so deserves it.

I love how ViSa forget their worries, commitments.. the world when they are together.

Yaar why did Vik make khichdi? I hate it😆 but I guess that gave them strenght to do what followed breakfast 😉

Gutter minds suits us so well, I'm ashamed with some of the thought I have ☺️😆 but I blame it all on ViSa.

A maar daala update!!👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Morning after ,hmmm☺️
Sab kuch hogaya,ab bas intezar hai Ms junior suryvanshi ka😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
You killed me pallavi with superb update 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
First of all , I see that you finally gave a name to this story ... (Sorry if I'm mistaken about that )
This is an amazing update !!! 👏
And it was HOT too ... ☺️☺️☺️
Your FF makes my gutter-mind swtch on ... 😳😆
You're a great writer ...
I really love and enjoy reading your story ... ❤️
Keep up the good work dear ... 👍🏼

Btw what's your name dear ???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meriam25

awesome update pallavi

read it agn n agn
you are too good
if u ever write a novel, do give me a copy
this was awesome



Aww, thank you Meriam! 😳
This is my first stint at writing fanfics and I am so very glad that you like it. Me writing novels, is a far fetched idea right now. Hehe. But thank you for finding my writing worth it, dear! I really appreciate it!

Thanks once again for reading, liking and leaving a comment about the fic, dear! I am humbled! 😃 😳

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