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Part-23

All left from there .Maan after going some steps forward ,turned and looked at her .She was looking at them only as he turned she smiled and said-Goodnight.

Maan -goodnight ...and he left after saving that smiling face in his eyes .He was very puzzled at his own thoughts today...

They all reached home and Priya asked Maan to have dinner but he denied and told that he had in the hospital and now he wasn't hungry.

He reached his room and laid on his bed.

Nurse's words were still ringing in his ears.

Maan-Why I m thinking too much about what that nurse said.she didn't tell me any new thing,I know that Geet trusts me blindly.and why I didn't tell her that whatever she was thinking wasn't true.Why did I feel my heart experiencing a new ehsaas..what was that...

He closed his eyes but Geet's face came infront of his eyes and he snap opened his eyes. It was getting on his nerves now.He went to his gym to get some peace..but he saw Geet saying him.. good night...

He knew that Geet was very normal but the problem was with him only..he was over reacting only...after spending few minutes he came back as gym too didn't help him.He laid again on his bed and tried to sleep ..after turning from one side to another Sleep caught him...

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Soon Maan was roaming in to his dreamland..

Maan Arpita yash and Geet were going for some picnic..they were passing trough a hilly area..

Suddenly Arpita saw a tree full of beautiful flowers and asked Maan to stop the car but maan said-Arpita See the tree is too far..our time will be wasted only.tum kya karogi unka..jab tak hum destination tak pahunchenge they will dry ..

Arpita"But look na Maan they are too beautiful..they are very rare to see.maine to aaj tak nahin dekhe..

Yash-Maan ..she is requesting you why don't you stop tha car..thodi der hi to lagegi..

Maan-Yash tu bhi ...tu kab se aisi baaton ko encourage karne laga

Yash -jab se ye Geet madam meri zindgi me aayi hain..you know It's easy to handle a kid but this Geet..it's impossible

Geet-Hawww Yash.. you tthink that I always trouble you...main kahaan kuchh kahti hoon.jo bolte ho aap hi bolte rahte ho ki aisa karo aisa mat karo...and she pouted

Yash smiled and said-I like this angry Geet...Maan stop the car..chalo arpita main lata hoon tumhaare liye wo flowers..Geet aao na

Arpita-I too will come.Maan main bhi jaaun?

Maan-Jaao ab jab ek supporter hai to rukogi to nahin na..and Geet laughed at that...

Geet-But I will not come mujhe yahin baithna hai.aap dono jaao main yahin hoon.

Yash and Arpita went .Maan and Geet were waiting for them to come.

Maan-Geet you know yash has changed a lot since you have come in to his life.

Geet-I know ..you know he is such a gem.He care for me a lot.aapko pata hai he always says me to ignore taiji too as he does...and you know ab mujhe taiji ki koi bhi baat sunaayi hi nahin deti..and I m very much at peace now.

Maan-Geet yash and Arpita are still not back..itna time kyun lag raha hai..flowers hi to lene the unko.

Geet-you are right maan..I m also thinking that ..Let's go and see what they are doing there for so long

Maan nad Geet reached near the tree but Yash and Arpita were not there..

Maan-Yash Arpita kahaan ho tum dono?

Why are you hiding from us.Please come out fast.

Geet-Yash please mazak mat kijiye aaiye na jaldi samne.

But they didn't get a reply.

Geet was scared now-Yash please I m scared ..aaiye na jaldi.

They searched here and there but didn find them.

Maan called again loudly-Yash Arpita.

But No response

Suddenly Geet's eyes fall on the tree .It was on the edge of the cliff and ahead of it there was deep velley.a nd it was too rocky and she saw some fresh blood spots on some rocks.Geet got paniked held Maan by his hand and shouted -Yaaashh...Arpitaaa...

Maan -Geet kya hua aise kyun chilla rahi ho

Geet pointed her finger towards the velley..and he understood all.

Geet out of fear to lose yash stepped towards the edge of the velley and again shouted-Yaashh and started to move ahead .She was about to keep her step in to the air but Maan Held her hand and pulled her towards himself-GEEETT

and Maan opened his eyes .He woke up from his dream.His body was wet with his sweat. He was breathing very fast..He got up and set in the bed-What does that dream mean..why I was seeing that..after so many days of Yash and Arpita left..was that dream indicating something to me? Why I was worried for Geet more than Yash and Arpita in my dream?

He got up from the bed picked up the glass of water and gulped all the water and thought-Maan it's all wrong.ye sab sirf issliye ho raha hai because the words of that nurse made you to think in otherway for Geet.But It's wrong Maan.She is your deceased brother's wife .How can you think anything like that about her. She trusts you but she still loves Yash.you are changing because you think that you didn't love Arpita...Maan don't think to take advantage of her trust on you.tum Geet ke saath saath apne bhai ka vishwaas bhi tod rahe ho.Nahin Maan..tum aisa nahin kar sakte.please control your self here it self. You had that dream as you were thinking about Geet only.So stop yourself where you are.

And his full night went with his open eyes..

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Next morning on BF table Ram informed Maan to go to the hospital as he himself was going to attend the meeting in that government office.Sudha was going to be discharged today so Geet needed some one with her.

Maan nodded and Priya gave him the food for Geet and Sudha. He took the food and left for the hospital.He reached the hospital enterd in the room.He wished sudha good morning.

Sudha -Good morning Maan

Maan-How are you aunty now.pain kam hua kya?

Sudha -haan Maan kal se better hai.

Maan0- Where is Geet?

Sudha -wash room me hai

Maan-okey.maa ne aapke aur Geet ke liye BF bheja hai

Sudha-Maan uski kya zaroorat thi?

Geet came out of the washroom and heard Sudha-Kyun mamma zaroorat kyun nahin thi.home made food is best for you..(to Maan) Good morning Maan

Maan again felt something with that sweet voice but replied her-Good morning.when they will discharge her?

Geet-Dr.came to check her and said that after doing few more tests they will discharge her,Her BP is under control now.

Maan-Hmm main dr. se baat karke aata hoon.aur hann have your BF too.

Geet-Ya sure

Maan went to meet dr. but he was not in the cabin so he came back and saw Geet helping her mother to sit .But Geet was finding it little difficult as she was trying to do it slowly to protect sudha from the pain.Maan saw and moved to help her to let Sudha sit on the bed,He went otherside of Sudha.and he held Sudha with one hand on her shoulder and other on her back but he put his hand on Geet's hand as she had already put her hand on her mother's back to support her.but Maan's world stopped there as he was holding her hand now. He could feel that soft touch under his palm .He looked at Geet but Geet was unaffected by that as her mind was on her mother only.

Geet-Mamma araam se ..and her voice brought him back to the reality.he removed his hand from there and made Sudha comfortable so that she could have her BF.

Geet served BF to her mother and she ate that.

Maan -Geet tum bhi kha lo.

Geet-hmm will u have some?

Maan-No I have had my BF at home ..Then Geet gave him a cup of tea and he took that.

Sudha-Maan ...say my thanks to Priya ji. Meri wajah se sab pareshaan ho rahe hain .Dekho tumhen bhi apna kaam chhodkar yahaan aana pada.

Maan-It's okey aunty.Kaam to hota hi rahega.Family comes first ..

Geet smiled to hear that.A nurse came there and asked them to leave as it was time to spong bath for Sudha.Maan and Geet left from there and set on the chairs outside of the room.

Geet-Maan abhi to mamma ke discharge me time hai. If you want you can go to office.

Maan-No I will not leave you here alone as they can call anytime for completing the formalities for discharge .so I wil go to office only after dropping you and aunty at home.

Geet-Hmm...and they set quietly for some time..

Nurse had given sponge bath to Sudha ..and another nurse came there with a ward boy to take sudha for some tests.Geet was ready to go with her mother but Nurse asked her to stop there only as she would not be allowed to enter the test room. And geet agreed.she set there with maan. Maan was wacthing Geet .He didn't want to do that but was finding himself unable to stop himself from doing that.One moment came when Geet looked at him and he instantly turned his eyes from her face.

He took a deep breath as he was just to be caught.

Nurse brought back Sudha after doing some tests and informed them to complete the formalities of the discharge.

Maan-Geet you pack your things.I will do the formalities.

Geet-Maan..I..I.. will do that. why are you ..

Maan-Geet what are you talking ? Do you think that Sudha aunty ke bill mujhe nahin pay karne chahiye.He asked him as he was questioning her

Geet bent her face , thought for some time and said-I m sorry...aap jaaiye main mamma ko ready karti hoon.Maan nodded and left.

After Sudha was discharged Maan and Geet made her settled on the back seat of the car with her leg streched on full seat and Geet set on the passernger seat.and again Maan liked that..and he did not know why?

After reaching home .Sudha was carried in side the house on a wheel chair. she will need it for next two weeks.they helped her to settle on her bed ..Geet asked servant to bring lunch for her mother.

After the servant brought the lunch for Sudha she asked Maan and Geet to have their lunch.

Geet-Mamma you finish first..

Sudha-Geet I m in home now so don't worry..servant hain wo dekh lenge...aur phir maan ko bhi to office jana hai na..usko der ho rahi hai.

And Geet said-Theek hai Mamma ..and she took maan with her for lunch.

Geet asked Maan to sit on the chair and she went in to the kitchen to ask the servant to serve the lunch.

While having the lunch Geet took proper care of Maan if he was eating well or not.It was veri obvious for Geet as he was her guest right now but for Maan it was something which was forcing him to think in some other sense as his mind was losing his control over his heart slowly.

At night he decided to not to think in that way about her but he was finding himself some where helpless. Geet's every gesture was leaving a diifrent impression on him though he knew that she was behaving like she always behaved.

After lunch Maan went to Sudha's room and asked for the leave and told her to come in the evening again.Geet went to see him off.Maan was going to sit in the car but he saw that geet was little bit tensed.He came near her and asked-Geet is there any problem?

Geet-Maan tomorrow papa and rahul will return and I m feeling guilty for not taking proper care of mamma..I know they will not say anything to me but I m still nervous..Maan aap rahoge kal mere saath jab papa n Rahul aayenge ..please..

Maan was again shocked to see Geet asking for his help even to face her own father and brother..he said-Geet it's okey but they are your own father and brother..how can you talk about them like this.

Geet -I know Maan but today I can understand why Mamma said to me that shadi ke baad ladki maayke me guest hoti hai. I can feel today the meanings of her words. M feeling little bit nervous . I m feeling that I m answerable to them as they gave me her responsibility.Maan please be here tomorrow..please

Maan- Geet.you don't need to do request ..I will be here tomorrow. I wiil go and pick up them srom the airport..and he teased her..phir mujhe dekh kar wo tumhen nahin daatenge.. sasuraal walon ke saamne wo kuchh nahin bolenge and listening this Geet laughed -yehh you are right.

Maan- Geet tum chinta mat karo main uncle aur Rahul ko le aaunga..and he went from there Geet too went to Sudha's room and laid near her..Sudha petted on her head and Geet snuggled more in to her mother.

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Maan reached the office .he was not there yesterday first because of meeting and then after that he went to hospital.today too since morning he was with Geet and Sudha.

And Now It was time to give some lessons to that receptionist.He called her in to her cabin.she came and knocked at the door.

Maan-Come in

She came in and wished him-Good after noon sir.

Maan-Hmm miss .. kya naam hai tumhara.. leave it.did some one call in last two days.

Receptionist-No sir No one called

Maan-Are you sure ? I mean some one called me who wanted to talk to me urgently?

She tried to remember -No sir

Maan was burning with anger and shouted -theek se yaad karo

Rec.-Sir no one called but yes a girl called you she wanted to ntalk to you but sir I caught her as she was lying.

Maan-What did she say?you asked her who she was?

Recep.- Yes sir she wanted to talk to you very urgently by lieing about you. You know sir she told me that she was your brother's wife but I instantly caught her ..Sir I know that you don't have any brother.

She was saying that very proudly.Maan just wanted to throw her out but He controled as he promised geet to not to fire her.

Man-from how many days you are working here?

Recep.I m working here from three weeks sir.

Maan -and how many times you have come in this cabin?

Recep.-Sir I come daily here to instruct he office boy to clean this cabin and I come some times for some other works too.

Maan -have you ever noticed the picture on the wall behind ne ?

Recep.Yes sir it's your pic. And her eyes widened to see the picture on the wall there she saw a pic of Maan and Yash

(Thanks to-Sudipa Tonni)

She was shocked-Sir ye ye tasveer..I m sorry sir

Maan-Did you ever think once if she was telling you the truth.If you didn't know at least you could ask from some one about her.You were new here so it was not sure that you knew our whole family..How dare you ..how could you talk like that with her..Did you know why she called me ..her mother was admitted in the hospital and she was all alone to handle there..tumhaari sorry ka kya krta main agar wahaan kuchh ho jata to..Listen to me for the very first and the last time.don't take the decision on your own in this office and even someone is lieing according to you then confirm it from some old employee.Aaj tum yahaan meri baat sun pa rahi ho to that's because of Geet only ,other wise kal ka din tumhara job ka aakhri din hota...So dare you if you do that again..I will not give you another chance..

Recep-Sir I m very sorry .. I will ask for the forgiveness from Geet maam too.

Maan-that will be better..Now go and do your work carefully.

Recep.Thanks Sir..and one more time ..Sorry I will not do that again.

Maan-Hmm..and he got busy in his work.He had told his interior designers and achitect to to prepare the design for the FH for Geet .And they were already on their work.

Precap-Some more happenings which push maan's heart towards Geet


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Baby looney toons disney gifs Yeh Dance First aane ke liye...😆 unique dance haina...😉bunny dance...(I'm imagining Ranbir kapoor in this Dance😉😆)


Maan toh Gaya Kaam se Lagne wala hain prem rog...pehle choti choti baatein notice karega...phir pasand karne lage aur pyaar bhi hojayega...

Scary dream tha Rashmi...Par usne Arpita ka naam nahi Geet ka naam liya...Samjho Maan babu...u dont want to loose her😉

First symptom of Love - Sleepless nights...Accomplished...😆What next...

Maan is trying hard to control...par usse nahi horaha hai...staring sessions...Second symptom😉😆

Ankahi baatein bhi samajhne laga hai...another symptom...😛


My Fav part----Maan's nice class to the receptionist...

Woh kaisi receptionist bangayi yaar...common sence hain.ki hume kuch pata nahi ho toh kisi se poochte hain jinko pata hain...usse woh bhi nahi hain...kisne rakha usse job pe...


Maan aur Yash ki pic Achi hai...


Bach gayi Geet ki wajah se woh receptionist...

Toh geet jaldhi Office Join karne wali hai...tab kya karega Maan...Sambhal payega apni Dil Ko...


Wonderful Part Rashmi......Thank you for the Pollution Free .i Mean Taiji free Update😉


Yeh tumhare liye...



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maan having a dream about them
he is confused about the dream
he si not understanding why is he thinking in such a way
maan angry on the girl for ignoring geet's call
loved it
Edited by valli30 - 11 years ago
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awesome part..
maan is thinking about geet only
he dont want to think about her
but who can control the heart which is pulling him towards her
her every small things attract her..
bichara maan..
couldnot even sleep dreaming about geet
the dream 2 says he cares for geet..
nice class to receptionist..
maan has fallen for her..
now when will geet fall for him..
thank you..no taiji😆
Edited by valli22 - 11 years ago
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ab maan tho gaya kaam se
bechara kitna try karraha hai geet ke baaremein nahi sochne keliye par uska dil aur dimaag dono dhoka derahi hai


dekhna yeh hai ki aagay aagay kaise wo apne aap ko control karpayega geet ko yeh ehsaas nahi hone ka ki wo kya sochtha hai geet ke baaremein
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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now maan started having feeling for geet

good to see
pls contd dear & also take care

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