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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

yes and i shared it on fb too😉


omg di😲
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qYpD-DdSab8&feature=youtu.be

ye rahi hindi song ka link
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: valli30


omg di😲
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qYpD-DdSab8&feature=youtu.be

ye rahi hindi song ka link




nahi khul raha hai valli...saying its private
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nahi khul raha hai valli...saying its private


di check it now
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haa ab khula...dekh rahi hoon...guru ka song haina
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Originally posted by: -indu-



haa ab khula...dekh rahi hoon...guru ka song haina

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Part-24

It was the day when Gautam and Rahul were coming back from Bangalore..they came out of the airport and were surprised to see maan who was there to pick them up.

Gautam-Maan you here?

Maan-yes uncle actually I thought to pick u up because I came here for some work.

Rahul-Maan is every thing alright?

Mann-yes ..Rahul everything is fine.

Gautam-How are Geet and Sudha? I talked Sudha yesterday but couldn't call today as we had lot's of work and had to leave for airport so didn't get time.

Maan-ji wo dono bhi theek hain.

But Rahul could see that Maan was not talking comfotably.

Rahul-Maan mujhe lagta hai I kuchh to hai jo theek nahin hai.

Maan-Actually uncle ..wo sudha aunty s BP got very high on the next day after you left and she fainted in washroom .The washbasin which she held for support fell on her leg and she had an hair line fracture.

Gautam-What? OMG Is she fine now?Sudha bhi na ..she is very careless about herself..

Maan-Yes Uncle aunty is fine now she has a plaster on her leg but Geet is very nervous as she thinks that she couldn't take proper care of aunty . so she asked me to be there with her at the time you reach home.that's why I came to pick u up .I wanted to tell you this before reaching the home.so that you don't feel shocked to see aunty in that condition.

Rahul-Is Mamma is fine now? But tumne pahle kyun nahin bataya Maan?

Maan-kya hota ..aap log tensed ho jaate .and that day Geet was al alone as I too was busy in a meeting in some government office, so my phone was not with me .She handled everything on her own

Gautam- OH no...bechari Geet but I m happy that Geet is very responsible now..

They reached home..came inside and went to the bedroom where Sudha was.Geet too was there.She saw them and came towards rahul and Gautam.she hugged her father and said-Sorry papa.I couldn't take proper care of mamma.and tears were ready to spill from her eyes.Maan was surprised to see this Geet, he couldn't believe if it was the same Geet who handled every thing so bravely and maturely.Now seeing her father she was ready to cry.

Gautam-patted on her head and kissed her -Geet why are you saying sorry.it could have happened even in our presence.But Maan told us how you handled everything alone .meri beti bahut badi ho gayi hai ab.Darr kyun rahi thi tum..I know you have another family now but still we are your parents and you are the same Geet for us.

Rahul-Haan par ek baat hai Geet... He said very seriously-..I know mamma and papa picked you from the garbage but we consider you as a part of our family.arrey bek baar jise apna man liya to maan liya ..phir peechhe nahin hat te hum.

Maan -What are you saying Rahul? Are you serious?

Rahul-Arrey you don't know ?

Geet-Rahul just shut up...don't say a word or I will kill you...

Rahul -haan haan kyun nahin ..tere gharwalon ko bhi to pata chale what the reality is..what a devil you are (To Maan)Maan mamma didn't give birth to her she was lying on garbage and crying loudly.mamma saw and she melted to see a beautiful doll like that .So she brought her home.Geet tumne bataya nahin kabhi Maan ko?

Geet was seeing her brother with her open mouth.and she cribbed-Papa see na ..and she started to hit him with her fists

Gautam-rahul shut up ..meri beti ko tang mat karo.I know that you are jealous of her because we love her more than you.

Geet-yes you are right papa.he is jealous of me.Rahul .mamma loves me more that's why you always say so..

Rahul -yes I know she loves you more as you are not her daughter.I m her own son so she always tried to make you comfortable here..as you were outsider..and he teased her again..

Sudha now had to interupt-Rahul bas bhi karo ab..

Rahul-Okey. And he hugged Geet"sorry yaar bas tumhen dekha to mann kiya tumhen irritate karne ka..as I was missing this fight from so many days.

Geet-Hmm I know and I too missed you a lot.

Maan was watching the fight between Geet and Rahul.he was amused to see how Rahul distracted Geet from the topic and she like a kid involved in that fight forgetting about that guilt.

It was almost eight months when Geet became the part of the family still there was so much left to know about her.Maan has witnessed so many colors of Geet.one day she was a sensible and mature girl next day a scred girl who was fearing to face her own father and brother and now she was just a kid who was ready to fight with her brother on a very small issue.She knew that Rahul was lieing still she was annoyed at him.and one hug from her brother ..all her irritation vanished in the air in seconds.

Man-I think I should go now

Sudha -No Maan first have something..

Geet-yes.. maan please wait for some time I wll bring tea for all and she left

Gautam came near Sudha-Sudha how are you now...maine kaha tha na ki apna khayaal rakhna..I m sure you forgot to take the medicine at night..

Sudha-Ji I m really sorry ..meri wajah se Geet ko bhi kitni pareshani hui.Maan too has to come.

Maan-Come on aunty why are you talking like this?on the other hand I too couldn't come when you and Geet needed me.

Gautam-chalo chhodo ye sab.. jo hona tha ho gaya..ab hum bhi aa gaye hain na.so leave it..

Sudha -But I m feeling bad that she was here for few days and couldn't live here peacefully.

Geet entered with Tea-Aap se kisne kaha mamma that I was not happy.I m so happy to be with you all..

All had tea while chatting .Between their talks Rahul was making weird comment to irritate Geet and she was making faces to hear his talks..

Geet-Rahul just one chance and you are gone ..dekh lena main chhodungi nahin tumko.

Maan shook his head seeing that both are so fight lover.He finished his tea and asked for leave.

Rahul-Maan thanks a lot for being there for them.

Maan-Come on Rahul you don't need to say it.

Geet-Mamma main maan ko bahar tak chhod ke aati hoon.and Maan couldn't ask for more. He left with her..they reached near his car

Geet-Maan thanks for everything you did for me..and her sentence melted like a song in his ears..and he thought- Did I do every thing for her?

Geet-Maan maa ko boliyega ki main kuchh din aur yahin rahoongi mamma ke saath.

Maan-Theek hai I will tell her.Bye and take care

Geet-Hmm.. you too. Bye... and he left..from there.

Later he imformed at home about what Geet said.

Priya -Theek hai..I will talk to her.

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Next day went as usaual for maan .he was busy with office work.In the evening he turned his car towards HM and soon he realized it that it was not good now to go there as Rahul and Gautam were back so Sudha and Geet did not need him now.But he again thought-so what Sudha aunty ko dekhne to ja hi sakta hoon na

But his mind stopped him-No Maan you can ask it from Rahul on phone too as there would be no change in her condition..she is having a plaster and it will be removed only after 10 days. Yesterday you saw her.so no need.it won't look good to go there daily.

Maan -but Geet se milne ja sakta hoon ?

Mind-Why? you met her too Yesterday.She is not here for ever she will come to your house after few days only.Maan this is the right time to check your feeling for her here itself.I know that you are feeling yourself being pulled by her but she doesn't have any feeling like this.This is wrong Maan. If she knows what you think about her, she will be hurt. she thinks you as her friend and the brother of her husband. Don't deceive her faith on you Maan.

Maan-But I know that she is my brother's wife ..ussi rishte se to ja sakta hoon na.

Mimd-Be honest Maan...You don't want to go there for your brother's sake..you have something else in your mind

Maan was very confused.Finally he decided to not to go..He reached home .After change he came down ..he spent some time there with family to forget his inner war but they too were mentioning Geet every now and then in their conversation so he left from there too.

That night too Maan saw same dream again and he was forced to think what that dream meant but he was not successful to come to any conclusion. He was very frustrated as he was stuck between what to do and what to not.

Every evening he had an argument with his mind and his mind won every time as he too was thinking somewhere that he was wrong on a moral ground..

Priya daily talked Geet and Sudha to know about the progress of Sudha's condition.Taiji was at peace as she was not seeing geet roaming around the house.She was thinking -It's good that she is there and I wish that she never comes here.and she will be saved from trown out of the house by me...

After a weak

Maan was going to office..He received a call .It was from his secretary-GM sir .Today we have called the aaplicants who sent their CV for the posts in FH to work with Geet maam..

Maan-And you are telling it today .Why didn't you tell me before?

Secreatary-I m very sorry sir..You were very busy for some days so I couldn't inform you..

Maan-it's okey n but in future inform me in advance.

Cesretary-Sure sir and very sorry again.

Maan looked at his watch.

He called Geet but she didn't pick up the phone..He decided to go and pick her up himself ..He turned his car towards HM and for his surprise his mind didn't stop him today as he had a very genuine reason ..as the car was moving towards HM his heart was at peace and wanted to jump out of his body to do a dance...

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HM

Geet was up and had her tea.She was in no mood to take a bath as she was feeling very lazy.Servant informed her that BF was ready .

She asked servant to serve the BF and she decided to call every one.Sudha was very used to her plaster so could move on wheel chair easily.she went to her parent's room and asked them to come and have breakfast.Then she went into Rahul's room .She went in as she never knocked at his room..She found him lying lazily and she noticed that he was staring at something..She went near him with silent steps and saw that he was staring at Anie's piture.A smile came on to her lips and then an old bubbly and naughty Geet woke up in to her.His back was towards the door and was lost in Anie so couldn't sense Geet there.She put her one knee on his bed bent on him and snatched the picture from him.

Rahul was just shocked to see her he turned and saw Geet there and said-Geet kya kar rahi hai ..

Geet-You tell what you were doing? Today I got the chance and now I m going to show this picture to mamma n papa..

Rahul -Geet yaar it's not a joke ..Give the picture back

Geet-Nahin I wont..try if you can..

And she ran out of the room leaving him behind.Rahul-Oh no she looks serious. what if she shows the picture to mamma papa. And he too ran after her calling her name.

Soon their voices could be heard in HM.Gautam and Sudha felt happy to see their kids fighting like before.

Gautam-I missed this in our home.

Sudha-You are right .Geet ke aane se jaise raunak aa gayi hai.

Geet was running ahead and Rahul behind her.Her intention was only to tease rahul and she was not serious so she didn't go where their parents were.She ran outside of the house..She was looking back again and again as she wanted to see how far rahul was from her.she was giggling at the condition of her brother as he was hell worried for his secret to be opened before his parents.Geet one more time looked back and there she bumped in to some one and fell on the ground taking that person under her.She closed her eyes as she found herself falling on the ground but landed on some soft yet a hard frame..As her eyes were closed so she could not see who the person was whom she bumped in to.. but that person was not able to remove his gaze from her face. He didn't care that he was on the muddy ground.He was seeing her from so close for the very first.Geet was panting badly as she war running..He was spellbound by the beauty that was very near him..he moved his hand to touch that face and same time Geet too realised that she didn't touch the ground. She was safe and she opened her eyes and looked at the person and her eyes got wider -Maan aap... and Maan came to his senses as he heard her voice.

But unfortunately this scene was missed by Rahul as he was so worried for the picture .The time Geet bumped in to Maan ,the picture was out of her grip. Rahul's full attention was on the picture only and In the effort to pick the picture before Geet took it again Rahul missed all the the expressions of Maan.At that time any one could guess easily by seeing him what was going in his mind.

Geet tried to get up but couldn't as she was so embarrassed to see herself in that position.She murmurred a quick sorry and tried to get up.Maan was back to his sense so he said-Geet araam se..warna phir se gir jaaogi..and he helped her in getting her up from himself.Rahul turned and saw the scene infront of his eyes and he was shocked-Maan..OMG Geet ye tumne kya kiya?

Geet-Maine ?..Miane kya kiya Rahul.

Rahul came and held her hand and made her stand on her feet.

Rahul -See Geet what have you done to him..It seems that he was going to office and now what is his condition..Geet looked at Maan and saw his clothes were covered with mud as the lawn was wet with dew.

Geet put her hand on her mouth-OH no.. Maan I m so sorry..Rahul stupid ye sab tumhaari wajah se hua.tum agar mere peechhe nahin aate to ye sab nahin hota..I will clean it.. and she tried to dust all the mud with her hands from maan but it had only a otherwise reaction on him.He was looking at her lost as she was dusting all the mud from his clothes-.Maan I m really very sorry...ab aap kya karoge.. she asked innocently to him.Maan controled him self and said -It's okey ..I have another set of clothes with me.. don't worry.

Geet-Thank God.Come in and change your clothes.they all went in and Sudha saw Maan and then his clothes-Maan what happened beta..tumhaare kapde kaise gande o gaye.

Rahul was laughing to see Geet all enbarrrassed-Mamma jab toofan saamne se guzarta hai to everything is under it's effect. koi kaise bach sakta hai..aapke iss Geet naam ke toofaan se

Maan instantly smiled to remember that he too called her toofaan mail.and he was very right she was really not less than a toofaan.

Maan- Kuchh nahin aunty I slipped in the lawn and kapde gande ho gaye.but don't worry I have another set with me.

Gautam-Okey.but you here so early?

Maan-Ji wo aaj Geet ke FH ke liye interviews hain .my scretary forgot to inform in advance.She called me now and I thought to take Geet with me.FH ke designs bhi ready hain wo dekh legi.

Geet-But how can I go? Mamma ko chhodkar.kaise

Gautam-Don't worry Geet aaj office me kuchhjyada kaam nahin hai .Rahul will see that .I will stay at home with Sudha today..tum jaao aur ready ho jaao.

Geet-Ji papa..Maan aap Rahul ke room me change kar lijiye...and I m really sorry for that

Maan nodded and went to Rahul's room.and he was not able to forget that view which he witnessed few minutes before when Geet was on him and he could still feel her heavy breathes on his face...He could feel a warmness in his skin...he wanted to shrug his feelings but that scene was dancing in front of his eyes...

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3h1nE6catfI[/YOUTUBE]

(This is the title track of SR.punarvivah-uploaded by-smavia95 and suggested by-maangeetforever..it's a very melodious track and perfectly fits to Maaneet)

(Thank u girls)

HOOO

naino se ye mil kar nainaa jaane kyun phir jhuk jaate hain.

Aage badhte hi kadam ye jaane kyun phir ruk jaate hai.

Dhadkano se hai guzarish dor me ye baandh le jaaye hamen ...eee

har uljhan ko suljhaayen kasak meethi si de jaayen

har uljhan ko suljhaayen kasak meethi si de jaayen

akhir dil hai na .. dil hain na

ye dil hai ye dil hai ye dil haiii

sab iss dil ki hi to mushkil hai.

ye dil hai ye dil hai ye dil haiii

sab iss dil ki hi to mushkil hai.

(I will use this song in pieces in my future updates like the title tracks are used in serials)

He closed his eyes in frustration and chided to himself-Maan shut up ..be in control..You know it's not good for yourself...he scolded himself again and again and came out after changing his clothes

Precap-few more moments between Maaneet showing their understanding and some romantic moments between Rahul and anie...😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
Main phir se first aayi...

Nice update...


Ladkiya kitni parayi hojati hain yaar shaadi ke baad...apne father ko face karne se bhi darr rahi hain...jab uski koi galti nahi hain...usse maan ko kehna padha...

yeh toh har ghar mein hota hain...bhai aur behen ki tu tu main main...really enjoyed and thankyou for reminding my premarital days...


Dil aur dimag ki ladai shuru hogayi...dekhte hain kya hota hain...

Maan babu toh bure phase...geet ke aankhon mein bhi kho gaye...😆



Do continue Soon...

A big Hug to u for the lovely update...🤗



Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
geet is afraid of gautam's reacationa nd she asked maan help
uff waisi hi maan ka dil aaj kal usko pareshan kartha hai
ab geet dauthe hue maan par giri tho kya hua bechare ka😉
maan scolding himself to control his feelings
loved it
Edited by valli30 - 11 years ago
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lunch ke liye gayi thi
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wow..maan is totally in love with .geet toofanmail

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