SS "tum jo aaye jindagi me"LAST UPDATE ST15 ON PG43 - Page 21

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: veena23


hehehe...han is gane par aur bhi vm bne hain to maine usko like kiya tha to wo mere channl pr show karta h apne whi dekha hoga...qki mne ise posting k bad public kiya tha uske pehle private hone ki wajah se ye block show karta h public ko...aap ise dekhengi to pta chal jayega ki ye alag h 

achha samji๐Ÿ˜†...ok mein dekhti hoon...same hai ki alag. muje nahi pata eisa bhi hota hai karke. dekhkar batati hoon yahi dekha tha kya ki dusra dekha tha
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Posted: 10 years ago
haan yeh who nahi hai๐Ÿ˜ฒ...isme first season ke scenes hai aur jo meine dekha tha usme new season matlab chatt wale scenes se starting tha...aur saare wahi scenes the๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandhyasn

haan yeh who nahi hai๐Ÿ˜ฒ...isme first season ke scenes hai aur jo meine dekha tha usme new season matlab chatt wale scenes se starting tha...aur saare wahi scenes the๐Ÿ˜•

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Edited by veena23 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok..maine likhna to shuru kar diya but ab ye tital suit nhi kar rha h...qki ab jindgi  me ate to nhi h...ab jindgi me aa gye hain...to ise badlna padega...to sabse pehle nam badlte hain...but badal k bhi  aisa rakhna padega jo isi nam se relate hota ho...wrna public communicate nhi kar payegi...so aftr so much thinking...main iska nam rakhne ja rhi hu..

"tum jo aye zindgi me"

hope ye work karega..chalo ab dusri baat...ye story m situations par likh rhi thi to abhi tak situation dono ko milane ki thi...ab to dono mil chuke h...now what??...to ab soch rhi hu ki mil to gye hain par eksath to hain ek hona baki h...to ab ek hone ki situation dhundhni h...ki kitni aisi situation creat ho sakti h..jo do dost lekin phir bhi ajnabee type k logo k beech pyar paida kar sakti h...lets try ...hopefully kuchh achha nikal kar aaye...ok moving on updates...hamne story jab shuru ki thi tabhi bataya tha ki raya ki shaadi ho chuki h...to hum wapas whi pahonch gye hain..

SITUATION 10

"ek question h yar"

rampriya window par khade hokar barish ko dekh rhe hain...finally dono ki shaadi ho gyi...dono kamre me ekdusre ki baho me hain...kafi der se dono bate kar rhe the...apne safar ko yad kar rhe hote hain...kafi der bad ram bolta hai...

Ram...priya hum kya sari rat aise hi khade rhenge..??

Priya ram ki tarf dekhti h wo uske bht kareeb rhta h...jab   priya ram ki trf dekhti h to ram ko bhi ehsas hota h ki priya uske bht kareeb h...dono ekdm se action me aa jate hain aur ekdusre ko chhod kar thoda dur khade ho jate hain...aur ekdusre ki ankho me dekhte hain...aaj jab wo ekdusre ki ankho me dekhte hain to sabkuchh alag sa rhta h..kuchh bht ajeeb sa...kal tak to sab kuchh theek tha aaj nazare kyun nhi mila pa rhe hain...dono k deemag me yhi chal rha hota h ki dosti dosti karke ye dono kahan aa gye...

Priya...wo...m...pta nhi..m..

Ram..han..bht...der ho gyi...m...tum...dekh lo...kahan sona h

priya...m...m kya dekh lu...ye to...ap hi btayenge...na...ki...kahan sona h

ram...han...actully...sona..to...h...to..bed pr hi soyenge na...

Ufff...dono ajeeb harkate karne lagte hain...ram bistr theek karne lagta h to priya bhi ake bistr theek karne lagti h...dono faltu me kamre me idhar udhar cheeze karne lagte hain...actully dono ko ab samjh aya ki dosti dosti karke wo shaadi k mod tak pahonch gye hain aur shaadi k bad bht kuchh karna padta h...dosti shaadi ki sirf ek kadi ho sakti h..shaadishuda jindgi bitane ka jariya nhi...shaadishuda jindgi k liye aur bhi bht kuchh karna padta h...dosti k sahare jindgi nhi kati ja sakti h...dosti rishto ko khubsurat bnane k liye hoti h..par rishte ko mazbut bnane k liye..trust love aur cmpatibilty chahiye...aur wo ye dono kahan se laye...ufff...ye to...kya se kya ho gya...ab inko samjh nhi aa rha h ki kya kare to idhar udhar kar rhen hain...phir thodi der bad...

Priya...mr.kapoor kya faltu me idhar udhar kar rhen h ...sone ki jagah btaiye...

Ram...han han...h na ye bed...tum jis taraf sona chaho so jao...

Priya ko kuchh  Samjh nhi ata h to wo bed par ek tarf muh karke late jati h...ram bhi aakr dusri tarf so jata h...aur light off kar deta h...jab light off karta h to priya thoda dar jati h dono kuchh der waise hi pade rhte hain...neend to kisi ko aa rhi nhi thi...phir bhi dono sone ki nakam si koshis kar rhe hote h...pr koi fayeda nahi hota...dono ek sath hi mudhte hain aur ekdusre k amne samne ho jate hain...dono k hath takra jate hain to dono jhat se uth k baith jate hain...

Ram...are yar priya..bht problm h yar kuchh samjh nhi aa rha h

priya...same here

ram...bht ajeeb lag rha h...

Priya...mujhe bhi

ram...ek sawal ghum rha h deemag me...

Priya...mere bhi

ram...to puchho na

priya...nahi aap puchhiye

ram..are..puchho na

priya...ok ok...actully pls aap glt mat samjhiyega...main bas ye soch rhi thi...ki humne actully shadi kyun ki???

Ram...are bura manne ki kya bat h...main bhi to yhi soch rha hu...kyun shaadi ki humne...??..isliye ki hum achhe dost h...ya isliye ki logo ne hame glt samjha??

Priya...ya isliye ki hum ekdusre ko kisi aur k sath nhi dekh sakte...ya isliye ki hum hamesha sath rhna chahte hain???

Ram...are sare option to sahi hi lag rhe hain...

Priya...han...lekin in sare options k sath sari jindagi to nhi kati ja sakti h na...

Ram...whi to...upar se log kehte hain ki shaadi k bad jindgi aur rishto k mayne badal jate hain,...to kya hamare sath bhi aisa hoga??

Priya...shayad..mujhe kya pta yar...mne to pehli bar shaadi ki h..

Ram...o hello maine bhi pehli hi bar ki h...aur akhiri bhi...qki dubara ye situation face karne ka petience mere pas nhi h...

Priya...vry funny...

Ram...are par ab kare kya??

Priya...karenge kya??..jee k dekhte hain shaadishuda zindgi kabhi to pta chal hi jayega ki kyun shaadi ki..

Ram...to hame bhi wo sab karna padega jo sab karte hain...

Priya...han whats the option...lets try..

Ram...abhi...???

Priya...are to shaadi abhi hui to abhi se hi karenge tabhi to settle ho payenge...

Ram...par thoda jaldi nhi h???

Priya...are jaldi..jaldi kya h...insab cheezo k result me bht time lagta h to jaldi to karna padega...

Ram...r u sure???

Priya...ofcourse i am very sure...

Ram...ok phir shuru karte hain...

Ram priya k pas aa jata h..

Priya...kya???

Ram aur pas aa jata h...

Priya...are mr.kapoor kya kar rhen hain aap??

Ram...whi jo tumne kaha

priya...kya kaha main???

Ram...tumne hi to kaha abhi se shuru karte hain...

Priya...han toh...

Ram...han toh main shuru kar rha hu...

Priya ram ko dur jhatak deti h...aur ajeeb se dekhti h...

Ram...kya h???

Priya hasne lagti h jor jor

ram...are kya h yar???

Priya...apne kya samjh liya...?...main jindgi naye tareeke se shuru karne ki bat kar rhi thi...

Ram jhenp jata h...nazare churane lagta h...priya hasti hi ja rhi h...

Ram...shutup...so jao chupchap...

Priya...hahaha...han han so hi jati hu wrna aap shuru ho gye to bht dikkat ho jayegi...gudnight...

Ram...huh...

Dono do tarf muh karke so jate hain...but ab thode relax rhte hain...qki unhe ye to pta h Ki wo ek sath ek achhi jindgi ji sakte hain theek h settl hone me thoda time lagega...lekin to kya hua...us time ko fillr samjh k enjoy karenge yar...qki samay se pehle aur kismat se jyada kisi ko kuchh nhi milta h...to kismat ne eksath kiya h...to ek bhi karegi,,...dekhte hain aage aage kya hota h...

Next morning...

Dono ek achhi si neend se jagte hain...ab samne ek sapno jaisi jindgi h jise haqeeqat me badlna h...

Ram...so vry gudmornin mrs kapoor...nayi jindgi ki nayi subah ho gyi h..

Priya...han mr.kapoor..to phir nayi jindgi ka naya safar shuru karen...??

Ram...eksath...

Priya...bilkul

to b continue... 
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Posted: 10 years ago
raya: tum Jo aye zandagi mein ya aye ho meri zandagi mein...ik baat tuh common hui Bahar zaroor ayi hai life mein.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.. ๐Ÿคฃ n dii title Jo bhi ho communicate karne wale kar le Ge๐Ÿ˜Š...n update five 9 hai ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘love their chemistry n sub se maze ki cheez care hai Jo yeh iK dusre ki karte ...care means love ki initial stage ...n yeh update mein ne tum Jo aye song laga ki read ki ...n agar reply mein koi mistake ho tuh sorry ..net shutdown hai n mobile data slow hai...n thanksss Jo aap hum sub ke liye itni fast fast updates deti ho ,,,,,hayeee aaj mera lucky day hai diii   net re start  ho gaya phir band naa ho sooo jaldi jaldi mein edit ker rahi hon๐Ÿ˜†iss dafa ka favourite scene ram ka hunky punky scene tha๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†bechare kaya kuch samajh bathe...update par meri side se โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธn one more thing yahan ist mein hn๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Edited by NAZIANISAR1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wah kya mast update tha...hehe...rambabu abb golu nahi rahe lagte hain ya phir jyaada hi golu ho gaye hain...but what a fantastic idea yaar...solid maal... ๐Ÿ˜‰ ...abb jaldi se update karna...rambabu se aur raha nahi ja raha hai...
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Posted: 10 years ago
mast update di...!!!
hehehehehe...ram babu kya soch baithy...!!!๐Ÿคฃ
acha hua priya ne rok liya aur smjha diya...!!!

contn soon...!!


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Posted: 10 years ago

yaar veena tumne inn dono ko nahi milaya๐Ÿ˜†...ram shuru kar raha tha toh roka kyun karne deti tabhi nhe pata chalta ki love trust aur compatibility kaise banta hai. dono ke ajeeb ajeeb sawa ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†. achha hua inki shaadi shekhar aur shikha se nahi hone diya warna who dono bhaag jaate๐Ÿ˜†

continue soon and thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thx for the PM.
Yaar acchja fasa deti ho , raya ko ek Neah fasa sakti hai ya fir veena.
lekin baar veena ne fasaaya toh raya ka jeetna na mumkin ho jaata hai..
well done, do dostoan ki jinki shaadi hoti hai unki awkwardness perfectly written..
loved it ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ram ka chehara dekhna tha us situation mei...๐Ÿคฃvery nice update.. waiting to see more updates like this.. thanks for pm๐Ÿ˜›