Second chance- a KriYansh poem

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Silence and soltitude is where I reside... ,
World and people , they dont't exist for me when you aren"t besides .
Happiness and joy , ah they are far fetched dreams...
Cries and tears ...they take me to.memory down the lane...
Where only us existed ...there were no curses , no banes

Love is what completed us...love ws what left me incomplete ,
With you every moment seemed timeless...without you.the clock has stood still .
I wish moving on was as simple as it did sound ,
But what should I do my love , with every step I move forward ...more into you I drown .

No my love , regret is the last moment I would name..
To the bond you and I ,with time had gained .
As your mere presence made me believe in life ,
I have laughed ,I have cried ...with every moment I have lived you. I had felt alive.

Days now don't have a new beginning ,
Nights are dim and dead
Why do I still breathe , why do my pulse still craves...
You , your love is the answer ...to all your questions vague.
And I stand by the door ...as I wait for a second chance.paves...




-XXX-
This was an impromptu idea that struck to me ...how had kria been all these years , what kept her alive and what reyansh meant to her ...as according to my pov this poem says it all .
So please review ...iall sorts of reviews are welcome ...

Btw how r u guys ...came to this forum after ages ...I am mahi btw ...my old username was kriyansh117...
And ignore the typos ...IFing thru cell sucks big time

-Mahi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow this is deeply heart-rendering
You are truly an amazing poet
Great job!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arshalicious

Wow this is deeply heart-rendering

You are truly an amazing poet
Great job!! 👍🏼


Hey thats a huge compliment
Thanks alot🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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commendable Job Mahi..
Thumb's up 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Shukti--

commendable Job Mahi..

Thumb's up 👍🏼

Thanks Shukti🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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U nailed it dude ...

Heart touching re...

love it ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank uuu Asma 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heart-touching poem Mahi<3

its jst bful 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angel56

U nailed it dude ...


Heart touching re...

love it ..


Thank uu angelll dear
Glad u found it worth reading 😃 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kuhu_Arsha

<font color="#6600ff">heart-touching poem Mahi<3
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[IV][DIV]<font color="#6600ff">its jst bful👏</font>

thank uu kuhu swtyy
Glad uliked it 😃

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