My repesentation of DK scene of 13th Mar

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Friends this is the way I would represent the Dev-Kaajal scene of today's episode. I hope you all like it. I am quoting almost all of the original dialogues. So here we go.

Kaajal (Knocking at the window) asks Dev to please open the door, as she wants to speak to him.

Dev starts the car and Kaajal goes and stands in front of the car, thus managing to stop him. He asks her to move aside but she refuses and thus he gets out of the car and walks to the building under construction.

Hottie-Bua-Satya-Dhruv-Daadi scene.

Dev walking towards the building with a hot on the heels Kaajal following him and asking him to stop says that "Stop Dev, I know the truth about you going to die"

Dev stops.

Kaajal: Nothing can change the fact. I know about everything. Aunty told me all. Running will not change anything.

Dev:So what if I am going to die, I can enjoy and fulfill all my last wishes. So what if I will die I shall enjoy every moment to the fullest. Why should it even bother you. I don't have anything to do with you.

Kaajal:No, don't say such things. You know it too that it matters a lot. Your life does not mean everything only to you. It means a lot to me. I know you love me a lot and that's the reason why you did what you did at that hotel that night.

Dev:(Cuts Kaajal off and says)You have no idea why I took you to that hotel that day. Since I am dying, I wanted to fulfill my wish of having you, ravishing and enjoying you. That was one of my many last wishes like these. You don't mean anything more than a plaything to me.

Dev projects a very harsh and rough face to Kaajal. Kaajal absorbs all what Dev says and finally says

K:Okay, so you are telling me that I was only a plaything for you?

D:(Looks away and says)yes

K:You only wanted to have fun for some time and discard me like some used clothing?

D:Frustratingly turns away and says "yes"

K: Ever since you met me this is only what you felt?

D:This time closes his eyes and thinks God how much more lying do I have to do. Remembers his first meeting on the cliff at Mussourie, where he had saved Kaajal. How much more can I hurt the love of my life and forcefully shrieks "yes, how many times do I say Yes, Yes...."

K: Okay, so be it. Then here I am standing right in front of you. I am very much at the same place as that night. Go ahead and ravish me.

Dev is shocked as Kaajal has turned the tables and rebounds his own game back to him. He turns and shockingly looks at Kaajal. She is in the mean time mumbling and taking small sure steps towards Dev

K: Common Dev, ravish me. I won't even try to stop you today.

D: Stop right there. Don't come any closer! (Thinks oh God, if Kaajal touches me now, I will breakdown. I can't bear this any more. I shall never be able to keep her away fom me ever, if she comes close to me today.) Kaajal in the mean time keeps advancing towards Dev. Finally she manages to catch hold of him and there is a scuffle where she tries to take his arm and puts it around her waist and forces herself on Dev. Dev struggles and in his anger loses his control and slaps Kaajal hard to stop her. As this is not what he intended to happen. But, Kaajal is pleased that the truth is out.

K:I knew it , you love me even more than your dear life. This slap is the proof of your love. It is screaming to be heard and it says.....

Dev cuts in saying

D: I love you very much. Yes, Kaajal its true.

He closes his eyes with all the pent up emotions rolling down his eyes in the form of tears. He grabs Kaajal and hugs her. Kaajal too realises that Dev has finally admitted and closes her eyes as if thanking God that Dev verbally admitted it. She too says "I too love you very much Dev"

They both are lost in each other's arms and are mumbling "I love you very much"

Dev breaks the hug but still holds Kaajal in his arms and looks down at her lovingly. He speaks out his emotions that he had to restrain all this time

D: you are my life. I live to see you smile. Your laughter brings joy to my life and I can't see my life without you.

K: Then why, why are you denying it. So what if you are going to die. That brings Dev back to the present with a thud. He pushes himself away from Kaajal saying

D: No, this is not right. Let's go from here. Our coming together is not possible in this life. common lets go from here. Dhruv is waiting for you.

Kaajal on hearing this is shocked and says that on one hand you tell me that you love me and that I am your life and the other hand you are asking me to go to someone else.....

Dev too can't bear of hearing the grief and shock in Kaajal's voice, loses controls again and turns and grabs Kaajal again in a loose hug.But he remembers again and says,"It is wrong for us to come together. Dhruv will keep you very happy." Kaajal pushes his arms away saying, "How can you say that. Dhruv might give me all the happiness in my life, but you are my life and you are my happiness. How can I go away from my life and happiness? Lets become one Dev, for however short the time let us enjoy each other. I shall have all these as sweet memories and I will live my life alone with these beautiful memories of you. Dev sees the tears in her eyes and cannot control himself. He cups her face in his hands and wipes her tears.

D:Please don't cry kaajal, you are making things very hard for me. I can't see you so hurt and in tears. Kaajal breaks down even further and hugs Dev tightly. She rests her forehead on his wide shoulders and says

K: Then why are you giving me these tears. It is in your hands to give me happiness. My smiles are from you, my joy is from you. Then why don't you give them to me? Why do you want to let death come in between us and our union?

On hearing the word of death Dev once again comes to the present situation and pushing Kaajal away says

D:Its not a matter of my death. Its the matter of your death.

Kaajal is puzzled by what Dev syas and questions Dev. So he explains the situation that if they unite then Kaajal will be destined to die. Hearing this Kaajal is overjoyed. Mentally she thanks God that there is a way to finally save Dev, even if it is at the expense of her life. She moves closer to Dev and cups his face lovingly, and she says,

K: So what if I will die, at least we shall be together. I am feeling lucky to be able to save you. To die in the arms of the person I love.

Dev on hearing this hugs Kaajal in desparation. Asking God why does he have to give Kaajal so much pain.

D: No, I can't imagine my life without you. Don't say such things. (He pulls apart a bit and says) I know you love me very much but today I shall ask something from you.(He takes her hand and puts it on his head and looks deeply and lovingly into kaajal's eyes and says) Today I am asking from you not your life but a promise, that I know and believe that you will fulfill. If you don't, then I shall surely die....

Kaajal stops him from uttering those words by covering his lips. With his other hand he holds her hand and asks her smilingly and with loving eyes,

D: For my happiness, please go to Dhruv and get engaged to him today.

Kaajal is shocked and pulls her hands away saying :Please don't ask me to do this. Don't kill me like this. If I go to Dhruv I shall be a dead body walking without any life. My soul will be with you. Please don't ask me such promises. Please don't.

But Dev is very persistent and he with a very heavy heart himself takes Kaajal by her hand and says "Let's go. Everyone alonwith Dhruv are waiting for you."

Kaajal in a shock mumbles "No, please don't , No, please don't and follows Dev..........................

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Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Friends this is the way I would represent the Dev-Kaajal scene of today's episode. I hope you all like it. I am quoting almost all of the original dialogues. So here we go.

Kaajal (Knocking at the window) asks Dev to please open the door, as she wants to speak to him.

Dev starts the car and Kaajal goes and stands in front of the car, thus managing to stop him. He asks her to move aside but she refuses and thus he gets out of the car and walks to the building under construction.

Hottie-Bua-Satya-Dhruv-Daadi scene.

Dev walking towards the building with a hot on the heels Kaajal following him and asking him to stop says that "Stop Dev, I know the truth about you going to die"

Dev stops.

Kaajal: Nothing can change the fact. I know about everything. Aunty told me all. Running will not change anything.

Dev:So what if I am going to die, I can enjoy and fulfill all my last wishes. So what if I will die I shall enjoy every moment to the fullest. Why should it even bother you. I don't have anything to do with you.

Kaajal:No, don't say such things. You know it too that it matters a lot. Your life does not mean everything only to you. It means a lot to me. I know you love me a lot and that's the reason why you did what you did at that hotel that night.

Dev:(Cuts Kaajal off and says)You have no idea why I took you to that hotel that day. Since I am dying, I wanted to fulfill my wish of having you, ravishing and enjoying you. That was one of my many last wishes like these. You don't mean anything more than a plaything to me.

Dev projects a very harsh and rough face to Kaajal. Kaajal absorbs all what Dev says and finally says

K:Okay, so you are telling me that I was only a plaything for you?

D:(Looks away and says)yes

K:You only wanted to have fun for some time and discard me like some used clothing?

D:Frustratingly turns away and says "yes"

K: Ever since you met me this is only what you felt?

D:This time closes his eyes and thinks God how much more lying do I have to do. Remembers his first meeting on the cliff at Mussourie, where he had saved Kaajal. How much more can I hurt the love of my life and forcefully shrieks "yes, how many times do I say Yes, Yes...."

K: Okay, so be it. Then here I am standing right in front of you. I am very much at the same place as that night. Go ahead and ravish me.

Dev is shocked as Kaajal has turned the tables and rebounds his own game back to him. He turns and shockingly looks at Kaajal. She is in the mean time mumbling and taking small sure steps towards Dev

K: Common Dev, ravish me. I won't even try to stop you today.

D: Stop right there. Don't come any closer! (Thinks oh God, if Kaajal touches me now, I will breakdown. I can't bear this any more. I shall never be able to keep her away fom me ever, if she comes close to me today.) Kaajal in the mean time keeps advancing towards Dev. Finally she manages to catch hold of him and there is a scuffle where she tries to take his arm and puts it around her waist and forces herself on Dev. Dev struggles and in his anger loses his control and slaps Kaajal hard to stop her. As this is not what he intended to happen. But, Kaajal is pleased that the truth is out.

K:I knew it , you love me even more than your dear life. This slap is the proof of your love. It is screaming to be heard and it says.....

Dev cuts in saying

D: I love you very much. Yes, Kaajal its true.

He closes his eyes with all the pent up emotions rolling down his eyes in the form of tears. He grabs Kaajal and hugs her. Kaajal too realises that Dev has finally admitted and closes her eyes as if thanking God that Dev verbally admitted it. She too says "I too love you very much Dev"

They both are lost in each other's arms and are mumbling "I love you very much"

Dev breaks the hug but still holds Kaajal in his arms and looks down at her lovingly. He speaks out his emotions that he had to restrain all this time

D: you are my life. I live to see you smile. Your laughter brings joy to my life and I can't see my life without you.

K: Then why, why are you denying it. So what if you are going to die. That brings Dev back to the present with a thud. He pushes himself away from Kaajal saying

D: No, this is not right. Let's go from here. Our coming together is not possible in this life. common lets go from here. Dhruv is waiting for you.

Kaajal on hearing this is shocked and says that on one hand you tell me that you love me and that I am your life and the other hand you are asking me to go to someone else.....

Dev too can't bear of hearing the grief and shock in Kaajal's voice, loses controls again and turns and grabs Kaajal again in a loose hug.But he remembers again and says,"It is wrong for us to come together. Dhruv will keep you very happy." Kaajal pushes his arms away saying, "How can you say that. Dhruv might give me all the happiness in my life, but you are my life and you are my happiness. How can I go away from my life and happiness? Lets become one Dev, for however short the time let us enjoy each other. I shall have all these as sweet memories and I will live my life alone with these beautiful memories of you. Dev sees the tears in her eyes and cannot control himself. He cups her face in his hands and wipes her tears.

D:Please don't cry kaajal, you are making things very hard for me. I can't see you so hurt and in tears. Kaajal breaks down even further and hugs Dev tightly. She rests her forehead on his wide shoulders and says

K: Then why are you giving me these tears. It is in your hands to give me happiness. My smiles are from you, my joy is from you. Then why don't you give them to me? Why do you want to let death come in between us and our union?

On hearing the word of death Dev once again comes to the present situation and pushing Kaajal away says

D:Its not a matter of my death. Its the matter of your death.

Kaajal is puzzled by what Dev syas and questions Dev. So he explains the situation that if they unite then Kaajal will be destined to die. Hearing this Kaajal is overjoyed. Mentally she thanks God that there is a way to finally save Dev, even if it is at the expense of her life. She moves closer to Dev and cups his face lovingly, and she says,

K: So what if I will die, at least we shall be together. I am feeling lucky to be able to save you. To die in the arms of the person I love.

Dev on hearing this hugs Kaajal in desparation. Asking God why does he have to give Kaajal so much pain.

D: No, I can't imagine my life without you. Don't say such things. (He pulls apart a bit and says) I know you love me very much but today I shall ask something from you.(He takes her hand and puts it on his head and looks deeply and lovingly into kaajal's eyes and says) Today I am asking from you not your life but a promise, that I know and believe that you will fulfill. If you don't, then I shall surely die....

Kaajal stops him from uttering those words by covering his lips. With his other hand he holds her hand and asks her smilingly and with loving eyes,

D: For my happiness, please go to Dhruv and get engaged to him today.

Kaajal is shocked and pulls her hands away saying :Please don't ask me to do this. Don't kill me like this. If I go to Dhruv I shall be a dead body walking without any life. My soul will be with you. Please don't ask me such promises. Please don't.

But Dev is very persistent and he with a very heavy heart himself takes Kaajal by her hand and says "Let's go. Everyone alonwith Dhruv are waiting for you."

Kaajal in a shock mumbles "No, please don't , No, please don't and follows Dev..........................

Thats what they missed...Well written👏👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
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woww..very well written 👏 ..i m completely speechless 😛 ..i wish they would hv also shown the much-awaited hug today..but i m really getting goosebumps by reading your DK conversation 😳 ..wonderfully written 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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The hug ...the hug....

autumn leaf Your very good!!!


And sharmii is still obsessed with the hug!! 😆

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