NEED HELP Guys!

Hello guys, hope u re all great? know this is an entertainment forum not academic, but I need ur help. Actually am assigned to write nd present a motivational speech which I haven't done before, so am skeptic if it will move the student, so need someone proof- read it for me nd tell me ur sincere opinion, if possible show me my mistake as well. Please, thank you. Anyone who wants to help notify me i will send u a pm😳

Originally posted by: melodica

hey...i'm ready 2 help !!😃

me very good @ motivational attyachaar !😳😆