Hey guys i noe that there are so...many fan fiction's but mine is gonna be a bit different . . . its going to continue on the rape track...now i am very well aware that this topic is very sensitive to people...trust me i noe, one of my friends was raped...also i have heard that ekta sometimes takes people's ideas so im hoping she reads this and takes it into use...also i apologize for any mistake or incorrect information that i make in advance because im only 14....My story is also going to be written as you would see it on tv.
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My scene starts out when every one is in the hospital, where all the Virani family is gathered at the hospital because KT has met with an accident with a truck (remember march 8th episode where she drives towards the truck) im also going to pretend that lakshya told everyone about KT's strange behavior.
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Every one is worried, a shot of Lakshya is seen reating his head on this fisted hands, with his mouth touching two thumbs. and hand that belongs to Nakul giving the shocked kisna his courage from breaking down that very second.)
Tulsi: I don't know why KT is behaving so stangely?
Tripti: I KNow, You made her marry Lakshya, and he doen;t have that much money so now shes pretending to get out of the marriage. . . and
Tulsi: Enough Tripti. (shocked faces of of Tripti and Mohini)You want Lakshya to marry Saniya don't you? But what kind kind of a mother are you? You have yet failed to realise that Lakshya's haet beats for one person and one person only and that is Krishna Tulsi. And your worried about money right? let me tell you that Krishna is my daughter, and the whole Virani property is mine, and it will go to my children, and now Krishna. (tripti's really shocked. shocked face is shown)
The Doctor comes out of the ER room. and Lakshya auomatically get up from his chair and walks up to him.
Lakshya: Doctor, how is she? Is she ok?
Doctor: Yes, she is fine. she's also regained her concisenesses she has a minor concution however,...
Lakshya: but? But what? Please do whatever it takes to get my KT back...
Doctor: WHat she has, i don't think will ever go away....
Lakshya: WHat are you saying? WHAT HAPPENED TO KT? TELL ME(Lakshya's mad face is shown, shaking the doctor)
Doctor: Mr. Virani, controll your self please...
Lakshya: Please tell me what's wrong...
Doctor: Mr. Virani, Miss Krishna Tulsi has been raped....un ka balakar hua hai...
lakshya lets go of the doctor, while tulsi and all the other women rush forward to deal with the formalities, lakshya's broken face with tears streaming down is shown...heart beats playing the back ground...the instrument form the movie Kal hoo naa hoo's title song plays, lakshya backs away as he hits the wall, and sinks down, heat beat and lakshya's face is shown, heart beat, and kt's face is shown, the instrumental plays again, heat beat, Lakshya's face, heart beat, kt's face. out of the blue you hear tulsi's face crying and her sobbing uncontrllably in front of the radha and krishna's photo in the hospital
Tulsi: What have you done thakurji? First Nandini and now my Krishna Tulsi (bhoomi's shocked face is shown.)
Bhoomi: what do you mean? What do you mean first nandini and now Krisnhan Tulsi??
Tulsi: fir...first my nandini had to go...goo...go through...trought th...this and now...now tulsi...
Bhoomi: your mad!
Karan: No, shes telling the truth...as Karan tells Bhoomi the truth that Bhoomi is a love child and that nandini was raped by Ansh, flashbacks of nandini pregnant and her rape (sorry if i am offending someone but i think that it is not too visual, and i tried to make it so...i am sorry if i have hurt someone)
Boomi and Eku are shocked are shocked Boomi starts crying and Eku hugs and consoles her. Tulsi is still crying.
Tulsi: ypu have ruined my daughter's life and i will never forgive you...ever! Now...who will get married to Tulsi...
Tripti: I know one person who isn't going to marry your so called daughter, my son. No one will ever marry you "bakwaas" daughter. She is a **** (I'm going to sensor it my self to save the moderators some trouble.)
Suddenly a hand slaps her, and the view is rotating in circles from Nandini, to tripti and back to nandini. (Ganga and Nandini were invited at the party so I'm going to pretend that both of them showed up.)
Nandini: I dare you say one more word.
Ganga eneters the picture and gives Tripti another tight smack (sorry if i am offending any Tripti fans)
Ganga: I should have probably done that when you first entered my life. I should have probably done that when you took my kids from me. I should have done that when you took away my home. Or I Should have done that when you tried to use Nakul to gain my property. But it's better late than never. Lakshya will do whatever he feels to be suitable. From today you have no rights over him, you have no rights ofver nakul, and no rights towards my house.
Mihir: Stop! Look at all of you fighting with one another, hear Bhoomi and Tulsi and there, Nandini, Ganga, and Tripti. When we should be focusing on Krishna Tulsi and Lakshya their world has been turned upside down.
Lakshya is shown. ANd is thinking yet totally crushed. (jeene ke ishare koo gaye plays the sad version)
Flash backs of him first meeting KT, and how she risked her life to save his, Flashback of Him saving her from the fire. Flashback of how he stood up for KT's honor the day he got beat up for her in the rain. Falash back of him accidently confessing his love for her. Flash back of KT saying that she loves him. Flash back of Woh Kisna Hai. Flash back of the romantic Dream sequences they had. Flash back of the romantic scene when he goes to kiss her. Back to reality and lakshya's long eyelashes show just the way kt's eyelashes and face showed when lakshya accidently told her that he loved her. Tulsi's voice is heard. Form that day when she caught the two of them. Hay Lakshya stop chasing the Gopis, and stay the Ram of my Sita. Lakshya gulps. and gets up silently (Now in the parenthesis, im going to show you what the music is going to be like beacuse it is a remix.)
Lakshya gets up (Woh KIsna HAi...Jo hai all bela)
He goes to the picture of thakurji. (Ram ram jai raja ram ram ram jai sita ram)
He looks at the picture and remebers the promise that he made to tulsi....(the choch blows in the som ram ram jai raja ram)
all of a sudden, the sadness is gone and replaced by a glint in his eyes and a new found confidence. He takes the tilak from the Radha and Krishna's picture and goes toward the door (jiski dewani hai ujti hai har bala woh kisna hai....)
He reaches for the door knob (Conch blows, Ram ram jai raja ram,,,... Kisnnnnaaaaa kisnnnaaaa kisna hai...raja ram...Choch blows again.) He goes in the door and locks it as soon as he is in (the ending part form woh kisna plays
He turns around and the wind blows. The camera rotates from lakshya to to KT who is hugging her knees and crying silently. He walks up to her and the camera goes above them spinning. (Heartbeat plays) KT's crying face is shown. (Heartbeat playing) Lakshya's face. KT silently looks up. Lakshya sits down and takes one of KT's Hands. and looks determinedly at her eyes. KT is not able to bear this and turns away. Lakshya starts to tear up a bit. Again the same determined glint in his eyes is shown and he takes his other hand and turns KT to face him. He looks at his finger that held the tika of Ram and Sita photo He takes it (The enitre scene now is in black and whit and is widescreen) He reaches up and puts the sindoor (aka tikka on the photo) on KT. (a big boom is shown) Outside everyone knows something has happened. Silence is still kept. Tulsi's face. Nandini's face. Ganga's face. Mihir's face. Sahil's face. Karan's face. Gautum's face. Damini's face. Eklaviya and Bhoomi's face. Baa's face. Ganga and Sahil look at each other tentively. and look at the camera (which is supposed to be the door) Inside KT is shocked. Lakshya smiles. and the wide screen is gone and color restores it self.
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sorry guys thats al the time i have today, please tell me if i should continue. again im sorry if i made some mistakes or offended some people in some thing i have said....please give me suggestion and feed back...and tell me what you would like to see happen...thank you
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lilita
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