MG-SS Love n its entry in my life... #4[Completed]

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Jeevana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: JayeetaGurtian
awesome ff...😃very well written...😊loved it...❤️

Thanks Jayeeta

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

best of luck for ur exams jeev

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Jeevana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
best of luck for ur exams jeev

Thanks Lakshmi...

Par mera exam tho kal katam hogaya 😉

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Jeevana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
bookmarked this... will soon read the whole story and comment

still waiting...

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Skyisthelimit

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

Very different story . Loved it , rest all threads are closed so commenting here . All parts were superb.

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Ratna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#356

Prafulla🤗

Awesome concept 👏...started so simply with the childhood to adulthood scenes of a sweet and confused girl...the way u wrote it made it feel so real...never for a second doubted it could be her dream...but again your trademark twist...the dream becomes a reality...but in this whole process she has learned and gained so much...personally and professionally 👍🏼

Loved this journey of Geet's life...from being an innocent child... to a troubled and confused girl...to a confident and complete woman...till she became Maan ki Geet ...so much doubt and pain in her...being the youngest child from her pov it did look like she was neglected and taken for granted,,,,then she is reluctantly married to a man who made her his first priority and changed the way she looked at life and relationships...beautiful Maaneet scenes...loved all of them ❤️...she wakes up and realises it is all a dream...but she is not sad or bitter...she takes strength from what she learnt from Maan even if it was dream... she changes herself into a loving and hard working woman ...no wonder shes achieved a lot in a years time 👍🏼

Thank u so much for the wonderful epi...so many twists and shocks...first Maan coming to her for business purpose...their instant connection...the way she wholeheartedly helps him...how he ends up dropping her home...she thinking Dev was her suitor...the happy realisation it is Maan ...the romantic proposal...the lovely text msg in the end...feeling so sad the story has ended...was so involved in it...now moving on to the next story of yours 😊

Edited by --Ratna-- - 10 years ago

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JeevanaP

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Posted: 10 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Prafulla🤗
Awesome concept 👏...started so simply with the childhood to adulthood scenes of a sweet and confused girl...the way u wrote it made it feel so real...never for a second doubted it could be her dream...but again your trademark twist...the dream becomes a reality...but in this whole process she has learned and gained so much...personally and professionally 👍🏼

Loved this journey of Geet's life...from being an innocent child... to a troubled and confused girl...to a confident and complete woman...till she became Maan ki Geet ...so much doubt and pain in her...being the youngest child from her pov it did look like she was neglected and taken for granted,,,,then she is reluctantly married to a man who made her his first priority and changed the way she looked at life and relationships...beautiful Maaneet scenes...loved all of them ❤️...she wakes up and realises it is all a dream...but she is not sad or bitter...she takes strength from what she learnt from Maan even if it was dream... she changes herself into a loving and hard working woman ...no wonder shes achieved a lot in a years time 👍🏼

Thank u so much for the wonderful epi...so many twists and shocks...first Maan coming to her for business purpose...their instant connection...the way she wholeheartedly helps him...how he ends up dropping her home...she thinking Dev was her suitor...the happy realisation it is Maan ...the romantic proposal...the lovely text msg in the end...feeling so sad the story has ended...was so involved in it...now moving on to the next story of yours 😊

Just came online... and what a welcome I get here...

A secret batavo... even I had not planned this twist initially... but then couldn't stop from implementing into the story... wanted to give zabardast boost so made it a dream.. and Geet achieving what she always wanted.

It was only Love what she asked for... so the same love made her change her thinking to win over the world n her Man too 😉

Thank you Ratna for loving this one too.. it is my first work so wouldn't think this as a best work so ignore the mistakes...😛

Now I am eagerly waiting for your comment on next work

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Ratna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#358

Prafulla 🤗...hi dear...what mistakes are u talking about ?...i was so involved in the story...did not see any...but what i can see is big black circles under my eyes 😆...the credit goes to your awesome writing skills 👏...will talk to u later...was so sleepy but wanted to comment before going...glad u liked it...bye ...have a wonderful Sunday...tc 😊

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JeevanaP

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Posted: 10 years ago

#359

Originally posted by: --Ratna--
Prafulla 🤗...hi dear...what mistakes are u talking about ?...i was so involved in the story...did not see any...but what i can see is big black circles under my eyes 😆...the credit goes to your awesome writing skills 👏...will talk to u later...was so sleepy but wanted to comment before going...glad u liked it...bye ...have a wonderful Sunday...tc 😊

Sorry for the black circles... Sunday.. will vanish in seconds...

Thanks Again...GN...😛