ASYA OS:AJMER LOVE

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello friends this is my first os .hope you enjoy it.

AFTER 1 MONTH LATER NOW ZOYA IN ORPHANAGE.

AT ORPHANAGE;

Asad in car crossing the orphanage and asad in his thoughts about zoya

And other side children playing and one child comes the road for pick the ball and at the time asad stop the car but fail on the road and zoya come and went the children at orphanage.and asad see this and shocked to see zoya but he thinks she is not there and he leaves.

AT ASAD RESIDENT;

Asad his bed room and sit on the sofa thinks about zoya and remember the asya movement(mitwa movements) but he comes his sense when his ami call him.

AMI; Asad zoya ka kuch pata chala?

ASAD; (sad) nahi'.nahin ami.

AMI; Allah kare who jahan bhi ho sahi salamat ho.

ASAD; Ami aap fikar mat kijie zoya mil jaigi .aap relax karin plz thora rest kijiye.

AMI; tum bhirest karo

And then dilshad leaves.
AT ORPHANAGE

Manager of orphanage said to zoya;

MANAGER; miss zoya hamein both dukh k sath ye kahna par raha hai k aap ab yaha nhn rahe sakte kyun k sidique sahib ko aap ki baton ka both bura laga is lye aap ab yahan nhn rah sakte .hamein maaf kr dejiyi

Zoya in shock but thanks to manager and she leaves .she decide to leave ajmer for spend some more time alone.

AFTER 1 WEEK

AT ASAD RESIDENT

Asad in living room and his pone rings and asad received the call of emploe his office.

EMPLOE; sir meine miss zoya faruki ko dekha ajmer mein.

Asad in tears and happily said;

Ky ..kya kya tu.. tum sach kahrahe ho woh kahan hai?kaise hai? Kahan rah rahe hai? Woh theek to hai na? tumne dekha ussai?plzz bato asad continuosly questioning.

EMPLOE; SIR SIR SIR.clam down sir .she is fine and she is in ajmer.

Asad cut the and run to go ajmer dilshad see.s asad and say

Asad tum kahan ja rahe ho?

ASAD; ami mein iss baar zoya ko leke hi wapas aaonga.i promise.

AT AJMER

One girl called zoya and say

Girl ; didi aap ko koi wahan bula raha hai

Zoya; kon ?

and girl leave from there without informe any think

zoya go there and say

zoya; kon ho tum

one lady say; hahaha.. tum mujhe nahin jaani bano rani itni jaldi bhool gaye

Zoya; tum yahan?

(yah friends she is billo rani (tanveer)

TANVEER'S FLASHBACK

Asad talk with emploeand cut the call and run from there and tanveer also there and lisning every think and she think in her mind

Tanveer; iss se pehle asad wahan pohche mujhe wahan jake zoya ko khatam karma hoga

FLASHBACK END

Tanveer continue to say

Tanveer mujhe tumhain iss tarah dekh kar bohut taras aaraha hai per koi baat nahin mein tumhain iss dard se aazad kar deti hoon hamesha hamesha ke lie

Zoya was confused and ask her

Zoya; matlab?

Tanveer; matlab yeh k mein tumhain yahan khatam karne aayi hoon

Zoya was scared and shock

Tanveer; par iss se pehle ke tum yeh dunya chor ke chali jao mein tumhain apni kahani bata doon

And tanveer tell the truth of her

Zoya was super shocked (asad aldo there and liusning every thing ).

Tanveer try to push her from clift zoya was felt but asad comes and save his zoya and tanveer slip and felt from clift (the end of billo rani ki kahani) asya look at each other and asad say

Asad; zoya mein aap se kuch kehna chahta hoon mujhe maaf kardo zoya

And zoya stop him and say

Zoya; aap maafi kyun maang rahi ho mr. khan galti jiski thi usse is ski saza mill gayye

Asad; zoya mujhe aap se kuch kehna zoya I LOVE YOU

Zoya (surprised and say) I LOVE YOU TOO ASAD

And they happy with each other.😊

Pheeew I complete my 1st os and I hope u like it and tamatar egg jo bhi maarna ho chalega (kam se kam raat ka khana to hojaega) hahaha😉

Edited by Rabertmona - 12 years ago

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sasir thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it. i wish asya together after ajmer track like this
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wah! kaash story aise hi khatam ho jaati!!! at least humein billi ko jhelna nahi padta itne din!!!! nice os! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I wish this happens with Asya
And it was awesome loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os!
I wish aya get togther soon!
Do write more os!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww kash yeh sach ho jaye. Amezing yr
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thnkx frnds and I also think write an ff on asya😊
Edited by Rabertmona - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i really wish it really happens
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow dii!!!
it soo awesome!!!
loved it to the core!!!
thanxs 4 the link!!!! :)
love u a lotss!!!! :*
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